Lights... Camera... ACTION!!: A Hollywood Quest

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT
Hi Magoose here one of the guys helping Duke.

So we have some bad news.

The quest has been canceled as duke does not want to write it anymore.

I'm going to ask if I can take over for it, because I like this quest, and it would be a shame to kill it
TBF, Mags, you have been doing a lot of the heavylifting for the quest, so this will be in good hands. :)

To be clear to everyone, this is just me burning out on imagination of the quest, since my muse has been hitting me over the head a lot with so many different ideas that I just can't find myself too interested in this.

I'll still hang out here, though, since this still does have a sepcial place in my heart.

I'd like to thank you all for making this a wonderful experience while it lasted.

I'd also like to thank @Magoose, @Fluffy_serpent, and @Martin Noctis for doing so much to help prepare and write this quest. I couldn't have done it without you all. :D

I'll see you all around.

With so many regards, Duke William Of.
 
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Hmm...that certainly puts everything into perspective...will split the diff and change it to $2.5 Mil.
Well, that is a much more reasonable amount...

The only other criticism that I have for your idea of a Gym is that it doesn´t really make any sense to call our new project "The Mandalorian Gym" when Star Wars has not even been released, and there has not been any appearance of the Madalorians in any media (hell, we have not even developed the concept of Mandalorians with George, who was the one who created them)

It would make much more sense that the new Gym´s name would be an homage to our friend and mentor Bruce Lee, or an homage to some famous legendary stuntman who helped advance the media of cinema like Buster Keaton
 
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Calling the Vote.
Adhoc vote count started by Magoose on Apr 5, 2023 at 8:36 PM, finished with 71 posts and 21 votes.

