Padawans (Canon)
Padawans

Kygeetu san Torrgh was in awe as she walked through the halls of the Abyss Watcher's base on Coruscant. She had dreamed of being a member of Lady Ciaran's organization for years now, and while she had been training for some time, it had never felt as real as it did this moment. Master Tyro didn't allow his trainees off of The Oracle until they were proficient enough with Buried Presence to avoid detection, and she hadn't been at that level the last time the ship had docked at Coruscant. But she had brushed up on the technique when she heard The Oracle was homeward bound.

Nothing out of the ordinary was particularly happening in the base, but just being what it was made it the most appealing place on Coruscant to Kygeetu. As far as she was concerned, this was practically a holy site. Which is why Kygeetu became incensed when she saw a Jedi walking through the halls. Master Tyro had drilled it into their heads that while Jedi weren't enemies per se, they often snooped around too much, and should be avoided or deterred. It was why he made them master the Buried Presence, so that no Jedi would be able to sense their training in the Force.

"Excuse me, who are you and what are you doing here?" asked Kygeetu as she stormed up to the Togruta. She was a Padawan judging by the bead thing on her head that was meant to emulate a braid of hair for species that didn't grow any. Kygeetu was thankful the Abyss Watchers didn't have any crazy policy like that.

"Oh, I was just heading to meet with Thrawn." said the Padawan, blinking owlishly and answering instinctively. Kygeetu's sudden approach and questioning had obviously caught her off guard. "I didn't know Lady Ciaran was close with any other Jedi though. I'm surprised we haven't run into each other before."

"What?" Now it was Kygeetu's turn to be stunned. "What makes you think I'm a Jedi?"

"You've obviously been trained with the Force. I can sense it. And you're pretty clearly not a Sith." joked Ahsoka. "But Lady Ciaran doesn't really like Jedi hanging around. Even I'm only allowed in the spaces between the entrance and the rec room."

Fuck. Kygeetu had been so taken in with the experience of being in Abyss Watcher's HQ that she hadn't even noticed that she wasn't suppressing her connection to the Force. And justifying it in retrospect, she hadn't thought there would be any Jedi just wandering around. Kygeetu realized that the girl was staring at her oddly, and she hurried to come up with any excuse that wouldn't out the entire organization. "Oh, uh, well, Lady Ciaran is very close with Master Tyro."

The internal screaming abated somewhat as the Jedi seemed to accept her response. "Huh, I've never heard of Master Tyro. I don't think Master Skywalker's ever mentioned him either."

"He doesn't come back to Coruscant often. And he's very old. We've been training in solitude for… years now." said Kygeetu, gesturing vaguely as she tried to guess an appropriate timeframe.

"Well I'm Ahsoka Tano, Master Skywalker's Padawan. It's nice to meet you." said Ahsoka, extending her hand.

Kygeetu shook it, feeling like her façade would crack at any second. "Kygeetu san Torrgh. It's a pleasure."

"I gotta say, I'm glad Master Skywalker doesn't do any crazy training like that. Just the thought of training in seclusion like that…" shuddered Ahsoka. "Though he seems to think experience is the best teacher, so we spend a lot of time away from the temple anyways on the front lines. It's important work, but you start to miss home, you know?"

"It's been so long since I've even been on Coruscant. I don't even really think of the temple as home." said Kygeetu, her admittedly limited diplomatic training pushing her into asserting something that wasn't technically a lie.

"I can't even imagine a home other than the Jedi Temple. I can't even imagine the kind of training you'd have to do for that long." said Ahsoka sympathetically. "What were you training that whole time?"

"Just some Force techniques is all. Advanced application of basic principles. Like using the Force to move blaster bolts around and stuff. Simple in theory, difficult in practice." said Kygeetu. There was no way she'd be able to make up something that would have convincingly taken such a long time to learn, so she settled for exaggerating the difficulty of the Blazing Chains.

"That does sound pretty tough. I've never even considered the possibility. Doesn't really seem worth the time when you can just knock stuff away with a lightsaber." said Ahsoka, tapping her own lightsaber for emphasis.

"A lightsaber can only be in one place at a time. The Force is everywhere at once." Said Kygeetu, defending the style taught to her by the Abyss Watchers with the same rhetoric Master Tyro used when some idiot had made a similar objection early on in their class.

"I suppose that's true." said Ahsoka, thinking about Kygeetu's words more deeply than the Kaleesh had intended her to. "I guess that's sort of what Master Yoda was talking about when he brought up the Force. 'Skill with a lightsaber make not a Jedi, but knowledge of the Force' and all that." said Ahsoka, imitating what Kygeetu could only assume was Master Yoda's voice.

