Well, I'mean sold on this compromise/improvement

[X] VIGIL

The English Backronym is... Hm.... "Vanguard Intervention for Ground Interdiction Landings"

The Orion/Amarki version sounds much smoother. But hey, what can you do?
 
The political correct term would probably be something like Federation Stability Mission in the Orion Union (FESMOU) if we look at the naming conventions of UN missions but that doesn't sound very convicning and I ölack the energy to come up with something that results in a cooler acronym so..

[X][NAME] VIGILANCE

it is.
 
A lot of real anti-terrorist/ police paramilitary organizations have animal themed names like Tigers or Scorpions. Given that previous talk in this thread has pointed to the Imperial Orions being the originators of the Bird of Prey type warship and thus probably having avian predator symbolism, along with the Aero-Commandos typical method of operation I think a bird name would be good.

We haven't seen Amarki ground forces much , but given their knight fetish I can't imagine them as anything else but clad in plate power Armour. Thus;

[][NAME] Iron Eagles

Amarki and Orion, in unison: "...What's an eagle?"

:p

EDIT: Oh, and I made a few very slight tweaks to the wording of a bit of Ensign Bessle's dialogue in Fairy Tales, Pt. 3 to be compatible with the timeline of the fall of the Orion Empire that you expressed in your recent omake. Since a thousand years ago as of 2312, the Orion Empire was basically dead already and the Hur'q were running the quadrant.

[][NAME] Aethercorps
[Looks at Leila's profile picture]

Good enough for me!

[X][NAME] Aethercorps

Also can you imagine the reaction from fans of the show who thought Nash had been put on a bus? In the universe where TBG is a TV show, I can imagine this was planned since her removal from the EC.
Yeah. I knew we weren't going to keep Nash on the sidelines forever, so I kind of... foreshadowed it, if you will, in my Five Years in Review mock-review that covers 2301-10 or so. I didn't know exactly what I was foreshadowing, of course, but I knew she'd be back for something.

Well ka'Sharren's first space assignment as a commodore certainly tosses her back into the thick of things. What interests me is the nature of the assignment. Up until now, the ships assigned to the anti-Syndicate Task Force have been primarily on interdiction duty, locking down whichever world Uhura was working on at the time. The UESPA and Andorian Guard ships seem to have been on commerce inspection duty, looking for Syndicate smugglers. This is... something different. I have a hunch what it's actually about.

They're looking for the Syndicate's hidden fleet. We know the Syndicate has some real, dedicated warships. Not many (we hope) but some escorts, one or two or three cruisers. Thus far the Syndicate has been very carefully keeping them out of this fight, judging correctly that if Starfleet ever got a bead on them it would be all over. However, starships are big items. The Syndicate has to actually keep them at some physical location, preferably with enough support infrastructure to keep them repaired and ready to move out.

Outer-colony worlds and "uninhabited" systems in and near Orion space seem like the most likely places for hidden Syndicate bases. With so much of the CA-Navy, it might finally be possible to do a sweep of all potential hiding places, drive the Syndicate fleet into the open, and bring them to battle. That's the ultimate goal of this CA-Navy task force, even if they can't say so. (I mean, the Syndicate will probably suspect, but there's no reason to confirm their suspicions.)

The only downside is that with so many CA-Navy forces tied up here, they aren't going to be able to do much to support the Gabriel Expanse.
It's a good theory. Makes a lot of sense. Helps explain why they wanted Nash, specifically, in charge. She may well be our most celebrated field commander at this point. Everyone with that kind of command experience before the Khitomer Accords (e.g. Sulu) has already been promoted too high to take the field.

This does worry me a little. I understand why it had to happen as part of the political compromises being made, but we can count on more leaks. The Task Force probably isn't going to be able to surprise the Syndicate as much as it has int he past.
I fondly hope that Uhura will be reporting to only a very short list of individuals, highly placed in the Union government. If we're lucky, we can maybe get them, specifically, in front of a psychic or two.

As long as the task force still has operational independence, and the direct oversight is concentrated in the person of a small number of individuals whose loyalties are known (like Oyana herself, or Sierre, or that Vulcan jurist we saw in one of the 'Orion politics' omakes), we should be okay. I'd actually like to see Sierre doing something, because a reputation for incorruptibility is really really handy at times like this, especially if it's the truth.