  • [X] Plan Carpe Diem
    -[X]PreProduction (Ironing Out the Script): George is a good Screenwriter… but you can hire several people that can help him (Allows you to hire a screenwriter, and add some small ideas within George's Script. Or just have it focus on one particular aspect that can be improved) DC: 10 (If you want to write in an idea, please linetail below)
    --[X] Develop the dialogue so it strikes a balance between George's vision and worldbuilding and a more natural delivery that audiences can relate to.
    --[X] Include subtle hints in Han's dialogue and blocking that suggests that he is a former Imperial. Nothing that dominates a scene, but quiet character moments that can be explored in the sequels.
    -[X]Importing Foreign Films: So… you may have a way to get some films showing in American Theaters. Maybe you can go to other foreign film industries and… well, ask to distribute their films. Sure many of those foreign film companies never expected an American company to distribute their films in the US… but maybe you can get money without producing them. (Linetail where you try to get films from, and if there are any specific films, line tail them below) DC: ???
    --[X] Japan. Godzilla vs Mechagodzilla
    -[X]Opening Night: They finished the film Early, and they are going to release it in Style. So you're going to be there for Carrie. DC: 0
    -[X]An Engagement Ring: You want to get a Ring (Linetail what you want and how much money you invest in it.)
    --[X] A simple engagement ring with a golden band and a beautifully cut diamond in the center. $4,000.
    -[X]And The Question was Asked: You called Debbie to your home. And asked her for her permission. DC:???
    -[X]Continue Developing The Kung Fu Kid: You want to expand the idea and make the script idea you have even better.
    -[X]Pray: It had been a long time since you went to Mass. You wish for the Lord to give you strength. DC: ???
    -[X] Call your parents: You need to call mom and dad, and see how they are doing. DC: 10 (You call your parents and see what they are doing)
    [X] Plan Recovery Road: For the Family
    -[X] Preproduction (The Effects): You want to Plan out what the Hell George is going to do with the ILM… Or the Magician's first outing. (Begin a small Mini-turn to plan out the effects and the possible sequences in it.) DC:50
    -[X]PreProduction (Ironing Out the Script): George is a good Screenwriter… but you can hire several people that can help him (Allows you to hire a screenwriter, and add some small ideas within George's Script. Or just have it focus on one particular aspect that can be improved) DC: 10 (If you want to write in an idea, please linetail below)
    --[X] Develop the dialogue so it strikes a balance between George's vision and worldbuilding and a more natural delivery that audiences can relate to.
    -[X] Let Mike Work: You will give Mike a Freehand to do what he wants to make money. DC: 0 (An action will be Chosen from the list of actions. Shenanigans may ensure)
    -[X] Investing in the Future: You want to Spend some of that money you made into the company and make the whole thing better DC: ??? (Linetail what you want to invest in, and how much money you want to invest in it)
    --[X] The Mandalorian Gymnasium [$2.5 Million]: Open to the general public and offers an adult accreditation programs as well as an After School program for underprivileged children; to start, Mando's Gym consists of four core programs: The Bruce Lee Memorial Martial Arts and Stunts Program, Conditioning and Exercise Athletics Program, Craftsman and Survivalist Accreditation Program, Firearm and Weapon Safety Accreditation Program.
    ---[X] Part I: The Bruce Lee Memorial Martial Arts and Stunts Program: (Action Cinematography)
    -[X]Opening Night: They finished the film Early, and they are going to release it in Style. So you're going to be there for Carrie. DC: 0
    -[X]And The Question was Asked: You called Debbie to your home. And asked her for her permission. DC:???
    -[X] And The Great Friendship Between Debbie Reynolds and Clint Eastwood: You never expected Clint and Debbie to actually spend time together as friends. Isn't that surprising? DC: 30
    -[X]Continue Developing The Kung Fu Kid: You want to expand the idea and make the script idea you have even better.
    [X] Plan Preproduction, family and friends.
    -[X] Preproduction (The Effects): You want to Plan out what the Hell George is going to do with the ILM… Or the Magician's first outing. (Begin a small Mini-turn to plan out the effects and the possible sequences in it.) DC:50
    -[X]PreProduction (Ironing Out the Script): George is a good Screenwriter… but you can hire several people that can help him (Allows you to hire a screenwriter, and add some small ideas within George's Script. Or just have it focus on one particular aspect that can be improved) DC: 10 (If you want to write in an idea, please linetail below)
    --[X] Develop the dialogue so it strikes a balance between George's vision and worldbuilding and a more natural delivery that audiences can relate to.
    --[X] Include subtle hints in Han's dialogue and blocking that suggests that he is a former Imperial. Nothing that dominates a scene, but quiet character moments that can be explored in the sequels.
    -[X]Contract Negotiations (Everyone): You need to make sure George is paying everyone properly. DC 50
    -[X]Opening Night: They finished the film Early, and they are going to release it in Style. So you're going to be there for Carrie. DC: 0
    -[X]And The Question was Asked: You called Debbie to your home. And asked her for her permission. DC:???
    -[X] And The Great Friendship Between Debbie Reynolds and Clint Eastwood: You never expected Clint and Debbie to actually spend time together as friends. Isn't that surprising? DC: 30
    -[X]Pray: It had been a long time since you went to Mass. You wish for the Lord to give you strength. DC: ???
    -[X] Call your parents: You need to call mom and dad, and see how they are doing. DC: 10 (You call your parents and see what they are doing)
    [X] So, It's real? (Lucasfilms submits a patent for a sand battery)
 
This is the Way
Kal had always been a man of peace, as much as can be said of the Mandalorians of Old. He lived his life in peace as the armorer of his small village. But all that changed when he received the news of his mother's death at the hands of a rival clan. The pain of the loss consumed him, and the only thing he could think about was revenge.

Kal made his way to the rival clan's settlement, where he confronted their leader. He demanded justice for his mother's murder, but the clan leader just laughed in his face, before beating him senselessly. In that moment, as blood pooled around him, something inside Kal snapped, and he knew there was only one way to make things right.

He shakily picked up his mother's gun, which she had given to him for protection before she passed, and pointed it directly at the leader's head. "In this Court of Gunsmoke, my gun is the gavel and the jury has spoken," he whispered, before pulling the trigger.

With their leader dead, the clan members were left stunned, as they had never seen such a brazen act in spite of their fearless leader. Kal barely managed his escape, knowing that he would now be a target, so he packed up his things and left the village he had always called home.

He became a wanderer, moving from town to town, never staying in one place for too long. But everywhere he went, the stories of his revenge spread like wildfire. People began to talk about the armorer who had brought down a powerful clan leader, and soon, he was not only a man of peace but also a legend among the people of Concordia.

As Kal traveled, he continued to create armor and weapons, but now he was known as the man who had taken down a clan leader single-handedly. His new reputation preceded him, and he was sought after by people who needed protection against those who would do them harm.

In the end, the pain of his mother's death had driven him to take action, to leave behind the life of a peaceful armorer and become something new. He was a symbol of justice and a beacon of hope for those who needed it most. His journey had led him down a violent path, but it had also given him a new purpose - to protect those who couldn't protect themselves.

