Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

There was some heavy discussion regarding Riley and the Slaughterhouse Nine. I'm not going to reopen that, but what I will say is the challenge of rehabilitating Riley is severely undersold in most fics. Riley isn't six anymore, she's twelve. She's spend half of her life doing horrible things with the Slaughterhouse Nine. Even setting aside Jack's telepath power, she's had to build a mindset that allowed her to function in that environment. That's not something she's just going to snap out of. In canon it took Contessa's interference and two years of personal growth to begin to break free, and even then she still launched the Slaughterhouse 9000 before turning around. Just taking her away from Jack isn't going to snap her out of her mindset, and it's very hard to help someone who doesn't want to change. Riley's ability to function is based on the mentality she built up as a member of the Nine. The process of breaking that down in painful and devastating and without the advantage of the specific circumstances afforded by canon and the PtV is likely to be very messy.

Someone wanting to 'save' Riley has their work cut out for them. It is also a very dangerous prospect, and if even one innocent person gets hurt during the process you have to call the entire endeavor into question. Most people can't hope to effectively contain Riley long enough to have any hope of making progress. Joe can, and Joe is probably one of the few people who could counter her well enough to actually say there is no chance she will hurt anyone else. It will still be a nightmarish process to try to walk her back from her current mindset, but it would be possible. What I meant with my earlier statements is that Joe is likely to focus on helping Bonesaw's victims before he took on the monster of a task that is Riley's psychology. At the very least those people would want help and wouldn't be fighting him every step of the way. Also, Joe does not need her. He already is beyond her in terms of medicine and cybernetics. Joe neither wants nor needs Bonesaw on his team. If he does save Riley her future isn't membership in the Celestial Forge, it's proper medication and intuitional care until she can handle society again
there is a fic in QQ called Predatory where the MC fixed Riley by erasing her memories until she was back to 6 years old, they then put themselves in a simulation(that only lasted a few minutes in real time) where they raised Riley until she was 12 while slowly telling her who she really was and what happened over years in the simulation.
 
there is a fic in QQ called Predatory where the MC fixed Riley by erasing her memories until she was back to 6 years old, they then put themselves in a simulation(that only lasted a few minutes in real time) where they raised Riley until she was 12 while slowly telling her who she really was and what happened over years in the simulation.
While that's a way of solving the problem, I doubt it's one that Joe would personally do, as it would both require memory manipulation and significant investment into someone he doesn't deeply care about.
 
He might find himself overwhelmed by the sheer variety of threats that he'd need to mitigate, and definitely try applying hard pressure against a few of them and make the whole situation worse, but for other ones even he couldn't delude himself into thinking that he had a monopoly of force in that situation. Maybe if he had a few departments worth of forces on hand but thaaat's not happening to for Brookton Bay no matter how bad the situation gets. They could lose the very land the place was built upon and it still wouldn't be worth it.
Actually, he is canonically in charge of a nanite swarm based quarantine zone best known as the Machine Army which only stopped where it did due to maintenance concerns for it. The city within his zone looks normal. He has every bird who flies up to the wall shot on principle because there is nothing organic left in his zone, and that is the only way to stay safe.
 
there is a fic in QQ called Predatory where the MC fixed Riley by erasing her memories until she was back to 6 years old, they then put themselves in a simulation(that only lasted a few minutes in real time) where they raised Riley until she was 12 while slowly telling her who she really was and what happened over years in the simulation.
And that's exactly what counter-brainwashing is. Something that Joe really doesn't like. That being said, idea with simulation as environment for therapy sessions sounds actually pretty neat and allows to handle all kinds of dangerous people. Memory erasing is highly questionable though.
 
It might cheapen the ability somewhat, but for the sake of the story I'm only writing time travel involving stable time loops. No multiverse theory, no rubber banding changes to the past, no fixed points or timey wimey. Even if you have the rules completely locked down time travel can eat a story. For the purposes of the Damaged Microchip it's stuck on the mechanics of the first Terminator movie. Any changes to the past have already happened, predestination paradoxes are fine, but they're baked in and unchangeable. Joe can still go to the past, it's just any changes he makes will have already happened.
Does this exclude the possibility of Joe going back in time, faking the corpse of someone who was supposed to die, like say, Hero for the Protectorate or Annette for Taylor, and bringing them to the present as a rescue? It wouldn't cause any paradoxes and would fall into the category of closed loop time travel.
 
Does this exclude the possibility of Joe going back in time, faking the corpse of someone who was supposed to die, like say, Hero for the Protectorate or Annette for Taylor, and bringing them to the present as a rescue? It wouldn't cause any paradoxes and would fall into the category of closed loop time travel.
That certainly won't help rumours of Aperion courting Kepri.

"Some people buy flowers for their girlfriends, but no, Aperion goes and resurrects his crush's mother! How are us normal guys supposed to compete with that?!" - Some guy, somewhere.
 
