Lights... Camera... ACTION!!: A Hollywood Quest

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT
Hi Magoose here one of the guys helping Duke.

So we have some bad news.

The quest has been canceled as duke does not want to write it anymore.

I'm going to ask if I can take over for it, because I like this quest, and it would be a shame to kill it
TBF, Mags, you have been doing a lot of the heavylifting for the quest, so this will be in good hands. :)

To be clear to everyone, this is just me burning out on imagination of the quest, since my muse has been hitting me over the head a lot with so many different ideas that I just can't find myself too interested in this.

I'll still hang out here, though, since this still does have a sepcial place in my heart.

I'd like to thank you all for making this a wonderful experience while it lasted.

I'd also like to thank @Magoose, @Fluffy_serpent, and @Martin Noctis for doing so much to help prepare and write this quest. I couldn't have done it without you all. :D

I'll see you all around.

With so many regards, Duke William Of.
 
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Hey with the Olympics coming up and the development of carries new sports teams how do folks feel about either creating or enhancing the Bruce Lee gym in order to create a world class training center. It could be used as a pull to bring in athletes for the Fighting Geese after the Olympics have passed
 
Hey with the Olympics coming up and the development of carries new sports teams how do folks feel about either creating or enhancing the Bruce Lee gym in order to create a world class training center. It could be used as a pull to bring in athletes for the Fighting Geese after the Olympics have passed
..... You know, I just had a thought.


Let's bring our son to watch the Olympics in person
 
Well regarding "alternative" western animation, there are plans to buy as subsidiaries Aardman once Wallace and Gromit put them on the spotlight, and Jim Henson's Company once the poor Jim ends up so burned out by Hollywood politics that he wants an out of all that crap so that he can focus on the puppets alone...

And if we want to expand our anime operations nothing prevents us from buying other small Japanese Animation Studios like Madhouse, KyoAni, or Gainax... Which I would like to do if only more animators of their awful working conditions...
No. Lucasfilm gets nothing else. THey have DreamWorks, Hanna-Barbera and Sunrise already. But some of those studios could merge together. I do have a idea for Rankin-Bass to buy Topcraft and Madhouse, so R-B could have the Ghibli stuff, especially considering the history they had together, then for Disney to maybe buyout Rankin-Bass unless that'd be a bit much.
Rebuilding The House

- Extracted from A New House: Marvel's Great Shift in the 80s from YouTube Channel Kamen-Kun, 2013

Graphic novels have had a long a varied history, though with different definitions as to what constitutes one, as well as many varied accounts of just which one is the first. Many fans of the genre will point to Maus, Watchmen and The Dark Knight Returns as the literary trilogy which sparked the genre and pushed comic books into adopting a mature, long-form literary approach.

Others however would point to Sabre, a science fiction swashbuckler in which the self-consciously romantic rebel Sabre and his companion Melissa Siren fight the mercenary Blackstar Blood and others to achieve freedom and strike a blow for individuality. Published in 1976, a full decade before the previously mentioned titles were truly appreciated or thought. Yet that is discounting the stories from Europe, and in particular Cortomaltese, created by Hugo Pratt, and one of the defining titles which inspired much of the artistic evolution in the West.

Yet all those titles and claim would fail to point to the many different non-western stories being written decades prior, stories that had all the marks of a graphic novel; long-form, closed ended, fictional narrative with complex characters and literary merit.

From its humble beginnings in the late 19th century, to the now juggernaut of the Japanese publishing industry, Manga has become one of the most famous exports of Japanese literature the world over. From kids to adults, men and women from all over the world and walks of life read manga. With the medium including works in a broad range of genres: action, adventure, business and commerce, comedy, detective, drama, historical, horror, mystery, romance, science fiction and fantasy, sports and games, and suspense among others.

[Scenes from different Manga and Anime are shown]

Manga however took a long time to get to where it is today, and one of its major influences came, ironically, from the west itself. Many of the great Mangakas such as Osamu Tezuka, Yoshinori Nakai and Shotaro Ishinomori had much of their influence when watching and reading old comics made by Walt Disney themselves. In fact, many credit the stories of Donald Duck written by Carl Barks, which had such a rich and detailed plot, story and design in its drawings as the ones that pushed them down the path of becoming a Mangaka themselves. The influence of Carl Barks can really not be underestimated...But, for full story of Carl Banks and his influence, you can check up our video here.

Now, back to the topic.

With modern manage evolving in the East, it started adopting traits not seen or discarded when it came to the west. After the 50s hearing on children's violence, and with Fredric Wertham's book "Seduction of the Innocent" in everyone's mind, comics in the United States began a process by which many mature or "adult" topics were severely curtailed, if not outright banned. Romance could not go beyond kissing or handholding, terror had to show no blood nor deformities, many of the old-time monsters from literature were outright forbidden to be shown, and acts of violence had to be de-escalated or at the very least not be shown to have drawn blood at all. All of these restrictions led to the conclusion in many that comics were, in the end, just childish, the things that little boys read before becoming adults.

