I don't know what it was about him that caused a mix of fear, hatred, and rage that overshadowed even the local Nazis, but it was enough to make me warry.
Wary
Baring that I would take equipment and materials
Barring
Twelve hours would be more than enough time to rebuild and upgrade and entire aircraft.
upgrade an entire aircraft
What's more it came with even more technical knowledge.
What's more, it came with even more technical knowledge.
I was confident I could personally resist any recruitment attempt, but if my identity was exposed that meant they could try to coheres me through family members.
coerce
He stated in a clam tone.
calm
Baukda started a bombing spree!"
Bakuda
Apparently it's the highest cape per capital in the country, excluding small towns where entire teams set up."
highest cape per capita (which actually isn't accurate to canon, but that's neither here nor there.)
Between the Adapts and the Elite things have been bad enough, but apparently the Teeth set up a cell recently."
Adepts
And as someone with an omni-tool up to the elbow in and active engine while making micro adjustments with the other hand and trying not to fall off a swerving high-speed motorcycle my threshold for a terrible idea really meant something.
elbow in an active engine
It wasn't the largest mots I had connected to, but the ability was so ridiculously overpowered that it nearly made me lose focus on what I was doing.
mote
Next to her Angelic literally growled at me.
Angelica
Also the locations of any confirmed or suspected front businesses and any properties I've been able to confirm as owned by gang members of their fronts."
This is word salad.
"From the way that talked about her I figured she'd be nicer. Also didn't know you were together."
"From the way that you talked..."
My duplicates would have snipped him from high altitude the moment he dared to show his face.
Sniped, unless they were giving him a vasectomy.
They linked their mass fields, creating a kind of tethering system that would not have been possible before Eleven Enchantment, and trailed behind the suits in a tight V formation as my duplicates launched themselves towards the site of the missiles.
Elven enchantment
That got a quick inquiry from me, to which Survey relayed that she had informed Aisha of the technical adequacy of the tea and offered suggestions regarding potential causes for a defective pallet.
palette
With a body language the looked awkward, nervous, and slightly embarrassed.
The pronoun here seems wrong.
Without a second thought I bust forward again, launching myself at Lung before the hulking cape could react.
burst
Bizarro
Pick one. Unless she changed her name, of course.
She felt a little weird having inside information on her what her brother had been essentially ordered to do.
...inside information on
her what her brother...
There was also a Victorian feel in the scientific principles on display, and the general regard for research ethics that seemed to be held by the labratory.
laboratory
Seriously, whoes handwriting has actual serifs?
whose
I nodded. "Conductivity of salt water is a blessing for that." Normally an I-field would persist for nearly a month, but that was in vacuum conditions. In atmosphere, any interaction with charged or conductive materials could accelerate its deterioration. Water was effective, and salt water's higher conductivity broke it down on two fronts. "What about the city?"
I could see the results of the analysis for myself, but the duplicate explained it anyway, possibly for the benefits of discussing a problem, possibly for the benefit of Garment and Tetra. Garment seemed at least moderately interested in the information, but I could tell it was less from a technical perspective and more with respect to how it would affect the actions we would have to take and how it would impact the people of the city.
"Weather dependent. We get a calm dry period and it could last nearly a month. We get a couple of rainstorms strong enough to churn up the bay and that could be it for the field." He explained looking over to the other duplicate.
Wait, how is the bay being churned up supposed to help clear the fields in the city proper?
Still, as hard as he'd, as everyone had been working, none of them had been blown apart on a live broadcast only to pull themselves together and win the day.
I'd suggest "...as he had, as everyone had..." - it reads better.