Does this exclude the possibility of Joe going back in time, faking the corpse of someone who was supposed to die, like say, Hero for the Protectorate or Annette for Taylor, and bringing them to the present as a rescue? It wouldn't cause any paradoxes and would fall into the category of closed loop time travel.
If you are going to do that for one person then why not everyone?
 
Joe can already resurrect capes theoretically. Not sure about time travel working that way given that terminator time travel in this fic would probably be limited to closed time loops if it ever gets used.
I do remember a Harry Potter fanfic that may have been written by Perfect Lionheart. It included Professor Trelawny time traveling to save all the magical folk that died in Voldemorts first go by replacing their bodies with fake simulacrums, and moving the real people to an isolated island nation to wait until the time travel begins before interacting with the world.

I believe this idea is closer to Avengers endgame with bringing lost people back in the present. I will say though, so long as the Simurgh lives, I would rather not be raised from death in Worm.
 
If you are going to do that for one person then why not everyone?
Joe can already resurrect capes theoretically.
It's similar to what Ciara does in canon to revive capes anyhow.

The thing is, both methodologies for reviving parahumans are mutually exclusive. If Joe could revive a parahuman by using time travel as described to fake their death and bringing them to the present, they would naturally not be in the "shard afterlife" where souls are kept semi-intact inside shards. Therefore, in a hypothetical post epilogue where Joe is reviving capes left and right via manipulating the shard afterlife (or maybe even pre-epilogue, as a way of reviving the right people to take down Scion), he could stumble upon a person who, curiously enough, should have their soul in their shard like everyone else, but said shard remains empty as though the person in question isn't actually dead.

Investigating it further could reveal the presence of a time travel closed-loop where Joe goes back in time to save said person by faking their death and bringing them to the present, because the only way a parahuman could be "dead" and not have their soul stored is by them not dying in the first place. And if it's confirmed that they are indeed "dead" as far as the timeline goes, despite not being actually dead, then the answer there is closed loop time travel.
 
I do remember a Harry Potter fanfic that may have been written by Perfect Lionheart. It included Professor Trelawny time traveling to save all the magical folk that died in Voldemorts first go by replacing their bodies with fake simulacrums, and moving the real people to an isolated island nation to wait until the time travel begins before interacting with the world.

Ugh I remember that one. Fairly sure you are right, its by PL. And if I remember correctly its also one of those where every 95% of the named female characters in the series ends up essentially "consenting" to be mind controlled to be in Harry's harem. Some of whom were mind controlled years or decades earlier and replaced with simulacrums to play out their parts and not break the timeline.
 
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Ugh I remember that one. Fairly sure you are right, its by PL. And if I remember correctly its also one of those where every 95% of the named female characters in the series ends up essentially "consenting" to be mind controlled to be in Harry's harem. Some of whom were mind controlled years or decades earlier and replaced with simulacrums to play out their parts and not break the timeline.
Who's Perfect Lionheart?
 
Ugh I remember that one. Fairly sure you are right, its by PL. And if I remember correctly its also one of those where every 95% of the named female characters in the series ends up essentially "consenting" to be mind controlled to be in Harry's harem. Some of whom were mind controlled years or decades earlier and replaced with simulacrums to play out their parts and not break the timeline.
Yeah, now that you mention it, I do remember that happening. Also Harry getting mentally modified to consent to having a harem. I remember it being an odd combination of cartoonishly evil Dumbledore and Snape, with protagonists being left with no other option than massive violence. And characters have two mental states 'good' support protagonists and 'evil' do not support protagonists. And the idea that if you throw enough money around you can buy sovereignty.

Edit: and with that I am going to go back to never thinking about this again if I can.
 
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Who's Perfect Lionheart?
A weirdo who doesn't need to be discussed any further.
How about we stop that line of discussion all together.
It's similar to what Ciara does in canon to revive capes anyhow.

The thing is, both methodologies for reviving parahumans are mutually exclusive. If Joe could revive a parahuman by using time travel as described to fake their death and bringing them to the present, they would naturally not be in the "shard afterlife" where souls are kept semi-intact inside shards. Therefore, in a hypothetical post epilogue where Joe is reviving capes left and right via manipulating the shard afterlife (or maybe even pre-epilogue, as a way of reviving the right people to take down Scion), he could stumble upon a person who, curiously enough, should have their soul in their shard like everyone else, but said shard remains empty as though the person in question isn't actually dead.

Investigating it further could reveal the presence of a time travel closed-loop where Joe goes back in time to save said person by faking their death and bringing them to the present, because the only way a parahuman could be "dead" and not have their soul stored is by them not dying in the first place. And if it's confirmed that they are indeed "dead" as far as the timeline goes, despite not being actually dead, then the answer there is closed loop time travel.
This would be a great idea, if only that the predetermination paradox is fucky because time travel only happens because time travel happened before. Like, technically this happens in Terminator with Skynet being based on the Skynet in the terminator remnants, but like... This would be a lot more recursive than that.
Alternatively, Joe simply never opens that box, not trusting himself or anyone else with such power.
 