The creation of the Comic Codes Authority did not help the situation, creating an environment where many of the big comic book publishers (Gold Key, DC and Marvel) had to severely limit their output, or go bankrupt. Both DC and Marvel chose different roads by revamping their old superheroes, while Gold Key was unable to adapt and had to eventually close their doors. Thus, we had a situation where for the last two decades, Japan and its manga industry had evolved in a rich environment hat could, and was encouraged, to explore any and all topic they could find. Whereas in the United States, the very idea that comics could go beyond fantasy and childish imagination was just ludicrous.

Something had to give, and that something was the Comic Code Authority when during the 70s a series of actions taken by Marvel managed to not only crack their seemingly impenetrable armor, but to also put on full display how little power they actually had to affect the consumer mind who was thirsty for new experiences.

The first action was the creation, and then distribution, of a new line of comics that re-imagined the Marvel Superheroes, but in the style of Pulp magazines; the more gray and morally dubious tone of the story allowed for many a new artist to explore ideas long forgotten about vigilantism, justice, love, and common law and order among others. Stan Lee and Jack Kirby even won an Eisner Award for their first run of Spider-Man Noir, showing that there was a true market for a more mature audience.

The second action came with the buyout of Marvel, first by the artists and creators themselves, and the by Lucasfilms who had long been fans of the more irreverent and daring tone and actions of the company under Stan Lee to break from the shackles and censorship of the Comic Codes Authority. George Lucas himself was a big fan of Howard the Duck, with plans to produce a movie of some kind including the character, as seen in our past video of last year.

With the newfound freedom and financial support, as well as revealing how toothless the Comic Code Authority truly was, Marvel was ready to move in a new direction when it came to their new comics. New artists and writers were ready to once more flex their creative muscles, and among them, two would take inspiration from the new wave of Manga from Japan, creating fanbases that redefined Marvel's future for the decades to come.

The Two Big Gambles

In the mid-1970s, Marvel Comics was undergoing a series of changes in the position of editor-in-chief. A succession of different editors came and went leaving Marvel in chaos, to the point that Stan Lee had to once more take the reins if only to bring some stability to the company once more after the Lucasfilms buyout. During this period, the reorganization of the company allowed for the removal of many from the Board of Directors who had hindered the creative process of many a previous artist, and allowed for new blood to take charge.

With the quick turnover at the top, a recent employee by the name of Jim Shooter rapidly found himself rising in the ranks, and soon after 1979, he went on to become Marvel's editor-in-chief. During this period, while Stan Lee relocated to Los Angeles to better oversee Marvel's animation, television and film projects with Lucasfilm's TV and Animation divisions, Shooter was left largely in charge of the creative decision-making at Marvel's New York City headquarters.

Among Shooter's new directives was an expansion on the genre of stories being told; the Cyberpunk genre had just been released into the mainstream with both films and comics in different magazines. R. Talsorian had also released their famous TTRPG to great success, and what better way to capitalize on it than with comics that would celebrate and aim towards that demographic. Among the many artists who would continue to work on the current titles, Shooter also had commissioned works that could satisfy this new need for the fans.

However, no one expected what would come next.

Steve Englehart, one of the veteran writers of Marvel, was given the task to work on a new title that would thus bring in new readers. During his talks with Michael Pondsmith in order to better understand the genre (and it also helped that R. Talsorian was also under Lucasfilm's banner) the seeds of what would soon become Bubblegum Crisis were planted. Englehart, who much preferred not trodding on the same ground, took the entire concept of Cyberpunk's biggest fear, that of the American government being taken over by foreign corporations, and turned it on its head by showing American companies taking over the Japanese government.

However that alone was not enough for Englehart, as though the story might seem different, to him it still felt like retreading old ground, especially when the lead artist's drawings, Herb Trimpe, simply showed the supposedly futuristic structures a bit too clean, seeming more like military buildings just given a tune up. For this, he needed a new perspective, and what better way than to visit and speak with the many new animators from both DreamWorks and Sunrise who'd arrived to the states. Though not comics, the drawings and inspiration taken from discussions with Yoshiyuki Tomino and Shoji Kawamori, allowed for him to finally understand just what it was that the series was missing, as well as the overall style that it would require.

As such, Englehart went out of his way to once more rehire one of their previous artists who'd gone on to work for Heavy Metal magazine; Alex Niño, a Filipino comic artist who'd arrived with the first wave along with Tony DeZuniga, and had worked on both DC and Marvel before being let go due to his preferences in drawing. Now, with a new lease on what and how he could draw, his true talents were given a chance to shine; lush, full of rich detail, and playing with shades or surreal composition which drew the eye across the page masterfully, Bubblegum Crisis story was only enhanced with the artwork in full display, creating an almost hazy and surreal feeling that jumped at you from the page with both the themes in question, and the beautiful art on full display.

It was, in many ways, the first example of an Original English Language Manga, or at the very least one heavily inspired by Eastern animation. Yet it would not be the only one, and in many ways it would share the title with fellow Marvel artist, Geoff Senior.