But it's also a huge move for the Orion Union. They're pushing all their chips in to bet on the Federation. This bombing proved what crazy fuckers the Syndicate actually are; it stripped away a lot of the excuses about how they're just freedom-fighters. There may be a lot of things about Federation membership that worry the various Orion political parties, but they're willing to trade away restrictions on genetic research and the End of Ambition if only it means the Syndicate will be gone too.
Quite frankly, the Orions hit the end of ambition around a thousand years ago; everything since then has been them kidding themselves. They had their second chance, because the Hur'q vanished a loooong time ago. Their current social structure was never going to become a great power, not as long as the Syndicate and the hypercorps were parasitical on the system. If they had that potential they would have expressed it already, instead of having species that were literally in the Iron Age during their imperial peak rise to overtake them.

I think that probably-Qute was right about that one, really. The Orions have to adapt to not being galactic overlords. They should have done it a long time ago. Because they're never going to enjoy the kind of power vacuum that they originally expanded into, that enabled them to become an empire in the first place. It's not that they have to forget ambition. But they need to recognize that it's time to stop dreaming of a revived Rome and start dreaming of a united Italy.

I don't see the End, but I do maybe see the Beginning of the End. Another couple of years and maybe...
Nonono. This is not the end. This is not even the beginning of the end.

However, like El Alamein, it is the end of the beginning.
 
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If so, for someone who used Robespierre like a stage prop, she sure seems to agree with the sentiments of his Orion counterpart. :D

You're right, but I was suddenly reminded of the episode Devil's Due. Strictly, someone with a transporter and a holodeck could have duplicated most of that.

Sorry, didn't catch this before.

1. To clarify, Q wasn't threatening to destroy the Orions herself. She was warning Oyana that if they don't get their shit together, sooner or later someone else will.

2. I was also thinking of "Devil's Due." Not because Q was an imposter, but because if I were in Oyana's place that would be my initial assumption, so I had her act accordingly.
 
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Oh wow, how did I miss those two tasty Orion omakes? Weird.

I dig it. The way the Hur'q are talked about in other omakes makes it seem like much less is supposed to be known about them, though.
Well nothing specific is really said about them here. Other than they conquer people, prefer to stay on their ships, loot everything they can get their hands on, and use indigenous populations as cannon fodder. A lot of the dating here is derived less from direct accounts, and more from inferring due to archeological research.
When in doubt I assume some of @Ato's omakes could just be the author taking an authoritative stance on issues that are still contentious in the academic community. Like it could be some people aren't sure if the Hur'q actually ran those suzerainties, or if it was aristocratic factions of the existing society adopting the Hur'q name for legitimacy or as a form of worship. Or if the Janissary Rebellion actually happened, because the main source about it is a text written 100 years later by a biased source. Shit like that.

Personally I assume the Hur'q have a level of mystery hovering around "Sea Peoples" level.


Well. (I'm actually in the middle of an Omake that mentions this) but the Aerocommandos are sort of a reference/send up of the military science fiction that still has some descendant of the US Marines around in the year 1 billion or whatever. The Aerocommandos occupy roughly the same cultural space for the Union that the Marines do for the US. Except the organizational history of the Aerocommando Corps goes back a couple millenia.
Indeed, Aerocommandos are supposed to be Marines. It's in reference to how Mexico uses it's Marine Corps in the drug war - they caught El Chapo for example.

I suggested Aerocommandos instead of Marines because I think any sort of Space Assault Force that specializes in drop pods or high-risk shuttle assaults will be modeled more like Paratrooper or Air Assault units and named as such, rather than using the term 'marine,' which might not even be a cultural concept for some species.

However in the Earth context I suspect the term persists due to cultural inertia (SPACE MARINES) and tradition, but as informal names. I would actually not be surprised if MACOs were referred to as "Space Marines" by the general public. Or if Starfleet has an orbital assault corps they have an official name like "Special Orbital Tactical Unit" or "Security Enhanced Response Force" but all the humans wander around calling them "Starfleet Marines" to the general confusion of the other species. Andorians be like "I thought they were Starfleet Guard?", Vulcans stick to the acronym, and Amarki are like "uh my dude they are clearly Starfleet Dragoons". This would probably apply to UESPA Marines as well. EDIT: by which I mean they might have a more formal name but are called Marines widely by the Earth populace and probably even the government. I actually assume that would get translated to other species, whereas the SF version would have no official-unofficial moniker and thus be open season to cultural interpretation.
 
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Amarki and Orion, in unison: "...What's an eagle?"

