Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

Now Joe, be reasonable about this. Let's not use Lung's arm to make Taylor a Raiment of Escalating Defense. I don't care how safe it would make her and that it'd be great practice making Teigu, everyone's gonna be extra terrified if the Swarm Queen can shapeshift into an invulnerable dragon because of you.
 
Now Joe, be reasonable about this. Let's not use Lung's arm to make Taylor a Raiment of Escalating Defense. I don't care how safe it would make her and that it'd be great practice making Teigu, everyone's gonna be extra terrified if the Swarm Queen can shapeshift into an invulnerable dragon because of you.
I mean. I don't think Joe plans on giving Taylor anything at the moment, mostly because he assumes she'll somehow manage to use it as a weapon. Once she says the word, Joe'll come and give aid, but that hasn't happened yet. Given Taylor's apparent temperament it might not happen at all.
 
Now Joe, be reasonable about this. Let's not use Lung's arm to make Taylor a Raiment of Escalating Defense. I don't care how safe it would make her and that it'd be great practice making Teigu, everyone's gonna be extra terrified if the Swarm Queen can shapeshift into an invulnerable dragon because of you.
Joe gave her a pretty sharp knife and regretted it. Gave her a bag of holding and she made it an insect carrier. I don't think Joe is going to make the mistake of giving her anything he doesn't absolutely have to.
 
Isn't that just infinity?
Borrowing some results from set theory, it is possible for an infinite number to be smaller than another infinite number. Raising infinity* to an infinite power** does that over the exponent. Formally, this means making a set with size equal to the infinite number in the exponent, then taking the set of all subsets of that set, then the set of all subsets of subsets of that set, and so on infinitely... which results in a set that's demonstrably larger than the original.

More generally, infinite power might still not be enough for infinite combinations of applications that are themselves infinite.

* assuming countable infinity for the base
** this one can be any infinite number
 
One interesting possibility for a teigu Joe can make is Bug Glaive + Lung Meat = "Dragon Fly" superweapon.
It would be a perfect present for Taylor, instantly raising her to S-Class threat.
 
Jezus, fuck... There is NO DYSON SPHERE!
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Honestly, I think the wording is ambiguous here, so it fall straight into rule 0 of Jumpchain : "when in doubt, fanwank something". Lord is the one with the last word, but I think "Joe have a Dyson Sphere" is more fun than the reverse.

I mean, can you imagine Lisa's expression when Joe give her a tour ?

She would be panicked from losing her power, too far away from Earth.
 
Lance of Leviathan: S-class water magic
Breastplate of Behemoth: S-class damage reflect
Shield of the Simurgh: S-class accuracy and dodge

You know you want to look this good.

Bonus:
Flail of Khonshu: S-class stun
Helm of Tohu: S-class skill copy
Bow of Bohu: S-class trap launcher



Fleet looking up from his magazine while his sister does neurotic secretary things. - Hilarious

Potterverse charms counting as crafting is so very broken. Again.



If I was designing a Dyson Sphere for Joe's lair, I'd put a shrunk-down star in a metal shell the size of a Trek warp core.
 
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Finally caught up, and honestly his passenger is starting to irritate me. At this point, Joe outclasses pretty much anything in the setting. Author fiat is the only possible way anyone except maybe Scion could give him any challenge at this point, which is why I'm still baffled that Bakuda hasn't been dealt with.

Also can't wait to get out of the workshop. It's very noticeable that when he only has one or two people to speak to, the narrative just falls into tens of thousands of words of rambling about idle thoughts they might be having. When he's out and interacting with others things actually progress and the world feels more immersive and alive. Just let him go hang out with people or talk to people or something.
 
Finally caught up, and honestly his passenger is starting to irritate me. At this point, Joe outclasses pretty much anything in the setting. Author fiat is the only possible way anyone except maybe Scion could give him any challenge at this point, which is why I'm still baffled that Bakuda hasn't been dealt with.
any "all or nothing" cape can kill him with enough luck, planning or allies. He hasn't worked on it, He's just getting stronger.
 