Unlike Englehart, Geoff Senior was a relatively new member of Marvel's staff. A British young man who worked in the UK Marvel's office, he'd been hired mostly in order to aid in the reprinting, and reinking of Marvel's old titles for distribution in the United Kingdom and the European Market. Soon he and writer Simon Furman established a quick and growing friendship as they saw they shared most of the same interests when it came to both comics and entertainment; both of them were Young and very interested in both the animation and comic drawings of the times, they had devoured not only the many comics that had been in print, but also the new influences being delivered thanks to the Lucasfilms and their Japanese imports, as well as the new wave of animation thanks to shows like Gundam, Pacific Rim and Macross.

All shows which came to influence their future endeavor; being at the low end of the totem hierarchy, both Geoff and Simon would often get together during their time off and discuss different ideas that could then be made into comics. Their work eventually coalescing into a loving homage to Spider-Man comics (taking another bit of inspiration from the Spider-Man Noir line), and adapting the character into its most radical version yet.

The result was SP//dr: Amazing Armored Hero. The story of Peni Parker, a normal girl like any other until her father, who was the pilot of Sp//dr, a mech developed by Oscorp that was used to help protect the city, died. After his death, she was contacted by Oscorp for the intention of having her bond with "Sp//dr", becoming its next pilot and protecting the city. It was a bold new idea that recontextualized the lessons of Power and Responsibility that the character was originally based on.

Both comics, though not popular at first, had a momentum that slowly but surely won ground amongst those who were mostly tired of the mainstream comic scene, the crowd that would usually go more for magazines like Heavy Metal or independent comics like Elfquest were now buying both comics like they were sure to run out any moment.

The mix of a fresh and unique look, with the unique style taking inspiration from manga and anime, soon became a feature that just drew in more and more buyers, making them the most popular of Marvel titles not focused on Superheroes, a first for Marvel, and something that Jim Shooter made sure to capitalize on by making them the flagship titles for his new initiative. And though different titles were created such as The Zeta Project, at the end of the day, no other non-mainstream title was able to equal the sales for both Bubblegum Crisis and SP//dr: Amazing Armored Hero.

The Eclipse Line

It was in 1982 when things were shaken once more when a new talent came to the doors of Marvel with recommendations from the God of Manga himself. Akira Toriyama, born in 1955 in the Aichi Prefecture of Japan, a Mangaka of renown in his own native land thanks to the original comedy and satirical work Dr. Slump, had decided to leave and like Kurosawa before him, turned to the west in order to apply his talents once more.

Future interviews brought to light how Toriyama was tired of working on Dr. Slump over and over again, and had been trying to break out into a different genre or story, only for the editors to pressure him back into working more, declaring that unless he could bring them something as good or greater than Dr. Slump, he was to remain in his station and keep on drawing. Toriyama chose to quit, take his family and creations with him, and try his luck in the land of the free. A quick interview with Jim Shooter where he showed both his skill and ideas (and that he still owned the rights to Dr. Slump for distribution in the United States) was all that was needed to be hired on the spot.

Thus it was that with a third title on Hand, and more possibly coming as well, that Shooter created a third line of comics for Marvel; the Eclipse Line, a more mature oriented comic line where titles like Bubblegum Crisis, SP//dr: Amazing Armored Hero and now Dr. Slump were to be the be printed at. It would be a place where no comic title would need to care about continuity with another, where crossovers may take place, but not overlap nor interfere with their own inner continuity.

The announcement was met with interest, though not with the riotous expectations that he perhaps expected, but the upward sales of Dr. Slump more than made up for it. For the first time ever in Marvel history, they began to show the worlds the joy of Manga from a master at his craft.

And the people loved it...Arale was such a rambunctious bundle of joy and power, the characters she interacted with where just hilarious yet filled with complexity at the same time, and the artworks was something beyond what they had expected before, with the round lines of both vehicles and building, along with the expressive faces of the characters showing something bold and unique. The mix of irreverence and childishness, adult and young entertainment, just made it one of the top sellers, in many ways overshadowing the other two titles of the line.

It would soon be followed by another, as Toriyama was finally allowed to work on his short story; a small adventure of a young kid in order to find a treasure like no other; one where friendships and enemies were made, where villains held sway and a hero was needed, a story where the fate of their world was at stake.

Thus it was, that the newest title, Sand Land, was born.

Only lasting around fourteen issues, and being introduced in the manga style that needed reading from right to left, Sand Land was a bit of a dud when it was released. Though at the time it was thought that the fact that the main character was a demon (though all the prints made sure to call them Oni to make a difference), later research shows that it just had the bad luck of being released in the midst of popularity for Dr. Slump, with further reprints in the future giving it the respect and accolades it deserved.

With his previous title rising, and the newest one flunking right out of the gate, Toriyama was once more feeling doubt as to whether he could make another original story. In order to clear his head, he and his wife decided to take on a movie, managing by stint of luck, to catch one of the final showings of the Kung Fu Kid. It was during the climax of the final confrontation between Bruce and William, as his wife made an innocuous comment about Toriyama always enjoying this kind of movies and shows, that it finally hit him. The one thing he'd been missing all along, the idea that would finally push him out of his rut and into what he was sure would be his next big work.

