I think it's fine. What would be nice is a catchy way to refer to it.
I'd reword that sentence. Right now, it could be seen as implying that Cartwright was Commander. I would change it to "after [INSERT CATCHY NAME]" or something else instead of "after Cartwright".
I'd reword that sentence. Right now, it could be seen as implying that Cartwright was Commander. I would change it to "after [INSERT CATCHY NAME]" or something else instead of "after Cartwright".
I think it's fine. What would be nice is a catchy way to refer to it.
Oh I got that, like the bit on how he tried to tie into Kahurangi success into his doing well in putting Starfleet back together. And it does sound like at the start he got the ship righted, but then he got too aggressive. Also I think in some ways he hates Kahurangi. She oversaw a massive expansion of Starfleet, and actually got to run an actual State of Emergency that even the Pacifists agreed with against the biophage, was able to engage and attack the Syndicate, and she and Sousa have been able to fight a limited war with the Cardassians along with putting the Renissance and Connie-B into production as a combat cruiser, which is a better Ares. And the people love Kahurangi.Okay, I edited it to read "first Commander after the Cartwright Conspiracy". It's still possible someone could read it and come away with the impression Cartwright was Commander, but that just makes it a misleading article in-universe.
And I hope everyone realizes that this was Rogers being somewhat self-serving and spinning things in the best possible light for himself, excusing things he can't explain away. Which doesn't make him a liar, of course. It's all true from his own point of view.
"Khitomer" is already used as a shorthand/metonym for the politically more significant set of diplomatic accords. "Khitomer Conspiracy" works, but then so does "Cartwright Conspiracy."
Yeah. I mean, he kind of deflects the point that, as I mentioned earlier, that we could have had a highly active, effective Constitution-B fleet that would have done an admirable job securing the frontiers up through the 2320s. It'd probably even have been a lot cheaper than the ConnieBee program we wound up enacting, because we wouldn't have to rebuild all the ships from scratch. But no, not to be, because he HAD to try and squeeze the Excelsior's performance into a platform 80% the size with the benefit of only a single decade of technological advancement.Okay, I edited it to read "first Commander after the Cartwright Conspiracy". It's still possible someone could read it and come away with the impression Cartwright was Commander, but that just makes it a misleading article in-universe.
And I hope everyone realizes that this was Rogers being somewhat self-serving and spinning things in the best possible light for himself, excusing things he can't explain away. Which doesn't make him a liar, of course. It's all true from his own point of view.
I don't see Rogers as being especially bitter, although that could just be him being a good politician.Oh I got that, like the bit on how he tried to tie into Kahurangi success into his doing well in putting Starfleet back together. And it does sound like at the start he got the ship righted, but then he got too aggressive. Also I think in some ways he hates Kahurangi. She oversaw a massive expansion of Starfleet, and actually got to run an actual State of Emergency that even the Pacifists agreed with against the biophage, was able to engage and attack the Syndicate, and she and Sousa have been able to fight a limited war with the Cardassians along with putting the Renissance and Connie-B into production as a combat cruiser, which is a better Ares. And the people love Kahurangi.
Oh I got that, like the bit on how he tried to tie into Kahurangi success into his doing well in putting Starfleet back together. And it does sound like at the start he got the ship righted, but then he got too aggressive. Also I think in some ways he hates Kahurangi. She oversaw a massive expansion of Starfleet, and actually got to run an actual State of Emergency that even the Pacifists agreed with against the biophage, was able to engage and attack the Syndicate, and she and Sousa have been able to fight a limited war with the Cardassians along with putting the Renissance and Connie-B into production as a combat cruiser, which is a better Ares. And the people love Kahurangi.
On top of that one of our earliest actions was expanding the shipyards to the other member systems including Excelsior berths. Also a bit of self serving is the excuse on the poor science of the Ares, while it is our good science from Excelsiors and the 5YM in particular that allows us to build 2 Excelsiors a year plus other ships."Khitomer" is already used as a shorthand/metonym for the politically more significant set of diplomatic accords. "Khitomer Conspiracy" works, but then so does "Cartwright Conspiracy."
Yeah. I mean, he kind of deflects the point that, as I mentioned earlier, that we could have had a highly active, effective Constitution-B fleet that would have done an admirable job securing the frontiers up through the 2320s. It'd probably even have been a lot cheaper than the ConnieBee program we wound up enacting, because we wouldn't have to rebuild all the ships from scratch. But no, not to be, because he HAD to try and squeeze the Excelsior's performance into a platform 80% the size with the benefit of only a single decade of technological advancement.
And he says "I just dipped into the spare parts reserve for Excelsiors," but he doesn't own up to the fact that we probably could have had two Excelsior berths and Kumari starting construction rather earlier if he'd taken the same political oomph he put behind Ares and put it behind Excelsiors instead.
...Although come to think of it, that would explain why the two-megaton berth at Utopia Planitia is such a cheap option, even cheaper than setting up one-megaton berths in some locations, and why it's the only place in the Federation we can build one. We're not building a new facility, we're reactivating an old one that was decommissioned at the end of Rogers' term. The pp cost is because a lot of Councilors associate that berth with the Ares program, not because it would actually take significant effort to get it up and running again.
I'll do my best to remember that!@OneirosTheWriter I know you don't do a lot of omake rewards anymore, but if when you run the 2318 election the Hawks candidate should happen to win Mars according to your dice rolls...
Yeah, I'd bet on that. "Oh gee, NOW you want back in after I've gone down in flames trying to fix things and rebuild the organization!"She also resigned on him. Sousa too, but Sousa stuck a little longer. So there's probably a perception from him that she was one of those who abandoned his Starfleet.
They all fit with the other facts known to us, and most of them are easily checkable or soon will be (e.g. Kirk having given a speech to the Council right after Khitomer defending Starfleet's continued existence). I suspect that he's doing more exaggeration and shading of the truth than outright lying.Also, frankly, some of the things he says in the interview are probably bald-faced lies.
Oh, I quite agree- if Rogers had taken the political will he presumably spent starting the Ares project and getting its two-megaton berth started on, say, a Excelsior berth at Vulcan and a budget increase, we would probably have had five explorers at game start an six by the time the Biophage broke out, rather than four and five, respectively. We might have been able to reach five five-year missions by 2305, even.On top of that one of our earliest actions was expanding the shipyards to the other member systems including Excelsior berths.
His big excuse there is pretty clearly that he thought he could refit the Ares-class to an acceptable standard of sensor and scientific performance later. Which is more or less exactly what we wound up doing with the Centaur-A- and I strongly suspect that the Centaur was a Rogers-era project too, given that we only had two of the things when we took office.Also a bit of self serving is the excuse on the poor science of the Ares, while it is our good science from Excelsiors and the 5YM in particular that allows us to build 2 Excelsiors a year plus other ships.
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