Let me say something about the Dyson sphere not being in the PR.

The whole place shook hard enough to take Joe off his feet if he was standing, eluding to something being added. He also said, "We have a Dyson sphere".

Make of those obvious statements what you will.
 
Finally caught up, and honestly his passenger is starting to irritate me. At this point, Joe outclasses pretty much anything in the setting. Author fiat is the only possible way anyone except maybe Scion could give him any challenge at this point, which is why I'm still baffled that Bakuda hasn't been dealt with.

Also can't wait to get out of the workshop. It's very noticeable that when he only has one or two people to speak to, the narrative just falls into tens of thousands of words of rambling about idle thoughts they might be having. When he's out and interacting with others things actually progress and the world feels more immersive and alive. Just let him go hang out with people or talk to people or something.


Again, again and again: PASSENGERS ARE WAY, WAAAAAAAAAAAY MORE POWERFUL THAN PEOPLE THINK. EVEN WITH FULL FORGE ZION CAN GIVE JOE RUN FOR HIS MONEY BOTH DUE TO LUDICROUS POWER AND INSANE UTILITY HIS SHARDS OFFER. And with Joe and his sweet sweet [DATA] around shards willing to throw a lot more resources for their hosts so they can gather more [DATA].
 
Finally caught up, and honestly his passenger is starting to irritate me. At this point, Joe outclasses pretty much anything in the setting. Author fiat is the only possible way anyone except maybe Scion could give him any challenge at this point, which is why I'm still baffled that Bakuda hasn't been dealt with.
Okay, looks like my reply will be a bit messy. I apologize in advance for it.

Bakuda and remnants of the ABB is playing Whac-A-Mole with Apeiron. He can crush them but he needs to find them first. You read that they had gotten Dodge's pocket dimension tech and that they are careful of their cybersecurity. So their soon to be released magic divine stealth spy drones will cover the city to search for his opponents while Survey searches the web.

Bakuda's dead man's switch couldn't be broken in canon, and this time she's been cribbing Leet's work to try to upstage him. It is a major obstacle, basically a mega-project exactly in line with her field of tinkering. Joe might be able to crack it, but without a major reverse engineering perk it will take a lot of time and effort.
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By this I mean that in canon it wasn't even broken despite having weeks to do it (I think it was three weeks). Apeiron will be will be able to do it with his new computer.

If you check on VS Battles on Zion and Warrior Entity you'll see that it has exceptional abilities. In canon it wasn't overpowered, it let itself be defeated.

People aren't going to line themselves up to fight a fruitless battle against Apeiron. If they are going to line up they will be either having something they think they can use against him or use tactics to avoid fighting him directly.

Chapter 69 said:
"Maybe." I said. "Parahuman powers, even basic ones, are already pretty high up there in terms of magic. Like, just trying to emulate your power in a magic system would be a legendary undertaking. I'm not sure a regular striker would make enough of a difference to be noticeable."

"But these aren't ordinary, right?" She asked, taking the set of ankle boots from the drone.

"Not even close." I said with a grin. "Normal strikers run off a small internal combustion engine. These are using a substantially more advanced power plant."

"How advanced?" She asked with genuine interest.

"Something that wouldn't be out of place on a starship." I replied. "There's a limit to how much can be converted and transferred, no matter how powerful the engine, but it's about as strong as I can make it."

Which was a serious statement. Still, given the power source that parahumans actually drew from, it would take a lot to meaningfully impact things. Passenger Space exploration was still in the early stages, with Survey's compressed program still transferring through the quantum link, but the sheer scale of the place was telling of what I was actually dealing with. Parahumans didn't operate with even a fraction of their power's full potential. Working around or enhancing those limits was a substantial challenge, but fortunately one my work could address.
So parahuman powers and passangers is very strong. Despite having something like a powerplant from a starship it only managed to alter a parahuman power a little.
She shifted slightly as she spoke. "Um, like control how it spreads. Exclude people from it, or include them in the effect. Maybe, that's still hard to do, but this is a really big difference."

