Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Maybe mention that in parentheses?
It does seem like a very crass and personal thing to ask, but if you read the first 3 questions they really don't sound very serious if you get the reference, and parenthesizing the statement just kills the joke somewhat. There really isn't a good way to make the joke feel natural without sounding crass.
Also, the question doesn't ask for a full name or even more sensitive information like the 4 digits on the back of your credit card so answering the question with sir my-totally-real-Firstname might answer it and not tell a lot of personal information?.. I think... it's just a unwelcome and sensitive thing to ask for on the unforgeting internet so I dunno. Besides, Lord doesn't have to answer every question.so he can skip it if he feels it's too much.
 
Since shard powers are considered magic, how would precognition work with a complex machine completely made of entirely magic-resistant materials? Would it make precognition start to break down or simply make it much more energy-intensive?
 
Since shard powers are considered magic, how would precognition work with a complex machine completely made of entirely magic-resistant materials? Would it make precognition start to break down or simply make it much more energy-intensive?
That's an interesting question. While shard powers do count as magic they still function as computers that manipulate reality as such precognition runs on calculating the future based on factors in the present (that's why the forge disrupts Precognition, because it changes the present with no basis on past events in a non-meta sense), so if the shard can gather info on the magic resistant machine in a way that doesn't involve scanning it with "shard power" it should still work the same. However if Lord counts Precognition as running on magic rules completely then I don't think magic resistance would affect it because magic Precognition works on reading fate or seeing the future, you need a specific ability to block Precognition such as Mimihagi being immune to Yhwach's The Almighty.
 
They may not know what it can do, but they can know what it has done and fill in the blank with that information, sort of like the Aisha memory editing when aisha got into the workshop
 
They may not know what it can do, but they can know what it has done and fill in the blank with that information
Which is why I specified a complex machine, an advanced autonomous combat machine that is hard to precog is a decent way around things like PtV and simple Simurgh plots. They will have difficulty accounting for its decisions.
 
I will be disregarding these concerns and will in fact likely be doing the opposite.

To clarify, I will not be focusing on tighter pacing, rushing through plot points, or making sure the chapters are tight and efficient. I have been having trouble with those issues for a while now, as well as various issues with writing this story and it wasn't until the most recent round of complaints regarding the pacing that things finally became clear for me.

I haven't been enjoying the time I spend writing this story.

That is a problem. When I started this fic I would write it to unwind. Literally any time I could spare I would spend working on the next chapter. The possibility of missing a week didn't enter into it because I would always have something ready since I would always be writing. Over the last several months that stopped happening. Part of that is the various events that I have been dealing with. I won't get into details, but honestly, I I was writing the last six months of my life as a story I would find the combination of events ridiculously convoluted and dismiss them as an attempt to manufacture drama. Also, amazingly, the majority of them had nothing to do with the current pandemic.

Those concerns diverted my time and attention from the story, but they weren't what was wrong. As the story became more popular I started to try to modify my writing to accommodate the concerns of my readers. After a series of rather significant negative reactions I became a lot more concerned with the broader structure of the chapters and arcs and how they came together. I wasn't just writing anymore, I was trying to craft a compelling narrative that would keep everyone happy while also accounting for rapid power growth and randomly assigned abilities. That was considerably less fun, and I stopped writing as a way to unwind.

When I started writing this story was my primary use of spare time. Any other media was usually chosen to be able to integrate new properties into the Forge. Eventually I started using media to take brakes from writing. Then writing became something I was budgeting to maintain my chapter schedule. The real wakeup call was when I realized I was doing other writing projects as a way to take a break from the work I was doing on this one. That was the tell that I was probably getting close to burnout on this project.

To deal with this I'm going to go back to writing the way I used to. The goal of this story was to address the core problem I always felt was present in jumpchains. You had this fascinating potential with exciting powers, fantastic worlds, and interesting characters, but people didn't dive into the details of the powers, they didn't explore the settings, and they didn't interact with the characters. My goal with this story has always been examination of the powers that make up the forge, exploration the setting of worm, and examination the interaction of the characters. Plot progression has always been fourth place, failing to medal. I began this story with a chapter in which the main character takes the bus home from work and goes to the gym, so it's not like I gave any false impression of the pacing.

Going forward, chapters are going to take as long as they take. I'm going to write what I want to write and enjoy getting into the setting and the events that are occurring. That might kill pacing, but posting delays and missed weeks also kills pacing. I need to write the story in a way I can enjoy writing it, otherwise I won't be able to sustain it. I would rather take a half million words to get to the Endbringer battle than burn out in a month of trying to rush through plot points. I have six hundred words of bullet points on what I want to cover before Joe's therapy session starts, and previously I was hoping to get through it in one chapter. That is not reasonable and it is not something I want to write. I know this might not be what some people want to hear, and if they decide to leave the fic all I can say is thank you for your support and for giving me a chance. I am going to be writing in a way that I know I can sustain, even if that means things like the opening of Garment's shop being an arc with more words than an early Harry Potter novel.

