Nova Prospekt pt. 13
"... hey, don't leave me behind!" you protest, jogging a few steps to catch up with Kyouko and Yuma. The murk closes in around you, the oppressively intense smell of ozone and plastic heavy on the air.

You catch up to them, eyeing Kyouko. It's pretty obvious that Kyouko didn't want to talk about this with Yuma, and so it's equally obvious that Kyouko wants a pause from the conversation for now. That's fine, you can deal with that.

Witch hunt first.

"Is it just me or is it a bit quiet?" you ask. "Where the hell are all the Familiars?"

"It's quiet," Yuma agrees. "Too quiet."

"Could be worse," you say, grinning at Yuma. Someone's been watching lots of TV. "Could be too loud."

Yuma shudders theatrically, and Kyouko's hand lands on her head, ruffling grass-green hair gently.

"Don't get distracted," Kyouko says. "Because...?"

"Distraction kills," Yuma answers obediently, smiling at Kyouko.

"And now would be a perfect time for an attack," you murmur, pushing out with your Grief senses... but there's nothing, other than the pervasive haze.

Kyouko snorts, and hefts her spear over her shoulder. "Not seein' Familiars now just means a big wave later."

You nod along, hiding a smile. Kyouko flips you a middle finger behind her back, where Yuma can't see it. You laugh cheerfully, letting the sound ring out through the gloom of the Barrier. She's only proving your point for you, when you actually get around to making it.

Kyouko stiffens, going totally still. Her head twitches to the side, crimson ponytail swaying, and Yuma stops too, hefting her mace.

Not to be outdone, you draw your hammer form beneath your coat, shining, filigreed steel light in your hand. You stare out into the murk, straining your eyes and ears and senses and trying to see. It's a pity Homura isn't with you, because a flare or two would be great right about now. It takes you a moment to hear what caught Kyouko's attention.

A low, mechanical buzz, warbling up and down. You feel it more than anything, thrumming so low at the edge of your hearing it's barely there - but it doesn't seem to be getting louder, either. Or softer.

Kyouko relaxes after a second, catching Yuma's eye and nodding in that direction.

"Weird Witch," you note as Yuma starts jogging in that direction, mace bouncing on her shoulder.

"Eh," Kyouko says with a shrug. You both keep pace with Yuma, flanking her on either side and leaving a trail of footprints in pure, unblemished white across the ink-dark ground. "Seen weirder."

Your Grief cloud rolls over an abrupt lack of-

"Floor!" you bark, reaching forward for Yuma - but you're far too slow. She squawks, pitching forward with arms wheeling, and then Kyouko blurs, spear suddenly slammed point-first into the ground as support. She snatches for Yuma with her other hand, grabbing hold just as your Grief solidifies into a wall.

"Bitch," Kyouko mutters, glaring down at her feet as she reels Yuma back in. Rather, glaring at the unseen cliff edge hidden by the swirling haze.

It's not like a drop would hurt a magical girl with any kind of experience, but who knows what might be at the bottom of said fall?

"S-sorry," Yuma mutters. She's shaking a little.

"Don't be," Kyouko says, scanning the murk surrounding you. "Learn from the mistake, yeah?"

"Y-yes," Yuma says, taking a deep breath and straightening. She steps closer to Kyouko, wrapping her arms around the older girl's waist in a brief hug. Kyouko rests a hand on her shoulder, but doesn't look away from her inspection of the Barrier.

"We gotta go down, anyway," Kyouko mutters at last, cracking her neck from side to side. She retrieves a battered package of pocky from her pocket, offering it around. You take one, and so does Yuma.

"Ugh," you mutter. "Yeah, I figured as much. Wanna ride?"

"Just jump, you pansy," Kyouko says, clapping you firmly on the back, pocky stick dangling from her mouth. "C'mon, Yuma!"

Both of them leap forward, weapons slung low and ready. You crunch up the rest of your pocky stick in a few quick bites, and follow them off the edge. Kyouko's a lot more experienced than you are, you suppose, and you'd decided to let her lead on this hunt, so you'll follow her lead. But you still think that it would be safer to ride a Grief platform down or something.

The three of you plunge through the smoke, the hazy air stinging your eyes and snapping your coat out straight behind you. Kyouko and Yuma are just a little further down beneath you, arms and legs spread-eagled. And then-

Light.