He would make a comic about Martial Arts.

It was not an easy process, as Toriyama had to go through many iterations in order to make it work. His first pitch, Dragon Boy, was felt to be a bit too childish at times and too uninspired at others. Through repeated practice and feedback from his new friends at Marvel, and taking their advice for the need to rest in order to recharge one's energies, Toriyama managed to create the newest title for the Eclipse Line; Dragon Ball, the tale of Son Goku and his adventures as he seeks to find the seven mythical Dragon Balls that can grant any wish. Taking heavy inspiration from Journey to the West (which he made sure not to mention, what with the current tension with China), the title was an amazing blend of adventure, action, comedy, slight adult themes (for America) and the amazing artwork only Toriyama was able to deliver so far.

And to say that it was a sensation would be underselling it.

Dragon Ball exploded into popularity from the get go, its characters and world feeling vibrant and lived on respectively. Sales began to tick up, with constant reprints needed, each issue selling more than the last. The names soon became household names as Son Goku, Bulma, Yamcha, Puar and Oolong among others were soon heard in workplaces in conversations around the water cooler, in schools as children played out their many adventures, in talk shows and news as Toriyama was invited to speak in front as everyone and anyone wanted to hear and learn more of the young genius behind one of the greatest stories of their generation.

Dragon Ball came to rival Spider-Man in popularity, with deals made in promotions and merchandising alone making sure that Marvel's budget would remain in the black for years to come, matching Star Wars in popularity after a couple of years. It soon came to the point that Shooter wished to spin Dragon Ball out of the Eclipse Line and make it its own Universe, with new characters to better explore the setting and more adventures to come. Only the refusal from Toriyama, who did not wish to be so completely tied down as he was with Dr. Slump stopped the plan.

The Aftermath

With the increasingly popular Dragon Ball as the definitive Flagship for the Eclipse Line, and the solid showing of the other two titles currently being written (not to mention the reprints of Dr. Slump) the time to expand the line had come. Shooter, seeing how much of the appeal of the line came from manga inspired comics (if not outright manga themselves) called for the creation for more similar titles.

His argument grew in strength when a new artist and writer joined Marvel after the burst in popularity of Dragon Ball, and seeing that unlike many of the different comic companies, Marvel had instituted Iron Clad guidelines that made sure to protect the artist's creations and made it impossible for anyone to take and use without their permission (This later led to the now infamous debacle with Howard the Duck's creator Steve Gerber in 84'). That Toriyama personally came to speak with him in order to welcome him, and the agreeable and friendly atmosphere from the staff, managed to convince Stan Sakai that Marvel was the right place to publish and distribute his newest work; Usagi Yojimbo. A story that, while not as big as Dragon Ball, would still manage to gain a fair amount of popularity, often times manages to approach or match the second-best title.

However, making it so in-house was a tall order; Englehart had to study and take heavy inspiration from different sources in order to make his, and he was one of their most innovative and experienced writers. Geoff Senior and Simon Furman were still young adults who had grown up with the style and thus could easily mold themselves to it.

Most of Marvel's staff however consisted of men who had spent their entire lives deeply submerged in western style comics, to have them change their styles would be possible, but it would take so much time and effort for what the results would be.

Toriyama however suggested an alternate route; he could take assistants for his work like many mangakas did in Japan, they would in turn learn the basics and develop their own style from the experience, and in turn could then be offered the chance to work with marvel. it may take longer, but at the very least it would allow for a wider pool of talent for the future. With Sakai agreeing to also host and teach some of the assistants so long as they aided in the drawing, Shooter approved of it.

From that moment on it became official, the Eclipse Line was here to stay, and has so far remained as one of the most lucrative areas for Marvel. Though the original Dragon Ball series has long ended, its impact remains in both Marvel and the world (with some recent hints that Toriyama may return to said title growing in the last year). The newest manga inspired comics, or "Amerimanga" as it's come to be called, have become a staple of not only Marvel but eventually rival DC Comics and Charlston as well, not counting the many independent comic companies that make sure to at the very least add an Amerimanga for variety's sake.

Marvel however has been the one at the forefront thanks to the program that allowed for more talent to be nurtured in house, as well as taking in any and all Mangaka that would prefer to, like Toriyama, try their luck across the Pacific. This has led oddly enough to both harsher and less restrictive laws in treatment for Mangakas, with some studios making sure that they can never leave with their works, while others prefer to give generous benefits to avoid them ever wanting to leave.

Ending

Marvel's new addition to the House of Ideas did not end with the addition of Toriyama and Sakai to their ranks, and their assistants and students took their torch to create their own works that have achieved as much fame as theirs, their lessons being applied and shared with the world; Ben Dunn, creator of Ninja High School, and both Jason and john Waltrip, the writers and illustrators for the Macross comics, were all assistants to Toriyama, and in many interviews have expressed their admiration and gratefulness for his lessons when starting out. Their works rank among the most popular in the Eclipse Line and in Marvel altogether, as well as the most prolific writers for different titles.

