Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Something interesting that stands out to me is that Uppercrust, once word of his contract with Apieron becomes known, will be able to honestly answer the question, "what did your contract with Apieron cost?" with the simple response, "Everything." Which could make for a particularly interesting scene.
 
Joe can make devices for people to block any precognition targeted at them. It would be a different effect, but could he make something to blind a precog at the source? Fly up, and give Ziz a choker that cuts her off from seeing anything.
 
There are no undetectable elements present in the area. The location is secure."
-How would she know if something she couldn't detect is there?-

approach as a cape or member of the elite."
Elite

timed you could practically March's fingerprints on the operation.
practically see

No, do not have any need to dress up a new cape as an overpowered scapegoat."
I do

I gave him a nebulose gesture. Either would do
nebulous

Slayed by the Aesir, his flesh became the earth, his blood
Slain
 
-How would she know if something she couldn't detect is there?-

Its specifically mentioned in an earlier chapter, but because FMA Alchemy requires you to Comprehend what you are trying to affect, attempting the first stage of a Transmutation on an area (but not going any further) allows you to tell if there is any difference between what is there and what you know is there iirc.
 
Now that Joe has made a contract with Uppercrust I wonder if he'll go about checking who else tried to contact him. I imagine it's time for Weld's next treatment. Maybe he'll also meet with Fautline and her crew.
 
Hurrah! It finally happened. Glad to see him get some supporting allies (as opposed to the Undersiders who have just been liabilities for his reputation and strength).

Cool ability descriptions.
 
Its specifically mentioned in an earlier chapter, but because FMA Alchemy requires you to Comprehend what you are trying to affect, attempting the first stage of a Transmutation on an area (but not going any further) allows you to tell if there is any difference between what is there and what you know is there iirc.
-That's a method of detection. Which doesn't work on something that is undetectable.-
 
-That's a method of detection. Which doesn't work on something that is undetectable.-


Direct WOG Quote from the Discord:

Q: I'm intrigued by the fact that Survey is attending the meeting with Uppercrust. Maybe that was mentioned previously though.

A::Joe did ask Survey to come with him, since her sensor abilities are the best the Forge has access to. She can also do an alchemy based scan using the 'comprehension' effect of transmutation that identifies if any part of the environment is inconsistent with her understanding of it, meaning she can detect undetectable things. It was a short mention in a earlier chapter, but they're a lot of value in her attending the meeting that goes beyond the flex of showing up with support staff.```

So, take it up with Lord if it's that important to you, but it's not a 'mistake', it's a clearly intended aspect of her abilities.
 
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Spaceship-blocked once again. Damn you, chance! I will have my SPACESHIP! I don't care if it'll be useless, if it'll sty in the hangar for the resto of the story if it won't be mentioned again (though I hope it won't be the case) I WANT SPACESHIP!

But he already received a spaceship?

Edit: In 79 chapter Tybalt received a spaceship together with ability to use drugs without negative effects
 
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What is this? Did this perk just give Joe a basic hoe? Or is this some kind of Divinely Crafted Hoe made by Norse Dwarves?

Just a standard farmer's hoe, I expect.

(Presumably it's a riff on the fact that Norse myth is famously full of sexual imprecations between its legendary figures, to the point that the gods would call each other whores via rap battle.)

So anyone want to take a guess as to how he plans to change his power? Thanks for the chapter.

From context clues, Joe wants to make up for the fact that Uppercrust is going to have to cull a significant fraction of his manpower and cape underlings. So I'd bet 3 to 1 that he's going to give Uppercrust a major force multiplier - that is, make a focus that enhances the man's tinker power to the point he could outfit his entire cell with personal energy shields and similar equipment.

However, if I was going to fling a baseless guess into the dark, there are more ways to buff Uppercrust's crafting abilities than simply amplifying his connection to his passenger, and Joe has a lot of resources to throw at a project like this. Considering that Uppercrust is going to be one of his greatest allies in the future, and he's already proven himself basically responsible with power in a way that Aisha wasn't earlier (and Taylor still isn't)...

Daedalus' Student, Master Craftsman, and Craftsman of the Gods all allow for the implementation of effects that "just work", a semblance of fiat evoked through divine perfection. Selecting an appropriate medium to channel the relevant concepts, make a divine tool - say, a pair of gloves designed for the hands of a creator - that divinely enhances everything created with that tool and allows its wielder to act with impossible grace.

Suddenly Uppercrust can apply a bootleg version of Built To Last to all his gear, and he works at impossible speeds. His tinkertech just doesn't break down and need maintenance over time, and it's not an effect that other tinkers can usefully reverse-engineer. Not only can he free up half of his schedule in terms of no longer needing to maintain his technology, he can even use his free time to build more tech than he could have managed otherwise.

