I think she's already aware true grief manipulation is hax beyond moving grief around due to being in a privacy sphere right now.

[] She's being obstructive because she thinks you can't offer her anything and that this trip will be a waste unless she can goad you into a fight and take your soul. Convince her otherwise.
[] You have much more to offer her than just moving grief around.
-[] Give examples as appropriate - conceptual effects like the privacy sphere, gross physical effects like intercontinental travel, Grief-system effects like reading Witch Names.
[] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.
 
Bit of a synthesis of a lot of different votes, here. Credit to @Vebyast , @Conjured Blade , and @TJSomething for vote components.

[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible - you could probably get to Edinburgh in under an hour.
-[x] And what you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.
[X] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.
-[X] If it seems appropriate, propose a trade of services. You've wanted her help for future dewitching efforts ever since you learned she was a soul manipulator. You've had preliminary results already, but with a soul specialist you're certain the results would be far better. You're certain that you could help her accomplish whatever her own goals are, in return.
 
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I feel like it's still missing the high-level guidance; Brinapilot needs to know why we're countering the idea that we can't help her.

[x] Redshirt Army
 
Incorporated Vebyast's point.

[X] She's being obstructive because she thinks you can't offer her anything and that this trip will be a waste unless she can goad you into a fight and take your soul. Convince her otherwise.
[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible - you could probably get to Edinburgh in under an hour.
-[x] And what you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.
[X] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.
-[X] If it seems appropriate, propose a trade of services. You've wanted her help for future dewitching efforts ever since you learned she was a soul manipulator. You're certain that you could help her accomplish whatever her own goals are.
 
[X] She's being obstructive since she thinks the trip was a waste, and that you can't help her. Convince her otherwise. Be as direct as possible.
-[X] True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible - you could probably get to Edinburgh in under an hour.
-[X] What you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.

[X] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.
-[X] If it seems appropriate, propose a trade of services. You've wanted her help for future dewitching efforts ever since you learned she was a soul manipulator.
--[X] You've had preliminary results already, but with a soul specialist you're certain the results would be far better. You're certain that you could help her accomplish whatever her own goals are, in return.

My own edit, only slightly different from @Conjured Blade 's.
 
What are the high-level goals of this vote again? Are you trying to gain her trust, are you trying to figure out what her goals are so we can figure out a counter-offer, are you just trying to figure out why she's ganking grief spreaders?

[] She's being obstructive because she thinks we can't offer her anything and this trip will be a waste unless she can goad us into a fight so she can take our soul. Convince her otherwise.
[] You have much more to offer than just moving grief around. Privacy sphere. Or, you think you could have her back home in approximately an hour. The few things you can't do you have teammates for.
[] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.

The first thing that needs to be done is that we need to directly disagree with that. The second thing that needs to be done is that we need to directly communicate to her that we know damn well where her problem is and still believe we can help with it, because she appears to be assuming

that we will not be willing to travel to Scotland with her. When, on the contrary, we are totally capable of & willing to do that, just not by @#*)(!!$ twelve-hour commercial air.

She thinks that she no longer has anything to gain here. And until she stops believing that, nothing we say will be treated in any manner except dismissively. Therefore, we must address that immediately.

Now just go ahead and remove everything in your vote that describes her antagonistically: "obstructive" "goad us into a fight" yadda yadda yadda, it's all pointless and serves no purpose except to impair Sabrina's ability to perform diplomacy.

When we know what her motives are, which we will only gain by not treating her as an enemy, at that time we can decide whether we want to kill her or not. Before then, we have to avoid this stuff.

[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible, and most of what we aren't capable of we have people for, or we expect to become capable of in the near-to-mid term.
--[X] Given what she's told us, and given her presence here, it's pretty clear that there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
--[X] If it takes a trip by hypersonic grief aircraft with timestop to fulfill your end of a bargain, so be it.
[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.

I'd rather avoid specifying anything about what we can do. It's enough to simply say that we're capable of more, and then to hypothesize her problem's location back in Scotland. Her reaction to us saying that we can help her and asserting that we know that she has a problem back in Scotland should be sufficient to put things on the straight-and-narrow afterwards, hence why my vote is so short. If her reaction is "neener neener no you can't help me," then we can get into specifics of why we can't help her because she'll have confirmed that there is a problem. If her reaction is to push back on the problem, we'll have more-or-less confirmation that there is a problem and that she needs help. If her reaction is to attack us, we gem her. Etcetera.