This is the Way, a gentle man is never harmless and is to be feared. In this way, the tale of the Journeyman Protectors began, and the legend of Clan Fett only grew.


"Dave, all this for a scratched up patch?"

"I have six more papers back home."

"...now I know how Bruce feels."
 
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Some Nights Are Truely Special Turn 33 Results (July-August 1974)
-[X]PreProduction (Ironing Out the Script): George is a good Screenwriter… but you can hire several people that can help him (Allows you to hire a screenwriter, and add some small ideas within George's Script. Or just have it focus on one particular aspect that can be improved) DC: 10 (If you want to write in an idea, please linetail below)
--[X] Develop the dialogue so it strikes a balance between George's vision and worldbuilding and a more natural delivery that audiences can relate to.
--[X] Include subtle hints in Han's dialogue and blocking that suggests that he is a former Imperial. Nothing that dominates a scene, but quiet character moments that can be explored in the sequels. Rolled: D100 => 52

There was some grumbling the whole time, but George was willing to allow you to change it.

Then you removed several events, along with changing several pieces of dialogue to make it flow better as it did on Graffiti, as well as, with his blessing, change one scene during the smuggler's hold, where Luke asks him what he hides in there, People?

And Han would reply. "People Aren't Cargo."

Reward: You did some very minor changes, something that George, eventually Relented to.
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-[X]Importing Foreign Films: So… you may have a way to get some films showing in American Theaters. Maybe you can go to other foreign film industries and… well, ask to distribute their films. Sure many of those foreign film companies never expected an American company to distribute their films in the US… but maybe you can get money without producing them. (Linetail where you try to get films from, and if there are any specific films, line tail them below) DC: ???
--[X] Japan. Godzilla vs Mechagodzilla Rolled:D100 => 1+10=11

Toho did not trust you enough to handle their Golden Child that was Godzilla.

They wanted far more trust from you, and they wanted it not to be tainted by American Censors…

Wait they thought Americans would censor Godzilla?

Near Critical Failure!: Godzilla is off limits until you distribute at least ten films for Toho. Or you manage to meet with Toho Leadership and convince them you were the right person for the job.
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-[X]Opening Night: They finished the film Early, and they are going to release it in Style. So you're going to be there for Carrie. DC: 0 Rolled:D100 => 37+30=67

You looked at the film, and dammit…

It was worth the battle to see it in her vision.

(Continued in: Some Nights)
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-[X]An Engagement Ring: You want to get a Ring (Linetail what you want and how much money you invest in it.)
--[X] A simple engagement ring with a golden band and a beautifully cut diamond in the center. $4,000. Rolled:D100 => 32
-[X]And The Question was Asked: You called Debbie to your home. And asked her for her permission. DC:??? Rolled:D100 => 75

The ring was in your pocket, in a tiny velvet box as you walked into the room where Debbie Waited. She was… not very unhappy about the situation that she found herself in, but was a bit surprised by the seriousness, and the grimness that you carried yourself in.

She was not expecting you to be this way, but you were going to be as blunt as possible.

You took a breath and offered a seat. "Need anything to drink?" you asked as you looked at the kitchen, to get ready to prepare something.

"No, though something tells me that would still not calm your nerves." She replied, reading the room expertly as you sat down, trying to relax with the jitters in your mind.

Then you were very still, as you looked down at the face of Debbie, before you looked down to you're feet. "I'm asking for permission." You whispered, too quiet to really do anything else.

Debbie did not hear you. "Bruce, what did you say?" She asked, leaning closer.

Then you held out your hand, and you waited for Debbie. "Bruce is everything-"

You then reached into your pocket and showed it to Debbie. "I want to ask for your permission to marry Carrie-"

Your words were then swiped from your mouth as she took your hand. And it hurt as she did that, and it was a great deal of surprise.

She then pulled away. "Bruce, I…" She leaned back in her chair her hands and fingers laced together as she went deep into thought.

"Oh crap, I'm sorry Debbie, I should have-" you babbled, losing all confidence in yourself as you waited for her to continue.

There was silence, before she nodded. "Of course. But once she has turned 18."

"Thank you."

Reward: You can now Marry Carrie, with enthusiastic acceptance.
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-[X]Continue Developing The Kung Fu Kid: You want to expand the idea and make the script idea you have even better. Rolled:D100 => 10

Script improvement: 85

The Script was looking good.