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THIS!
Yes yes yes, I am so glad that you understand @LordRoustabout ! This is what I was meaning in my posts like 6 months or so ago, but described with much more clarity. You should write what YOU want to write. If you want to improve your writing then choose to change in the way that YOU want to. No need to get bogged down in the comments or people who complain about the same things that you have already chosen against, like the March thing or the pacing.

I have my own things that I would change about this story, but i'm not going to tell you them because not the writer. You are. If I want this story to go the way I want I will write it myself (as Fanfiction or Omake), and so should everyone else. Pick up whatever helpful hints or tricky techniques you can in the comments, and leave the rest.

So just keep writing your story and know that you have my support, and the support of everyone who gives you the hugs and likes that you deserve on each chapter of this Epic that you are writing!
Remember to write what you like and have fun <3
 
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I think that when Leviatan attacks the Bay Joe will be forced to choose one of two options. Kill Leviatan even when he knows horrible things will happen because of it or fight it non-lethally while the city is destroyed around him and people die. There is no way Joe would be able to stomach the second one, even if he new what was coming he would still feel creeping guilt.
 
precognition runs on calculating the future based on factors in the present (that's why the forge disrupts Precognition, because it changes the present with no basis on past events in a non-meta sense)
I feel that I should point out that there are real time manipulation powers in worm, or at least I've heard it argued that it isn't likely shards would be faking such phenomena. Therefore, it would seem unlikely that literally all shard precog is just simulation. Especially with how bullshit wog says Path to Victory can still be when encountering completely new phenomena.

Forge still fucks it up with its out-of-context unknowableness, but I figured I'd still bring that all up.
 
I feel that I should point out that there are real time manipulation powers in worm, or at least I've heard it argued that it isn't likely shards would be faking such phenomena. Therefore, it would seem unlikely that literally all shard precog is just simulation. Especially with how bullshit wog says Path to Victory can still be when encountering completely new phenomena.

Forge still fucks it up with its out-of-context unknowableness, but I figured I'd still bring that all up.
If remember correctly time-travel was to costly energy wise, and precogs Throw each other off.
I find it more likely that time travel or viewing isn't in play due to energy vost.

It might just be fanon howvever.
 
I feel that I should point out that there are real time manipulation powers in worm, or at least I've heard it argued that it isn't likely shards would be faking such phenomena. Therefore, it would seem unlikely that literally all shard precog is just simulation. Especially with how bullshit wog says Path to Victory can still be when encountering completely new phenomena.

Forge still fucks it up with its out-of-context unknowableness, but I figured I'd still bring that all up.
You don't need to do a whole reality simulation to generate predictions. e.g I don't need a simulation of the world down to the quarks to know that if I want something to eat I can go to the supermarket and buy food.

Precog shards could just combine Clairvoyant's ability to view everything, Tattletale's ability to infer things from observed information and Accord's ability to generate super-intelligent plans using provided information. That would give them the ability to make largely reliable predictions without simulating the whole of reality for a long time.

PtV probably doesn't necessarily provide the best or most efficient path to the goal for the user. It probably provides the first plan that would work it finds, the easiest for it to calculate. If you ask it how to get the dish on the menu you will like the best it might tell you to just order all of them instead of simulating which one you will like best.
 
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I feel that I should point out that there are real time manipulation powers in worm, or at least I've heard it argued that it isn't likely shards would be faking such phenomena. Therefore, it would seem unlikely that literally all shard precog is just simulation. Especially with how bullshit wog says Path to Victory can still be when encountering completely new phenomena.

Forge still fucks it up with its out-of-context unknowableness, but I figured I'd still bring that all up.
From WoG (i.e. Wildbow), most time-manipulation powers — or, at least, the ones involving reversing it, resetting location/matter (e.g. Greyboy & Alabaster) — are actually the result of Shards messing around by other means to simulate time control. Stuff like "slowing down time" or "speeding time up" could presumably be achieved by combining dimensional trickery with the Theory of Relativity, which might account for Khonsu and Clockblocker's abilities as actual time control, but not reversing it: shards explicitly have to fake such phenomena.

After all, the ability to actually go back in time would effectively involve the reversal of entropy, i.e. the "holy grail" that the Entities are supposedly after to allow them to continue eating and expanding forever.
 
