Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Why ask for pictures? Gully's description is now spot on for a non green She-Hulk. Use that.
That was what came to mind as well to be honest. Though honestly? Nothing was actually described off of Gully's actual looks. Only that she was tall and stunning, don't even know what hair color she has and her hairstyle, if she actually has a large bust, or even her skin tone. She could be any combination of these factors and still be really beautiful. Really wondering how she looks now.

Also worth questioning: just how strong is she now? I assume a high Brute rating and s an unbelievably high powered Shaker with that shovel, but it'll be nice to know some details, @LordRoustabout.
I just want to point one thing out about how much the city planners of Chicago and Brockton Bay have to hate this dudes power. I sure do love having to anticipate the gas mains, sewer pipes, water pipes, internet phone and power cables all being swapped around at random and being severed in the process.
I imagine that's part of the planning process before he is cleared to use his power.
 
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"I'm very glad to hear that." He said smoothly. Well, everything he did was smooth. It was even more striking in person than in the videos she had seen. Newt to it she felt even more awkward and uncoordinated than usual, the lummox of a ward who had to be taught how to not accidentally break things or hurt people with her strength.
When did the Fault Lines crew arrive?

A portal. Because with Apeiron, why not?.
extra period
Not what she would have expected from Apeiron's workshop, but she sincerely doubted that was the entirety of it
missing period
Like she could speak in a normal tone rather than her usual whisper without constantly being reminded of who off-putting her voice could sound.
of how off?
She was running circled in her head, trying to find some way to justify things to herself.
circles?
There was more information there, color gradients and data readings that she couldn't hope to follow, but once aging, at the highest level it was simple enough. Of simplified enough.
but once again ... If simplified enough?
One of the potential results of such a connection is a modulation of a parahuman's abilities. The breach allows a stronger connection, which can be expressed in everything from temporary empowerment to the manifestation of new powers to a completely new expression of base abilities." He continued. There were complicated designs shown on the 'passenger space' side of the diagram, but once again, if she focused on the highest-level elements she could follow what Apeiron was saying.
missing"
"Sea Snails." Apeiron explained. "Well, a unique variant of sea snail"
missing period
But that was the thing, she was used to the eccentricities of tinkers, not whatever Apeiron counted as, and if his lab was anything to go off, he was even further beyond the pale than anyone could have imagined.
off of?
One strong enough to make her doubt whether it was actually possible for her to damage or disrupt anything no matter what she did
missing period
Apeiron let out a breath. "Fine. If that's alright with you?" He asked gully. She gave him a nervous nod, then braced herself as he gestured towards a piece of equipment.
Gully
The actual chance wasn't as uncomfortable as she expected.
change?
"No." Gully said. "No, after everything, with all of this, she gestured down at her tiny normal body. Then at her transformed state. "It's already too much. Everything, it's just…"
missing"
 
"Okay, I need you not to freak out about this." Gully said calmly. And was answered with a shriek of excitement that pushed the phone's speaker to its limit and edged into frequencies that only dogs could hear.

So much for keeping things quiet.
God, I wish I had a friend like Facetime who'd react to good news like that.
 
It was an example of a power that was unquestionably strong, but also inherently limited. Shuffle could work over huge areas, switching out parts of the landscape, moving roads, hills, even buildings. He was able to massively rearrange a battlefield, but significantly less capable when dealing with the subsequent battle. More of a setup cape than an active combatant.
That's a stronk power. I can really see him having been named Labyrinth or something in an another fanfiction if he was to become a more active combatant whatever its villain or hero.
She was being regarded as some kind of defiant symbol, which was just about the last thing she wanted.
[...]
Effectively, she was an example of the Protectorate's failures, serving to highlight another extremely high-profile failure. If things didn't work out for her, if she had to slink back to San Diego at the end of all this, there was no chance of just falling back into her previous role. Not after what had happened and the amount of focus that had been placed on her. They would either have to counter that image or subvert it somehow.
Ouch. Not only has she make sure that she doesn't burn bridges she doesn't need to but also make sure she doesn't accidentally say things that can be twisted.
Garment was an incredibly talented person, and there was no doubt that she was a master of her craft, but she would probably want to apply that craft, or at least attempt to. No matter how talented Garment might be, there wasn't any outfit Gully could imagine herself in that wouldn't make her feel like an elephant that had been decorated for a festival.
Happy that Garment's skill is recognized. It hits harder than when its from a tinker perspective from Armsmaster. Armsmaster is more about the technical skill and the profoundness of her tinker ability while Gully is about Garment's fashion skills.
It would help if there was something she could do to prepare, but beyond maybe watching some more of the woman's admittedly excellent videos to get a point of reference, she was at a loss. Really, beyond waking into the studio and trying to find a way to bring up the subject, she didn't know what she could do.
Ouch. Stressing trying to research a topic to ask about and second guessing herself about it.
And that wasn't even getting into the panic waiting for her if Garment could actually set up a meeting.
[...]
"Good afternoon, Gully."
[...]
Apeiron, the Enigmatic Artificer, was here.
She knows how much panic she would have if she actually can make a deal to have it.
In the face of possibly the most powerful cape on the planet who was apparently taking the time to meet her personally
She's in panic mode. It doesn't really get better after this too. Yes, she did somehow ground herself a bit after this but she's much more stressed and nervous than Armstrong for example.
"Some additional privacy would probably help, and I might need access to my facilities, depending on what treatment option you decide to pursue. If any." He added at the end.