Ryan Brown and Richard Moore both were assistants to Sakai, and they would in time bring about their own works if in different formats. Richard Moore would gain acclaim for his Far West comic, a fantasy/Science Fiction Amerimanga hybrid that has so far expanded with the help of Ryan, who took Co-Writer and artist duties whenever Moore would need to take a break. The team has collaborated in near every issue, with collaborations in different comics being expected of them.

Terry Moore and Jeff Smith are among the latter group who joined in the late 80s to early 90s, bringing in their own works such as Strangers in Paradise and Bone respectively. The first time in a while when not Amerimanga comics were published under the label. Terry Moore has gone on to write different short stories of high quality, while Jeff Smith's bone remains as one of the new Flagships of the comic line.

Wendy and Richard Pini, of Elfquest fame, eventually also joined Marvel and the Eclipse Line, their own work having gained a great deal of notoriety, and with the promise of a possible Elfquest movie in the future. The couple have gone back to working on the comic by themselves, exchanging ideas, and moving the plot forward steadily instead of the spreading themselves too thin.

And finally, Fred Perry began his own experience as an apprentice to both Ben Dunn and Richard Moore, creating his own series Gold Digger under the Eclipse Line. The story has been in publication for 20 years now, and is only matched by some very few currently in print. The adventures of the titular Digger Family and its mix of martial arts, fantasy and science fiction, along with its colorful cast, makes it very clear that the future is in good hands.

And that's all we have for today. Thank you all for joining me in this trip down memory lane. Please don't forget to like and subscribe, and I'll see you all in the next one. Take Care!

A.N.: this came to me when I heard that Toriyama would be joining Marvel. As I was thinking on the changes that would occur, I also came to think about the other changes that had been done and how they would all accumulate and bring about a much different Marvel than one would expect. So, I thought I would combine both and see what would come out of it. The rise of Amerimanga, and Marvel becoming a pioneer of it, while at the same time attracting those who would go on to work independently on the genre, seemed like a no brainer to me. We get to benefit from some of the greatest titles in independent comics, while giving them a good stable environment where they can make sure their work is printed. It's win-win.
Holy crap...........I am at a loss of words for how great this is......
 
So I had this idea on how we format the LucasTV subscription which should still be dirt cheap for the times. We do it in four tiers:
  1. Tier 1 Monthly Subscription of 25 cents each month for 3$ annually.
  2. Tier 2 Quarterly Subscription of 50 cents each month for $2 annually.
  3. Tier 3 Semi-annual subscription of 75 cents each month for $1.50 annually.
  4. Tier 4 Annual Subscription of just $1 annually.
If we compare that to HBO at this current time which is $13 per month, it's an insane steal and is basically near free cable. Hell, Julius from Everybody Hates Chris would probably have a LucasTV subscription. A huge quality of shows, Lucasfilms movies streamed every weekend and throughout the days, and now upcoming USFL would be major draws for people. The dollar per year would also be an excellent selling point that would be just as, if not more famous than the $5 footlong. Plus, just imagine all the ads after Robocop, "I'd buy that for a dollar!"

With this we'll probably have an income of $100-$200 million a year from subscription alone. Which yeah will lead to a loss, but brand loyalty developing will lead to brand revenue and we can more than make up for that with merch and multi media tie-ins. Heck, Gundam should have made enough money alone to fund LucasTV for next year.
 
No. Lucasfilm gets nothing else. THey have DreamWorks, Hanna-Barbera and Sunrise already. But some of those studios could merge together. I do have a idea for Rankin-Bass to buy Topcraft and Madhouse, so R-B could have the Ghibli stuff, especially considering the history they had together, then for Disney to maybe buyout Rankin-Bass unless that'd be a bit much.
Well, you can obviously vote for whatever you want as we can all do, but remember that Overmind, one of the greatest contributor to this quest and regular planmaker was completely against buying TSR (the creators of DnD), and we have just bought them...
 