Brilliant, emerald green blazes all around you, leaving starry spots across your vision . You can just barely see Yuma and Kyouko whirling impossibly mid-air, mace and spear lashing out blindly. There's nothing around them, but they don't know that. But you can sense the real attack coming.

"Incoming, below!" you yell. Your Grief coalesces and sweeps into blades, a sphere bulging to meet the leaping forms. Almost human sized in your Grief senses, swift, fluttering things streaking upwards to meet you.

You slash through one, then three, then six, and there are dozens, hundreds of them boiling up towards your little group. Kyouko's spear flicks out, deadly fast to weave a deadly field of steel. Yuma's mace whirls through the gaps, Yuma somehow finding purchase on thin air to push off and strike with inexorable force. The pattern shifts at some unseen signal between the duo, Kyouko kicking off the air. Yuma meets her halfway, her mace meeting the flat of Kyouko's blade with a chime. The shockwave ripples through the air, blasting back the Familiars in a burst of green.

They're humanoid.

The Familiars, that is. You fall, an unending plunge through smokey air and endless onslaught of things boiling upward to meet you. None of them come close to you, with your Grief blades thinning the herd and Kyouko and Yuma further below - but you keep your hammer ready and a careful eye out. Distraction kills, after all.

Humanoid, paper-thin Familiars. In fact, they look papery, black and white and grey replicas of... you. You and Kyouko and Yuma in sketchy monochrome and flapping paper. They swarm towards you, slicing through the air as if hurled by something below.

The next wave of Familiars ride a blast of heat. Not hot enough to hurt, but hot enough to make your skin feel tight, and hot enough to intensify the acrid burn as you inhale.

And finally, finally-

"Floor!" you warn.

"Yeah, yeah!" Kyouko snaps back, her attention not wavering from the oncoming tide of Familiars. Her ponytail snaps out straight behind her, her spear continuing to dance. It cracks into whipping chains there and crunching through a sweeping slash there, not a single Familiar even coming close to her.

Yuma falls, and fights by her side, a deadly shadow to her adoptive sister. Her mace doesn't have as many tricks as Kyouko's does, but she makes up for the lack of flair with raw power, smashing and crushing everything that she can reach with spinning strikes.

She draws her mace back a split second before hitting the ground, pulling in magic. And with a cry, she smashes a powerful, overhead strike into the ground. The shockwave blasts across the floor, shimmering green waves rippling forth. The ground shatters beneath her blow, cracks streaking across it like breaking glass.

"Again!" Kyouko barks, landing a hair behind Yuma. She lands spear-first, the steel crunching through the ground, and-

It doesn't just shatter like glass, it is glass. You slam to a landing, a flare of magic absorbing the impact just as Kyouko whirls her spear overhead and strikes again. Familiars swarm towards you, streaking into the air and swooping down towards you, but this time, this time, you're ready to meet them.

Grief blades slash through the horde as Yuma and Kyouko hammer the ground, mace and spear in counterpoint rhythm. You glare out at the haze, the smoke, and the oncoming Familiars, orchestrating a thousand different blades slicing through the air and Familiars with equal impunity.

The floor gives way with a crunch. You stagger and let yourself fall backwards, a quick step shifting your balance so that you can catch yourself on the short drop below, ducking beneath what you realise is soot-covered glass. You slide in beside Kyouko and Yuma, Grief blades still weaving a defense from the horde of Familiars.

Kyouko exhales hard, glaring first at the darkness surrounding you and the floor-now-ceiling of shattered glass. Weak light filters in through the hole, barely illuminating the low 'ceiling' of the space you find yourself in. You'd almost call it a crawlspace, but there's just enough room for you to stand upright.

"Christ," she mutters.

"Mmh," you agree vaguely. The Familiars are petering out. Finally. "You two OK?"

"Yuma is OK!" Yuma says, nodding vigorously.

"Yep," Kyouko grumbles, scowling at the darkness like it personally offended her. She touches a hand to her Soul Gem, frowning. "The Witch..."

Her head twitches to the side.

Scuttling feet. A lot of scuttling feet, completely silent in the dark. A millipede. A very, very big millipede, bearing down on you like a freight train. It's about the length of a freight train, too.

"Yuma!" Kyouko barks, pointing with her spear. You see Yuma's teeth flash in the dark as she raises her weapon overhead.

Magic flares as Yuma brings her mace down with a shout. Shockwaves crash across the ground, brilliant green forcing the smog back. It illuminates a nightmarish form of glinting metal and far, far too many legs shrouded by a roiling mantle of black strips, moments before the shockwave hits.