But it could be better.

Reward: You now have a script of 85 quality. It would pass as a weak but effective A-List production if you wanted to make it, and it would be viewed as such when producing it.

It could be better.
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-[X]Pray: It had been a long time since you went to Mass. You wish for the Lord to give you strength. DC: ??? Rolled:D100 => 46

"If I speak in the tongues of men or of angels, but do not have love, I am only a resounding gong or a clanging cymbal. If I have the gift of prophecy and can fathom all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have a faith that can move mountains, but do not have love, I am nothing. If I give all I possess to the poor and give over my body to hardship that I may boast,[b] but do not have love, I gain nothing.
Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away. For we know in part and we prophesy in part, but when completeness comes, what is in part disappears. When I was a child, I talked like a child, I thought like a child, I reasoned like a child. When I became a man, I put the ways of childhood behind me. For now we see only a reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known.

And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love."



Reward: Something Beautiful will soon happen. Expect a great boon to follow for all you love.
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-[X] Call your parents: You need to call mom and dad, and see how they are doing. DC: 10 (You call your parents and see what they are doing) Rolled:D100 => 6

Dad and Mom didn't answer.

Not because of anything, but because they were preparing a huge watch party for… Some Nights.

Saying that its something that Carrie would see as special.

Failure.

AN: enjoy.
 
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Damn it! We should have built more trust with Toho before we move into their golden child! (Then again who could have fucking predicted a Nat 1 there).

Oh well, who's up for "Evil of Dracula" or "Lady Snowblood" for next turn distribution?
 
OH BOY. For a while I was waiting for the other shoe of Magoose Dice to drop considering all the strong successes and nat 90s and 100s, I guess this is the turn that it comes to roost. Or, if Some Nights is really as awesome as Magoose is hyping it up to be, this is just further definitive proof that Magoose Dice loves Carrie and Carrie comes before Bruce. Even the mighty Goose is nothing before the princess.

Oh well, at least Some Nights is the movie of the year and Prayer got a great result for Bruce's loved ones. I must say, I am a bit confused on the body language in the Permission section. I'm guessing she had a knee jerk reaction to the most important change in her daughter's life, which was not helped at all by Bruce acting like he was about to commit a felony, and once she digested the news, thought it over and enthusiastically accepted? With the 75 it seems like it would have most likely passed, but without the instant there might have been some more conditions? No matter what, Bruce really needs to learn how to deliver news and requests better or else he's going to give his family 10 years in stress.

Also in regards to Kung Fu Kid, thanks to the Omake for Kung Fu Kid 2, it should have instantly upgraded to +70 and from there get the Omake bonus from Kung Fu Kid 1 in rolls, so I guess it would become an 85. I apologize for not catching it on the Omake rewards list, but when I did a lookover to see all I needed to jot down, I missed Kung Fu Kid 2 because it was never threadmarked in Apocrypha. Now I have updated the Omake Reward list so everything should be there. Here is the proof:

Pitch: Kung Fu Kid- Part II

Several years after the first movie, Li is teaching a dojo in Hong Kong with the help of his star pupils, Bobby and James, the two share friendly banter, James even referencing the first movie by putting on a bit of a posh accent, we see James is the stronger and more aggressive of the two, while Bobby is more defensive and better with balance and redirection.

Bobby and James meet up with Sue, who has brought along a friend for James, a sweet local girl, James hits it off with her as Sue and Bobby take a minute for themselves. Bobby jokes that she's 'fed another one to James' and Sue states that James 'isn't that bad'.

Overall their lives seem quite idillic and calm, Li is grooming Bobby to open a dojo of his own to spread their teachings of Balance and Self Defence. However Li receives a letter from the mainland and announces he must leave.

Bobby and Sue convince him to take them, Li puts James in charge while he is gone. Li is reluctant to bring Bobby and Sue at first, but he submits, announcing he is going back 'home'. To the village he was born in.

They get to the isolated town in rural China and immediately Li announces he must go see a friend, telling Sue to keep Bobby out of trouble. Sue takes Bobby around the village, telling him about the traditional way of life in rural china.

Seeing someone's wagon break down Bobby goes to help them. Meanwhile a gang of three teenagers led by a young man (played by Jackie Chan) spot Sue and go over to flirt with her, though the young man stays behind, and shakes his head.

