SV needs hints spelled out in bold, red, size 20 font to get them half the time, lance. :p

[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Assuming Kyubey hasn't already vanished from the rooftop, keep him in sight and head over to Mami with him. Don't take no for an answer, as far as we can without being outright hostile.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.
 
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[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.
 
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Personally of the opinion, trying to restrain Kyubey, while admirable is an excercise in futility. Plus, that line is really awkward...

[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.
 
[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.
 
[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.


"Masami Gaikotsu?" Kyuubey asks, tilting its head. "She is still active, although currently rather reclusive, and actively goes out of her way to avoid other magical girls. She's a powerful telekinetic."
I eagerly await to see what you did for your version of her :p
 
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[x]Sure! We'll be right there.
[x]Talk to Mami via telepathy. Ask about her day. No infodumps.
[x]Bring up the idea of having Nagisa over.
-[x]Ask to call with Mami's phone.
[x]Talk to everyone. Keep an eye out for if Sayaka seems to be thinking about contracting.
 
Adfligo - Latin for I strike, punish, cast down, etc. systema - latin for system obviously

This is basically Firn's way of saying Magical Girl punishment system :p
 
Entanglement pt. 34
Your mood, soured after talking to Kyuubey, lifts at the sound of Mami's voice. "Sure, we'll be right there." You walk into an alleyway, and take to the roofs as has become habitual to you, ping-ponging from wall to wall to get up to the rooftops. You briefly wonder, in light of Kyuubey's passive aggressive complaint, how much extra work you're generating for it, but in the end, it really isn't your problem. The thought has you grinning as you make your run for the edge of the roof.

"So, Mami, how was your day?" you ask idly, enjoying the sensation of the wind ruffling your hair.

"Oh, today was a PE day," she comments. "We played volleyball!"

"How'd it go?" you ask, adjusting your trajectory to avoid an air conditioning compressor on a rooftop. You land, weave around the compressor, and launch yourself into the air again without losing any momentum.

"My team won," Mami says happily. "The team I'm on always seems to do well." You can practically hear the glowing smile on her face.

"Of course. Who would dare to disappoint dear Mami?" you say teasingly.

"I'm sure it's just luck," Mami replies.

"Sure," you say, rolling your eyes. "Anyway, I'm almost there. Oh! One more thing... uh, do you remember I mentioned meeting a girl who lost her parents?"

"Ah, yes," Mami says. "You're thinking of inviting her over?"

"Er, yes, actually," you admit. "How did you know?"

"You mentioned it yesterday," Mami replies. "And I must admit I'm curious to see what kind of little sister Sabrina found for herself."

"Er. So I suppose that's an OK, then?" you say.

"Of course! Though... I expect that we will be visiting at the hospital until perhaps four thirty? I invited Sayaka and Madoka over to my house, too. Hmm..." Mami trails off, thinking over it. "Maybe we could just invite everybody to my house?"

"Sounds good," you agree easily. "I'll be at the hospital soon."

As you approach the hospital on foot, you sense two magical girls. One at what you now recognize to be the lobby of the hospital, and another simply lurking on the roof of said hospital. You pulse quickens, but you decide to check first. "Homura, is that you at the hospital?"

"Yes, it is. I am keeping an eye on Madoka," she says.

"For goodness' sake, couldn't you simply join the group like a normal person?" you grumble.

"My presence makes them uncomfortable," Homura replies. "Additionally, this higher vantage point lets me see further."

"Ugh," you say in disgust, but you let it go for now.

Walking in to the lobby, you smile and wave at the small group there. "Hi, everyone!"

"Sabrina!" Mami calls, followed by greetings from Madoka and Sayaka.

"Oh, Sabrina! Thanks for those notes yesterday, they really helped!" Sayaka calls as you walk over and sit down. "You should become a teacher!"

"Heh," you shrug. "Well, you shouldn't leave your homework to the last minute."

"I know, I know, I usually don't!" Sayaka exclaims. "It's just... Kyuubey, magic, you suddenly showing up... One thing after another, and I just forgot, you know!"

"Eh... OK, then. So how're things going? How's your friend?" you glance at Madoka.

"She's recovering, she should be out of hospital by the end of this week," Madoka says, looking happier. "Ah... They confirmed that she's going to need the cast for a month, though."

"Hm... that's a shame," you say. "Oh, by the way, Mami, may I borrow your phone for a moment? I'd like to arrange the meeting later?"

