Oh, speaking of crossovers, one of the ideas kicking around in my plot bunny thread is the PMMM cast getting reincarnated into Naruto. Would that Naruto version of Sabrina be able to control all chakra?

Well, as @Redshirt Army said, could always opt for Demon's Souls instead.

Or have someone wish for it. :V
What magic would you even get for wishing for Dark Souls? Really, really shitty immortality?
Speaking of crossovers:

If Madoka is Nanoha, and Homura is Fate, does that make Sabrina Hayate?
Snrk. Literally just posted a Nanoha crossover with Madoka taking Nanoha's place in my plot bunny thread yesterday. Nice timing.
 
I had been working on updating my vote, but now it's been many days without having thought about it. >_>

Not gonna update right now, need time to think and I'm be busy for a bit.

Votecrafting so far; needs work:

[] Brinapilot.
-[] Regain patience.
-[] If Riona's patience stretches thin, intersperse secondary topics.
-[] Dig at Riona's reasons.

(Previous vote called Sabrina's patience to be about to snap. Calm down.

Had been thinking of directly addressing Riona's baiting, calling her out on it, and still being the better woman and re-assuring we want to solve things peacefully. But I'm not sure.

Digging at Riona's reasons, and the reasons underneath those reasons is, I think, what we should've been doing all along. She won't tell us what her deal is; what can she tell us? We need to go deeper.*

Another line I was thinking of was '-[] Keep insisting you want to help.' Don't understimate the power of someone simply insisting on and on and on. As long as Riona's patience doesn't snap... that's why the part about changing topics is there; control the conversation.)

[] Offer and (ask Mami to) get refreshments. Don't leave the bubble nor stop talking.

(Not vital, but at least we've seen Riona does seem to have manners of some sort (offering us a drink), so maybe this would help ease social along.)

[] Answer:
-[] It's not about taking away. Your goal is to give her, everyone, a chance to do better.
-[] Killing and using people's actual Souls. Nobody deserves that. Is this what she wants to be?

(It's the first line that's really the answer. Riona's afraid of losing what's she's got, her collected army of souls, her sense of security. In order to solve things peacefully, we can't just take that away, we need Riona to give us a chance to make things work better.

The second line is aimed at making Riona think about the shades, perhaps about her hypothetical sister's shade. It might or might not be too confrontational? I don't know, it's been a while.)

[] Look for compromise.
-[] No more killing.
-[] You'll help fix her reason to 'need' an undead army. Then she'll release them.
--[] Acknowledge exceptions:
---[] Volunteers? Fine.
---[] Anyone she wanted to revive? You'll help.

(This vote block was made with the idea of Brinapilot in mind: It could be worded better, it's not about throwing these condition at Riona, but Sabrina reacting to the developing conversation at a level we can't from here, and trying to work towards these goals.)

[] If she won't share her goal, ask after her underlying reasons.
-[] What's her motivation? What can she share?

(*)

[] Secondary topics:
-[] De-Witching.
--[] Let Riona examine Aurora.
--[] Explain your experiments so far.
-[] Ask after her powers.
--[] What does your Soul look like?
-[] Wish rejection: describe Oriko's symptoms.


(The topics we could hit if the main discussion gets heated. Try and calm down and get Riona to calm down by spending time talking about other things.)

I've tried to explain each point, but I do need to do further thinking. Of course, maybe someone else will chop this for parts? :p

Spoiling this because it's big, thanks to explanations. Don't let this stop non-voting conversation.


Respawning at bonfires? Turning hollow? Summoning other magical girls to aid you in a fight? Praising the sun? Video-game developing powers? ^^"
Don't forget it needs to end in despair. :p

Wish for dark soul, get the darksign. Which then goes and spreads amongst the population and turns everyone into zombies!

PMMM! :V
 
Sabrina's Eberron equivalent might be somebody with a True Dragonmark(The level of Dragonmark above a Mark of Siberys that's basically a plot device). Like Erandis D'Vol had before she was forced into lichification.