Spectacularly.

The Witch tumbles, forward momentum turned into a slide. Legs flail and scrape at the air, segments of the thing spinning wildly about as the thing skids across the ground, folding on itself.

And then Kyouko's there, spear blurring. She strikes low, sweeping in with one spear she slams under its head and drives it up, hooked under its featureless, rounded head.

"C'mon!" she screams in defiance, letting go of that spear and leaping clear over a squirming loop of the Witch. She just barely slips between the Witch's body and the ceiling, manifesting another spear.

Yuma charges, and you follow on her heels, hammer ready. She hits first as the Witch flails in your direction, smaller shockwaves rippling through the body of the creature. You stick close, hammer ready - but unused.

Grief answers your call, blades hammering into its blank face. They bite deep into metallic carapace, carving chunks out of it, and Kyouko follows up with a spear driven into the cracks.

The Witch thrashes and squirms and flails, smokey soot blasting from its shroud. You dive under a scything loop of the Witch. Razor sharp legs slash past your face, and you respond in kind with the spike of your hammer. You drive it deep into its body, gouging and dragging a tear open. Choking, acrid haze spills from the creature, and you dart away with your nose burning.

Behind you, Yuma pounds another shockwave blast into the Witch. Crackling bursts thunder through the Witch, blowing off entire segments from the inside.

"Again!" Kyouko barks, and Yuma yells wordlessly in response, rearing back to slam another blow into the Witch. And another, and another, and that finally does it.

The Witch's body gives way with a crunch, Yuma's mace cleaving right through to bury itself in the ground. You can feel its death, reverberating through the Barrier as reality starts to waver and collapse.

You shudder as the world reasserts itself, carpet under your shoes and dim, institutional fluorescent light shining from above. You gulp down lungfuls of fresh -fresher- air, a relief after the choking smog of the Barrier. A clatter nearby is the Grief Seed falling to the carpet, balanced on its point.

"That sucked," you mutter, looking around at what seems to be an office corridor. Empty, thank goodness, and judging by the dust thick on the wilted potted plants, the entire floor's unused.

"Suck it up," Kyouko grunts back, rolling her shoulders. Yuma's slumped against the nearest source of support -a photocopier- tired, but beaming happily at you and Kyouko.

"That's the problem. That Barrier sucked," you grumble. "Anyway, cleansing?"

Kyouko glares half-heartedly at you before shrugging. "Whatever. Hit me."

You grin, and raise a hand theatrically before clenching it. With the motion, you pull Grief from Kyouko and Yuma's Soul Gems, cleansing your own for good measure. Kyouko sighs, and inspects her Soul Gem closely for a moment.

"Squirt? You good?" Kyouko asks.

"Yuma is good!" Yuma says happily, beaming at Kyouko and walking over to latch onto her leg.

"You did great on the hunt," Kyouko says, ruffling her hair. "Let's go kick back at the hotel."

"OK!" Yuma chirps.

Kyouko glances at you, eyebrow raised. "Comin'?"

"Yup, yup," you say, smiling. "I'm coming."

You make your way out of the building. Kyouko takes the lead, climbing up the stairway and exiting via the roof. From there, it's a bounding path over the skyscrapers of Kasamino to a glittering hotel building -a different one from last time- and down to an opulently furnished hotel suite.

You're pretty sure they've been staying here for a bit, judging by how messy the living room is already. And the blanket fort you can spy through the door, piled up against the bed and walled in with pillows.

Kyouko throws herself on the plush carpet, limbs splayed wide. "Go take a bath, squirt?"

"OK!" Yuma says, glancing between you and Kyouko before beaming and bouncing off towards the shower.

You throw yourself down on the remarkably comfortable sofa in the living area, wiggling to get comfortable. Kyouko keeps an eye on the bathroom door, and when the sound of running water starts up, she levers herself off the floor and grabs a chair. She reverses it and sits straddling it, raising an eyebrow.

"Honestly, you pretty much made my point for me," you say with a grin. "Look. It's not just about getting Yuma away from her shitsack of a mother. That's part of it, yeah, but it's also that her being with you is good for her. You care about her, and you're the first person to care about her. You're important to her, and shock and horror, she cares about you. She trusts you, and-"

You pause, glancing back at the bathroom door and confirming with your Grief sense to make doubly sure that Yuma's not listening in.

