No offense, I unexpectedly liked the text, but the amount of technical details and completely unnecessary details per square centimeter just physically kill any possible reading pleasure. I don't think I opened America with this statement - dozens of people have already said the same thing before me. I'll just be another of these dudes, okay?
The technological porn descriptions is part of this fic' identity by now. It isn't for everyone, but I don't think the author should change them.
Taylor NEED to read that comment, it would do so much good to her self-esteem.
She already know she have a overly powerful Tinker who is in love with her (or whatever his power is saying about her). And she feel horrible about it, because she think she corrupted him to villainy or something. See the addendum of the previous chapter.
The instant you even imply MC and Taylor might ACTUALLY try dating or something, the mods on Sufficient Velocity and Spacebattles will shut you down.
This fic isn't only on Sufficient Velocity, it's also on Archive of our own and fanfiction.net. So does it really matter ? If the rules here doesn't allow the author to write what he want, he can go elsewhere.
Not that I think he will do it, Joe seems very disturbed with the idea of dating a 15 years old.
Question, why work with other heros?
On top of my head:
- Public relationship, the one thing the PRT/protectorate is always great at (and Apeiron is apparently very poor at).
- Access to full warehouse of broken tinkertech for reverse engineering
- Act as a force multiplier by equipping the PRT with shiny tinkertech
that require no maintenance. Apeiron can kick a lot of ass, but he can't be everywhere at the same time, unlike the PRT.
- Having an official government behind him can open him a lot of doors.
- Oh, yeah, and no risk of S threat classification / kill order.
you want him to make an AI to manage internet forums for him? Why not just make a killbot that wants to whipe out humanity directly, skip the extra steps
Dragon is moderating PHO. Go re-read the previous chapters (especially chapter 18 - Debut) knowing who "Tin_Mother" is...
Except for the fact that joining the PRT comes with massive downsides and would cripple mc and prevent him from growing and making stuff he desperately needs
The worst downsides would only happen if he reveal his workshop to them. Nobody have to know he is working with nanites or making super advanced AI.
There's also the option to just stuff him in a burlap sack and drop him off on the PRT doorstep.
Best way to get Weld to be held for master/stranger protocols.
EDIT: ...wait, now that I think of it, Weld is immune to master powers because of the Manton effect (he count as inorganic for them). So saving Weld is a good way in putting good word into the PRT ears without tripping into master/stranger protocols (like he did with Amy).
At the very least, there's multiple copies of him running around with him being temporarily sped up mentally...
All I read is "he can make copies of himself for sexy time".