Knowing absolutely nothing about Jedi teachers, Kygeetu decided to just butter him up. "He certainly is wise." The statement was either true enough, vague enough, or both for Ahsoka to have nothing left to really say about it.

"Yeah, he really is. Well it was nice meeting you Kygeetu, but I'll be running late for my meeting with Thrawn if I don't get a move on. I've never really been late before, but something tells me he values punctuality." said Ahsoka, moving past and waving.

"Same." Kygeetu breathed a sigh of relief as soon as Ahsoka had turned the corner. Somehow she had managed to not blow the secret of an entire organization of Force users. Beating herself up for letting her guard down in the first place, Kygeetu suppressed her connection to the Force until she would have appeared to not even have the potential to be trained in it and slinked back to The Oracle in shame. As long as she never saw Ahsoka Tano again, nothing would come of this fiasco.


AN: Originally this was Kygeetu's disbelief upon seeing Ciaran suck at Blazing Chains and deciding that Ciaran's flaws only make her more perfect. Then I realized there wasn't much actually there.
 
As long as she never saw Ahsoka Tano again, nothing would come of this fiasco.
:rofl: And we all know how this is going to turn out.
Sure, but let me finish this set next. I think I might combine the next two into one. We'll see how long it gets.
So that's the "three omakes" you mentioned before -- no wonder you had it planned out. By all means, take your time.

(You do realize that you've pretty much single-handedly turned Ahsoka Tano into a character we might actually recruit for this quest, right? Because geez that makes me happy. You do good work, Mr. Omake Dragon; keep it up!)
 
@Dr. Snark, now that we've recruited HK-47 (and will recruit Jango in the near future) would it be possible to gain +1 Hero Action at some point in the future, and if so, how?
Hero Units: You've been gathering a lot of talented individuals under your command, and many of them have ambitions of their own that they may need your help with to succeed.

Optional, Pick Up To 2, Uses Hero Unit's Full Stats:


Relatedly, would it be possible to reclassify some of the 'Personal Upgrade'-type actions, to be included as Hero Actions? I was originally thinking of 'Under the Knife':
[] Under The Knife: The Arkanians are now able and very willing to begin genemodding on new volunteers at your facilities should they ask for it. Chance of Success: 70% Cost: 100 Reward: Selected Hero Unit genemodded
-[] Choose 1 Hero Unit:
--[] Silencer: No response as usual.
--[] Thrawn: Ambivalent to the idea, but if you want him to go through with it he will.
--[] Ventress: Leery of the Arkanians, it might be a bit difficult to get her to go through with it.
-[] Choose 1 Genemod:
--[] Chiss: Thrawn's species, red-eyed and blue-skinned with above-average night vision and inherently fit bodies. (Martial, Intrigue)
--[] Echani: The progenitors of the Silencer's Thyrsian species, they are fierce fighters who believe in the concept of communication through combat. (Martial, Lore)
--[] Pau'an: Natives of Utapau, they can see well in darkness but their most notable trait is their extremely long lifespans. The Arkanians have noted that this genemod will extend a recipient's life span by about 20 years as opposed to regular genemods. (Intrigue, enhanced lifespan)
--[] Miraluka: Your own species, able to see through the Force despite a lack of eyes. The Arkanians have admitted that they're not entirely sure what will happen if that mod is used due to the species' natural connection with the Force. (Lore, ???)
--[] Zabrak: A tough species that is extremely resistant to physical pain. (Martial)
--[] Zeltron: An incredibly attractive species that uses pheromones to gain an edge in social conversations. (Diplomacy, Intrigue)
However, with our new 'Force-Friendly Cybernetics' upgrades and even more with potential 'Nano-Droid Injections', I could easily see our 'Learning' category getting so swamped with upgrading our people that we wouldn't have time for actual research.
With this development you could ensure that anyone within the Watchers or who visited a Karada facility could be made highly resistant to bioweapons or viruses...so long as they could afford the expensive injection of nano-droids.
All that to say, it would make sense to move those 'individual upgrade' Actions to the category in which our Heroes get upgraded.


In unrelated news, I think I have a pretty good idea what Grievous's Personal Action is supposed to do!
[] Grievous: Let the Hunt Begin: While he is certainly happy to work with you Grievous has requested the chance for him and a group of Kaleesh warriors personally chosen by him to go on a hunt. His destination: Vendaxa, a planet home to some of the fiercest predators in the galaxy. He's pointed out that he might be able to capture some of the beasts of the planet for your use, though it's clear that he's using that as an excuse more than anything else... (Uses Martial Bonuses, Grievous must be assigned to this action if chosen) Chance of Success: 60% Reward: Grievous hones his skills through his hunts, ???

