[X] The Eyes
I'm mostly ok with The Eyes vote although I still feel like we should adjust the wording when discussing Hijiri's magic

-[] Explain Hijiri's mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.

Could be changed to

-[] Explain Hijiri's copy magic might give her access to the Pleiades mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
Adhoc vote count started by 4Dname on Jun 21, 2017 at 1:17 PM, finished with 119251 posts and 23 votes.

  • [X] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
    - [X] You're concerned. Ask Mami for her guidance on how to approach things, and follow it.
    [X]Sympathize with magical girl career pressures. Perhaps there's a solution: Segue into clear seed discussion
    - [X] We have prototypes but need testers.
    - [X] All it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or should we provide one?
    - [X] Give the standard disclaimers.
    [X] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends.
    [X] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
    -[X] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
    -[X] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.
    [X] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition? Be insistent.
    -[X] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time.
    [X] Keep the conversation going, but try to end it on a high note.
    [X] Ask Kazusa if she's available tomorrow. We'll pick her up during school time and bring her over. Figure out a time and place to meet up. Don't take no for an answer; it's no trouble and you don't have anything better to do anyway.
    -[X] Explain: Your ability to refresh Seeds, so don't discard them. Clear Seeds, every meguca group should have one, you'd appreciate the chance to have more beta testers.
    [X] Once you're done with Kazusa, bring back the Privacy Bubble.
    [X] Tell them about you bringing Kazusa over, and then properly visiting Asunaro later on.
    -[X] Explain Hijiri's copy magic might give her access to the Pleiades mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
    -[X] Mami is going by default.
    [X] Say goodbye to the Kures.
    [X] Ask Homura to have that chat, in private.
    [x] Phoenixian
    [x] And now I'm worried about you Kazusa, you didn't answer about how hunting is, you're worried about Mitakihara being able to support seven girls when your group is seven girls, and you're apparently so busy hunting you don't have time for school. I can be over in an hour to refresh your gems and grief seeds.
    [x] The Pheonixian
 
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I feel that it would be polite to let the others have a say in the visit, before deciding anything specific. Maybe let Mami catch up with Kazusa, if she recovered enough for that to be possible,while we clue the others in about what exactly's going on, before reaching a decision?
 
We could grab Homura and Time Stop over to Asunaro...do some stealthy cleansing.

Sabrina the Grief Thief.
 
-[] Explain Hijiri's mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.

Could be changed to

-[] Explain Hijiri's copy magic might give her access to the Pleiades mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
Oh, yeah, that's right:

[X] Ask Kazusa if she's available tomorrow. We'll pick her up during school time and bring her over. Figure out a time and place to meet up. Don't take no for an answer; it's no trouble and you don't have anything better to do anyway.
-[X] Explain your ability to refresh Seeds, so don't discard them. Clear Seeds, every meguca group should have one, you'd appreciate the chance to have more beta testers.

[X] Once you're done with Kazusa, bring back the Privacy Bubble.
[X] Tell them about you bringing Kazusa over, and then properly visiting Asunaro later on.
-[X] Explain Hijiri's copy magic might give her access to the Pleiades mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
-[X] Mami is going by default.

[X] Say goodbye to the Kures.
[X] Ask Homura to have that chat, in private.
 
So right now the leading plan is:

Okay, so first off I'm not sure this plan is blunt enough to get through Michiru's layer of denial, which we know can be serious enough that she can and will Witch out before ever admitting to her best friends that there is a problem. We're sort of playing into her game here, letting her deny there's anything wrong even if there very much could be by being vague and non-confrontational. If we don't cut to the heart of the matter, then it's almost certain that she will deflect and deny in order to spare her friends and sempai any grief. It's uncomfortable, but there are lives on the line here, and that's more important than being super-polite.

So here's a question for you: How does Michiru react when confronted directly? Does she give in or Does she clam up? If we choose the wrong answer we could lose her. If we're impolite or pushy and she doesn't react well then that's it as far as gleaning information nicely goes, and it may well push us out of gleaning information entirely or even have negative repercussions for our relationship beyond that.

Let me dig into this a bit:
You're right, I am being euphemistic rather than direct in that line. The intent was to say something more along the lines of:

[X] Confer with Mami and then dig a bit.
-[X] Verbally: Tell Mami you think she's hiding how bad the situation really is.
-[X] Telepathically: Make arrangements to meet up as quickly as possible. Tomorrow, or even tonight; in five minutes or less, if necessary. Offer ferry services.
-[X] Explain: Your ability to refresh Seeds, so don't discard them. Clear Seeds, every meguca group should have one, you'd appreciate the chance to have more beta testers.

