Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Need a clarification at the end here, is she in her Amazonian form while FaceTiming or in her smol' cute normish form?

Kinda surprised she didn't at least ask to see herself in a mirror for both form tho…or is it implied she can see it on whatever screen they are showing her stuff on?

Really happy for her tho, now we need weld future girlfriend too, can't forget poor lil' sveta!
 
Hasn't he mentioned, in public, that he physically can't stop the looks powers?
Not publicly. The people who all know are keeping it secret, either as a "contract" to Apeiron or as mere theories in the meantime for the overall PRT. As far as the public knows, it could've been intentional.

Sadly enough this wasn't actually Joe's perks kicking in. This is literally Gully's original Trigger, or at the very least the specifications of the Cauldron Vial she bought before she became a Case 53. The previous Gully wanted a supermodel Amazoness body, probably due to some degree of body image problems considering how small she actually turned out to be, only to become a hulking monster and getting her mind wiped for it.

Judging what we know of Cauldron vials and how they mix, it's possible that the "living" portion of her passenger was Scion's version of Oliver's Balance shard that lets him change his appearance to what others see as attractive (likely her original Trigger) combined with the "dead" Eden shard related to geokinesis as well as the "both dead and alive" Balance shard that Oliver is connected to.
 
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Sadly enough this wasn't actually Joe's perks kicking in. This is literally Gully's original Trigger, or at the very least the specifications of the Cauldron Vial she bought before she became a Case 53. The previous Gully wanted a supermodel Amazoness body, probably due to some degree of body image problems considering how small she actually turned out to be, only to become a hulking monster and getting her mind wiped for it.
Basically Reverse Lenn from the SAO spinoff.
 
Not publicly. The people who all know are keeping it secret, either as a "contract" to Apeiron or as mere theories in the meantime for the overall PRT. As far as the public knows, it could've been intentional.

Sadly enough this wasn't actually Joe's perks kicking in. This is literally Gully's original Trigger, or at the very least the specifications of the Cauldron Vial she bought before she became a Case 53. The previous Gully wanted a supermodel Amazoness body, probably due to some degree of body image problems considering how small she actually turned out to be, only to become a hulking monster and getting her mind wiped for it.
Funny how her LIVE shard is better for her ideal than her Cauldron Vial shard.
 
During the procedure he was doing the techno-thaumic equivalent of hitting your passenger with a rolled-up newspaper, and it still wouldn't back down from this."
Ok I read the chapter now. First, Tekton is obviously the luckiest son of a bitch in all of USA. And second, this is the most hysterical image fic put in my head thus far I cant XD
 
Given that precog effects drastically underestimate how proactive Joe will be in response to attack...

That will be Very Funny. I hope he steals Hat Lady's hat.
To be honest given he's "dangerous if provoked", it's likelier that instead of attacking Gully they'll probably try to manipulate her in some other way to keep things secret even if she remembers.
 
"During the procedure he was doing the techno-thaumic equivalent of hitting your passenger with a rolled-up newspaper, and it still wouldn't back down from this."

I am now picturing something like the Engineer equivalent of Fragile One, insisting to the Great Creator of Ways that this time, it's going to do right by its host, this time it will create its magnum opus as it should have been and show them all!
 
I really hope the next Chapter has PRT/PHO reactions😂
I remind you that the PHO thread exists for this fic, so if you want those PHO reactions, well, I'm sure nobody would mind you resurrecting this thing:
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PHO Blacksmithery - Brockton's Celestial Forge

Due to the recent omake regarding a PHO Interlude, and the sheer potential of portraying the public's response (factions included, but not limited to, Capes, PRT, public opinion, and Netizens )to Apeiron and the events related to him, I am opened up a thread that would be dedicated for BCF PHO...
 
Because with Apeiron, why not?.
not?
"To my Workshop." He said, with a particular emphasis on the word.
"Your workshop." She stuttered,
Not what she would have expected from Apeiron's workshop, but she sincerely doubted that was the entirety of it
"I would be happy to speak with you in your workshop?" She offered,
Aperion capitalized Workshop, but he's the only person to do so. Intentional?
and it's not that significant anyway." He said, "By my standards." He added, upon seeing her expression.
anyway." He said.

being reminded of who off-putting her voice could sound.
of how
possible directly through the PRT, if he had been able to, that particularly stung.
to; that
but once aging, at the highest level it was simple enough. Of simplified enough.
once again,
She assured him. "You can trust me."


"I appreciate that." He said.
Squish line break.
damage or disrupt anything no matter what she did
did.
"There are passengers operating normally, with active functions and live connections to the network.
"These are passengers operating normally, with
/
"There are passengers operating normally without active
(This line is odd due to the way the followup sentence is constructed as if this sentence is meant to say something different.)
She waved back, then sank into the bead,
bed,
but calling what she experienced 'visions' hardly didn't them justice.
hardly did them
would put the fear of God into even the most hard-nosed director.
god
Rarefied rock dust with a crystalline focus shaft."
Refined (Rather than 'Rarefied' which while a real word really doesn't fit the sentence.)
Rock Dust (Aperion should capitalize Dust and the type of it, since he knows what it is, and Dust as the crystalline Remnant power source is internally capitalized in RWBY setting)
mostly just from the ability to generate rock from the dust source.
Dust
"No, after everything, with all of this, she gestured down at her tiny normal body.
this," she
Newt to it she felt even more awkward and uncoordinated than usual, the lummox of a ward who had to be taught
Next to it
Ward (Capitalized as a title)
Of simplified enough.
Or
Gully.
One of the potential results of such a connection is
"One
 
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Entire sections of the city just swapped around
I just want to point one thing out about how much the city planners of Chicago and Brockton Bay have to hate this dudes power. I sure do love having to anticipate the gas mains, sewer pipes, water pipes, internet phone and power cables all being swapped around at random and being severed in the process.
 
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