"-after the kind of abuse she's experienced? That trust is earned, Kyouko," you say, lowering your voice to be triply sure. "Also, can I say? You're doing a fantastic job teaching her, you know. Which is, in and of itself, another point - she's a magical girl. She needs someone who understands the life, that she can trust. That's you, Kyouko."

"Cut the flattery," Kyouko growls, looking away.

"It's not flattery," you say. "You mean the world to her, and that's my entire point. It's not about her deserving better. She does, and so do you, but if you're looking for an excuse to cut her out of your life - then forget it, Kyouko. She does deserve better, and like it or not, that's you. If you want her to have a stable home, to go to school, then I've got ideas and possibilities I can lay out for you. Heck, her grandparents are an option, as far as 'not shitheads' goes. It's a possibility."

You fall silent, licking your lips. This is the time for Kyouko to respond, if she wants to. But she just glares at you with a belligerently pensive look, arms folded on the back of the chair and chin propped on her arms.

"Yuma deserves a better life," you say. "And so do you. A package deal. And what I want? I want to help. I'm paying you to teach Sayaka not just because you're probably the best teacher for her but also because I don't want you to have to scrabble for a life."

You sigh, leaning back and frowning at the ceiling.

"Thing is, like I said, I've... pretty much hit the limit of how much I can help you unless you're willing to accept more," you say softly. "I'd really like it if you could just tell me."

There's a long pause. You hold it, fighting the urge to fill the silence with chatter. Let Kyouko think about it, let her digest it and come to her own conclusions. She's not Mami, she's not Homura. You don't need to babble at her.

"Christ you are disgustingly nice," Kyouko mutters. "I don't want charity."

And that... that's open ended. She doesn't want charity, but that doesn't mean-

She gets up abruptly, an explosive motion that almost knocks the chair over. You meet Kyouko's eyes as she stands, but she looks away, meandering over to the fridge and grabbing two bottles from the fridge. She tosses one to you, and you catch it.

"A better life," Kyouko says with a sigh, cracking her bottle open and taking a gulp. "What do you even need in return, huh?"

[] How do you answer Kyouko? (word count limit: 150 words)

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I'm hoping to end this segment with Kyouko in about one or two updates. I'm also planning to try and update on my Wednesday, so we'll see which of these actually happen. :V
 
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Looks like that went well. Kyouko is still being Kyouko, but I think we've made our point about Yuma. And considering her statement beforehand about not knowing how to ask for help anymore, now this? We'll need to be careful as hell here, but we have a shot at finally changing the status quo for her.
 
"I need strong people. Experienced people. Disciplined people. I need people with oven mitts."

"Oven mitts? Why the fuck?"

"So that they can help me with all these irons in the fire."
Adhoc vote count started by Firnagzen on Jan 25, 2019 at 9:52 AM, finished with 149183 posts and 15 votes.

  • [X] You don't think Kyouko knows this, but if she were to just show up on Mami's doorstep tomorrow and say nothing at all, the reception she'd get from Mami would be this: repeated, tearful apologies mixed with offers of food and friendship, and possibly also housing. Mami has no problem with her whatsoever.
    -[X] In response to anything regarding the fight: Mami has no problem with Kyouko. Mami's problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. At one point, you accidentally convinced Mami that you were breaking ties with her, and promptly ended up in a ribbon cocoon -- and you weren't even transformed. The only thing you've ever heard from Mami on the topic is how much she regrets what she did that night -- and based on everything you know about her, the sentiment there is that she wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    --[X] If it becomes relevant: "Mami tried to kill Kyouko that night" is a false statement.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're out here saying all this stuff to her because you're a saint or somesuch, preaching about how everyone deserves redemption no matter who they are. But the fact of the matter is, there is literally only one person who has a problem with Kyouko, and that's Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [X] ... You're sorry about what you said about housing.
    [X] There doesn't have to be a problem. I'm not gonna push you to do this as my "favour" or whatever, but frankly, with what I know? You and Mami can work things out when that day comes.
    [X] See, Mami responds poorly whenever you're brought up because up until I showed up, everyone in her life had eventually left her, or had been abusing her trust. She gets upset because she blames herself for not being able to help you, and for how poorly the two of you parted. Because even with you picking a horrible thing to outrage her over to get her to drive you away -- and no, I know that's part of what that argument was about -- she felt horrible for doing so.
    [X] That's how I know that you and Mami can rebuild your friendship. Because Mami never wanted it to end in the first place, and the only reason you wanted it to end was because you were trying to punish yourself.
    [x] There is no problem with you hanging out with the rest of my friends. Mami for one would jump for joy if you came back.
    [x] There doesn't have to be a problem. I'm not gonna push you to do this as my "favour" or whatever, but frankly, with what I know? I think you and Mami can hash things out.
    [X] Wait until the great bubble debacle is over. Help if neccessary.
    [X] When you are alone again:
    -[X] So she's asking what she can do in return. Repeatedly. Heh, guess you're not the only one with a bleeding heart in the room, not that you didn't know.
    -[X] Can you punch her for making your girlfriend sad and lonely?
    --[X] ... Is that what she wanted to hear?
    -[X] The problem with having knowledge of private things is that you've taken their privacy away without consent or giving anything in return. You are uncomfortable with that.
    --[X] You're even more uncomfortable with her defeatist attitude. Plough on.
    ---[X] You know what she said and what she did. You know why she said and did what she did.
    ---[X] It was selfish and self-destructive, making Mami hurt to hurt herself. Get over it.
    -[X] The one thing you want from her is to stop punishing herself, to stop being a coward and get on with the rest of her life.
    --[X] Fix what she can, and let go of what she cannot. You both know where their with Mami issues lie. This is your price. Does she still think it's too small?
    [X] Roll things back a bit, you're worried you may be being pushy and inconsiderate... again: Ask Kyouko if she's insistent because she feels obligated to return the favor, or if helping us is something wants to do. You don't want obligation, but you could accept Kyouko doing things because she wants to.
    -[X] Part of your problem accepting things from her thinking they're her obligation is that the things you could ask are also things you have no right to ask. Ever.
 