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Marvel Manga Pitch: Tokyo Mew Mew
2 Pitches at once?! What is this world coming to! In all seriousness, I decided to pair up two pitches this time because I felt like it made the most sense, given the circumstances. With Undertale being released relatively soon(even though I wanted to hold off on it, but you guys wanted to blow your loads early, which means y'all also need to get around to making some omakes if you want to guarantee Undertale does well. We've got to get it to be the first billion dollar animated movie!), I decided to make a pitch for one of the premiere magical girl anime and manga, Tokyo Mew Mew. Why? Well, because it's actually referenced in Undertale. Remember the anime Alphys is obsessed with, Mew Mew Kissy Cutie? It's a reference to this series. With it coming up soon, I thought I'd spin this off into its own pitch for an anime and a manga. For the TV Show, I put Mavis as the writer since I felt it made the most sense at the end of things. For the Marvel pitch, I was originally going to put the original creators. I didn't really see any reason why I shouldn't and Reiko Yoshida is a hell of a mangaka and showrunner. She made Tokyo Mew Mew, D. Gray Man(a personal favorite of mine from my childhood), K-On!, Bakuman, Girls und Panzer, A Silent Voice, Digimon: The Movie, and Violet Evergarden, among others. That said, after talking with @overmind about it, I decided against it and to instead use an OC that he came up with and that I'll be developing. I'll cook up a quick omake for this OC to further develop her after Undertale comes out and after I finish the Charlton omake I'm currently working on with @Cyberphilosipher. I'll be real, I can't really say I like this direction and it's not especially clean of a solution to the problem we were having that led to this decision being made, but I can live with it. For the sake of clarity, the timeline of things is that Undertale would be released first, the Manga is created after some time, and then the show is created after some time, probably for the 90s when magical girls explode as a genre. Oh! I'm also trying something a little different. I've been wanting to better specify my pitches going forward, so I'm trying something new. Instead of just pitching an anime, I'll be pitching it to Sunrise. Same goes with anything else. If it's non-anime animated movie, it's pitched to Dreamworks, if it's a video game, it's a LucasArts pitch, etc. I didn't do that for the Marvel manga pitch here though, just because we haven't come up with names for our manga imprint/imprints/arm/arms Anyway, without further ado, I hope you enjoy!

Marvel Manga Pitch:
Tokyo Mew Mew

Created by: Sakura Miyaguchi​
SET UP: Ichigo Momomiya expected her first date with her crush and cutest boy in school, Masaya Aoyama, to have a more romantic ending than her falling asleep after she sees a vision of a cat entering her body. Things get even stranger when, the next day, she begins displaying cat-like behaviors such as an intense craving for fish. When Masaya is attacked by a monster, she discovers that she is able to transform into the cat-eared magical girl, Mew Ichigo. After she saves Masaya, two researchers named Ryou Shirogane and Keiichiro Akasaka approach her and reveal they had injected her with Iriomote Cat DNA in order to create a magical girl that can save the world from aliens. Ichigo is tasked with fighting these monsters, but saving the world proves to be just too much for Ichigo to handle by herself. Fortunately, she learns that there are four other girls just like her, and now, Ichigo must find them quickly before the aliens completely take over the planet.

Sunrise Pitch:
Tokyo Mew Mew

Written by: Mavis Kingsley

GENRE: Action, Comedy
SUBGENRE: Science Fiction, Romance, Magical Girl, Slice of Life
FORMAT: Anime​
SET UP: On her first date with the cutest boy in school, Ichigo Momomiya is exposed to a mysterious ray that meshes her DNA with that of the endangered Iriomote wildcat. She soon discovers that she has developed superhuman abilities and enhanced agility. Her new powers are put to the test when she leads a team with four other girls, each endowed with special abilities of their own. Together, they must now protect the Earth from an alien menace known as Deep Blue.
 
Man, I remember that show on TV when I was a child.

Anyway, I had some ideas as to a short omake as for the guidelines of the Eclipse Line. Will do that tomorrow maybe and hope they are good enough.
 
I already pitched Watchmen ages ago on Fanhunter's request as a joint Charlton-DC project. It should be made around OTL.

Also, Alan Moore is a nutter, anarcho-communist who worships a snake god that he made up and thinks he spoke interdimensionally with John Constantine. He'd fucking hate Bruce.
 
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Charlton Comics Pitch: Doomsday Clock Part 7
Is it a bird? Is it plane? No! It's the next issue of Doomsday Clock! Are you winning yet, son?! In all seriousness, this one wasn't too bad... at first. I've been getting a lot of help from @Cyberphilosipher, who has graciously lent me his assistance on my Charlton project. Together, we came up with an actual plot! How about that? Something that I'll be doing, as previously mentioned, with all previous Doomsday Clock issues once this event is completed. It was going along so well... and then we came to the Monarch vision section. Ugggh. It was that moment that I started hating this pitch. I wrote it in stream of conscious, which is why it's so disjointed, messy, and shitty at that part, and there's a reason I don't normally write stream of conscious. It was such a pain in the fucking ass and I ended up having to skimp out on the Sarge Steel visions. Regardless, it shouldn't be too much more going forward and Cyber's help made the whole thing waaaay easier. I also decided to do something else a bit different, which I'll be going back and retroactively adjusting as well, and that's actually having different artists. I felt like just having Geof Darrow on everything didn't really work and I wasn't satisfied with it. For this issue, I put Mike Grell on it, whose art is not only excellent, but who I'll be placing as the writer for Sarge Steel post-reset. Also, you'll notice a couple of things in the story itself. For one, I've added some worldbuilding stuff that didn't exist previously for Charlton, that being The Panopticon, ILIAD, the Maggot's Nest... and I think that's it? I'm sure you can understand what they are, more or less, by just reading through, but they'll be explained more thoroughly in the Charlton Universe megapost I'll be making in the future. You'll also notice two new characters, one original, and one from DC. Laplace isn't important right now and I'll probably be adjusting her post-reset, but as for Booster Gold, I'm sure some might be a little miffed, so I thought I'd explain my reasoning. For one, Charlton needs more character, period. The company was around since the Golden Age, but it wasn't until they were close to shutting down that they created most of the heroes people know them for. I don't want to be only using those immensely few number of characters along buoyed by nothing but OC superheroes. I want to be including some OTL superhero creations, but those are tough to gather without upsetting people, either by taking away creators or taking the creations, not to mention finding ones that met the right conditions. Booster Gold, however, was one that I felt made a lot of sense. He's strongly connected with Blue Beetle, he was introduced in his own issue OTL as the first new DC hero post-Crisis, Dan Jurgens didn't seem to be known for much else, and Booster does fuck all in the comics, and so his loss wouldn't exactly be felt. Overall, I thought he'd make sense to add to the Charlton lineup. I'm sure I had other things that I wanted to say, but I can't remember what they are now, so I'll just wrap it up. A very special thanks to @Cyberphilosipher for working with me on this, as well as all his assistance with other behind-the-scenes Charlton work. Without further ado, I hope you enjoy!