It turns out that Vendaxa isn't just the home to Acklays (as seen in Attack of the Clones). Vendaxa is also the home to the Roggwart species, which are about the size of a rancor and probably more dangerous. In canon, General Grievous caught & tamed one of those creatures as his 'pet' -- he named it Gor, and upgraded it with armor and four cybernetic limbs just to make it more terrifying. So basically, 'Let The Hunt Begin' is an action to give Grievous a 4.5-meter-tall, 245-kilogram attack dog (and if we develop cortosis or phrik or beskar, we can upgrade it even further to be especially deadly to Jedi and/or Sith...)
 
You do realize that you've pretty much single-handedly turned Ahsoka Tano into a character we might actually recruit for this quest, right?
We'd pretty much need her to get expelled from the Order to even have a chance at recruitment though, considering how dedicated she is. She adores Plo Koon for bringing her to the Jedi Order.

I will say we're in prime position to capitalize on the Jedi bomber incident if it goes through like canon. I'll even mention that one of my scrapped Tarkin ideas was titled "Ace Attorney: Mitth'raw'nuruodo" if anyone wants to take a crack at it. I only dropped the idea because I've never actually finished Clone Wars and didn't feel confident writing such an important arc.
 

...I like where this is going. Canon, +10.

On a related note, I love how in true Star Wars fashion the omake writers (okay, mostly Panory) have been adding in more and more named side characters that are constantly increasing the size of the cast list. It feels so fitting somehow.

@Dr. Snark, now that we've recruited HK-47 (and will recruit Jango in the near future) would it be possible to gain +1 Hero Action at some point in the future, and if so, how?

I'll give you a hint: Sienar.
 
Omake - Many men...

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POV: Senator Amidala Padme
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*Undisclosed Location*




Ciarans 'secret location' wasn't secret. It was literally an abandoned house that she bought for cheap for one event and got all of the Galactic Senate involved with the Anti-Palpatine bloc as she could. As Senatorial security escorted us inside we would newly painted and redecorated room with a large table. There were many seats available and knowing Ciaran each and every single one would be filled. On the table a large spread of fruit and salads lined the tables as the waiters stood by.

*Some time Later*

"We can't stop Palpatine when he's so popular. Were going to have to wait for a slip up and than hit him with a good oppertune power grab." said Senator lubwei.

"An how long do you think that'll last? What we have to do is tear down his key people and steal away his support in the Senate and take away his Emergency powers. The Senate is a redundnat mess with the senate involved and where one man can just make a decision." I retorted and continue

"Do


Anyone have an idea on how to write a secret meeting between senators? Besides Padme who would show up?
 
@Dr. Snark, now that we've recruited HK-47 (and will recruit Jango in the near future) would it be possible to gain +1 Hero Action at some point in the future, and if so, how?
I'll give you a hint: Sienar.
Ah. Really should have thought of that.
[] Sienar Custom Vessel: Now that you've partnered with Sienar you can request customized ships from them for a price. You can either send them a plan of your own, or give their engineers a base concept and let them work out the details. Chance of Success: 90%
-[] Personalized Courier Ships: Unlike the rest of the designs you've suggested these are fairly straightforward: extremely fast ships that can be personalized before their completion by their prospective owner. They'd certainly be nice gifts to your high-ranking members. Cost: 150 Reward: Personalized Courier ships designed/selectively produced
Not to mention the fact that we super-crit'ed the initial contact with Sienar, and our reward was the ability to buy these starships:
[X] Deals with Sienar: Reward: Formal relations with Sienar Fleet Systems opened, potential for starship contracts, ???
Rolled: 8 Reroll: 87+16+10=113 (Super Critical Success)
Stewardship: Partnership with Sienar Fleet Systems established, customized ships now available for creation/purchase from Sienar
...How did I miss that? Whelp, time to go on a spending spree. Lucky for us, we have the money to afford it now.

EDIT: aaaand ninja'd by @Tabron89.
 
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...How did I miss that?
So I went back to check the instant replay, and I think I figured it out. It turns out that I was the one to originally propose the Courier Ship design!
I have three proposals for 'high concept' Custom Vessels: ...
  • Courier Ships: highly personalized one-person vessels designed for each high-level member of the Abyss Watchers (so: Thrawn's might be a floating mini-museum, while The Silencer's would be a floating porcupine). Typical design emphasis is on speed -- these craft are built to convey their pilot as quickly to their destination as possible. (This could be especially useful as a 'graduation present' for each of our Abyss Agents and other Force users once they're strong enough to be sent on missions).
If others are interested, there's also this category page of 'Starship Types' that I found useful.
For instance, take a look at the page for the Chu'unthor:
So yeah.

