Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

wait hold on didn't Garment come from the Dodgeball jump? The Jump where everybody is obsessed with dodgeball and I'm like 50% sure it was based on the movie Dodgeball: A True Underdog Story?

what the hell happened in the dodgeball movie to lead to post-apocalyptic japan?
They're talking about the Fashion perk, the very first one that Joe got that lets him spread the durability of the items he wears across the rest of his body. Garment is from a different perk entirely.
Fashion (Highschool of the Dead) 200:
Your clothing and entire body acquire defensive properties equal to the most superior protective items you have currently equipped. Emphasis on protective item- an iron or steel ring won't give you metal-tough skin- the minimum is things like knee pads from extreme sports, helmets- even an apron would count, though all that'd do is protect you from the dangers of a kitchen...
This one.
 
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The other overarching joke is that each perk origin in the HSotD jump is a nod to the protagonist crew and/or some zombie-fiction archetype.

Saeko is firmly driven by her Id, so her four perks (Finesse, Fashion, Function, Form) are... there's no literal equivalence, but I picked the four Fs to match the biological necessities of Feed/Fight/Flee/etc
 
Just wondering whether the new chapter will be today or Friday like last week?
The schedule is two weeks from the last chapter.


Unrelated: Joe should make Google. But keep it good. He has functionally unlimited computing resources and a guaranteed unhackable connection plus Survey. If she hasn't already catalogued everything on the internet (including things that really shouldn't be) then she must be more distracted by Parian than I thought. So anyway Joe could easily put up a simple OG Google-alike page with a search bar and a really good algorithm and just leave it going. Call it Gorilla-search or something.
 
Gorilla-search or something
Somehow this made me to think about gorilla glue ads but with Apeiron instead of gorilla. There would be a lot more screaming.

Piggot: This city is at the brink of blowing up.
Armsmaster: Would be awful if someone set it off somehow.
Apeiron: ...
Piggo and Beardsmaster: AAAAAA-

Jack Slash: We have no reason to worry about going to Brockton.
Apeiron: ...
Jack Blocked: No reason at all.
Broadcast: AAAAAA-

Doctor Mother: Do we have any way to save the world?
Apeiron: ...
Fraud Mother: AAAAAA-

Simurgh: Aaaaaaaa
Kerbals: Saneub!
Ziz: AAAAAA-
 
It occurred to me that, if they want to keep the link between Garment and the Forge plausibly deniable, but still have her deal with Shatterbird, Joe, Aisha, Survey, Fleet, Tybalt, Tetra, and the Matrix could attack the nine in force "accidentally" let shatterbird get away (poor timing – she was on the loo in a separate part of the building) then have Garment fly up to intercept her from a different direction when she goes up to do her scream thing.
Contrived but also a good boost to Garment's rep and finances.
 
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Delay Announcement
I will be taking another week to recover from the holidays and to get the next chapter ready. My apologies for the delay, but it has been a busy time of year and I wasn't able to find time to write with everything else that has been going on. I'm hoping to be able to reduce these delays in the coming year, and hope everyone was able to have a good holiday season.

Regards,
Roust
 
I will be taking another week to recover from the holidays and to get the next chapter ready. My apologies for the delay, but it has been a busy time of year and I wasn't able to find time to write with everything else that has been going on. I'm hoping to be able to reduce these delays in the coming year, and hope everyone was able to have a good holiday season.

Regards,
Roust
Happy new Year my friend,

Take your time and I would actually suggest to take next week off to rest and recover, so that you can actually lossen your schedule.

Then just start again the week after next, so that you don't feel aren't rushed and stressed out. As too much would make your feel unmotivated and resentful of the work of art you have created.

Best Regards,
Zoundre
 
I will be taking another week to recover from the holidays and to get the next chapter ready. My apologies for the delay, but it has been a busy time of year and I wasn't able to find time to write with everything else that has been going on. I'm hoping to be able to reduce these delays in the coming year, and hope everyone was able to have a good holiday season.

Regards,
Roust
As one does; almost certainly the best approach to things.
 
I was already expecting an extra week or two delay from the holidays, so I'm certainly not disappointed. Take all the time you need.
 