Overplaying our hand here by putting specific stuff on the table is pointless, achieves little, and risks much, just as going on another story about how we want to make the world a better place would: we are only in a position to make educated guesses about what specific things we have that she might find useful, beyond the offer of limitless magic that we've already put in front of her and pulled back in the form of the clear seed, and guessing wrong would be... a poor action. We need do nothing but change the subject to her problem in Scotland after asserting that we're capable of more than she thinks we are, and then let her fill in all the blanks we're currently missing: why precisely she thinks we can't help, what precisely her problem is...

Almost everything I laid out in the previous essay is, while strong and I feel probably highly correct, still a guess. It's essentially clear that there is something important back in Scotland and that she's here for a reason, while she's outright said she thinks we can't help her. It's my feeling that by addressing those more-or-less fully confirmed points, we can drag a bunch more information out of her.

So, what this vote looks like is:

[] Be direct (avoid going off on stories or beating around the bush because it hasn't worked with her)
[] Do the following without provoking her, in fact, while explicitly de-provoking her because she's pretty fucking provoked right now. Also, avoid having her outright dismiss the following attempts, which is a real risk as-is, because she could easily respond to "why can't I help you" with "well y'don't trust me and i don't trust you, also you're an idiot and a judgemental moralist."
-[] Try to get information from her regarding why we can't help her
-[] Try to get information from her regarding Scotland
--[] Overall, try to get information from her regarding what we might be able to offer her that she would value more highly than the clear seed.
[] Cut to voting instead of starting some argument when she inevitably throws an outburst at us again.

So why did I phrase it like this?

[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." We can help her: we are capable of much beyond moving grief around, and most of what we aren't capable of we have people for, or we expect to become capable of in the near-to-mid term.
--[X] Given what she's told us, and given her presence here, it's pretty clear that there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.

Stating that we can help her prevents the surrounding stuff from coming off as any sort of threat, as talking about how great your capabilities are is wont to be. If she wants to counter the statement, then if she wants her counter to be strong she'll have to point to some specific capability she believes us to lack, which would give us a ton of information and a big opening because between us and our allies, there really aren't capabilities we lack, just ones we haven't developed. Otherwise, any weaker counter would allow us to proceed with the next line, after which she'll be in a position where virtually anything she does will give us more information: any reaction to the assertion that something important is in Scotland, any reaction to our ability to help with that something, even getting cagey would be informative.

And then, well, we don't have particularly reliable information on what other things to ask or assert as of the moment. So... cut.
 
[X] She's being obstructive since she thinks the trip was a waste, and that you can't help her. Convince her otherwise. Be as direct as possible.
-[X] True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible - you could probably get to Edinburgh in under an hour.
-[X] What you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.

[X] Ask her what it is she values so much, and what the problem is back home.
-[X] If it seems appropriate, propose a trade of services. You've wanted her help for future dewitching efforts ever since you learned she was a soul manipulator.
--[X] You've had preliminary results already, but with a soul specialist you're certain the results would be far better. You're certain that you could help her accomplish whatever her own goals are, in return.

To be quite frank, I'd rather immediately and directly try to convince her that the trip hasn't been a waste by deducing the location of her problem and asserting that we can help with it than do literally anything else whatsoever.

We can get into specifics, elaboration, and whatever else afterwards. But trying to do anything but directly point at her problem and say that we can help with it seems like a total waste of time based on how the conversation has gone. There are already things on the table that we clearly want, after all: her shades, not killing people... She's got plenty to offer us.
 
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Hmm.

I'm... honestly, going for shorter updates and responding to what Rionna says in them probably is the best way to get through this conversation.

My primary concern with it, upon reflection for why I was feeling put off with that approach, is that the thread may not have the patience to get through multiple updates of Rionna being Rionna with little apparent progress being made.

But I already wrote up a big thing about needed to trust ones fellow thread participants, and trying to rush to the part where Rionna actually tells us what the fuck her brain damage is... well, it's pretty likely to mess stuff up as well.

So, I suppose:

[X] Kaizuki
 
Hmm. I'm voting for a more confrontational approach, because I feel like she can go "Not your fucking business" on us at any moment and shut us off.
The thing is, she doesn't have to provide us any information, so provoking her into revealing it seems to me a more surefire method... though I do admit it can quickly escalate to a Social faux pas the size of Sakura's head.