Charlton Comics Pitch:
Doomsday Clock Part 7

Writer: Jeff Rovin
Artist: Mike Grell​
SET UP: In the year 2050, Earth is under the rule of the oppressive tyrant, Monarch. His rule is dystopian and the future is bleak for the people of Earth. Matthew Ryder, an expert on temporal studies and a scientist under the employ of Monarch, worked to develop his technology to travel back in time and prevent the tyrannical ruler from ever rising to power. He learned that in the late 20th century, one of Earth's superheroes had turned evil. They had gone on to kill all of Earth's heroes and villains, assumed the identity of Monarch, and began their rise to global domination. Because Monarch only ever appeared in a full body suit of armor, his previous identity was unknown to Ryder. Matthew Ryder succeeds in travelling back in time, 20 years before Monarch's massacre of Earth's heroes, in his desperate bid to find Monarch's true identity and kill him with his new powers before he can rise to power. Unfortunately, Monarch is not far behind and is determined to hunt Ryder down and kill both him, and anyone else who stands in his way. To face this unprecedented threat, Earth's greatest heroes and it's most sinister villains must work together to defeat Monarch and change the future.
In this installment of Doomsday Clock; Needing assistance to break into Sarge Steel's Government Archives, the location of which was obtained from The Question, Waverider travels to the Washington DC area to find anyone of note who works for Steel and his base.

Fortunately, his luck turns as he finds a young man named Michael Jon "M.J." Carter, a military MP and night watchman who is convinced to assist Waverider after mentioning The Question and a possible chance to meet Blue Beetle and give him the chance to be more than he could ever be. Instead of flying as he normally would to Steel's base, a government archive meant to house secrets on the Super Heroes and specialists that protect America and her people, Carter and Waverider drive in Carter's car in order to keep a low profile.

As they drive to West Virginia on this impromptu field trip, they talk about many things, including discussing their lives and how different they are; as people, as believers in a higher cause of justice and how they would act if given the chance to be better.

After some time, they finally arrive at The Panopticon, a massive, but highly secretive government facility that serves as the base of operations for Sarge Steel and ILIAD, the intelligence organization that Sarge Steel leads.

They break into the base and fight through the agents and defenses in the facility. Waverider splits up with Carter and tracks down the archives, looking for information on the various heroes in order to cross-reference it with the fragments of Monarch's own data and memory he stole. As he does so, Carter continues to hold off the agents present while Sarge makes his way to them in order to combat the intruders. As he fails to find any useful information, Waverider grows more and more frustrated, until he finds information on an asset kept within The Panopticon.

A young girl referred to as Laplace who has the ability to see probable and alternate scenarios at will, as well as being able to see how the path comes to be if she looks into it deep enough, although she can only do the latter with one scenario at a time. However, unlike Waverider, who bears a similar ability, she is able to control what she sees, leading to his desire to seek her out.

While he's searching through this information, Sarge and his men have reached Carter and after a brief bout, Sarge incapacitates and detains Carter. Waverider tracks down and enters Laplace's containment room, alerting Sarge and his men to his location. Although he initially considered simply taking the information from her, after seeing her and being reminded of his daughter before she had succumbed to Monarch's propaganda and became one of his Peacemakers, he instead chooses to approach her more gently. He speaks to her, attempting to convince her to assist him and meanwhile, Sarge and his men race to reach him, taking Carter with them due to being unable to waste time doing anything else. He is unable to convince her before Sarge arrives outside her containment, but they are being barred from entry, allowing Waverider just enough time to convince her to assist him.

They hold hands and activate their powers, sharing their abilities and visions between each other, focusing on visions of how Monarch came to be. Just as he does so, the agents manage to gain entry. As Sarge sees Waverider with the young girl, he becomes immediately agitated and races forward to keep her away from him, unintentionally intruding onto the process and muddling the visions and the information gained by Waverider. He is bombarded with these powerful visions, and despite many being made unclear by Sarge's intrusion, he is able to clearly make out some of them. He witnesses a figure who stands a shining beacon, a great hero loved by all. He watches as this beacon is worn down, the weight of his countless battles, responsibilities, and expectations grinding him down.