Bobby comes back and gets between Sue and the teenagers, when one of them throws a punch, Bobby quickly beats all three of them. The young man sits up startled and approaches, starting a fight too.

Bobby is clearly the better fighter, but the wiles of the young man, using any object he can find, and his sheer randomness stop Bobby from beating him. Eventually Bobby decides to stop going in the offensive and takes the 'Balance stance' from the end of the last movie. Which causes the young man to look at him shocked stating 'you should not be here'. To which Bobby replies in Mandarin 'well too late, I'm here".

He hears a voice respond behind him "And so am I".

We cut to Li sitting down with an elderly man, they share tea together. Li asks about what was in his letter, if Tai truly has returned to the village…the elderly man confirms he has, and that he and his gang have essentially taken over, Li sits up, the letter didn't mention any gang, he realises what this could mean and is horrified.

Meanwhile Bruce stands across from someone slightly older than the young man, who refers to the person Bruce has been fighting as 'Little Brother' and commands 'Hou' leave it up to his big bro. The elder man introduces himself as 'Fengtian', which Bobby mocks him for because that's the 'courtesy name of a character from a history book'.

Fengtian is surprised Bobby knows about the Three Kingdoms, but puts it aside to challenge him. Bobby gets knocked around, finding he can't get past Fengtian's defence with his arms, he tries a flying kick but just bounces off, Fengtian prepares to leap at him, only to be stopped by Li.

Fengtian seems to recognise who Li is, and congratulates his younger brother Hou on finding Li's disciple and helping lure him out. Hou seems uncomfortable with this, but Li tells Fengtian to 'return to his father with a message, there must be peace'. Fengtian scoffs but leaves.

Bobby and Sue demand and explanation, and Li gives it to them.

Li's best friend in his childhood, who fought with him in the army, was a man called Tai Tsung Chang, after the war they became mercenaries together, Tai, known as 'Mount Tai' as a nickname, became a leading member of the Triad in Heinan, however Li, the only man Tai trusted or loved, left Tai after taking his vows due to the deaths of his family. From what he heard, Tai had been forced to flee back to mainland China within the year, and no one had heard from him since. But now he's back, having taken over their old hometown with his two sons and a gang of young men.

We cut to Fengtian and Hou entering a small rustic manor housing the gangsters and Tai, Tai praises his son Fengtian for his victory but ignores and even belittles Hou, despite Fengtian trying to stick up for his younger brother.

Afterwards, we see Hou sneak out of the mansion while the others drink and celebrate. Hou wears a hood, but goes over to help an old lady trying to carry things towards her home, when she turns to thank him, she sees his face, becomes terrified, and slams the door. A disheartened Hou wanders into the forest, he looks up to the moon, and sighs, a woman asks him what he's 'so sad about', 'isn't she here?', this is Mei Lin, the village girl Bobby was helping earlier who introduced herself to him. The two embrace as Hou speaks about his father, and how he's worried now 'that man' is back in the village, the two embrace as they worry over the future.

Meanwhile Li tries to tell Bobby that just 'kicking down the door' won't work. 'No man may crumble Mount Tai'. Tai was his equal, and restrained by his vows, Li cannot defeat him. Li will try to think of a way to approach Tai and make peace

Sue and Bobby go out around the village, and begin to know the villagers, particularly Mei Lin, however they see how the gang members cause fear in the town.

Meanwhile Li goes to meet Tai by a waterfall, Li having known his old friend would come here for clarity. Tai boasts that he survived Li's 'betrayal' and while his 'Kingdom' isn't much, it's a start for his sons to grow out from, village after village, the authorities so far away, an isolated spot for a new triad to grow. He ignores Li's attempts to remind him of their old days, playing by this waterfall, and leaves, angry at Li for abandoning him.

Meanwhile the gangsters have noted Bobby hanging around the village, Hou meets up with Mei in secret to let her pass on a mess to Bobby and Sue to be more discreet, however Fengtian walks in, Hou rushes to explain but his brother notes that he already knew, and that he'd been covering for Hou with father. He tells his brothers 'little pet' to leave, and Fengtian talks to his brother about a way for him to gain fathers approval.

Bobby, walking through the village, is confronted by by Fengtian. The two get into another public fight, with Bobby falling back to the Balance stance, however Fengtian announces he is bored, and offers Hou a 'turn', a reluctant Hou comes forward.