Edit: weell
Ninja'd?
 
My primary concern with it, upon reflection for why I was feeling put off with that approach, is that the thread may not have the patience to get through multiple updates of Rionna being Rionna with little apparent progress being made.

But I already wrote up a big thing about needed to trust ones fellow thread participants, and trying to rush to the part where Rionna actually tells us what the fuck her brain damage is... well, it's pretty likely to mess stuff up as well.

Yeah, my take on impatience currently boils down to "I am doing nothing. I will post essays until people embrace patience, even if it takes weeks."
 
Hmm. I'm voting for a more confrontational approach, because I feel like she can go "Not your fucking business" on us at any moment and shut us off.
The thing is, she doesn't have to provide us any information, so provoking her into revealing it seems to me a more surefire method... though I do admit it can quickly escalate to a Social faux pas the size of Sakura's head.

Edit: weell
Ninja'd?

If we wanted to go that way we'd bring up her sister. Oriko told us not to do that, so I think that we're probably better off avoiding that course of action.
 
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  • [X] Be as direct as possible.
    -[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." We can help her: we are capable of much beyond moving grief around, and most of what we aren't capable of we have people for, or we expect to become capable of in the near-to-mid term.
    --[X] Given what she's told us, and given her presence here, it's pretty clear that there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
    [X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.
    [X] Reaction: Disappointment. Tone: Very serious.
    -[X] Calm down.
    -[X] Offer cleansing and cleanse yourself.
    [X] Look Riona in the eyes. Override interruptions.
    -[X] Show her Aurora.
    --[X] Ask if she sees anything unusual in the Seed.
    --[X] Briefly explain your dewitchification experiments.
    -[X] When you heard about her from Nadia, you were really happy, because an expert on souls could make a huge difference in making this dream a reality.
    -[X] ...but you can't work with her. Not while she continues to enslave souls. You'll try not to judge, but you're not going to condone it.
    [X] She came here with the intent of killing another false Grief controller. What does she intend to do now?
    -[X] She went out of her way to present herself as a villain who enjoys enslaving others. You don't intend to buy into that provocation, if that's what she was hoping for.
    -[X] She is free to stay in Mitakihara as long as she doesn't cause any trouble.
    -[X] Your offer remains open, if she changes her mind.
    [X] Be on guard for any aggressive moves, and be ready to signal Mami and Homura if it looks like Rionna is going to attack.
    [x] Keep Rionna talking.
    -[x] Flat out tell her that you want her help with dewitching, and that you're offering her the cleansing she wants. Why is she so willing to leave?
    [x] ABSOLUTELY DO NOT LET RIONNA NOTICE THIS, KEEP YOUR EMOTIONAL REACTION TO THIS MUTED:
    -[x] Calmly message Mami with grief, requesting that she not react and contact Homura for timestop, please.
    --[x] You need to discuss what Rionna has said with Mami, Homura, and Sayaka to decide what to do. You won't commit to any action without that discussion first.
    ---[x] Keep calm, do not commit to hostile action against Rionna in your mind.
    [X] Sigh, relax your visible tension, maybe slump a little bit.
    -[X] "You're not very easy to work with."
    [X] Explain and demonstrate your power
    -[X] Pull grief from your soul gem, float it around, make a few shapes. Perhaps a flute that starts softly playing music?
    -[X] Pull a little bit of grief from a grief seed, just to prove its possible
    --[X] Explain that floating grief is easy to manage, especially given use of a 4th dimension of space. If the cloud ever gets to be a bit too much you can just shove it down Kyubey's backhole. We can demonstrate this afterwards if she'd like.
    [X] After power explanation, move on to explaining your goals.
    -[X] Emphasize your desire for magical girls around the world to be able to live normal lives
    --[X] Ultimately, you want to break Kyubey's wretched system of grief and suffering, and replace it with something better
    ---[X] Some enchanted artefact that can absorb grief, or the proliferation of clear seeds or something that'll ensure magical girls can live long and peaceful lives, witches can be slowly but surely removed as a threat, and maybe Kyubey can even still accumulate grief for his anti-entropy efforts.
    [X] Now Riona knows what you can do and what your goals are. What's her place going to be in things?
    -[X] She can choose to help Sabrina with her powers, with her experience and very different perspective
    -[X] She can choose to go home in peace and deal with her own shit for however long it takes for Sabrina to fix things and bring infinite cleansings all the way to Ireland