It seemed strapping a starship power core to each leg with a combined output that outpaces entire civilizations was enough to slightly modify the application of a parahuman ability. Really, powers operated on a different level. It was no wonder my own tinker power had been such a game changer.
This means that passengers and powers is a real deal. They are powerful and have many different expressions of it.

To quote LR's in a comment from Lisa's Interlude.
On the topic of dealing with Noelle through remotely operated drones, that kind of thing would absolutely kick the hornet's nest. Joe was able to kill Lung, but that took an attack that was visible from three continents. His regular drones are powerful, but trying to put down or contain Noelle with them is extremely risky, particularly when you consider the rest of the Travelers and the fact that they'll stop holding back if Noelle is threatened. Then you get the risk of a Noelle rampage, meaning more capes dragged into things. Even in canon Lisa wasn't able to properly convey the risks associated with Noelle, only getting an A-class response rather than S-class, and leading to a much worse situation overall. Joe saying "Fine, I'll send in the drones." Is one of the responses she's worried about.
And another quote.
Joe's strongest weapons are in no way hand held. He can make Transformers grade planet busters, scaled up with Always a Bigger Robot and then enchanted with everything you listed. Right now, power is less of a problem than preventing collateral damage that would remove a large portion of the planet. Additionally, if we're talking absolute destructive capability the Vortex Grenade is still the most dangerous thing he can use against any single target, but has it's own nightmare when it comes to collateral damage.
With this I mean that sure Apeiron has enough firepower and almost overpower anything in the world. But he doesn't have enough information, leverage or enough technology to do it without massive potential collateral damage.

When Apeiron finally can unleash his best he will be ready for all organizations in the world response to him fooling precognition powers and behavior models. He said this chapter that he will do it at the latest one week later, as its Coil who primary makes it so that Apeiron needs to hold into his mercenary persona.

Practically the whole world is watching him and only the fact that he holding on to his own word and own rules makes them be able to sleep at night. It was said that at least Gesellschaft is on the edge according to chapter 33.
Chapter 33 said:
"As do I." Kaiser agreed. "On more serious business, what can we expect from Gesellschaft with respect to the current situation?"

James frowned behind his mask. "I'm afraid they are likely to be fairly reserved in their support." He saw the shift in his friend's eyes and elaborated. "Please understand, these are people who have lived under the threat of the Blasphemies for years. The prospect of another Mad Scientist tinker on an unpredictable trajectory has them on edge."
So he cannot just act with a lot less care as that will inevitable create a lot of panic and people probably make many stupid decisions across the organizations that is watching him.
 
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I don't know, at this point he should easily be able to deal with Noelle and Bakuda's nonsense. He's already exploring other dimensions, he's got multiple literal godlike powers, his new upgrade from Asura's Wrath could let him survive in an event horizon, he has multiple unchained AI helping him, and his endless building upgrades means that anything he makes at this point should take seconds at most. As for the Passengers sure the author can make them as strong as he wants, but then it runs into the dumb "Frodo gets a lightsaber, Sauron gets the Death Star" trope.

When Apeiron finally can unleash his best he will be ready for all organizations in the world's response to him fooling precognition powers and behavior models. He said this chapter that he will do it at the latest one week later, as its Coil who primary makes it so that Apeiron needs to hold into his mercenary persona.

My only worry is that it's already taken nearly 1.5 million words for this first week. I also refuse to believe that none of the AIs or godlike beings on his team aren't already tracking Coil. They surpassed Coil a long while back.
 
Okay, looks like my reply will be a bit messy. I apologize in advance for it.

Bakuda and remnants of the ABB is playing Whac-A-Mole with Apeiron. He can crush them but he needs to find them first. You read that they had gotten Dodge's pocket dimension tech and that they are careful of their cybersecurity. So their soon to be released magic divine stealth spy drones will cover the city to search for his opponents while Survey searches the web.