No matter what he does, nothing ever gets truly better. Worse yet, things seem to be getting worse. Heroes and innocents die in increasing numbers, Villains wreck greater and greater havoc, and he's continuously forced to compromise his beliefs for some nebulous concept of "good" that he can no longer believe in, all while the people grow increasingly hostile towards the heroes. He sees that despite the figure's growing weariness, he does still have something good in his life. A woman.

He witnesses their love for each other, day in and day out, and no matter how close the hero comes to falling apart, she's always there to help put him back together, just as he helps keep her strong. He sees as the hero's superiors are concerned with his performance. He's doing his best, but it's not enough for them. He isn't good enough for them, and so, they present him with an experimental new suit that will greatly increase his performance and propel him to even greater heights. Matthew Ryder comes face to face with a tyrant, the armor of Monarch. The hero is wary of the suit, concerned for what it would mean for him to put it on and what he'd be made to do, so he seeks the counsel of the woman he loves. She helps him navigate his feelings and bring him peace of mind. He has his answer and he will not put on the armor. That's not all she has to say, and Ryder watches as she gives the hero the greatest news he's heard in years. She's pregnant.

The hero is ecstatic and for the first time in ages, he begins to hope for the future. Months pass and criminal acts are only getting worse, but the hero has made his choice. It may have put him in an awkward place, but he knows that it's the right decision, but although they are able to claw some semblance of happiness from their increasingly dark world, the peace can't last forever. The woman is walking home from buying groceries when she is held up at gunpoint and robbed outside of their apartment, unable to retaliate due to her pregnancy. She complies, hoping to avoid any conflict and protect her unborn daughter, but in an act of senseless violence, the robber shoves her to the ground and onto her pregnant belly. She begins going into labor prematurely and is rushed to the hospital, but the signs don't bode well. The hero rushes to the hospital once informed, and makes it not long after the woman has finished giving birth and they savor each other's presence and discuss their daughter before they receive the terrible news. It was a miscarriage and the little girl that they'd have named Amy was dead.

The news breaks the couple and their lives suffer for it. Time passes, but they remain stuck. The woman is not truly there, often spending time in the room they had prepared for their daughter. The man is devastated, growing more disillusioned and detached from those around him by the day, and yet, the world keeps spinning. Even with the personal issues he faces with his work, with the public, and the growing divide between him and the woman, he must continue. In the midst of this, the Earth is attacked by a terrible alien force, a situation that leads to the hero being convinced to don the Monarch armor, no longer so steadfast in his principles, and though they are eventually defeated, great losses are incurred. The world is devastated, cities are in ruins, hundreds of millions of lives have been lost, chief among these losses being the woman, whose corpse he discovers when aimlessly wandering the ruined city, more than able to have survived, but choosing to die instead.

He doesn't know what to feel. He's afraid, he's angry, but more than anything, he's tired. He's lost everything, and for what? Nothing he does matters, nothing ever really changes, and he's constantly left to pick up the pieces once it falls apart around him. The more he thinks on everything, the more bitter he becomes. He won't stand for it anymore. He'll make things right. Things will… no, things must change. He floats over to the gathered heroes while remaining in the sky, his visage obscured and his silhouette casting over them as he makes his decision. He will become Monarch.

Along with these visions however, he also sees clear visions from Sarge Steel. He watches as a young German woman gives a speech to a large, indiscernible crowd in a large and secretive location, adorned with Nazi imagery. She speaks about past glories and humiliations, of defeating their enemies and destroying undesirables, of community and the superiority of their race. She brought them together for a vision, to build a community to realize this vision, and declared them to be Gesellschaft. He sees as the Artificial Intelligence and Supercomputer, NESTOR, is brought online under ILIAD. He sees as NESTOR tracks all actions and identities of everyone in the country and being used to assassinate threats before they can become threats. He sees fellow ILIAD agents betraying Steel on the commands of a rival within the agency.

Finally, he witnesses Sarge and Laplace meeting for the first time, and him slowly taking up a paternal role for the young, orphaned girl. After being overwhelmed by the effects of their powers, Sarge collapses and is out of commission and despite her still being weak and overwhelmed by the visions, Laplace makes her way to Sarge in order to check on him and ensure that he's okay.

With Sarge incapacitated and his men distracted, Carter uses the distraction to take out the agents and despite being injured, helps carry Waverider as they begin leaving the facility. As they leave the facility, they are confronted by Captain Atom floating above them, his figure initially obscured by the shadows casted by the sun and flanked by heroes such as Nightshade, Peacemaker, Judomaster, The Question, Blue Beetle, Thunderbolt, Yellowjacket, and Son of Vulcan.

The issue ends with Captain Atom stating that they have a lot to answer for and that they'll be able to do so from the inside of a cell in the Maggot's Nest.
 
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