    -[X] She can, for whatever reason, oppose this. Preferably with logical argument rather than sudden hostilities. Maaaybe don't mention this? Let it go unsaid unless she comments.
    --[X] Whatever her immediate choices, know that enslaved and possibly suffering shades of the dead won't be tolerated forever. That kind of shit belongs in Kyubey's system, not ours.
    [x] You flew half way around the world to find a real Grief cleanser, and you're just going to leave? No. You came here looking for something. Well, so am I. Let's deal.
    [x] I'm trying to figure out how to turn a witch back into a person. The Clear Seed is the first step. They have thousands of times the capacity of regular Grief Seeds. One of these can keep a magical girl clean for centuries. And eventually we hope to enchant something that will do the job without needing souls at all. No more witchouts. No more used Seeds going into Kyubey's back for him to do god-knows-what to. No more need for girls to put themselves through this hell of hunting and fighting to survive. We can all just live like real people.
    [x] When we no longer need Seeds to survive, we can start helping them, too. We've already gotten some small results from injecting positive emotions into the Clear Seed. Your soul powers might be the key to making this back into a Soul Gem.
    [x] You came here looking for a charlatan, a dragon to slay, but I'm not your enemy. I want to help people. Ask Nadia Bennouna, she'll confirm that I'm for real.
    [x] You fought the false Grief Cleansers because they were witching girls out. We don't want anyone to witchout either. We can make a world where no one does, ever again.
    [x] Please. Help us.
    [x] Why?
    [X] If at any point she displays surprise, cut to voting. If she tries to leave, cut to voting.
    [X] Be pensive. Body language should be asking a capital-Q Question.
    [X] What does she live for?
    -[X] It would be easy to make her out as the classic utterly powerful, knowledgeable, and selfish magical girl.
    -[X] Except that that requires she have something to be selfish about.
    -[X] And whatever that is, it's pretty clearly back home, with the majority of her shades guarding it. Not her city.
    [x] Everyone has a goal of some kind, something that keeps them going.
    -[x] You already know mine. Yours though I'm not so sure on. I think there's something specific you want to do with my power. Something beyond survival.
    -[x] We both want what the other one of us can provide. We don't trust each other enough to cooperate... *yet*. So we'll trade. You help me find out what happens with Dewitching research, and whatever your goal is... so long as it isn't super-villainy, I'll help you with it, and I'll prove to you with actions, not words, that you don't need to rely on those shades forever to accomplish it. You want my power that badly, I'll designate you my insurance policy if you release a few right now. If the research kills me, and you can claim my soul, it's yours.
    [X] Find her core goals.
    -[X] Ask bluntly.
    --[X] Everyone has something that drives them. We exist to break the magical girl system. Some people only cling to life by reflex.
    --[X] Why does she choose to live? (Phrasing, very specifically: not "why is she alive". The meaning must clearly refer to what she lives for, and not lean towards implying that we are asking why we shouldn't kill her.)
    -[X] She has a motive in targeting Grief movers. And it sounds like she can't relocate to work with you.
    -[X] is her drink enchanted with Memories?
    [x] You came here looking for a charlatan, a dragon to slay, but we're not your enemy. We help people. Ask Nadia Bennouna, she'll confirm.
    -[X] We don't want anyone to witchout either. We can make a world where no one does, ever again.
    [X] Her interests are relevant to us because we want to propose a trade. We might work together even if we don't trust each other.
    -[X] Rionna helps with Dewitching research and making the world a better place.
    --[X] You can promise that it is exactly what it sounds like
    [X] You'll help Riona achieve her goals, just like you want for every magical girl. We have reach and power
    -[X] First, we want to apprentice on her enforcement tasks. We will show her our morality as action. She can overwatch.
    -[X] Help grant her heart's desire? Even if it's just something that doesn't help others, but makes her happier.
    ---[X] What could we offer, in exchange for no further soul taking while we cooperate?
    [x] Please. Help us.
    [X] Be as direct as possible.
    -[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible, and most of what we aren't capable of we have people for, or we expect to become capable of in the near-to-mid term.
    --[X] Given what she's told us, and given her presence here, it's pretty clear that there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
    --[X] If it takes a trip by hypersonic grief spacecraft to fulfill your end of a bargain, so be it.
    [X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.
 
