Rei (especially one liberated from her slumber) that could read the narration in the same vein comic!Deadpool reads the yellow boxes would be either a very scare, or a very hilarious character.
Little did Rei know that, at that very moment, in another universe, a bunch of people were talking about her on a creative fiction forum.

"Um... I'm very flattered I am considered an engaging enough topic for discussion, but... why, exactly?"

Son of a-
 
If Rei can perceive that inner dialogue in any way, just for shits and giggles at some point in the future she should hide a lemur onesie in Asuka's closet and a (surprisingly well-tailored) magical girl outfit in Shinji's. :rofl:

Shinji: ...why is the skirt so short??

Rei: ...no reason.

Shinji: I'm not sure-

Asuka: (nonchalantly wearing her lemur onesie) Just shut up and put it on, oh baka mine.
 
That was the intention, though yeah it can be a bit vague admittedly. Anything emboldened is a page flip, with the current page alongside. Makes all our lives easier.
Yeah, looking back I can see what you intended. But yeah, it's a bit confusing, especially since Kaworu ripped out the page of his violent death immediately, so it wouldn't have been out of the question that Asuka would do the same with hers - just that they obviously just commented on that page, so I was almost wondering if that was a left-over alternative for it. :p
Thanks for continuing to proof this, I really appreciate it :D
My pleasure. ;)
'And my foot hurts.'
Don't say we didn't warn you, Asuka...
On a different topic, hi JimmyWolk ! I just finished The 2nd Try and I really liked it !
Hi, and thanks. :D
 
Little did Rei know that, at that very moment, in another universe, a bunch of people were talking about her on a creative fiction forum.

"Um... I'm very flattered I am considered an engaging enough topic for discussion, but... why, exactly?"

Son of a-
Shinji: ...why is the skirt so short??

Rei: ...no reason.

Shinji: I'm not sure-

Asuka: (nonchalantly wearing her lemur onesie) Just shut up and put it on, oh baka mine.
That's some crack fuel... <takes notes furiously>
 
So, I don't have time ATM to look for it, but I heard that someone, somewhere, set the Third Impact sequence to "Hey Jude" in an AMV...

Chronicles!Asuka: "...I don't think I like The Beatles anymore..."



For main A&T topic: How badly do you think Misato will take everything? Will it perhaps get to the point where Shinji/Asuka might have to shield Rei/Kaworu with their own bodies, "You'll have to go through me" style? ...And might Misato be so upset that she'll even try to shoot through them anyway just to kill the "Filthy Angels" behind them?
 
For main A&T topic: How badly do you think Misato will take everything? Will it perhaps get to the point where Shinji/Asuka might have to shield Rei/Kaworu with their own bodies, "You'll have to go through me" style? ...And might Misato be so upset that she'll even try to shoot through them anyway just to kill the "Filthy Angels" behind them?
There's a line that's been hinted at that's along the lines of "I guess you'll have to shoot me too, then". Not sure of the context, but this would definitely fit the bill.
 
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There's a line that's been foreshadowed that's along the lines of 'I guess you'll have to shoot me too, then'. Not sure of the context, but this would definitely fit the bill.
I believe this line has been a subject of debate, wonder, and horror since it's been released, which was, if I reckon properly, at least two years ago.

Which was, most likely, Strypgia's goal :D
 
If this weirdness keeps accelerating, I think I'll be a magical girl by next week, and Shinji will have turned into a lemur or something.'
Isn't this the fic where Asuka wished the school uniforms were seifuku so she could at least pretend she was a magical girl? (Because I know I've read one where that thought runs through her head.)
 
So, I don't have time ATM to look for it, but I heard that someone, somewhere, set the Third Impact sequence to "Hey Jude" in an AMV...

Chronicles!Asuka: "...I don't think I like The Beatles anymore..."



For main A&T topic: How badly do you think Misato will take everything? Will it perhaps get to the point where Shinji/Asuka might have to shield Rei/Kaworu with their own bodies, "You'll have to go through me" style? ...And might Misato be so upset that she'll even try to shoot through them anyway just to kill the "Filthy Angels" behind them?


I get the feeling that it will result in a "He who fights monsters" moment for Misato. The way I see it, she is the one among the cast that is most guilty of that. Depending on your interpretation, Gendo would also fall into that catagory. On another note, another sugestion for future chronicles is GunxSword. The Revenge part of that series would really strike home with Misato.
 
So, I don't have time ATM to look for it, but I heard that someone, somewhere, set the Third Impact sequence to "Hey Jude" in an AMV...

Chronicles!Asuka: "...I don't think I like The Beatles anymore..."
Third Impact goes better to "I Melt With You" by Modern English.

Moving forward using all my breath
Making love to you was never second best
I saw the world crashing all around your face
Never really knowing it was always mesh and lace

I'll stop the world and melt with you
You've seen the difference and it's getting better all the time
There's nothing you and I won't do
I'll stop the world and melt with you

Dream of better lives the kind which never hates
(You should see why)
Trapped in the state of imaginary grace
(You should know better)
I made a pilgrimage to save this humans race
(You should see why)
Never comprehending the race has long gone bye
 
Third Impact goes better to "I Melt With You" by Modern English.

Moving forward using all my breath
Making love to you was never second best
I saw the world crashing all around your face
Never really knowing it was always mesh and lace

I'll stop the world and melt with you
You've seen the difference and it's getting better all the time
There's nothing you and I won't do
I'll stop the world and melt with you

Dream of better lives the kind which never hates
(You should see why)
Trapped in the state of imaginary grace
(You should know better)
I made a pilgrimage to save this humans race
(You should see why)
Never comprehending the race has long gone bye

I remember an Eva Fanfic which had that song :)
 
...I think I have a headache now. I like numbers conceptually, but there's a reason I dropped Maths.
Source: DeviantArt / Konosuba

It also kept her mind partly off freaking out over what Rei had told her last night. 'My best friend is part ancient space alien, her boyfriend is too, and he's wobbling between suicidal and suppressing an urge to end the world personally. This is in addition too us already knowing our own Commander and his bosses each have their own plan to end the world. And someone tried to kill us all yesterday. If this weirdness keeps accelerating, I think I'll be a magical girl by next week, and Shinji will have turned into a lemur or something.'
The universe is paying you back for that week from The Twilight Zone that you force-fed to Misato a few months back (in-story).

Did anyone else already have the idea of creating multiple accounts just so we would have more of the story faster or is it just me ?
I would, but my ventriloquism is out of practice.

Shhh, sock puppets don't talk!
They do when you're a better ventriloquist than I am.
 
I forgot to mention this earlier but the protagonist of GunxSword has a bizarre taste in food similar to Misato. Specifically he orders the cheapest dish on the menu, all the condiments the restaurant has and puts all the condiments on his meal. He actually likes such a mess of food. Oh yeah, he also orders a mug of milk to go with his meal.
 
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