None of that comes from his connection to his passenger, so Joe has more slack to do other things with that asset. Selecting an appropriate medium to channel the relevant concepts, he makes an Arcane Craft focus - say, a pair of protective bracers to go over a pair of gloves - that allow Uppercrust to draw out a different expression of his shard. Suddenly, instead of just building energy shields, the man can also project such shields directly, using them for top-tier defense in solo and team engagements alike.

Uppercrust deliberately overdesigns his costume to pretend that he's made powerful yet extremely bulky advancements in shielding technology. Nobody sees through the ruse because it's now taken for granted that no-one in Brockton Bay can go 2 days without redesigning their costume, and he's only the 108th tinker to make a breakthrough in their specialty by means of second-hand exposure to Apeiron's awesomeness.
 
Something interesting that stands out to me is that Uppercrust, once word of his contract with Apieron becomes known, will be able to honestly answer the question, "what did your contract with Apieron cost?" with the simple response, "Everything." Which could make for a particularly interesting scene.

I can't be the only one imagining that infinity war earth bet edition has an Apeiron epxpy come out of nowhere and curbstomp the Thanos expy cape in their movie as his says the line

"What did it cost?"
"Everything"
*sudden portal opens up inside the soulstone space
"no infinity stones for you my man" *yoink*
*Thanos rapidly getting brown pants* "sir yes sir, I'm sorry sir!"

and the audience going "I can't even be mad, that's clearly supposed to be Apeiron. Very realistic reaction, my SoD would've broken if there had even been a fight to be honest"

"yeah, same. To bad that a 200 million budget of cutting edge cgi doesn't live up to the real thing, but at least they tried."
"I mean you can tell that it's supposed to be him, must have taken like half the budget of the movie to film that 30 second scene. Would've been cheaper to actually ask him to make a cameo as a parody of himself." "Totally, dude"


Odin is how it's spelled in swedish though.
No it isn't, I've never spelt or pronounced it like that in swedish, ever in my life. If Odin is used it's because the person mistakenly believes that the english spelling is the "correct" one just as a majority of people believe that Marvels you're not worthy enchantment is tied to the original myth when it really isn't. Marvels thor just happens to be the waaaaaay more well known interpretation of the character for the last, what 60(?)+ odd years.

I assume you're a swede to if you don't believe me google "tor och oden" it takes 5 seconds. Are you telling me that your teachers in school and whoever else ever said the name in swedish around you said Odin and not Oden? that's crazy!

...aaand I just saw that both ways of pronouncing it is "correct" haha so ignore all of this, well I wasted precious time writing this so I'm gonna post it anyway and besides on the swedish wikipedia Oden is the name of the article and the first pronunciation written so...

(edit: insert an ace attorney Take that that actually works)

and give me internet points for being right XD
/the last part was kind of sarcastic yes

So I just checked swedish wikipedia and both Oden and Odin are accepted spellings, apparently, though "Oden" is used for the article as the more common of the two.

I was also aishad lol
 
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I can't be the only one imagining that infinity war earth bet edition has an Apeiron epxpy come out of nowhere and curbstomp the Thanos expy cape in their movie as his says the line

"What did it cost?"
"Everything"
*sudden portal opens up inside the soulstone space
"no infinity stones for you my man" *yoink*
*Thanos rapidly getting brown pants* "sir yes sir, I'm sorry sir!"

and the audience going "I can't even be mad, that's clearly supposed to be Apeiron. Very realistic reaction, my SoD would've broken if there had even been a fight to be honest"

"yeah, same. To bad that a 200 million budget of cutting edge cgi doesn't live up to the real thing, but at least they tried."
"I mean you can tell that it's supposed to be him, must have taken like half the budget of the movie to film that 30 second scene. Would've been cheaper to actually ask him to make a cameo as a parody of himself." "Totally, dude"


No it isn't, I've never spelt or pronounced it like that in swedish, ever in my life. If Odin is used it's because the person mistakenly believes that the english spelling is the "correct" one just as a majority of people believe that Marvels you're not worthy enchantment is tied to the original myth when it really isn't. Marvels thor just happens to be the waaaaaay more well known interpretation of the character for the last, what 60(?)+ odd years.

I assume you're a swede to if you don't believe me google "tor och oden" it takes 5 seconds. Are you telling me that your teachers in school and whoever else ever said the name in swedish around you said Odin and not Oden? that's crazy!