In the meantime here's some ponderances I've had.

Firn has provided two hard and fast statements about Rionna ooc from the information post.


This isn't constructive. Maybe you didn't notice, but Rionna is absolutely a morally grey character, and Sabrina does behave morally. Perhaps erratically, but she always strives towards being a good person.


More importantly, some argue over the heinousness of Rionna's actions. Let me make this clear from an out of character position: Do not try and excuse her actions. You can justify them, perhaps, that she's working under a horrible system. She is, and so are Sabrina's friends. However, Rionna has done terrible things. She has not so far displayed any remorse for it.


1. Rionna is morally grey for the purposes of this quest. Not Sir Cackles von Babyeater the Orcish stereotype.

2. Rionna has done terrible things. Things that are perhaps justified by the system she has been working under yet things that should not be excused. This could also be interpreted as she is not doing anything terrible right now, which is a distinction that could matter when the GM has expressed a fondness for wordplay/hiding things in plain sight, and might support Riona's hypothesis about them not being aware.

Tangentially but still related to the previous bit of word of Firn, remorse for someone like Riona without someone she trusts enough to provide emergency cleansing could quite literally condemn her to a fate worse than death. Just because she has not displayed remorse so far does not mean she is incapable of it.

Here's a quote from an old Firnpost, and a list of old Vebyast points acknowledged as broadly correct.

Adfligo Systema. Our entire purpose is to break the system. PMAS is obviously intended to be a reconstruction of the deconstruction, the Gurren Lagann to PMMM's Evangelion.

Heroes should act, from the opening post. We're intended to be going out and proactively fixing things.

"Bad things don't happen for no reason."

"You can tell your own story with the same pieces, right?", in the context of Madoka not liking how grim 40k was. The implication is obviously that Firnagzen is doing the same thing, using the pieces of PMMM to tell a story that he prefers, one that's less sad.

Everything we do, from science to social, we're repeatedly rewarded for inclusion, teamwork, and idealism.

I get insightfuls from Firn on posts where I note how our powers appear to be designed to reward teamwork and cooperation.

Our powerset is a straightforward solution to the malthusian catastrophe that makes PMMM such a shithole in many cases.

Madoka literally wished to make the world better. Ultimately speaking, the root cause of PMMM's horrible grimness is that it's a philosophical statement. that philosophical statement is that "Hope is balanced by despair". Everything in PMMM revolves around that concept. In PMAS, that's been explicitly broken by a Madokami-tier Wish, with us as its instrument. The entire point of the quest is to have hope without despair.

Whatever nasty thing is talking to us in the invisitext, being WAFFy with our friend hampers its efforts.

Kirika's change to having antimagic in PMAS. The universe is literally telling Oriko to not die. That's as far from dark as you can possibly get.

The thing is, it need not be easy. I delight in wordplay and hiding the answers in plain sight (and for the record, there are still a decent number you guys simply haven't noticed yet). I came into PMAS with a massive, massive freewheeling plan, and I've been writing to that plan ever since, even with adjustments. Kirika's antimagic was one of those solutions I hid in plain sight, and to be frank I've been cackling over it ever since. It wasn't easy to find, but the solution exists.

That aside, it's not, and it's never been, about the universe (or me) making life easy or giving rewards if the genre conventions are adhered to. As a general rule, the answers are hidden in the general direction of being kind, emphatic, and so forth. So continuing to be nice tends to have you stumble over the answers, as has happened before. Quite simply: the answers are in the direction of being excellent to people. They're not in the direction of being Hard Girls Making Hard Choices.

So the question for those who want peace is how do we be excellent to Rionna without going Hard Girls Making Hard Choices? A route that simultaneously understands her past actions were perhaps justified yet does not excuse them because they were farked up too. How do we pull a Stannis on her? I think I've got an idea.

