I will add the changes. What other changes would you suggest?
[] Discreetly encase the feather in solid grief and move it among the other masses of grief, without bothering Mami.
I want more precautions against something going wrong with the feather.
[] Apologize for worrying Mami, then give her some time to recover her composure.
Change "some time" to "a moment". If it's taking her a while, she needs help.
[] Ask Mami if she would still like to practice magic, maybe show us how to do some of the things she mentioned yesterday.
Needs an alternative if she doesn't want to.
[] Ask if Mami wants to go on the excursion with Homura.
Mami is likely to freak out if she finds out what we're doing. Not safe.
[] When Homura comes by (and Mami isn't present), show her the feather and tell her where we found it. Discuss the feather, then ask to go see Oriko together.
Maybe. I want to examine it by ourselves first before we commit to showing it to Homura. If we visit Oriko ourselves, we can ask her how Homura would react without breaking our telepathy promise.
In any event, Mami has had enough of our silence in the last half-hour. She wants us talking and responsive. I also don't want to lead Mami in directions we want. I want to ask her what she wants.
But my point was that I don't think it will work and be meaningless at best, actively detrimental in worst case. I mean, are you assuming that it'll make us look silly and get a giggle out of Mami? I grant that it's possible, but you'll have to discuss in more detail before I will conclude that it's plausible.
I don't see it as meaningless and I think it will help. I don't see it as detrimental. I'm not trying to look silly. I'm trying to look ... adorable. And passionate. To show Mami that being torn from her horrifies us as much as it does her and that we will do whatever it takes to get back to her I'm trying to make Mami feel valued. And to show her that the bond we share is not fragile. And yes, that we're willing to look silly to protect it.