With Bobby in a defensive mindset, Hou is a lot more free to get inventive, and Bobby finds he cannot redirect or block all of Hou's unorthodox moves, eventually being knocked down. Seeing this as the green light, the rest of the gangsters surge forward to beat Bobby down. Sue rushes to stop them but Fengtian slaps her, Hou looks on horrified, the villagers who Bobby and Sue helped or befriended look away, despite Sue's begging.

Meanwhile a storm starts to roll into the riverside village.

Sue drags Bobby back to where they are staying, Mei joins in to help her. The rain is starting to pour down now.

Li is enraged when he sees how badly Bobby has been beaten. He helps until Bobby is stable, then marches off to the rustic manor the rain drenching him and covering him in mud.

The next scene is of Li defeating all of the gangsters that get in his way using his skills at dodging, redirection and the occasional palm strike alone. Bursting his way into Tai's office.

Meanwhile Mei states she will go out and find Li, stop him from doing anything too risky, Sue asks her not to go, but Mei insists she can weather the storm.

Li and Tai both fight, and surprisingly Tai is more out of shape, Li notes this as he mocks Tai, some cruelty starting to show up as he starts to aim his kicks and palm thrusts to cause pain and humiliation. Eventually Tai is knocked down.

The riverbanks near the village flood, and Mei is swept away, villagers and Sue hear her screams. They watch in horror as she is nearly dragged away by the waters, Sue dives in, and, inspiring the villagers, this time is helped by them instead of ignored, as together they save Mei.

As thunder rolls and rain falls, Li stands over a beaten Tai, he raises back a hand, and clenches his fist, preparing to break his oath and also kill Tai here. Fengtian screams for his father from the doorway, and Li snaps out of it, looking at his clenched fist with horror. Tai uses the distraction to break free, Tai and Fengtian join forces and overwhelm and beat Li down.

Hou witnesses Mei being saved, and openly embraces Mei before thanking Sue for what she did. The village all thank her too, and several people offer to come help her look after Bobby.

A few days later Bobby is more healed, Li still has not been seen, worrying him and Sue and Mei. Mei promises to meet up with Hou and try and find out what happened, since she hasn't seen him since she almost drowned that night.

Sue and Bobby commiserate about how dangerous things are, which shifts into them talking about the future, and their relationship, with Bobby admitting he's thought about then getting married and having kids someday. However a commotion outside draws them both to come and see what's going on.

In the centre of the village Tai, Fengtian and the gangsters all stand. With them is a battered Li and a restrained Mei. Bobby immediately goes in the offensive, and is defeated quickly and viscously by Fengtian, the other gangsters start to beat Bobby once more, as Tai announces that the village is his, Hou arrives and begs his brother to release Mei, but Fengtian will not meet his eyes. Sue comes forward and again asks the villagers for help, and this time they give it, starting to throw food and even gathering some weapons.

Not seeing the fear he saw before Tai starts to become worried. Unwilling to execute them here and now and risk a riot, he instead claims that the 'accused' have four weeks to prepare themselves for a 'trial by combat'. His sons/pupils Vs Li's. Releasing Li and stopping Bobby's beating.

As insurance he takes Mei so that the mob won't turn on him as he essentially flees. He claims to Hou that his son was wrong for 'fraternising with the help', and that as punishment he'll be the one to kill Li's pupils.

Bobby hasn't even been able to beat Fengtian, and knows he can't face both him and Hou. Li points out that Tai mentioned Li's pupils. There is another.

We cut to James arriving in the village, he gets lost without Sue there to help guide him, and eventually runs across a village girl, who he begins to flirt with, Fengtian sees him and confronts him, getting violent, however James is strong enough to make Fengtian feel it through his blocking techniques. Sue interrupts the fight and ushers James away.

Li is angered when he hears about the confrontation, as now Tai will know James has come to fight, and that James may be strong enough to break through Fengtian's blocking techniques. He decides to train James to fight Hou, and Bobby to fight Fengtian.

He takes them to the waterfall he and Tai met at, and relates the story of how he and Tai trained here together. He tells Bobby he must become 'strong enough to sunder a mountain' and that James will never be able to hit Hou, who is faster and unpredictable, so he must learn to defend. The two must essentially swap their techniques.

Bobby must stand below the waterfall and perform an extra high kick with the water pushing him down. James must catch a marble Li drops from the top of the waterfall from a random position.

Bobby is barely able to stand under the water, and James is unable to see the marble. Let alone fast enough to catch it. Li explains that James must 'feel' and 'react' in the same instance, Hou is too fast and unpredictable to formulate a proper response, it must be instinct. James eventually succeeds.