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By this I mean that in canon it wasn't even broken despite having weeks to do it (I think it was three weeks). Apeiron will be will be able to do it with his new computer.

If you check on VS Battles on Zion and Warrior Entity you'll see that it has exceptional abilities. In canon it wasn't overpowered, it let itself be defeated.

People aren't going to line themselves up to fight a fruitless battle against Apeiron. If they are going to line up they will be either having something they think they can use against him or use tactics to avoid fighting him directly.


So parahuman powers and passangers is very strong. Despite having something like a powerplant from a starship it only managed to alter a parahuman power a little.

This means that passengers and powers is a real deal. They are powerful and have many different expressions of it.

To quote LR's in a comment from Lisa's Interlude.

And another quote.

With this I mean that sure Apeiron has enough firepower and almost overpower anything in the world. But he doesn't have enough information, leverage or enough technology to do it without massive potential collateral damage.

When Apeiron finally can unleash his best he will be ready for all organizations in the world response to him fooling precognition powers and behavior models. He said this chapter that he will do it at the latest one week later, as its Coil who primary makes it so that Apeiron needs to hold into his mercenary persona.

Practically the whole world is watching him and only the fact that he holding on to his own word and own rules makes them be able to sleep at night. It was said that at least Gesellschaft is on the edge according to chapter 33.

So he cannot just act with a lot less care as that will inevitable create a lot of panic and people probably make many stupid decisions across the organizations that is watching him.
I thought VS battles was like, infamous in the fictional character vs fictional character fights community for being inaccurate and bad or something?
 
I don't know, at this point he should easily be able to deal with Noelle and Bakuda's nonsense.

Noelle yes, through nobody knows it yet. His pyromancy is strong enough she can't touch him. No touch, no clone. Noelle is still a major brute even without her cloning, but that's not really a danger to someone of Joe's caliber.

That will be resolved as soon as Lisa scan Noelle.

Bakuda no. Her dead man switch is explicitely a megaproject that was called impossible by Dragon. It was built with the full support of her shard, so it's a challenge even for Joe.

Joe is getting there due to the spiritron computer (that will be finish tomorrow in story), but he still have to crack the damn thing after getting the computer. It might take him a few days, unless... well, Lord said that any 600 CP reverse engineering perk will let Joe near-instantly finish.
 
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I don't know, at this point he should easily be able to deal with Noelle and Bakuda's nonsense. He's already exploring other dimensions, he's got multiple literal godlike powers, his new upgrade from Asura's Wrath could let him survive in an event horizon, he has multiple unchained AI helping him, and his endless building upgrades means that anything he makes at this point should take seconds at most. As for the Passengers sure the author can make them as strong as he wants, but then it runs into the dumb "Frodo gets a lightsaber, Sauron gets the Death Star" trope.

About Bakuda; I've already made several examples both in-story and LR's wogs.
About Noelle:
Multiple LR quotes about Noelle and C53 treatment said:
Noel is a very dangerous prospect for Joe to even approach. Additionally there are more issues with that application in that it's less an out of control power and more a shard driving 95% of the body and power. She's also the hardest monstrous cape to treat short of Ash Beast, and that's not even getting into the mess of what an accidental clone of Joe would look like.
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6 Tybalt's clones would 'only' be normal Felynes with some of his skills and knowledge, though that's not exactly a relief. Remember that Palicoes can meaningfully contribute in fights against the kind of things you see in Monster Hunter. A swarm of clones Felynes is going to be a serious threat even if they lack all of Tybalt's powers.
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(pre 600 pointers Magitech perk)
Physical aspects of Case 53s would largely be trivial at this point, but the factor of their powers would be the challenging aspect, particularly if they have some form of ability expressed through their philology. Some of the worse off Case 53s are basically held together by their power, often in ways that don't have a biological mechanism that can be interacted with. Those would be difficult to heal, or to make sure any healing sticks or doesn't spiral off into some new variation.
Chapter 103 wog said:
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Thank you, corrected.