The casual nature of his life changing offer was almost insulting, if not for the clear sincerity in his actions.
Something I am glad for is that he hasn't lost his sincerity and that it comes across clearly. It makes a clear difference.
"Please, have a seat." Apeiron said as he stepped through the portal. The simmering aperture winked out behind him, making Gully suddenly very aware that she had moved to a completely unknown location with no means of return.
Yeah. Kinda like you are getting that second voice questing your judgement and choice.
Like she could speak in a normal tone rather than her usual whisper without constantly being reminded of who off-putting her voice could sound.
#CasualApeironConstruction
If she describes this then it will be very much deliberate on the report's view.
If Weld hadn't clearly gone behind the PRT's backs, broken the non-interaction policy and made his own deal for treatment, she wouldn't have been surprised if they had sandbagged on the issue for years, and not until Apeiron agreed to all of their terms, conditions, and policies.
That's quite cynical but not unwarranted. I do think thought that public pressure would have forced their hand eventually.
In a perfect world, the fact that Apeiron had a treatment that could help Case 53s would have pressured the Protectorate and PRT to come to terms and resolve their issues with the man. Unfortunately, in reality it was much more likely that they would have used the same situation to try to force him to comply with their demands, not ALLOWING him to help until he agreed to fall in line.
I have a hard time thinking this would be the case for any other PRT branches than Brockton Bay's. Maybe trying a bit but ultimately wouldn't push their luck too much.
"Well, more like a couple of seconds to maybe a half hour, on the outside." He said, "And that will mostly be scanning and analysis. The actual treatment won't be much longer."
Maybe the analytics will get an 'aha' moment with the decade aged whisky made yesterday now. That it can be applied to other things than non living things.
 
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Aperion capitalized Workshop, but he's the only person to do so. Intentional?
That would be the "particular emphasis" mentioned in the first quote. To Joe, "Workshop" is a Proper Noun — it is both a power expression (in the same way that Panacea's power is "Shaper", and not "shaper"), but also a realm unto itself (in the same way that "Turkey" was the formerly the country now known as "Türkiye", while "turkey" is a relatively cheap American bird known for large breasts, typically eaten at Christmas or Thanksgiving)

To Gully, "workshop" is just a Common Noun, in the same way that Canada is a "country", not a "Country".
 
Its kind of funny how easily people forget that Undersiders are villains and for the most part they really dont give a shit about everyone else. So yeah, for villainess Tattletale situation of some random child who is probably just got extravagant house arrest doesnt matter in the slightest. What a surprise huh?
It is worth noting that Lisa is actually very unhappy about the truth of Dinah's treatment canonically and that Brian also found it unsettling. However Lisa does currently think that Dinah is basically being bribed by Coil with no school and ice cream (a frankly better plan then what Coil actually came up with since he's a bastard) and as such is not really a priority for anyone for good reason.
 
It's everything I ever could have asked for.

Did Joe just do the thing he did in Ch100, but better, to use his Forge powers to fix a passenger directly at scale? That is so cool!

I suppose he has the capability to do repair jobs on Shards at this point, yeah. Or even modifications... which could definitely get into interesting territory in theory, although I suspect probably won't be a factor in the context of the story itself.
 
Dr. MetalMonkey: "Here, take two miracles and call me in the morning"
At this point, the entire fic is just Apeiron as Parahuman Father Christmas.

Anyways, been looking forward to this one for a while. Glad to see moments of fulfillment for Gully, even if it is paired to an absurd case number. And, also, Amy about to put most of this PRT quarantine shit behind her. Funnily enough, she's not going to have that much to do but it'll let the Workshop ease off on the clandestine healing.
 
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Man that's a hilarious number of nails in Cauldron and Piggot's coffins.

Doing a reread, realized Joe specified that he would be willing to work with the Undersiders as long as they didn't break the Unwritten Rules with their big job (the bank heist). Definitely ironic that they immediately went ahead and assisted Coil in kidnapping Dinah. It was pretty painful how his power tried to warn him but he was too spiteful and enjoyed his power's panic at the thought of a gross supervillain getting his hands on a child, but it is what it is.