Step 1. Verify whether or not her shades are suffering. How do we know whether or not they are suffering? We're a grief controller. If we ask to see several shades, we will know by the grief they bear whether or not they suffer.

Step 2. If they don't suffer, become her oversight. Temper her justice with mercy.

Assuming the majority of Rionna's targets are people we would give the join or die/get frozen/jailed etc speech anyways, if this works we can:

1. Get a chance to save Riona's victims
2. Save Riona's victims victims.
3. Work on convicing her she doesn't need the shades anymore
4. Find out what the fuck her problem is

Riona has a network of some kind she uses to find these people. Odds are they will hurt more people in the intermission between us freezering her and us getting our own network to find these people. My vote also makes sense because it turns our past demands into Door in the Face Style Negotiation(Door-in-the-face technique - Wikipedia).

In addition, this route is teamwork/going out and fixing things.


[X]In that case there's only one way left for us to avoid a fight.
-[X]I need to see some of your shades so I know they aren't suffering for myself.
-[X]Once I've confirmed that they aren't suffering, you invite me to your future hunts for Magical Girls. All of them. You let me know their crimes beforehand and the basis for your knowledge. You cease hunting normal people. You let me grant your targets the opportunity to take a clear seed and should they wish it, a free flight to Mitakihara in exchange for sinning no more.
-[X]If they reject the offer, their souls are yours. If they sin again in my territory their gems get separated from their bodies and their bodies cryogenically frozen. Or they end up prisoners of an associate of mine who controls buildings. If they sin again outside my territory their souls are yours.
-[x]If Riona asks why: A majority of her targets sound like people you would want to talk to anyways and this enables you to save more of their victims, compared to if you need to track the people she'd target down from scratch after sealing her gem in an anti-magic box and freezing her body. The problem is that as that as this conversation indicates, you suck at negotiation. You're hoping having her waiting in the wings will make this process easier.
-[x]In addition to my combat skills(I've got a recording of a sparring match I had with that building controller if you need a demonstration) to compensate for the increased difficulty, I am prepared to offer hypersonic transportation and cleansing should you accept these terms, and a clear seed after the first hunt we make together.
-[x]Any questions or do we have a deal?


Other Chunks of Vote idea I came up with in no particular coherency(clearing one of her seeds no strings attached is a potential negotiation tactic to create reciprocity pressure):

[]Given she does not want to stop, she does not want to release her shades, she does not want to fight you, and her not liking to use her powers on decent people is a reasonable supposition, you only see one way left to avoid violence.

-[]A precog with a Sabrina-shaped blind spot told you a friend of yours dies of soul loss tonight. Blue haired power copier named Sayaka Miki. Significantly more impulsive than you, with similiar levels of idealism. A decent person. She cannot copy your powers, and if she dies of soul loss, that fight will happen. You don't know if Sayaka or Riona makes the first move, and from a practical standpoint it's irrelevant to you. Considering you're a terrible liar, you only see one thing left that can reduce the odds of this fight happening.

-[]You've realized the reason you hate what she does is that nobody got the chance to make them a better offer first, give them the opportunity to repent. You would like to be invited on her future hunts to make those better offers, and are willing to lend your skills to compensate for the increased difficulty this will add to her hunts, and provide a clear seed upon completion of your first joint hunt with her. Hypersonic transportation, cleansing, exotic instruments, deadly lasers. You've got a DVD of a sparring match you had with a building controller if she needs a demonstration.

-[]Offer to clear one of her seeds, because if you aren't intending to kill her and still want to make a deal with her, you have no excuse for letting a seed in her possession continue suffering for what Riona did.

-[]Ever Tried judging Kyubey?
 
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I think quests and morality don't go well together, morality is something to discuss with as little stakes as possible..and the quest means there is always some stake, because it hurts to have a character you feel a measure of control of do something you find reprehensible. It feels like _you_ have done something reprehensible.