Been rereading the story.

The crafting buildup is your thing, but what you have Joe do with it, parrying the executioner's axe...

It beats out the edgelord nonsense of canon Worm and the occasional SciFi forumite bloodlust isn't much better.

Good lad.
 
I know it was a long time ago, but during Garment interview with the Prt where March bumped into Joe. Did she realized that he was Ape Iron or at least a parahuman? (This doubt has been killing me for a long time)
 
Ascended Beings in stargate can gain power from prayers/faith.
I wonder how this differs from asura's wrath mantra.
Obviously the SG method is less efficient or it cannot be used effectively in higher dimensions.
 
The Ori had a whole galaxy full of followers and I didn't even see the same level of bullshit as in asura's wrath once
We only got to even briefly see what was going on up on the higher planes on a handful of occasions, and the only actual conflict with the Ori that we saw was after their boost had been cutoff.
 
We only got to even briefly see what was going on up on the higher planes on a handful of occasions, and the only actual conflict with the Ori that we saw was after their boost had been cutoff.
Even with the boost, the ancients were able to hold their own against the ori, or at least for a while. But as you said, we saw and know too little to really say what was going on. What I said before was more my personal opinion on the matter.
 
Ori faith and Mantra faith work very broadly along the same lines, with faith of some kind granting a boost, but with wildly varying expressions due to the differences in the nature of the two. An Ori, or ancient, is basically an energy being thinking itself into existence, while a Mantra Warrior is a super cyborg. Ori power are along the lines of reality warping and telekinesis. A Mantra warrior punches the universe and reality changes to keep up. An Ori could wave a hand and a mountain would rise into the air, while a mantra warrior would probably have to use an attack or a tool to get the same effect. Joes rosary elevator could probably pull it off.

But a secondary aspect is how the faith boost affects both. With enough faith, it can affect the image and personality of the Ori. The reason why the Ori were viewed as all powerful god was because they created a state religion viewing them as such and got rid of anyone who disagreed. On the other hand, mantra warriors have a self image they identify with that mantra just reinforces. Asura is an angry guy who punches hard, and that is such a core part of him that he can punch you even if his arms are ripped off. Powering with mantra just makes him punch harder and gives him more arms to punch you with. All else being equal, if the warrior can reach the Ori, the Ori is getting punched in the face. Which is why the smart Ori keeps at least 200 miles away from the warrior they are fighting and just keeps throwing mountains.

TLDR: Ori are casters, Mantras are fighters.
 
Okay so, canonically, Ascended/Ori (literally the same thing) can create and destroy planets with a thought. Youngins might be a bit drained by that for a while, but they can still do that. For the most part they don't, for various reasons but mostly because it's not necessary. From what I can see, Asura still have to physically throw things at each other to fight, instead of just willing each other into non-existence, which would mean your Ascended would win by default as they can just vanish the thrown object and create their own travelling at arbitrary speeds. Not to mention being able to phase though solid matter.

Saying that though, something else must be going on because the Astra's Wrath dudes are throwing planets at each other at velocities that are clearly superluminal, yet they somehow remain spherical, so we have to assume something is holding them together beyond mere gravity. Does this interfere with an Ascended's ability to vanish matter? Is that property actually key to the attack rather than the physical object (think payload vs missile)? Difficult to say because the "physics" of Astra's Wrath is so ill-defined.

Tangent to that, I will say that the Ori were almost certainly never as strong as some people like to imply; sure they had a galaxy of believers, but how many people is that, actually, if the population is mainly confined to small towns around the gates? And how does their faith/belief being founded on ignorance and falsehood affect things when Daniel was able to channel Oma's power into straight telekinesis with about three hours of instruction? None of the Ori galaxy's "faithful" managed that, not even the Priors and they had their magic staffs to help them.
 
Daniel was able to channel Oma's power into straight telekinesis with about three hours of instruction? None of the Ori galaxy's "faithful" managed that, not even the Priors and they had their magic staffs to help them.
Remember that Oma was all about helping people achieve enlightenment and ascension. She wanted it to happen.
 
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