Bobby meanwhile finds his injuries and the weight of the waterfall too much, he collapses again and again from pain, Sue and James try to convince Li to let James fight Fengtian, but Li states Fengtian and Hou will be training to fight James and Bobby respectively, they need to change the script.

Despite the agony, Bobby tries again and again, Li tells him pain is a state of mind, that it can be overcome, and displays this by, despite his greater age and his own injuries, performing a perfect Kata under the waterfall, ending with a high split kick. Bobby continues trying to accomplish it, eventually overcoming his pain, but being unable to perform the waterfall high kick.

The night before the match, Hou attempts to smuggle Mei Lin away, but is stopped by Fengtian, the elder brother allows Mei Lin to escape, but refuses to let Hou follow her, instead guilting him into fighting tomorrow.

Li visits Tai again, except this time he comes in peace, Tai begins to mock him, only to grow silent when Li kneels and Kowtows thrice, ending with his forehead pressed to the ground, Li apologises for abandoning his friend.

Tai grows tearful, and then angry. He loved Li's family too, they should've been there for each other, but Li left without a word. He was the only man Tai trusted, and because Li abandoned him everything he built was destroyed, he was forced to hide away like a rat for decades, he found someone who supported him, helped him heal, and then she died, birthing a failure of a second son. And Li wasn't there.

Li rises and it looks like the two may embrace, but Tai turns away, unwilling to look at his fiend, he announces that he will retake everything Li made him lose, but only after he takes everything Li has built.

The next day the whole village turns out to see the fight by the riverbank. Tai is angered when he sees Mei Lin in the crowd, and promises Hou will be punished later.

James fights Hou, but neither can overcome the other, James defence too fast and perfect, despite all Hou's improvising, meanwhile Hou is too random and quick for James to pin down.

Bobby finds himself still too weak to overcome Fengtian, his kicks blocked he is forced back into the river, where in the waters he tries to use his balancing defence technique, only for Fengtian to overwhelm it. Being beaten badly his ribs get broken and he's left spitting blood, the villagers become rowdy, and the gangsters start to realise they're outnumbered.

Despite his ribs, Bobby continues fighting, overcoming the pain, he lands a good hit in Fengtian, who is shown to be far more vulnerable to pain then Bobby, gaining an idea, Bobby hooks a rock on his foot, and slams the stone and his foot into one of Fengtian's arm blocks.

Bobby's foot is broken and bleeding, but Fengtian's arm is also broken. Overwhelmed by pain while Bobby has mastered his, Bobby uses his broken foot to enact heel strikes and thrusts, avoiding the more damaged part of his foot while also ignoring the pain.

Fengtian is driven out of the river and is knocked onto the riverbank, a wounded Bobby grabs him and pulls him up, hand raised to strike him down. He turns to Tai, "Live or Die man!"

Tai watches stony faced. Hou ceases his fight with James to cry out for his father "Live!" Begging his father to give up and let Fengtian be spared. The crowd grows increasingly rowdy and aggressive towards the gangsters, several of them slipping away.

Fengtian states "Die". Choosing to die rather than make his father surrender. But before Bobby can land the blow, Tai shouts "live". Bobby drops Fengtian and is embraced by the crowd of villagers, while Hou and Tai go to look over Fengtian's body. Most of the gang has started to sneak away.

Li comes forward and offers to help heal Fengtian, Tai looks at him for a moment, and then accepts. He calls forward his men to help move his son…only for them to mostly be gone. They've abandoned him.

The villagers see this and start to surge forward, only to be stopped by Li, who states revenge and violence are not the answer, Mei Lin joins in with him, and asks the villagers about all the times Hou tried to help them, and asks if they remember Fengtian ever hurting anyone, or if it was the other gang members. The crowd starts to calm, but they still want Tai punished.

Tai and Fengtian are put in a prison cell while Fengtian recovers. Hou meanwhile is allowed to be with Mei Lin. Bobby, Li and James are treated like heroes.

At the end of the movie Li and Hou help Fengtian and Tai escape their prison at night. Fengtian begs his brother to come with him, but Hou declines. He will stay here, teach martial arts, and create his own group, one which will protect the villages from the gang members that fled. Li states to Tai this is his fresh start, he can build a better life, with the son who remains with him.