Also..people have strong opinions about morality options that aren't going to change very often, unlike questions about strategy or tactics which because they depend so much on the quest itself for substance, sure different people do have opinions on strategy or tactics or how people work, but there's much more of a common ground of an ability feel like we are working together, and much more space for people to change their minds, so it is much more productive and fun.

I know none of this is new, but I just wanted to get down, why someone like me who actually can enjoy fairly acrimonious debates, stopped really participating.
 
Re: Boat. Make it submersible too, with wide, magically reinforced viewing screens and enchanted to amplify ambient light to visible yet comfortable levels. A deep sea tour sounds really awesome.

If we also want to unwind with both Mami and Homura, we could bring the gang to the mountains (or somewhere remote) for some target practice. A sniping contest between Mami and Homura sounds pretty neat, with Sayaka acting as spotter. Maybe make it a weekend camping trip too.

Thirdly, I'm thinking Tsurua Yuki's territory control power could make Danger Room-esque obstacle courses/training arenasz which can be great for any newbie allied meguca that could use the extra training. Something to think about, if we get to collab with her, or she (somehow) allows Sayaka to copy her power.
 
Hello! So, I'm catching up with the story as the last time I read things was around " "We Don't Go To Asunaro..." pt. 17". Any progress on what the black feathers were, at some point?
 
PMAS can be a really difficult quest to participate in. I enjoy reading updates but constantly bounce out of discussion. A few reasons:

1. The constant refrains that Sabrina is here to "fix everything" just sound like such unbridled arrogance that it completely turns me off. I don't even care if the QM declared it possible; when someone goes around declaring they have the power to fix the world I get super-supicious and repelled and kind of want them to get slapped in the face and taught a lesson. Obviously these feelings are completely at odds with the thread culture and feelings.

2. The focus on SCIENCE! and expecting players to come up with novel applications for Sabrina's abilities weirds me out and turns me off. It reminds me of so-called "Rationalist" stories in all the bad ways, like the goal of the story is to hack the mechanics somehow.

3. There's only so much 'dealing with teenage girl emotions' that I can take, at least with this level of immediacy and buy-in. Any particular scene exhausts me and makes me run out of patience long before the story is ready to move on.

"But Briefvoice, do you really enjoy reading the updates? Sounds like this quest just isn't for you and you should move on to something else. Now."

No, I really do enjoy reading the updates because it doesn't require me to be involved so I just read in depth the parts I get deeply interested in and skim anything that seems boring.
 
"But Briefvoice, do you really enjoy reading the updates? Sounds like this quest just isn't for you and you should move on

Uh, I hate to say it, but you got this argument wrong.

"But Briefvoice, if you'd rather not deal with teenage girl emotions and there's only so much of the quest you can take, and you constsntly bounce out of discussion, why aren't you subscribed to the story-only thread?"

The one thing nothing in that post explained to me was why you derive pleasure from participating, if you loathe participating so much?

A bit rude of me, I suppose, but it should be asked.
 
That seems backwards to me. I mean it lines up sad to sad. But it also lines up crush to crushee, and active to passive.
Not really? Fate's pretty devoted to Nanoha and sees her as having "saved" her in a way not unlike how Homura does towards Madoka, albeit probably in a psychologically healthier way, so I think that actually lines up pretty well.
 
Uh, I hate to say it, but you got this argument wrong.

"But Briefvoice, if you'd rather not deal with teenage girl emotions and there's only so much of the quest you can take, and you constsntly bounce out of discussion, why aren't you subscribed to the story-only thread?"

Sometimes it's nice to go back and read a little of the discussion prior to an update for context on what the players meant.

The one thing nothing in that post explained to me was why you derive pleasure from participating, if you loathe participating so much?

I don't! That's why I say I keep bouncing off and why my occasional forays into thread participation (usually occasioned by some decision point I'm a little interested in) quickly peter to a halt after two or three posts.

But the QM post this time seemed to be calling for some meta commentary on what people do or don't get out of thread participation, so I thought I'd add my two cents.
 
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