Anyway. What I would recommend changing.
Thanks for the support and suggestions!
Some of what you desire to be fixed is intentional. I've never been a fan of the robotic feeling 'I must never get angry at anybody' version of Sabrina who constantly,
constantly bends over backwards to avoid giving offense. I know it's not how this very wordy thread tends to operate, but I like the idea of a firm, no-nonsense Sabrina who draws a line in the sand and says 'no further'.
Simultaneously, I am absolutely aghast at the level of hostility the thread has been displaying towards Riona, but am trying to take this into account dispite my disagreement with them.
With those thoughts in mind, a level of confrontation is intentional. A form of compromise between the thread's hostility, Sabrina's moral stance and my own desire to display a bit of spine. However, I do want to avoid provoking her via
needless confrontation. So it might be wise to dial it back a bit, you're right. I'll think on it.
I also ended up avoiding mentioning the dewitching project, I'm still on the fence about bringing that up just yet. Sayaka copying powers, Hildegard feeding on 'hope', that sort of thing would be associated with the dewitching. Before bringing that up, I want to gauge her reaction to Sabrina's efforts to break the system. Or in other words, that'd all be for next vote. Seriously, how often does more than half a vote get left behind? Can't fit everything into every vote, and I'm already verging on being a bit wordy.
In summary, I'll take your suggestions under advisement and think about how to improve the vote along those lines, but I'll avoid making changes just yet. Feel free to ping me about this later if I go dark and more than just us have voted for it.