Beat me to it.
Here's my own less-angry rewrite:
[] Ask the Pleiades if they had any threats on their radar.
[] For ease of regrouping, flyers should search the most far away areas.
-[] Ask Niko to clarify. Search whichever place she's got in mind. Industrial area, maybe?
[] Ask everyone to remain in continuous contact with other groups.
-[] Anyone that has a multitasking power should be included in all status updates.
[x] Remind everyone to call and regroup if possible before engaging. You want to find out why this happened to better prevent a repeat.
[] Before going:
-[] Ask who was shadowing Niko on your first visit.
-[] Get the power copiers to copy everything you do.
--[] Do some grandstanding with the Fog to make sure they pick up the most powerful version they can get.
--[] The Privacy Sphere needs to be copied before you dismiss it.
--[] Other targets: MoF, Cleansing (grandstanding may be necessary), scanners, any defenses you make, the Manifold Omni-Debating Technique you'll be demonstrating with the status updates, etc.
-[] Have Umika do her mental protection
I think that yours is better overall; mine is a bit long. Individual points from mine that I think are useful:
- Kazumi's power-copying is almost certainly based on what she perceives an ability to be, so we should take care to grandstand when they're copying the Fog and attempting to copy Cleansing to maximize the power of the ability they copy. It's not just a Byakugan; if we give them the right demonstration, they could also pick up something very much like Skitter's power. Sayaka in particular could derive spectacular value if we can sell the Utility Fog as real infinite multitasking instead of the arbitrary parallelization that we actually get.
...Huh, that's actually about it.