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Can Joe summon a Servant? Is that capability included in the Thaumaturgy mote or not? That would be interesting if it is.
The throne of heroes might exist, but the Grail system doesn't exist; it was artificial. I suppose if Joe was familiar with the idea and put time into it, he might be able to summon a servant like that one Einzbern did, but having a servant out without support of the grail is not easy.
Also, I doubt his knowledge approaches that subject tbh.
I think that when Leviatan attacks the Bay Joe will be forced to choose one of two options. Kill Leviatan even when he knows horrible things will happen because of it or fight it non-lethally while the city is destroyed around him and people die. There is no way Joe would be able to stomach the second one, even if he new what was coming he would still feel creeping guilt.
You ignore what he will hopefully have by then: a Displacer Feild.
He could Jurry Rig the tech to keep teleporting levi away.
Also, if he temporarily deployed a Core, things would be fine. Alternativley, have Fleet's drones with the Red Potion and tractor beams to heal people and get them out.
Joe might not want to reveal himself and all his tech, but he wouldn't allow harm to come to the city when he can stop it. A Core might be too much, but those Fleet Drones have already been constructed.
 
Alright. I have a question though, Does Joe already have protection against the Simurgh and Scion's precog/thinker powers? If so, does it also block Scion/Contessa's PtV? How powerful is his protection? And will it hold up to Scion's full power? I'm asking because I can't remember if he does.
 
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Alright. I have a question though, Does Joe already have protection against the Simurgh and Scion's precog/thinker powers? If so, does it also block Scion/Contessa's PtV? How powerful is his protection? And will it hold up to Scion's full power? I'm asking because I can't remember if he does.
Joe has a couple systems for fucking with thinkers:
First is timing his actions with rolls of the forge. The rolls are completely out of context, so they fuck with precog/predictions. You see this in March underestimating his tracing/hacking skills.
Second, everything in his workshop is unseen by shards, so he can improve drastically in the workshop and they won't know.
Third is trying to limit how much info is released, so being secretive about what tech he's deploying, not revealing any powers to anyone outside the workshop, not discussing certain knowledge outside the workshop (passenger knowledge, enbringers, etc.), etc.
EDIT: If he gets M/E, he gains a free perk called Out Of Context Problem. Basically only Coil could predict him at that point, but Joe would know that, so would still stick to his strategies until Coil was taken out.
 
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Joe has a couple systems for fucking with thinkers:
First is timing his actions with rolls of the forge. The rolls are completely out of context, so they fuck with precog/predictions. You see this in march underestimating his tracing skills.
Second, everything in his workshop is unseen by shards, so he can improve drastically in the workshop and they won't know.
Third is trying to limit how much info is released, so being secretive about what tech he's deploying, not revealing any powers to anyone outside the workshop, not discussing knowledge he shouldn't have/knowledge that might bring attention to him outside the workshop(passenger knowledge, enbringers, etc.), etc.
EDIT: If he gets M/E, he gains a free perk called Out Of Context Problem. Basically only Coil could predict him at that point, but Joe would know that, so would still stick to his strategies until Coil was taken out.
Alright, thanks. What about Scion and the Simurgh though? Can they brute force their way to seeing inside the workshop or it's so advanced that it also works on them?
 
Alright, thanks. What about Scion and the Simurgh though? Can they brute force their way to seeing inside the workshop or does it also work on them?
The workshop is protected by Washu Tech, so not even those two can see. In fact, WOG:
Inside his workshop Joe is hidden even from Scion. Washu doesn't accept things like god like power to be an excuse for being a peeping tom.
 
What about Scion and the Simurgh though? Can they brute force their way to seeing inside the workshop
Shallow already answered, but I have a little clarification: they can try to brute force their way literally, by kicking the door into the Workshop and walking inside. They'll going to find themselves in the nearest large body of water (i.e. most likely the bay), because Joe installed the SSS defense system against intruders too... Too bad he disabled the part that writing the "Idiot" (or something like that) on their forehead.
Although, if they counts as natural disasters, not intruders - yes, they can brute force their way into the Workshop.

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Shallow already answered, but I have a little clarification: they can try to brute force their way literally, by kicking the door into the Workshop and walking inside. They'll going to find themselves in the nearest large body of water (i.e. most likely the bay), because Joe installed the SSS defense system against intruders too... Too bad he disabled the part that writing the "Idiot" (or something like that) on their forehead.
Although, if they counts as natural disasters, not intruders - yes, they can brute force their way into the Workshop.

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The workshop is protected by Washu Tech, so not even those two can see. In fact, WOG:

Alright, thanks for answering and clarifying my questions. This story is so good, I doubt i'm gonna find another one like this in a while.
 
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