...aaand I just saw that both ways of pronouncing it is "correct" haha so ignore all of this, well I wasted precious time writing this so I'm gonna post it anyway and besides on the swedish wikipedia Oden is the name of the article and the first pronunciation written so...

(edit: insert an ace attorney Take that that actually works)

and give me internet points for being right XD
/the last part was kind of sarcastic yes



I was also aishad lol
Odin Is how it was spelt in most of my old childhod boks, old classics such as Röde orm and the exelent lore accurate danish comic series (i was lucky enough to have a few swedish versions of it) Valhal.

As is how it is spelt in my copy of nordiska myter.

So i always asumed odin to be the more comon proper swedish spelling, as that is how the publishers spelt it.
 
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@LordRoustabout what style of Smithing Hammer is it? A regular village blacksmith for example will have at least 3. A general work hammer, a sledge for heavy work such as consolidating a billet, and a smaller hammer for detail work. Western, Middle Eastern or Asian style? Haft style and length, decorated or not?

If he is now a Svartalfar did he gain the size of one? Norse Dwarves were not tiny. They are larger than 40k Space Marines (14 to 16 feet outside their armor up to 18 inside armor) in full armor.

Also is that pre-Fall or post-Fall Khazad-dûm?
 
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Odin Is how it was spelt in most of my old childhod boks, old classics such as Röde orm and the exelent lore accurate danish comic series (i was lucky enough to have a few swedish versions of it) Valhal.

As is how it is spelt in my copy of nordiska myter.

So i always asumed odin to be the more comon proper swedish spelling, as that is how the publishers spelt it.
I didn't even know we sweden accepted Odin as proper to begin with until I looked it up, so what do I know honestly. Maybe we didin't and Odin is a bleedover from other languages in scandinavia or Americas influence via marvel. Languages evolve *shrug*
 
well shit this is a really satisfying chapter lordroustabout thank you very much for the chapter and for writing such awesomeness
 
I didn't even know we sweden accepted Odin as proper to begin with until I looked it up, so what do I know honestly. Maybe we didin't and Odin is a bleedover from other languages in scandinavia or Americas influence via marvel. Languages evolve *shrug*
Seing how old some of those books are (röde orm is from 41, and was voted one of the 3 most important/influential swedish books writen in the 1900s back in 98. So it does have quite abit of weight) i would say that the oden is the traveled name, as it more conforms with germanic and slavic pronunciation.

But yes. Languages transform. So we could both be wrong, even if I am personally more inclined to the way publishers decided was correct over wikipedia even if alot of that is my own bias to how I first saw it. And I am perfectly willing to admit that I do have alot of bias here.

What i'm wondering is, who was controlling the nanites, Apeiron or Matrix?

I geus we can tell by how impressive his Sixpack is.
 
Btw, wouldn't Joe's passenger have anything to say about Murder Rats existence? Not even a general sense of anger, disgust or pity for Joe to wonder about?

People are people, but Joe's passenger has shown time and time again that it cares quite a bit more about named characters. And it's basically Fandom Incarnate, and Worm Fandom do be liking Mouse Protector
 
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Btw, wouldn't Joe's passenger have anything to say about Murder Rats existence? Not even a general sense of anger, disgust or pity for Joe to wonder about?

People are people, but Joe's passenger has shown time and time again that it cares quite a bit more about named characters. And it's basically Fandom Incarnate, and Worm Fandom do be liking Mouse Protector
But he doesn't know about it, the passenger doesn't just randomly give information, it reacts to events happening around him or specific questions he asks and even then he has to figure out the context for everything.

I haven't seen him ask about bonesaws creations so he has no reason to think about anything that can clue him in on murderrat AFAIK
 
But he doesn't know about it, the passenger doesn't just randomly give information, it reacts to events happening around him or specific questions he asks and even then he has to figure out the context for everything.

I haven't seen him ask about bonesaws creations so he has no reason to think about anything that can clue him in on murderrat AFAIK
He read Survey's report. He read the name. I was imagining him reading the name, and his passenger in the background getting grouchy and Joe being like

"What is it this time!?"

(Also, was who it used to be... Just not in Surveys report? Could she not get the info somehow? Did it intact include these details, and mister passenger still had no input? All it took was looking at Taylor, a detailed report on something from Survey of all people should suffice)
 
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About Murder Rat from chapter 80:
The loss of Chuckles had been patched by Murder Rat, which was a particularly unpleasant thing to learn about in the level of detail I had, but that kind of creation had clearly been a temporary measure. There were only a few blurry photos of Bonesaw's creation, but the first-hand reports told a grim story.

Just another thing to address, along with the rest of the Nine's victims.

He knows.
 
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