She gets up abruptly, an explosive motion that almost knocks the chair over. You meet Kyouko's eyes as she stands, but she looks away, meandering over to the fridge and grabbing two bottles from the fridge. She tosses one to you, and you catch it.

"A better life," Kyouko says with a sigh, cracking her bottle open and taking a gulp. "What do you even need in return, huh?"

 
Gonna spitball random ideas, then leave it to my betters to come up with an actual vote. Here, as I see it, is (some of) what we want to say, even if it might not be the best idea to say it all:

"'Need?' Nothing. Helping you is something I value in and of itself. The ideal scenario I see in my head is setting you up with an apartment, trying to set things in motion for Yuma to go back to school - you as well, if you want - convince you to take a clear seed or at least take advantage of Mitakihara's steady supply of witches so hunting is less of an issue, stuff like that. I get the drive for independence and self-sufficiency, why you wouldn't feel great accepting so much help, but the thing is, you don't understand how much I care about my friends, you and Yuma included. It'd just...make me really, really happy to know you were doing better. To me, that's a fair trade, even if it doesn't feel that way to you."

"Now, there's a few things you could do that would...they'd be nice, but I'd still do my absolute best to help you, and I'd still be happy to see you happy, even if you weren't up for any of them: there's training Sayaka, of course, but that's already going pretty well. There's helping us out with Mitakihara's surplus witches; I don't need to hunt for my own sake, but I've got a lot going on and I still worry about letting things slip through the cracks and people getting killed because I'm busy elsewhere, so it'd be a huge load off my mind knowing there was one more badass meguca keeping an eye on things. And...well, no way to talk around it: it'd mean the world to me if you spoke to Mami again."
 
What do we need? Friends, I'd say. To hang out with because we enjoy being around them. And to have our back occasionally if we need it, though of course with the caveat that they do it because they want to, not because they feel they owe us. Friendship doesn't work like that.
 
[X] It comes back around to that, huh? What I want in return. Alright, I'll tell you.
-[X] I want to be able to hang out with my friends, with them safe and happy and able to live their lives, rather than needing to risk their lives all the time just to survive. I want hunting to be something that we do together, to keep everyone safe. I want to cook a big damn feast and invite all my friends over and enjoy life. That sort of thing is why I made my wish -- I want to be able to do that.
--[X] And that is why I'm going to tell you that with everything I know about you, everything that you've done, that place for 'people like you'? Is with the rest of my friends living instead of just surviving.
[X] So that's what I'm going to ask for. You want to repay me? I want you to fight to live, not just survive. That's what I want as payment. Are you good for it, or what?
 
We should probably answer honestly - and the honest answer is that Kyouko really can't do that much for us, that we'd want her to do out of obligation. At the same time, we should avoid just flat out telling her to her face that "there's nothing you can do for me". The best answer I can think of is to ask her to live well, and to try to pay our kindness forward.
 