From canon we know that many worlds in Trek have analogs to earth animals and in translation to whatever federation standard is they are often to referred to as such.(For example; Bajoran Bat, Caldorian Eel, Denebian whale, Algorian mammoth.) So they might be called Amarkian Eagles or Celos Eagles, but something similar is probably known to them. You could of course make a a word for whatever the most common eagle analogue on Orion worlds are and use that, but that would of course not mean anything to Amarkians, or vis versa.
Where it is clear that within the use of federation standard (which may or may not be English) there is a common word for large avian analogue predator that is widely applied. It would be Eagle.

Fun fact beta canon does actually have the name for the Andorian Eagle analogue, Atlirith. I'm sure we can use that at a starship name at some point.


Oh wow, how did I miss those two tasty Orion omakes? Weird.
When in doubt I assume some of @Ato's omakes could just be the author taking an authoritative stance on issues that are still contentious in the academic community. Like it could be some people aren't sure if the Hur'q actually ran those suzerainties, or if it was aristocratic factions of the existing society adopting the Hur'q name for legitimacy or as a form of worship. Or if the Janissary Rebellion actually happened, because the main source about it is a text written 100 years later by a biased source. Shit like that.

Personally I assume the Hur'q have a level of mystery hovering around "Sea Peoples" level.

Oh definitely, in fact I tried to suggest in the last part that no body was really sure what happened during the fall of the Hur'q or immediately after. and that the earliest accounts of Borass founding the Empire of Rigel are were really only written a generation or so later. And the author is quite clearly biased since the possibility of the Syndicate playing a role in the rebellion is dismissed out of hand, when really I think its probably likely they did.

However I don't think the level of mystery should be quite sea peoples level. The Hur'q were a star faring species that over ran and conquered several other star faring species. Even with the amount of damage the Hur'q did to the societies they subjugated there would be some records remaining, even if they were fragmentary and unreliable at best.

That and archeological from worlds the Hur'q conquered would show definite indicators and changes in patterns of use that could be used to infer changes in the society and date them. For instance modern archeologists can determine the growth and economy of settlements that existed during the mid first millennium from aerial photography and excavations. The amount of archeological data a technological civilization puts out, even one in decline, would enable quite a lot to be determined, even outside of actual written records.
 
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Unfortunately I have to vote with my heart

[X] Aeroknights

I think it works better and makes sense as an informal name. Like you can see it getting started when some news commentator or even comedian is like "Aerocommandos and Knights teaming up, like... Aeroknights."
 
From canon we know that many worlds in Trek have analogs to earth animals and in translation to whatever federation standard is they are often to referred to as such.(For example; Bajoran Bat, Caldorian Eel, Denebian whale, Algorian mammoth.) So they might be called Amarkian Eagles or Celos Eagles, but something similar is probably known to them. You could of course make a a word for whatever the most common eagle analogue on Orion worlds are and use that, but that would of course not mean anything to Amarkians, or vis versa.
I've convinced myself that the Amarkian Eagle is a Haast's Eagle analogue that ancient knights would ride into battle.
 
From canon we know that many worlds in Trek have analogs to earth animals and in translation to whatever federation standard is they are often to referred to as such.(For example; Bajoran Bat, Caldorian Eel, Denebian whale, Algorian mammoth.) So they might be called Amarkian Eagles or Celos Eagles, but something similar is probably known to them. You could of course make a a word for whatever the most common eagle analogue on Orion worlds are and use that, but that would of course not mean anything to Amarkians, or vis versa.
Where it is clear that within the use of federation standard (which may or may not be English) there is a common word for large avian analogue predator that is widely applied. It would be Eagle.

Fun fact beta canon does actually have the name for the Andorian Eagle analogue, Atlirith. I'm sure we can use that at a starship name at some point.

 
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Incidentally. Working with Amarki units marks the first time in the Aerocommandos long and illustrious history that they will operate with males in their unit that are not expendable auxiliaries.
 
When in doubt I assume some of @Ato's omakes could just be the author taking an authoritative stance on issues that are still contentious in the academic community. Like it could be some people aren't sure if the Hur'q actually ran those suzerainties, or if it was aristocratic factions of the existing society adopting the Hur'q name for legitimacy or as a form of worship. Or if the Janissary Rebellion actually happened, because the main source about it is a text written 100 years later by a biased source. Shit like that.

Personally I assume the Hur'q have a level of mystery hovering around "Sea Peoples" level.

[jk] Clearly we need to sponsor a time travel mission to go back and take a look. Seems like a pretty safe historical era to observe, right?
 
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