"How did I miss that?" -- this was how.
WHAT. THE. KRIFFING. HELL.
There's an abandoned Jedi 'praxeum'-class capital ship -- almost fully automated, with full Jedi library, plus data archives from multiple research organizations and universities -- that's unused and just sitting there in our own backyard? :o
WHAT IS THIS AND HOW DO WE CLAIM IT?
Just a wee bit distracted by the Boaty McBoatface hanging out on the planet next door.

Though, to be fair, Dr. Snark was rather coy about how we'd benefit from those custom ships:
Separate question: what practical effect (on the quest story or mechanics) would the Sienar Custom Vessels have if we selected them? ... Besides serving as a reward for our Hero units, what benefit would we (and they) gain for having such 'Personalized Courier' ships available?
In general they'll provide some bonus related to their purpose; for example the stealth vessels will add on Intrigue, the gunships Martial, and so on.
...which, in retrospect and given what we know, makes it sound like the custom ships would either provide default bonuses (+5 Martial), or extra actions (+1 Intrigue), or access to new Actions (able to conduct rescue missions for various endangered Jedi?)

Another possibility would be outfitting some of those ships for use by Clan Skirata... I'm sure they'd be grateful, and the custom gear would make their operations a lot more successful. Perhaps that would persuade them to give us those Treasury access codes...?
 
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One last thing about the the Chu'unthor, though -- it turns out we're right on schedule:
WHAT IS THIS AND HOW DO WE CLAIM IT?
Well first you're going to have to get Dathomir in the CNS, then you're going to have to learn that the thing exists, then you're going to have to convince the locals that they don't need it. So uh...it's going to take a lot of work.
Works for me. 3 Actions over 3 turns -- let's do this!
  1. Dathomir joins Council of Neutral Systems -- check
  2. Abyss Watchers visit planet to learn where Chu'unthor and what it would take to recover -- check
  3. Ciaran convinces the locals they don't need it -- "Well, it's a half-buried wreck that no one's used for 300 years, so really..." :D
Depending on the 'Chance of Success', we may have a few other options to consider:
  • "Recover the Chu'unthor (Sneaking Option)" would have us sneak onto the planet, sneak onto the ship, figure out its controls, activate the automation and ASAP fly it away, specifically to park it in orbit above our Kiln base.
  • "Recover the Chu'unthor (Speaking Option)" would have us meet with one of the clan leaders (most likely 'Mother Rell' of the Singing Mountain Clan) to ask permission before claiming and flying away with the praxeum ship.
  • "Recover the Chu'unthor (Shooting Option)" would have us send some/all of our assault troops onto the planet, activate the ship, and fly it away, dealing with any obstacle by shooting it in the face.
Dr. Snark was pretty clearly hinting at his preference for the 'Speaking Option' (my preference as well), but we shouldn't discount the other two if they become necessary....
 
Dr. Snark was pretty clearly hinting at his preference for the 'Speaking Option' (my preference as well), but we shouldn't discount the other two if they become necessary....
My first thought was the singing option, where we woo the ship away from them with the power of song. Then I realized that "Singing Mountain Clan" was probably less literal than I had initially thought.
 
Dr. Snark was pretty clearly hinting at his preference for the 'Speaking Option' (my preference as well), but we shouldn't discount the other two if they become necessary....

Oh I have no preference for any particular option with that. I'm perfectly willing to let you try any method to get it...but I will point out that different methods will have different consequences even if you succeed on whichever you choose.

My first thought was the singing option, where we woo the ship away from them with the power of song. Then I realized that "Singing Mountain Clan" was probably less literal than I had initially thought.

No, you cannot in fact sing away your problems. This ain't Macross, even if we've got a solid love triangle between Obi-Wan, Satine, and Siri going on.
 
My first thought was the singing option, where we woo the ship away from them with the power of song. Then I realized that "Singing Mountain Clan" was probably less literal than I had initially thought.
Oh, it's literal. It's the mountain that sings [due to wind...], not the clan living near it.
Okay, but yodeling Thrawn though.
:rofl: Oh please oh please tell me that's going to be an omake!

Heck, I'm even tempted to see if we can't make it canon somehow. Thrawn knows that Lady Ciaran really wants that ship, so when he overhears someone else mention that it's guarded by the "Singing Clan" (no mention of the mountain...), he offers to help out with the negotiations.

Cue awkward singing.

The rest is up to the dice -- if a low success, then his voice is terrifically flat and the Clan just wants him and us to leave. If a high success, then the Clan is so entertained by his crooning (and so convinced that we can't possibly be capital-E Evil if this is the sort of antics we get up to) that they volunteer to help us make the Chu'unthor flight-ready.

Make it so.
 
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