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That's especially fair on the MOO posts, though FWIW I back-dated this more to give myself some room to play with. I might do a "backstory" bit, and then try to start tying it into things (without accidentally stepping on toes). Again, half the reason I back-dated was to give myself space to try and tie it in to MOO/ASTF posts/events without feeling rushed about it.I think the most successful omakes are those that really tie into events in the quest in a concrete way. I know I've had to abandon a few where I realized I was spinning off completely into an original cast of characters that had nothing to do with the quest other than notionally taking place in the Boldly Go universe.
So basically my comment would be, great you've got an Orion vigilante, but it'll work better if it's really tied to things going on in all those 'Master of Orion' posts and to a more Star Trek feel in general.
[X][COUNCIL] Plan Modern Explorers and Syndicate Amendment
[X][FACTION] Approach the Mercantilists about a diplomatic/financial push to assist the Orions with their political and economic transition.