Let's say that Michiru is the type to clam up: This vote doesn't give Mami any chance to stop us so if we go in Leeroy Jenkins style, we're committed. Not only does that risk making Mami fret, but if Michiru clams up because of that, then this avenue of problem solving is done. As it turns out,

And that's the thing here, we don't have to guess here. We may not know Michiru, but Mami does. So rather than directly confronting Michiru or not, we get advice and let her call the shots here.

This is why part of the vote is asking Mami for advice. No, it hasn't been fully implemented to my satisfaction yet, but I can do that now.

And as far as "polite by default" goes: Keep in mind that any question we can ask directly we can also glean politely.

If Michiru dodges those topics... we already know what that means.

There's also a lot of random vote cruft and cloudcuckoolander stuff going on here. What the heck is "absolutely almonds" supposed to mean (hint: I know what it means in context of the thread, but haven't we learned our lessons about tossing random in-jokes into votes yet)? Why are we pulling Sayaka into the conversation, and then immediately ejecting her again; isn't that even more rude than just brain-mailing her up after everything's decided?

Sticking with my vote for now, but I'm not particularly happy about it:

It at least provides enough forward guidance if Firn wants to write a longer update, and ever since the latest vote reforms Brinapilot has been good for handling the small stuff.

Allow me to explain how I expect "absolutely almonds" would come off to someone outside the thread:
"The capacity is absolutely almonds."
*blink* "Why 'absolutely almonds?'"
"Because it's nuts!"
Alas, it looks like that was dropped for length anyways.

The point of calling Sayaka is twofold. The first is involving her in a conversation about magical girls visiting the city. If Homura Oriko and Kirika have questions and concerns then Sayaka could too. Secondly, Sayaka needs to know some things and may know others, so we need to have a conversation with her. The raincheck isn't booting her out after we bring her in, it's "hey, there's a lot of important stuff I'd like to talk to you about later."

Unfortunately, the giant epiphany storm happened on the discord, but we're now pretty sure something is up Sayaka. (Sympathetic to witches earlier and recently, never took her music player to Kyouske, she and Madoka both gave Nagisa an odd look on first meeting, has powers that mimic abilities shown in Rebellion, magic shows angelic imagery not previously associated with her, may have deliberately showed herself to Kyouko across the river, the list goes on.) Which is part of why I've been pushing for that meeting.

As far as "More to go off of for Firn" goes, please keep in mind that this was a longer update and that the last vote got us through maybe half to a third of the conversation despite having much more planned. We might get as far as starting planning, (I doubt it) but I guarantee you that it won't go further than that. This conversation can easily stretch on.

In any event, the revisions:

[X] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
- [X] Aside, Tell Mami you're worried for Michiru and ask for her guidance on how to approach things. Be polite by default but adjust accordingly.

[X] Move from the hardships of meguca life to segue into clear seeds.
- [X] We have prototypes but need testers.
- [X] Actually, if she wants, all it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or would she like us to provide one?
- [X] Note risks, benefits, and implications if she shows interest.

[X] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends.

[X] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
-[X] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
-[X] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.

[X] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition?
-[X] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time.

(Wordcount: 149... :/)

Notes on votes:
[ ] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
- [ ] Aside, Tell Mami you're worried for Michiru and ask for her guidance on how to approach things. Adjust Accodingly

This gives Mami a role in the conversation even if we ostensibly end up taking the helm: It's her who knows her friend and she can help us talk to Kazusa in the best way to solve her problems. And we're supporting instead of guiding because, well, we're the once being guided.

[ ]Actually if she wants, all it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or would she like us to provide one?

If we need to rush over, we can gauge how many grief seeds Michiru has to spare by noting that all it takes to make a clear seed is a grief seed and ask if she'd like to provide one or if we can bring her one of our spares.

If she dodges, well, that's our answer and we know enough to expedite. If she has a spare, well, she has a spare she can use for a clear seed, well she has a spare and the rush isn't that big. If she "can get one" it means she probably needs to hunt a witch or she's given them all to her friends.

And suddenly I'm picturing a result of that:

"Hey Homura, we needed to have a talk later? Would you be okay with dropping something off in Asunaro and having it on the way?"
IF YES:
"Hey Michiru, I have this trick we can do with clear seeds, Could you hold out your hand."
"...Okay?"
One long conversation and a round trip later for magical girls, no time at all for anyone else:
"What! It just appeared out of thin air!"

[ ] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
-[ ] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
-[ ] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.

First two changes shortening for length, "everyone" has become "Homura and Sayaka" per veByast's advice, and the latter has been expanded for clarity.

Sidenote to self: Make a point to vote to ask Oriko before we leave if her visions ever showed her acting for a reason she didn't understand, or in a way she didn't agree with. If she has to learn skills like enchanting and can't use them through future sight, it may be that her visions can't show her futures where she changes.
 
Does the pun work in Japanese?
I'm not seeing references to "nuts" as slang for crazy in Japanese. So I'd say no unless it arrived in recent cultural crossover
...So depending on translation convention, it would come off like a pun by an English speaker that didn't carry over.

EDIT: also tally
Adhoc vote count started by The Phoenixian on Jun 21, 2017 at 7:31 AM, finished with 119219 posts and 15 votes.

  • [X] Ask Kazusa if she's available tomorrow. We'll pick her up during school time and bring her over. Figure out a time and place to meet up. Don't take no for an answer; it's no trouble and you don't have anything better to do anyway.
    -[X] Explain: Your ability to refresh Seeds, so don't discard them. Clear Seeds, every meguca group should have one, you'd appreciate the chance to have more beta testers.
    [X] Once you're done with Kazusa, bring back the Privacy Bubble.
    [X] Tell them about you bringing Kazusa over, and then properly visiting Asunaro later on.
    -[X] Explain Hijiri's copy magic might give her access to the Pleiades mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
    -[X] Mami is going by default.
    [X] Say goodbye to the Kures.
    [X] Ask Homura to have that chat, in private.
    [X] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
    - [X] Aside, Tell Mami you're worried for Michiru and ask for her guidance on how to approach things. Be polite by default but adjust accordingly.
    [X] Move from the hardships of meguca life to segue into clear seeds.
    - [X] We have prototypes but need testers.
    - [X] Actually, if she wants, all it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or would she like us to provide one?
    - [X] Note risks, benefits, and implications if she shows interest.
    [X] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends.
    [X] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
    -[X] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
    -[X] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.
    [X] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition?
    -[X] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time.
    [X] Keep gently guiding Mami and reassuring her.
    -[X] Quietly ask Mami how she deals with Michiru when she's hiding her troubles
    [X] Segue from magical girl hardships into clear seeds
    - [X] We have plenty of prototypes but need testers. Note risks and benefits if she's interested.
    - [X] Clear seeds have absolutely almonds capacity, and that has political implications.
    [X] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends. Don't push.
    [X] Tell the assembled group and Sayaka that Kazuza is willing to come to Mitakihara.
    -[X] See if they have questions or concerns, offer to introduce everyone.
    -[X] Raincheck Sayaka conversation.
    [X] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition?
    -[X] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time for her and Mami.
    [X] Keep the conversation going, but try and end it on a high note.
    [x] And now I'm worried about you Kazusa, you didn't answer about how hunting is, you're worried about Mitakihara being able to support seven girls when your group is seven girls, and you're apparently so busy hunting you don't have time for school. I can be over in an hour to refresh your gems and grief seeds.
    [x] Something feels suspicious, and you're not going to take changes with Mami's friends.
    [x] Get on a private line and make sure Kazusa isn't about to martyr herself in the name of politeness.
    [X] Ask Kazusa if she's available tomorrow. We'll pick her up during school time and bring her over. Figure out a time and place to meet up. Insist. Make Kazusa promise to be there.
    -[X] Briefly explain Clear Seeds. Let Mami talk with Kazusa as long as she needs before saying goodbye.
    [X] Once you're done with Kazusa, bring back the Privacy Bubble.
    [X] Tell them about you bringing Kazusa over, and then properly visiting Asunaro later on.
    -[X] Explain Hijiri's mind/memory magics and push for Kirika (and Oriko) to accompany you to help counter that.
    -[X] Mami is going by default.
    [X] Say goodbye to the Kures.
    [X] Ask Homura to have that chat, in private.
 
[X] The Phoenixian

Ideally, we want Mami to feel better about herself and her life after this conversation. I feel like a lot of the other votes are doing far too little on that front, especially considering how swingy the past few hours have been on her.
 
The two votes both want more or less the same, but I feel Phoenixian's is more considerate and involves the others more.

We called this meeting to talk about Asunaro and what to do about it. Just deciding we're bringing Kazusa over tomorrow without any input from the others is needlessly pushy.
 
Hmm. I think I can refine @The Phoenixian 's vote a bit. Here's my take, additions in Redshirt red.

[ ] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
- [ ] You're concerned. Ask Mami for her guidance on how to approach things, and follow it.

//Just reduced the word count a bit while maintaining the same message.

[ ] Segue from time pressure into clear seed discussion.
- [ ] We have prototypes but need testers.
- [ ] All it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or should we provide one?
- [ ] Give the standard disclaimers.

//Cut down on words again, and more directly address Michiru's "not going to school" thing the last update ended on.

[ ] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends.

[ ] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
-[ ] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
-[ ] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.

//No changes.

[ ] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition? Be insistent.
-[ ] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time.

//Some insistence won't be too impolite, and should address the concerns that others in the thread have raised.

[ ] Keep the conversation going for as long as things go well. Try and end it on a high note.

//This is quite important, in my opinion, since having positive contact with former students is one of the best things we can do for Mami's mental state.

Total Word Count: 150 on the dot.
 
Isn't this a part of the oft-mentioned Brinapilot, and doesn't need to be included in votes?
Given the subject of the discussion and how it ties into the nature of the subvote that follows that vote, I'd rather include it explicitly here.

Hmm. I think I can refine @The Phoenixian 's vote a bit. Here's my take, additions in Redshirt red.

[ ] Keep gently supporting Mami and reassuring her.
- [ ] You're concerned. Ask Mami for her guidance on how to approach things, and follow it.

//Just reduced the word count a bit while maintaining the same message.

[ ] Segue from time pressure into clear seed discussion.
- [ ] We have prototypes but need testers.
- [ ] All it takes is any grief seed. Does she have a spare or should we provide one?
- [ ] Give the standard disclaimers.

//Cut down on words again, and more directly address Michiru's "not going to school" thing the last update ended on.

[ ] Try to touch on Asunaro meguca politics a bit. Especially old friends.

[ ] Tell your friends that Kazuza is willing to visit Mitakihara.
-[ ] Address any questions or concerns, offer to introduce Homura and Sayaka.
-[ ] Raincheck a conversation with Sayaka later.

//No changes.

[ ] Offer to ferry over Michiru tomorrow. If it wouldn't be too much imposition? Be insistent.
-[ ] Schedule the pickup at a convenient time.

//Some insistence won't be too impolite, and should address the concerns that others in the thread have raised.

[ ] Keep the conversation going for as long as things go well. Try and end it on a high note.

//This is quite important, in my opinion, since having positive contact with former students is one of the best things we can do for Mami's mental state.

Total Word Count: 150 on the dot.
Generally I like these changes a lot. Only input is that I'd like to free up just a little bit more wordcount for talking about the how time pressures of being a magical girl affect things, which the original vote was never good at.

How does swapping out the following sound?
[ ] Keep the conversation going for as long as things go well. Try and end it on a high note.
For
[ ] Keep the conversation going, but try to end it on a high note.

It saves six words which, if it's workable, lets this:
[ ] Segue from time pressure into clear seed discussion.
be expanded to:

[ ]Sympathize: Being meguca really is a full-time job.
[ ]Segue into clear seed discussion.

(three words cut from original + six extra allows 8 + tally mark)

(Thoughts here are that it was either "this is a full time job" or "sympathize with the time crunch of all magical girls" I like the former more since the connection to having a work life is a bit richer conversational soil, and the connection to mundane life is going to lend a calmer and somewhat more upbeat, or at least ironic, emotional context than saying the same without the connection; We are living out the fantasy of magical girls and because of that we're already working adults!)

For reference, it occurs to me that one potential "high note" to end on is the fact that we are going out for dinner tonight. Which is also a good excuse to stop: "Oh we're getting a little pressed for time; Mami and I are eating out tonight."

In any event, I'll give folks an hour or two to chime in before I switch my vote.
 
To answer this seriously, Michiru wished for her grandmother to wake up and act perfectly fine with her last day of life, without actually changing her fate or health. Essentially, magic that hide a problem and ignores it without stopping it.
Wait a minute...

What wish could possibly have given this result without breaking the "Kyubey doesn't do the monkey's paw thing" principle?
 
Wait a minute...

What wish could possibly have given this result without breaking the "Kyubey doesn't do the monkey's paw thing" principle?
Probably something like "I wish she'd wake up and be perfectly fine with her last day of life". The actual intent of the wish was to hide the problem and ignore it without stopping it. That's why I'm so concerned right now; Michiru would absolutely tell us that everything is fine and that tomorrow sounds good knowing full well that she's ten minutes away from witching out.
 
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