There is something Kyouko can do for Sabrina.

We want her to be happier and healthier.

So, make that our price. :V
I actually support this. I want to explain Sabrina's unusual psychology.

What Sabrina needs is the opportunity to help people. It's what she's for. She's at her worst when she has to wrangle people into letting her help them, as with Rionna, Hijiri, Akiko, and Oriko. Some people, like Niko and Nakano, are able to help her help other people, and that's great, but not strictly necessary.
 
We should probably answer honestly - and the honest answer is that Kyouko really can't do that much for us, that we'd want her to do out of obligation. At the same time, we should avoid just flat out telling her to her face that "there's nothing you can do for me". The best answer I can think of is to ask her to live well, and to try to pay our kindness forward.

Yeah, pretty sure this option is better than just saying "I just want you to be happy" again. Like, she gets it at this point, but it's Kyouko, she wants to earn what she's given.

Possibly the best thing we can do at this point is tell her about the things we'd be happy if she helped us with but we don't want her to feel obligated to do, because we need to acknowledge that the Sabrina and Kyouko thresholds for "I feel obligated to do this" are completely out of whack anyway so we might as well start hashing out some sort of compromise we can both live with. Worst case, we'll both feel like we're in each others' debt, and there's a kind of balance in that.
 
[:V] "I want to talk to you about the Avenger Meguca Initiative."

[x] "I want a big party. I want all of my friends, in a big enough space, to celebrate, with food and drink, and not have to worry about where the next meal or the next cleanse is coming from. I want to rejoice in the common ground of having purpose, of jobs and lives outside of this Cruel system that Kyubey designed. I want to bring magical girls together without needing to worry about fear, or anger, or fights breaking out between them. I want to throw a fucking gala, not like there's no tomorrow, but because tomorrow will be something we don't need to fear any longer. You get me?"
-[x] "And in case it wasn't clear, I want you and Yuma to be there."
--[x] "But if we're talking more present, immediate, and practical concerns... Well... I'd like it if maybe someday you could... Try talking to Mami again. I think she could use her friend back..."
 
Right... Incredible Kyouko, Spectacular Sayaka, Invincible Mami, the mighty Homura, and Captain Sabrina.

Earth's Mightiest Meguca :V


Given Madokami: Director Kaname Madoka (eyepatch optional)

And let's not forget: Hitomi, agent of SHIELD
 
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On one hand, the only thing she can really DO for us that we can't do for ourselves, that she wouldn't see as 'just accept charity', is pretty much "Make up with Mami."

On the other hands, yikes, that's a problematic topic.

[x] Godwinson
 
Just want to say, I don't know if people are dismissing the 'dinner party' bit I wrote because you think it's a joke, or if just no one is paying attention, but I do want to say, that was supposed to be a serious vote, and I would at the very least like feedback.
 
[x] "I want a big party. I want all of my friends, in a big enough space, to celebrate, with food and drink, and not have to worry about where the next meal or the next cleanse is coming from. I want to rejoice in the common ground of having purpose, of jobs and lives outside of this Cruel system that Kyubey designed. I want to bring magical girls together without needing to worry about fear, or anger, or fights breaking out between them. I want to throw a fucking gala, not like there's no tomorrow, but because tomorrow will be something we don't need to fear any longer. You get me?"

Since we haven't covered the witch bomb, I would be worried about explicitly mentioning QB as being behind the whole thing.

Also, I think we need the planner updated to show the new meta bombing we did.
 
Just want to say, I don't know if people are dismissing the 'dinner party' bit I wrote because you think it's a joke, or if just no one is paying attention, but I do want to say, that was supposed to be a serious vote, and I would at the very least like feedback.
No, I love it, And I would vote for it of not the Mami thing.

That I feel needs to happen on it's own.
 
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That I feel needs to happen on it's own.

I'm pretty sure if we leave that to 'happen on it's own' it will never happen. Kyoko is too stubborn and Mami too injured by their parting for either of them to reach out without some kind of push.

EDIT: I'm definitely not opposed to changing up the wording, there have been talks made on that subject in the past that do a better job than what I wrote there. But I do think a push needs to be given.

Since we haven't covered the witch bomb, I would be worried about explicitly mentioning QB as being behind the whole thing.

QB turns girls into meguca and manipulates them, we've already established that, we don't need to immediately leap to witchbomb just by accusing him...
 
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