It's kind of weird that Lisa knows about Dinah and hasn't said anything. It's even weirder that this hasn't even pinged on Joe's manipulation sensing, as it means Lisa genuinely doesn't care about Dinah/isn't trying to conceal her existence/doesn't think Joe would care and so doesn't think not mentioning her is manipulating Joe.

Then again, in canon when Miss Militia found out about Coil kidnapping Dinah, her reaction was pretty weird too. She halfheartedly tries to get a meeting with Dinah and when Coil says he has no reason to "let her", because he's "helping" Dinah with her power and needs complete isolation from all her friends and family, she just drops the subject. Never brings it up again.

Dinah really is a weird plot device that people treat in the most insane and inconsistent manner, no matter the medium.

That's not really what happened his passenger was ecstatic about the bank job even after how badly it went which Joe was rightly horrified by and so started ranting at it which meant when it then turned to horror because of the report turning up he thought it was his rant that got the response and thought it was trying to divert his attention to get out of the rant. Due to that Joe has no idea about Dinah.

Lisa is also simply caught up her her own issues and is pretty apathetic to anyone that isn't suicidal or her friend so combined with all the stuff since she hasn't thought about Dinah so is still under the assumption she's a political hostage and not a cape or being drugged. Interestingly tho recent wog confirms Joe will take it as a breech of their initial agreement and will seriously sour things between him and Lisa so ironically she'll get exactly what she wants distance from the forge.

Miss Militia also shouldn't be that surprising she's a dedicated yes man and follower without orders from above she wouldn't do anything about Dinah and probably wouldn't push for it.

Judging what we know of Cauldron vials and how they mix, it's possible that the "living" portion of her passenger was Scion's version of Oliver's Balance shard that lets him change his appearance to what others see as attractive (likely her original Trigger) combined with the "dead" Eden shard related to geokinesis as well as the "both dead and alive" Balance shard that Oliver is connected to.

Balance is the name Cauldron gave the formula not the shard so we don't even know if it maps to 1 specifically before we even consider he also only had half a vial tho it is probably like Aisha's in that it's supposed to be partially in all shards.

God, I wish I had a friend like Facetime who'd react to good news like that.

Eh I'd wait until we find out more about what specifically she's squealing over given worm in general there's decent odds it's over the Apeiron contact or shovel.

#CasualApeironConstruction
If she describes this then it will be very much deliberate on the report's view.

That's quite cynical but not unwarranted. I do think thought that public pressure would have forced their hand eventually.

I have a hard time thinking this would be the case for any other PRT branches than Brockton Bay's. Maybe trying a bit but ultimately wouldn't push their luck too much.

Maybe the analytics will get an 'aha' moment with the decade aged whisky made yesterday now. That it can be applied to other things than non living things.

The prt probably won't be getting too thorough a report given the provided Lethe excuse and request to keep things quiet. Besides Apeiron stuff has to be handled nationally and they'd want it ASAP so like Lily and Weld she won't want to tell them before seeing Garment and having her date. Then there's also how it's likely to be overshadowed by the nine takedown the next day and the reveal of Jack's power.

I also wouldn't be surprised if she was correct and it applied to other branches. While the bay's is bad if you dig into worm lore there's a lot of pretty bad stuff that the prt as a whole does or has as standard procedures such as their appalling treatment of non prt tinkers.

It is worth noting that Lisa is actually very unhappy about the truth of Dinah's treatment canonically and that Brian also found it unsettling.

It's also worth noting that it didn't bother them enough to actually speak up about it aside from later amongst themselves because they didn't care enough to make an issue of it or even speak up when Taylor considered it a deal breaker.
 


A collection of failures and mistakes within the system behind powers and through terrible luck she found herself with the equivalent of a corrupted hard drive.

I like the comparison, things are working but the hard drive is beaten, waterlogged, and barely booting up, just enough for the PC (Parahuman) to work.

"It could be considered excessive, in some areas."

Carol is being given more ammo. Bad, Gully, bad.

'News?'

'What news?'

'What have you gotten up to?'

'Tell me girl, spill those beans.'

'Come on, don't leave me hanging.'

'Call now.'

I like Facetime, she hits just the right balance of hyperactive and actually being worried.
 
Hope Everett like mountain climbing.

Or giving uppies.

I know new chapter droped, havent read that but still has to answer:

Its kind of funny how easily people forget that Undersiders are villains and for the most part they really dont give a shit about everyone else. So yeah, for villainess Tattletale situation of some random child who is probably just got extravagant house arrest doesnt matter in the slightest. What a surprise huh?