If we wanted to go that way we'd bring up her sister. Oriko told us not to do that, so I think that we're probably better off avoiding that course of action.

Even I'm not so insane that I would do something a precog we don't absolutely distrust specifically warned us against doing. :V

( Looking at you, Ersatz... :sour:)
 
Oh, one change, I think. I do kind of want something in case she cuts us off...

Newly-added conditionals in yellow. And... that should be good... Basically amounts to "if she cuts you off, don't roll over her but do absolutely finish saying what needs to be said." It's honestly pretty redundant... ><

[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." We can help her: we are capable of much beyond moving grief around, and most of what we aren't capable of we have people for, or we expect to become capable of in the near-to-mid term.
--[X] If she cuts you off on this, dig for information while also pointing out that it's pretty clear there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
-[X] Given what she's told us, and given her presence here, it's pretty clear that there is a problem involving something she values above most else back home.
[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.
 
Hmm. To cut down on redundancy, how about:

[X] She's being obstructive since she thinks the trip was a waste, and that you can't help her. Convince her otherwise. Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." We can help her: True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible, and what you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.

[X] Whether she heard you out or not, dig for further information on her situation and potential problems in Edinburgh. Be careful not to come across as threatening.

[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.
 
[X] She's being obstructive since she thinks the trip was a waste, and that you can't help her. Convince her otherwise. Be as direct as possible.
-[X] Begin by countering her earlier assertion that we "can't help her at all." We can help her: True Grief Manipulation is extremely flexible, and what you can't do, you've got people for, or can find people for. Unlimited cleansing is a hell of a bargaining tool.

Still has serious structural problems pursuant with everything I said a little earlier, but might be on the right track...?

Oh, I'm just an idiot.


[X] Be as direct as possible.
-[X] You can help her: you don't know the nature of whatever problem there is surrounding whatever it is back home that she values so much, but you're capable of an awful lot beyond just moving grief around.
--[X] Virtually anything you're not currently capable of, you either have allies who are capable of or you expect to develop the capability for in the near-to-mid term.
[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.

Problem solved.
 
I still think including the initial reasoning from Vebyast to inform Brinapilot is a good idea.

[X] NOT TO BE VOCALIZED, PROVIDED AS INFORMATION FOR BRINA: You won't get anything done here unless you can break her existing belief that you can't help her. So, be as direct as possible about this:
-[X] You can help her: you don't know the nature of whatever problem there is surrounding whatever it is back home that she values so much, but you're capable of an awful lot beyond just moving grief around.
--[X] Virtually anything you're not currently capable of, you either have allies who are capable of or you expect to develop the capability for in the near-to-mid term.
[X] Cut to voting fairly quickly.

Good? I don't want anything about obstructionism or such in here. No negative connotations to taint the pot.
 
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You know what would be direct? Letting her actually see the clear seed. It's pretty obvious she doesn't value Sabrina's words much, and it's the best proof available.
 
Sabrina literally snatched it the way the second Rionna looked at it, and then said she didn't trust her. That's not exactly what I would call 'letting her examine it'. It's a tantalising show at something she's not going to get.

I agree with you completely and totally. But I don't know that going back on that decision just yet is a good idea in the slightest. Wait for a bit of development first.
 
I agree with you completely and totally. But I don't know that going back on that decision just yet is a good idea in the slightest. Wait for a bit of development first.
My problem with that is that there's no trust here. Rionna's not going to take something Sabrina says to be true; I think the onus is on Sabrina to reach out, even if it means taking a risk. With that in mind, here's an attempt.

[X] If you could prove to her that you could help her, would she stop? Or at least pause and not take any more souls. She said 'will not and cannot', not that she wanted to.
-[X] Extend some trust. Show her the Clear Seed. Let her examine it, with the clear expectation that you'll get it back.
-[X] Tell her it's your first step towards Dewitching.

And yes, there's no guarantee that's what she wants, but it's the best guess we have at the moment. Also, despite having done monstrous things and generally being pretty rude, she doesn't strike me as a person who'd just pocket the Seed. She's too powerful to really care about owning one (much) and is probably more interested in what it represents.
 
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