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Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

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HMTN said:
Hey, you. Just-finished-chapter person, person who just finished the chapter. You got here fast. Almost as if you were a fan of the story, waiting for an update.

Directly above me, in the author's signature, is the link to the official Celestial Forge Discord Server™, if you've not joined it yet.

It's like this thread, but you don't have to hit f5. You get a ping when the chapter drops. It's pretty snazzy. But it would be even snazzier if we had you.

(On a completely unrelated note, the chapter would have been on page 420, if if wasn't for all that pre-post in-thread discussion. Please let us never repeat this tragedy).
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big O O F. if it were not for all the salt that the miners are still clearing out, we could of had the meaning of life, the universe, and everything on 420.
 
ONLY A FEW MORE DELETIONS LEFT! EVERYONE WITH A HEART, DELETE YOUR UNNESSECARY PRE-CHAPTER POSTS, FOR THE MEME! WE MUST HAVE THE CHAPTER BELONG TO THE 420TH PAGE!

On the interlude, damn it feels nice to read other people's reaction to Apeiron. And one that is not so negative. The character development for the dumb heroic blonde is amazing. Vicky will still be a hero, of course, but I wonder if she can lead a better version of New Wave, where everyone is accountable for their mistakes, as is their won't?
 
ONE LAST POST NEEDS TO BE DELETED! RISE BROTHERS AND SISTERS!

RISE!
What are you guys thoughts on a PHO Interlude for this fight? Will we get one, Lord?
 
Great job once again! I had thought that "3 day old technology" line might get a reaction, but seeing it happen in the moment was perfect! I really like your characterization of Victoria, you avoided the "collateral damage barbie with an empty skull to match" stereotype, and able to reflect on her actions, while still keeping a little bit of arrogance that inevitably comes with being a cape named "Glory Girl". Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what people think of the giant robot and ftl ramming!
 
WE DID IT! WE DID IT EVERYONE!!!

Lord now has chapters in the 69th page and the 420th page. Thank you for joining us in the crusade for justice of memes.
 
LordRoustabout said:
The obvious effect was slowing the dispatch to a crawl until every sight site was examined with a fine-tooth comb, but that was on the city-wide scale.
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LordRoustabout said:
Until this is over I would like to ask you to stay inside and off the streets, for your own safety and the safety of those working to end this crisis."
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Nice lil' interlude. I admire the way you weaved in the last chapters events without just repeating them. Lotta authors can't seem to manage it this well.
 
I loved this chapter for the insight into Victoria's perspective and characterization; you've given her more depth here than most fics with her as a main character and it really pays off.
 
Huh they cut out the transmission right before Bakuda revealed that Joe cut through her signal. Considering the events that happen next, I wonder if that was an impressive bit of on the fly editing to try and keep city wide panic levels up, or if they always intended to cut at that point, either him breaking through or roughly that area of the dialogue.
 
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