A number of people have raised the possibility of Joe using remote drones as a way to deal with Noelle. The problem with that is that you only get one chance, and you'll be going against the Travelers. The Travelers aren't a soft target. Lisa doesn't know that Joe's suits are made out of divinely crafted impossible metals, but she does know that Sundancer can destroy just about anything when she gets serious with her power. She knows the range and versatility that Genesis can bring into play, how much firepower Ballistic can put out, and how Trickster can turn any tactical situation into a nightmare. And, possibly most significantly, she knows how powerful Noelle is. If Joe's attack doesn't instantly take her and the rest of the team down then you're looking at a rampage, a very bad one since their last hope was just squashed. Maybe Noelle won't get the Celestial Forge, but is she cuts loose and starts churning out clones of the other Brockton capes she can reach it will still be a disaster.

Additionally, Lisa is not susposed to be acting perfectly rationally here. There's a difference between not being stupid and still being subject to stress, biases, and emotional concerns. One of the main reasons Lisa wants Joe to hold back is so that SHE can be proactive. Her power is working again, meaning she can actually understand and influence the situation, something that wasn't available to her when March was active.

Another important thing to remember is the actual timeframe here. It has been one day since the summit. A single day. Lisa is asking for a few more days to be able to build a strategy to properly deal with the situation. Since that situation isn't currently volatile, it's not an unreasonable request. I know the pacing of the chapters compared to the passage of time skews things for readers, but that doesn't change the rate at which thing are happening for people in the story. With daily check-ins and the advantage of the scanner things will be closing on the Noelle issue, they will just take time to play out.

Additionally, I really hate the idiot ball trope being thrown around. It's somwhat justified in cases where people suddenly forget their powers, where key details of the plot are overlooked, where highly suspicious characters are suddenly trusting, or for other contrivances. The problem is it tends to get brough up whenever a character's flaws are impacting the story in a manner that readers don't like. I have had to field and excessive amount of accusations regarding that particular trope, so I am not at all well-disposed to it. That said, I do acknowledge the significance of it. If someone is raising that as an issue, then they are really highlighting the fact that their suspension of disbelief is being compromised. They're seeing things in terms of intended plot structure, rather than cause and effect and character interactions. I understand where the reference came from, but please, actually explain specific concerns rather than cite that trope because it is, by its very nature, extremely insulting to authors.

Frankly, Joe saying something to the effect of "Ha, no." and immediately mounting up would be more out of character than his decision to temporarily indulge Lisa's concerns. I know everyone wants to see Joe step up and solve every problem by cutting loose, but you need to remember, once Joe starts acting overtly, there's no going back. That kicking the hornets' next and he will not be able to stop until some form of equilibrium is reached. Even if he tries to step back, the reaction isn't going to die down and will probably just be worse without his direct involvement. It also means once he takes one major action he needs to be ready to follow up on every other outstanding problem he has to deal with, and not all of them can be resolved with overwhelming force. Given the level of response that overt actions are guaranteed to provoke, Joe making sure he is prepared for the major threats and has the resources to deal with the fallout makes sense, particularly since you are talking about a span (in story) of a few days. It's reasonable to not want to have to deal with Bakuda's hostages, Dragon's mastering, the Teeth, and Noelle all at the same time.

I'm sorry if this came across as confrontational, and I want you to know I greatly appreciate your consistent and incredibly work in proofreading the chapters. I am hoping that this was more of a miscommunication issue connected to impressions of the chapter rather than some fundamental and unresolvable frustration with the story. Really, going forward, all I promise is to try to be as receptive to criticism as possible.

Its hardly "multiple dimensions", it's actually Shardspace. Sure its another dimension but multiple dimensions is an exaggeration.
My only worry is that it's already taken nearly 1.5 million words for this first week. I also refuse to believe that none of the AIs or godlike beings on his team aren't already tracking Coil.
They surpassed Coil a long while back.
Its valid concerns regarding that you don't want this to take too long.
Now you're exaggerating if you mean that it has been 1.5 million words for one week since chapter 1 until now.
Joe just talked to Survey this chapter that she should let Coil has his peace until Tattletale gets back to him. Is this a smart move? No. Is this a good move? No. Is this an efficient move? Also no.

