You know what bothers me the most about the leading vote?
[X] The time has finally come. You need to talk to Dandeer again.
-[X] Ask Dad and Grandma for advice. Doubles as insurance as they know what's happening.
-[X] Also, double-check that Jaron actually got permission for the training. If he didn't, you'll offer a formal apology to Dandeer, because whatever your feelings for her are, it was genuinely negligent on your part.
-[X] Talk to Dandeer in private about Jaron and his wish to fight.
--[X] Also ask her about her long term plan. The current situation does not seem tenable long term. Jaron can't be kept in an infantile state ofdependency forever, and theVegetans obviously aren't happy with him not being allowed to train.
I makes no mention about us thinking that him getting training migth help keep him safe. Making sure that Jaron is safe and sound is the ONE THING in which Dandeer and Kakara might find common ground and that both agree is important and the vote makes no mention of that. Furthermore, just mentioning it would make Kakara think of this action as something that might help keep him safe, which would mean that both of this traits would actívate:
Protector [Foundational Trait]: Meerak forced you to confront the question of what kind of person you really are. It was a painful year, figuring out the answer, but now you have it. You have your powers so that you can keep people safe. Everybody. Even those who don't want to be. People who are working to hurt others need to be stopped, but that doesn't mean you need to sink to their level. At the end of the day, the wicked need to be stopped, but you aren't them -- and you won't become them. That might mean that you need to talk them down, or it might mean that you need to fight. So be it. But no matter what, you know one thing about yourself: Thou shalt not kill. You gain heavy vote weighting against the use of lethal force on sapient beings, and will never default to it of your own will, even against Hated Enemies. The use of lethal force will never be presented as a default option; the players must write such options in if they want them. However, Kakara now gains a moderate bonus on all checks made in service of actions taken to protect the lives or safety of others. You no longer encounter barriers or penalties to combat skill training. This trait may, still, be developed further...
Convictions: A fearful whisper, let loose by Dandeer Vegeta, made you fear for your integrity and possible likeness to Lord Vegeta. Upon confronting this, you found...nothing. You aren't like him, and your behavior was not out of line. You were in the right, and the knowledge of this has strengthened your faith in yourself. Gain a small bonus to all actions taken in what you believe to be in the service of right.
which would give a moderate and a minor bonus to the action. It is such a small change with such a big benefit that makes me doubt how much thought was given to the writting.
Now, credit where it is due, it does benefit from some traits
Compelling Presence: When you speak, people listen. Something about your words draws and fascinates those around you. You have an almost indefinable charisma about you that draws people's attention whenever you have something to say. Minor bonus to all Communication checks and moderate boosts to take charge of a situation.
It would get a minor boost from this one though a stronger wording might change it to moderate.
Decisive: While level-headed, you recognize that when a crisis beckons the time for waiting has passed and the time for action has come. In a time-critical situation, gain a small bonus to all actions that resolve or defuse the situation swiftly.
It potentially benefits from this one since it tries to stop the situation from escalating.
Inquisitive: You like to know things and are none too shy about poking around until you find them out. Gain a small bonus to all actions to gather information.
This part affects the last part of the vote.
Knowledgeable Gokun Foreigner: With the conclusion of your noble education has come an advanced understanding of both the ways and customs of Clan Vegeta, and their deep cultural tolerance of Gokun failures to adhere to these customs outside of extreme offense. You will take a lesser penalty on social interactions with Vegetans as a result and they will think more highly of you, but the fact that you know enough to do that means they'll stop trying to overlook failures.
Not as big of a malus to interacting with her.
Level-Headed: You are a calm girl, at heart. You don't react to provocation easily, and keep your head when somebody is doing their level best to set you off. Gain a small bonus to all calm or patient actions.
This one benefits because we consult Berra and Apra.
Socializer: You don't have many friends, but you like people, and it's hurt you deeply to be able to talk to so few of them. But when you get the chance, you tend to seek out others. Gain a small bonus to all Communication checks.
And this one is obvious.
So it is not as bad as I first thought and it shows some thought was put into it even though it could be better. However, there is the other part of convincing others, which is to tailor the argument to them.
I have already mentioned the lack of mention regarding Jaron's safety. It would also help to explain why Jaron wishes to be able to fight (an important distintion compared to his wish to fight). For one, he hasn't decided if he will fight or not. For another, telling her why would help her understand that Jaron himself doesn't know himself if he will do so or not until the momento comes which would make her aware that it is posible he will choose to fight regardless of him being trained or not. It also puts the blame of this on him being a good boy, which appeases the mother in her (since we compliment her son and how he was raised) and makes her less suspicious about us being the ones who convinced him to fight, which she already was with the scout situation. As things are, she is likely to believe we are taking advantage of the situation to train Jaron rathr than adapting to it by doing it. If you can also tie his actions to the morals learned from the faith instead for the wish for fights saiyans have then it would appeal to the religious in her rather tan her delusion of saiyan violence making a reappearance. Even if it doesn't convince her, it would at least help her prepare so that he doesn't join the fight. Finally, we could add to it that WE don't want him to fight but are afraid that his good heart might get the better of him and while we expect for there to be saiyans assigned to protect him, he at least has to last enough for them to get him out of a stciky situation if he does manage to slip away, an argument that would further assuage her we are not trying to take advantage. Finally, you could mention it would ease Jaron's mind if he believes he can defend his mother and sister if te aliens attack, which would both mean it is to help him cope and that he does it because he loves his mother, which is something she cares about a lot.