"Oh, sure, Sabrina," Mami nods, before reaching into her pockets and pulling out a smartphone.

You take it, and walk a step away before dialing the number Momoe Shin had provided you with, and wait patiently as the phone rings.

"Hello? This is Momoe Shin, who is this?" a familiar voice sounds a few rings later.

"Uh... this is Sabrina?" you say tentatively.

"Ah, Sabrina! Nagisa was hoping you'd call," Shin's voice turns cheerful. "I- yes, Nagisa, it's Sabrin- uh, I'll pass her the phone, OK?"

There's some rustling noises, as of the phone changing hands. "Big sis!" the girl says. "Are you coming to visit?"

"Hi, Nagisa," you say. "I was just wondering about that, actually. Ask your uncle if I can invite you over later?"

"OK!" Nagisa says, and you can hear the phone changing hands, and some conversation in the background.

"You'd like to invite Nagisa over?" Shin confirms.

"Yes, if that's possible? Maybe about 5 o'clock?" you suggest.

"Hm..." you get the impression he's looking at the clock. "I'm on leave today, so I'll be able to drive her over. Where shall I send her?"

You give him Mami's addess, and say farewell to the two of them before walking back to the main group, where Mami is talking to Madoka and Sayaka.

"Thanks, Mami," you say, catching her attention and handing the phone back.

"Anyway, shall we go up?" Sayaka suggests, bouncing to her feet. "We can introduce you to Hitomi, maybe? Uh... maybe I'll go see Kyousuke first, though?"

"Kyousuke?" you lilt, drawing out the syllables and grinning at Sayaka.

She instantly flushes red. "Ah... my other friend here."

You glance at Mami, and she grins back. "Friend?" she says, with the same teasing lilt in her voice.

"I'm not talking to the two of you any more," Sayaka sniffs, putting her nose in the air.

"What's he here for, anyway?" you ask.

Sayaka stares at you with one eye before deciding that maybe you aren't teasing her. "Accident, long term hand and leg injuries."

You grimace. "Sounds unpleasant."

"Yeah... he's an amazing violinist, you know? But he can't play now..." Sayaka trails off. "Anyway, enough chit chat, we really should be going up."

[] Visit Hitomi
[] Visit Kyousuke
[] Insist that Homura join you
[] Go and see if there's a nearby Witch
- [] With Mami, Homura, or both
[] Write-in


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No invisitext countdown. As always, include some conversation direction.
 
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Adfligo - Latin for I strike, punish, cast down, etc. systema - latin for system obviously

This is basically Firn's way of saying Magical Girl punishment system :p
Systema is nominative case so it is the subject. "The system overthrows"

Puella Magi is a bit of a Latin mistake really, as it means Mage's Girl, or Girl of the Mage, rather than Magical Girl. Though in this case it's compounded by Puella and Systema being nominative case, so there's some confusion of what is being overthrown and possessed by the mage, it would mean that it's a "girl system" which I suppose might be intended.

"Girl system of the mage overthrows (something)" is about the most accurate you can get. Puella Magi in general implies that the girls belong to the mage (possibly kyuubey) rather than them actually being magical.

Really the lack of the object makes the whole issue confused. I mean the object could be anything: entropy, the incubators, etc.

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Bah double checked, Systema is third declension which means it could be nominative or accusative (subject or object). Given the lack of an object otherwise though it's probably safe to assume Systema is the accusative in this case.

This means that it probably is best translated "(I) the girl of the mage overthrow the system".
 
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Okay then!

[X] Visit Kyousuke

Edit: Changing Vote...
 
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[x] Muse about if Mami could speed up Hitomi or Kyouske's recovery, you think she mentioned something about healing?
[x] Insist that Homura join the group.
 
[x] Visit Hitomi.
-[x] Introduce yourself.
-[x] Fuss over her injury.
--[x] Tactfully... Very tactfully ask if there was anyone with her when she fell.
---[x] If asked about it, laugh it off nervously, apologize and tell them your mind has been going to strange places lately.
---[x] Telepathy Mami. It's a bit of a reach, but it's possible Oriko had a hand in this.
----[x] Telepathy cont: Actually, Hitomi and Kyousuke... could magic help speed their recovery?


-[x] Ask Hitomi what it's like at the hospital to check if she's talking with Kyousuke early.

[x] Afterwards, visit Kyousuke. Catch up with Sayaka if she's still there.
 
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