Tai bows to Li, as does Fengtian, Tai making the same oath, word for word, that Li did when his family died.

Li states to Bobby and James later on he might stick around for a while, and says that one of them will have to look after the gym for him. Bobby and James can't decide with words, and so the movie ends with them about to fight, in the same poses they had during their display match at the start of the film.
Damn I love this:

[]I finally got some skill (+5 to Screen writing skills)
[]And So there Would be A Turn (Linda came to you, and read what you had in the script. She loved it)
[]One More Struggle (Next Development of the Kungfu kid will leave it with a 70 script quality)
[X] Plan The Skywalker Saga

I think I'll take One More Struggle, gets us months forward when we do work on the script next

Also in regards to the poster, it's okay if you can't find a good one or weren't satisfied. The content is what matters and I don't mind if there isn't one or you have to post at a later date.
 
With the 75 it seems like it would have most likely passed, but without the instant there might have been some more conditions?
There were going to be a few conditions, mostly asking Bruce and Carrie to wait for another few years, as well as for Carrie to get settled in Hollywood. Just the two of them having to wait until Carrie was 19 instead of 21.

Though I am going to say that if it was a low roll, she would have been extremely hesitant, and given Bruce a Challenge that he would have needed to complete.

Thankfully it would only be owning several items that would have proven that he was being serious, as well as buying a dog, because she belives that owning a dog will prove Bruce's character the best way.
I'm guessing she had a knee jerk reaction to the most important change in her daughter's life, which was not helped at all by Bruce acting like he was about to commit a felony, and once she digested the news, thought it over and enthusiastically accepted?
She was caught off guard because she thought that Bruce was going to ask about something else, and despite the obvious love, she thought that Bruce was going to wait a little while longer, instead of right before Carries first film being released.

And yes. that is also true.
Also in regards to Kung Fu Kid, thanks to the Omake for Kung Fu Kid 2, it should have instantly upgraded to +70 and from there get the Omake bonus from Kung Fu Kid 1 in rolls, so I guess it would become an 85. I apologize for not catching it on the Omake rewards list, but when I did a lookover to see all I needed to jot down, I missed Kung Fu Kid 2 because it was never threadmarked in Apocrypha. Now I have updated the Omake Reward list so everything should be there. Here is the proof:
No I just forgot.

As usual.
 
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What the fuck now we will never get Godzilla because no one will like Tokyo movies
They didn't say that they have to like them, only that we have to distribute them.

And frankly, we have shown that we can make money out of them, plus with enough movies we might be able to create a niche group who like said movie to justify our continuing distribution.
 
Some Nights
Some Nights:

Starring:

Carrie Fisher
John Travolta


Directed By: Gene Kelly

Released: August 3rd 1974

Audience Reaction:D100 + 60 => 152

Critic Reaction:D100 + 60 => 155

Production Budget: 40,000,000

Domestic Gross: 277,420,942

International Gross:293,448,016

Total Gross:570,868,958

Total Profits: 530,868,958
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When you arrived with Carrie, you could tell that all of Hollywood was watching, though that was to be expected. It seems that the film, despite the first draft being complete and utter shit… was saved, by some editors that you knew were going to win an Oscar.

And walking her down the red carpet was something incredible, and the flashes and the cameras were… pretty much everyone was trying to get a look at you and Carrie, who was clinging to your arm like it was a promise of security, and you knew that was something you were indeed able to do.

But as you took a breath, you were quietly prepared to just get in.

However, Carrie had some other plans. She smiled, waved, and took in every moment of the cameras. She was taking to the media like a duck to water, and there was a great and powerful feeling of her enjoying the attention, despite all the things that had happened.

Though standing next to you might have also been easy tabloid fodder, for the simple fact the Goose was standing beside her, not in the film… as well as many things were going to be great.

Also… You were huge, that was also something most people failed to realize. It was actually kinda amusing, to see you, a nearly mini giant next to the tiny Carrie.

But you walked into the theater, Carrie whispered. "Come here."

You leaned in, wanting to hear what she said before she ambushed you with a kiss. But you thought it was a move that was… smart.

Give everyone something to talk about before everything… goes away, and you saw the movie.

And when you finished, you knew it was going to sweep the Oscars.


Reward: Some Nights is one of the most popular & profitable films of All Time.

Unknown Effect on Carrie and John.

Unknown Effect.
AN: A Common Fisher W it seems.

Well... also Universal is going to be swimming in money.
 
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