-[X]The Batman must be… something: You have an idea of a scene where Batman interacts with a couple of very young hoodlums, who are clearly being threatened. How do you want to do it (Linetail how you want to try and shoot it)
--[X] For how Batman interacts with a couple of hoodlums being threatened, focus on the duality of Batman as a hero and highlight his potential to inspire and give hope as the caped crusader which highlights the care Bruce has towards those who turn to crime because of circumstances beyond their control; with compassion and care, giving them a chance and trying to steer them right. Show that he fights the ones threatening, but tries turning the others back into the right path. Rolled:
D100 => 98+20=118
-[X]A Cowardly and Superstitious lot: Batman being more than a man… that is something you want to put through the eyes of his… adversary. How would you do it? (Linetail how do you want to try and shoot it?)
--[X] Batman, in order to be something beyond human in the eyes of the criminals, needs to build a reputation of being invincible, unstoppable, relentless. He must lean on the fear he brings the criminal element. he must strike from the shadows and barely, if ever, speak. When struck he must not show weakness, when striking it must bring them down in one shot, when he threatens everyone must believe he's willing to go through with it. Rolled:
D100 => 92+20=112
-[X]The Most important thing: You are going to try and film the Murder of the Waynes… How do you do it (Linetail how do you want to try and shoot it?)
--[X] We should start with a close up of his eyes, as if delving deep into a memory, before moving to a young Bruce as he's watching Zorro in the cinema. Then cutting to him and his parents leaving, all are happy, Bruce is playing at Zorro as they walk, before Joe Chill moves from the shadows. Thomas tries to put himself forward to protect his family and give the man what he wants, but Chill sees it as provocation and shoots, Martha screams which has him shoot her as well, with Joe grabbing the pearl necklace and it breaking as he runs away. Bruce through it all is in shock, then falling to his knees in front of his parents' bodies, as he softly weeps. Rolled:
D100 => 99+20=119
Honestly, it took only a month, and numerous changes to the script. But that didn't matter.
You managed to get everything you wanted. And even Alan was impressed by how you did it.
Reward: Unknown Positive effect, not only on the film's quality. But on the Entire Batman Canon.
Also, +50 to all Production rolls.