As someone who legit hates Lisa, I will to anything that will put her in a worse light than she already naturally is in. 🥰

Hasn't he mentioned, in public, that he physically can't stop the looks powers?

The PRT knows, and those who look into it have enough evidence to take it for certain, but it isn't a "public" thing.

Need a clarification at the end here, is she in her Amazonian form while FaceTiming or in her smol' cute normish form?

Smolly, her phone (that she described as being like a brick before) was too big for her small hands, but still serviceable.

Those rumours of Taylor being a former supermodel is never dying at this point. The air of mystery surrounding her legs are only going to intensify.

I mean, given than looks aren't as important as body type, she may well be told to become a model anyway if people knew she isn't one :V

So… out of Dir. Piggot and Carol Dallon, which one is going to explode and which one will spontaneously combust when they find out about this?

Probably Carol, Piggot may be at her nerves end, but Carol is so in denial and paranoid over everything that she may as well pull the metaphorical trigger if her family doesn't keep her on check, which is part of why she was exiled sent to New York with GG.

Man that's a hilarious number of nails in Cauldron and Piggot's coffins.

Dr. Mother? More like Dr. Fraud.

Joe IS NOT beating fey allegations any time soon

Joe realizing that his Servant stat page now have the Fae (Fake) skill.
 
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Gully's Shard: "Finally! My moment has come! Super sexy super amazonian super transformation acti-"

WHACK!!

Apeiron with a rolled up 6 dimensional newspaper: "Bad Shard! Bad! Tone it down!"

Gully's Shard: "You're not my daddy! You can't tell me what to do!"
 
It's also worth noting that it didn't bother them enough to actually speak up about it aside from later amongst themselves because they didn't care enough to make an issue of it or even speak up when Taylor considered it a deal breaker.
It'll bother her more now because if she knows, the Ape knows
And the Ape won't be very happy if she's too happy
 
The fact that Gully describes her "lighter body" as "effortlessly elegant" makes me suspect that some of Joe's style powers seeped into the aesthetics of both of Gully's new forms. Shame we did not get a proper "step by step" of what was actually in Gully's treatment and how much Joe's involvement affected the end result yet. Guess that for the Joe's PoV on the events. And we will probably have to wait for something like Tecton's interlude for a proper description of how Gully now looks.

Wonder what form Gully will choose to attend her dinner with Everett.

On one hand, that bigger body seems to be something Gully at least at some point wanted, plus her new cape look will get out at some point might as well be there, plus if Tecton will be in his power armour it will make sense for Gully to be in her cape form.

On the other hand, I can see Gully preferring her lighter body, at least by sheer contrast in perspective it offers in comparison to her Case 53 form, plus it being more normal and discreet, both qualities Gully seemed to learn to appreciate from her time as a cape, plus it will just make sense for Gully to want to go out "out of costumes" with the dinner, if she manages to convince Everett to go without power armour.

In general, it seems that what form she will choose will depend on if Gully would want the dinner to be notably Cape business, or a more personal and private thing.
 
Oh so many people are gonna look at her new form and get the very very very very wrong idea about what he charges for fixes. Vista is gonna use this as another reason to talk mad shit about him
 
Oh so many people are gonna look at her new form and get the very very very very wrong idea about what he charges for fixes. Vista is gonna use this as another reason to talk mad shit about him
Counter-point, people would just assume that Apeiron has a version of Accord's OCD where everything must be BEAUTIFUL because lets be real, why would he charge that if Survey exists?
 
I like the comparison, things are working but the hard drive is beaten, waterlogged, and barely booting up, just enough for the PC (Parahuman) to work.
The sad thing is, depending if she was a buyer or a captive of Cauldron when she got her vial, it could have still been her choice that landed her as a Case 53. It's kinda why Triumph is so messed up at the moment - as far as he knows he's fated for a horrible afterlife and that's because he bought that vial.
plus it will just make sense for Gully to want to go out "out of costumes" with the dinner, if she manages to convince Everett to go without power armour.
He probably only went in costume anyway because Gully literally cannot go and eat outside "out of costume" before. Now that wouldn't really be an issue.

That's assuming the date doesn't cancelled though, by either her cure or the fact that Joe is about to kill the S9 in less than 24 hours before Unleashing The Healing. WoG is that the date Crystal is so excited for might end up getting disrupted for similar reasons.

Crystal: "CURSE YOU APEIRON FOR RUINING MY DATE NIGHT"
Joe: "Ah, we can just reschedule...?"
 
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Aaand smash cut to Cauldron and PRT going absolutely bananas behind the scenes. I hope the shovel has some thinker-dampening on it or the think tanks are going to start chewing the walls trying to make any sense of this.

Ten bucks on Gully's date's 'tall and strong preference' hitting so hard he faints.
 
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