It's not only just Coil that they need to build up against. When Apeiron & Celestial Forge moves against Coil, then the big organizations will realize that he can't be predicted by precogs and thinkers.
This will result in a massive disruptive event across the globe with a massive amount of people scrambling to enact countermeasures against him.
The moment he makes his move he will need to be able to resolve multiple problems like; Dragon, Butcher, Noelle, Coil, ABB, Bakuda's deadman switch, Protectorate, Leet's Megaproject and possible other minor problems.


I thought VS battles was like, infamous in the fictional character vs fictional character fights community for being inaccurate and bad or something?
Well, I admit I meant this page
Scion (Worm)
If I wish to get an understanding about different powerlevels. Of course wogs and in-story text is better but when you don't want to scour the web for 8 year old wogs, its good enough.
I didn't mean the VS Battles section between different fictional characters. I avoid that section so I was unaware of its reputation.

In-story Scion destroyed several Earths in the final battle and it wasn't even serious. So its upper limit is somewhere above that.
 
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Speaking about Noelle, could she clone Tetra? Or would she be (most likely) drained to death the moment she absorbs her?
 
Speaking about Noelle, could she clone Tetra? Or would she be (most likely) drained to death the moment she absorbs her?
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I had a thought. If Joe does get Noelled and he has Tetra attached to him, what would happen? Would she spit out a Tetra clone or would Tetra proceed to completely absorb all of the life energy that Noelle has? After all as far as I can remember she can only clone humans so that might give Tetra the chance. Just a thought if I am wrong in my assumption please point it out.
Wog:
This is something I'm divided on. Life fibers can be genetically altered, so they should be able to be cloned. At the same time, they are such an unusual lifeform I am inclined to believe that Noel's shard wouldn't know what to do with them. Noelle can clone animals and insects, but isn't cloning viruses or fungal spores. It also assumes that there is some kind of evolved form that the shard would be able to shift the life fibers into, and that doesn't make sense with the fibers being all about evolution themselves. I would say the fibers are too out of context for Noelle to do anything with them.

So its too OOC for Noelle.
 
Just a thought. Let's say that during the period of Worms how long timeskip Joe gets a long period of free time to work on projects. He decides to turn the Dyson Sphere into a Spiritron Matrioshka Brain. How powerful would it be and what kind of bullshit do you think he could accomplish with it?
 
Just a thought. Let's say that during the period of Worms how long timeskip Joe gets a long period of free time to work on projects. He decides to turn the Dyson Sphere into a Spiritron Matrioshka Brain. How powerful would it be and what kind of bullshit do you think he could accomplish with it?
Even IF the DS exists (which I still insist it does not), even with his construction speed, it would still take him years if not decades of constant work.
As for power, maybe something on the Xeelee level.
 
Even IF the DS exists (which I still insist it does not), even with his construction speed, it would still take him years if not decades of constant work.
As for power, maybe something on the Xeelee level.
According to Ao3 WOG, the Dyson Sphere does exist... but it exists in the way background details of a videogame level exist. It's there, but Joe can't interact with it.

Lord Roustabout on Ao3 said:
7. The Dyson Sphere exists, but doesn't add any accessible space. It definitely exists because the perk specifically states that it does, but Joe didn't just get a 1 AU radius worth of additional space and 550 million planets worth of surface area. (That's also getting into the difference between a Dyson Sphere and a Dyson Shell, but it's clear what the perk meant) Basically, Joe has a star that he definitely owns and gets all the energy from in a useable form, but can't actually interact with.
Sort of like having an NFT, only it's actually useful.
Joe has enough extra senses to be aware of the star and the collection apparatus, but he can't modify or upgrade them in any way. On the plus side, the star is fiat backed to never deplete and he's receiving all the energy at 100% efficiency.
 
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