Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Regrettably, due to a work commitment I'll have to delay the next chapter. I was hoping to be able to get ahead of things and be able to keep my schedule, but, it's clear that's not going to be possible. As such, the chapter will need to be postponed. I'm sorry for the late notice and will commit to getting the chapter out next week.
We quite understand take care of your self don't stress to much on it
Can't, it's over on QQ so let's not discuss that.
you can mention it and I think you're even allowed to link to it though before linking better to double check with the mod's but mentioning the story name wont get you in trouble
 
There's also a version converted to Text-to-Speech if you want to listen and not read (and are okay with robot voice).

The clips set broken up, so here's the link to the channel with all of them: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbp_nT77ylfJhCOyr9HIfIQ

(Also, there's an annoying minute gap between chapters you have to manually skip.)
 
Unnatural Skill: Agriculture (Demeter)
Acceleration of the process of turning land into a high value farm. Using the long lost knowledge of ancient civilizations and even other species you can squeeze incredible efdiciency out of your farmland and or hydroponic operations. Polycuture practices that would make monitoring and harvestong the plants far more tedious will be accomplished with ease as the plants seem happy to yeild their fruit to you. Livestock will be supernaturally docile when you come to harvest them and more likely to natural sort themselves in a way that in generations will lead to a better meat or fur or milk product normally seen in dedicated breeding programs. Your designated land will quickly achieve superfertility with thick layers of rich black humus in it's soil, and beehives making it's trees home. Yields of grapes the size of melons are a real possibility with time and effort. Dedicated agroforestry may lead to certain mythical creatures making your woods their home, along with a fiat backed zen state for those who mediate in thier depths. Go forth and reap the sweat of your brow!
 
Unnatural Skill: Agriculture (Demeter)
I like the way you think, but Lord said that he's basing Unnatural Skills on the supernatural abilities of mythical creatures that aren't demigods/ gods. So the Agricultural skill of elves or fairies would probably be a better comparison.

Unless you meant Demeter granting a Minor Blessing of Agriculture?

Either way I vote yes to Agriculture being added as a possibility.
 
Sinereal writes good stuff on QQ, people come for "plot" and stay for plot. His latest fic "How I Became a Male Equivalent of a JK" has the MC work as a well, "masseur", in a world where there are only few men. And there are expies of anime characters (Homura is so better off in this world), shadow agencies (Nerv for example), psychics, gene-mods (Dragon-maid caracters have physical ones while Shiro (NGNL) has int mod)...
It get's crazy the farther you go but it all makes sense.
Plus, chapter length is comparable to Lord if not as frequent as of late, Sinee's muse jumping between projects.

But I don't know what he's talking about either *shrug*
 
So, hey, do you guys think that the Rule of Cool Joe gets from the free perk Cuh-Ray-Zee will interfere with precognition? Sorta like the Spiral?
 
So, hey, do you guys think that the Rule of Cool Joe gets from the free perk Cuh-Ray-Zee will interfere with precognition? Sorta like the Spiral?

I think that is likely, also likely is that it will help with Spiral itself. What would be hilarious, however, is if Taunts interfered with precog even more. Cuh-Ray-Zee only effects Apeiron, the Enigmatic Artificer, and precogs are already shaky around him. Taunts has the possibility of messing with the actions of whoever hears them as well.
 
I like the way you think, but Lord said that he's basing Unnatural Skills on the supernatural abilities of mythical creatures that aren't demigods/ gods. So the Agricultural skill of elves or fairies would probably be a better comparison.

Unless you meant Demeter granting a Minor Blessing of Agriculture?

Either way I vote yes to Agriculture being added as a possibility.

I originally meant the blessing, but the unnatural part of the skill blurs the lines.
 
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I was browsing the comments in ao3 and someone asked if Joe will build an anti-Tattletale mystic code with Item Contruction.

That got me thinking. While Ziz is a bigger long term threat. Tattletale is also a nuisance so, I hope Joe nips the problem in the bud making a mystic code to turn him into a blind spot for Tattletale as well.
 
Yes, as good a way as any to send the collective house of cards each character in the story has meticulously built tumbling.
 
After having read through the story I have to say that I'm disappointed…

… that there isn't more. Keep up the good work my dude!
 
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