This would be a great idea, if only that the predetermination paradox is fucky because time travel only happens because time travel happened before. Like, technically this happens in Terminator with Skynet being based on the Skynet in the terminator remnants, but like... This would be a lot more recursive than that.
Except, we did just get WoG confirmation that while the time travel is limited to closed loops, predestination paradox is a non-issue. Honestly, in the first place, predestination paradox is just another extension of the law of conservation (specifically, conservation of information, where information can neither be created nor destroyed with a lot of debates involving blackholes), so it wouldn't be the last time Joe broke rules of reality like that through fiat anyway.
 
Joe can already resurrect capes theoretically. Not sure about time travel working that way given that terminator time travel in this fic would probably be limited to closed time loops if it ever gets used.

It's similar to what Ciara does in canon to revive capes anyhow.

The thing is, both methodologies for reviving parahumans are mutually exclusive. If Joe could revive a parahuman by using time travel as described to fake their death and bringing them to the present, they would naturally not be in the "shard afterlife" where souls are kept semi-intact inside shards. Therefore, in a hypothetical post epilogue where Joe is reviving capes left and right via manipulating the shard afterlife (or maybe even pre-epilogue, as a way of reviving the right people to take down Scion), he could stumble upon a person who, curiously enough, should have their soul in their shard like everyone else, but said shard remains empty as though the person in question isn't actually dead.

Investigating it further could reveal the presence of a time travel closed-loop where Joe goes back in time to save said person by faking their death and bringing them to the present, because the only way a parahuman could be "dead" and not have their soul stored is by them not dying in the first place. And if it's confirmed that they are indeed "dead" as far as the timeline goes, despite not being actually dead, then the answer there is closed loop time travel.

This would be a great idea, if only that the predetermination paradox is fucky because time travel only happens because time travel happened before. Like, technically this happens in Terminator with Skynet being based on the Skynet in the terminator remnants, but like... This would be a lot more recursive than that.
Alternatively, Joe simply never opens that box, not trusting himself or anyone else with such power.

There seems to be a missing factor in these hypotheticals that should be raised, moving a parahuman through time does not move the shard as well. Chucking Hero through a Terminator time machine buck naked (as you do) is your prerogative, but we can't assume a shard will be kosher about the displacement. We see in canon what happened to one of Bakudas time bomb victims once he came out of it, Dauntless before he turns into a Titan, and while most of it had to do with Scion being dead and the network a mess, his shard knew he wasn't dead and kept building charges while he was stuck. There's no knowing how a Cauldron cape will turn out if they get grabbed for imminent temporal shenanigans, but a natural trigger might just have a buildup of energy they can't control once they're dropped off, if they don't just drop dead from the shard moving to a new host instead.

I don't know how to make that Dauntless part a spoiler thing, so sorry about that if you wanted to read Ward. Also there has been no instance of a time jump being used to go back to their point of origin in the Terminator series, that was part of what made time travel a closed time loop to my understanding.
 
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@dragon_cloud16 mind if I use your omakes for the PHO thread?
Oh no you absolutely SHOULD DO IT!!! DO IT! DO IT!!!

If you remember on a earlier posting of one of them I actually already had given permission for people to do a PHO thread response to them.

If anything, I would also love it if people in the thread commented with a member of the Celestial Forge joining in to complain about that rule. Such as Survey complaining on what else she is supposed to do in restaurants since they don't cook as good as Apeiron. Or Fleet wanting to challenge Assault to Battleship with him accepting it only for someone in the PRT or Protectorate to put the foot down against it.

I actually have ideas for the next set involving Lethe, Proto Aima, Matrix, and Tybalt as well. With possible extensions for Survey and Fleet as well.
 
@CorEagle seeing as @dragon_cloud16 has given his go ahead, feel free to use my additions as well.

@dragon_cloud16
27. I am not now, nor will I ever be in possession of two copies of the world's longest wedding dress, and they do not go all the way to Los Angeles.
28. No member of the Celestial Forge was involved in the construction of the world's longest wedding dress, and I did not allow Garment to use life fibers and/or colors which don't exist in its construction.
29. I also do not possess a flower girl's outfit in the Simurgh's measurements.
30. No wedding invitations have been sent out, and there is no wedding taking place on the moon at the end of the month.
@dragon_cloud16 Why thank you. Also
1. I did not give Scion an Everlasting Gobstopper, and it did not make him cry tears of joy.
2. Everlasting Gobstoppers don't generate matter ex nihilo, and I cannot make them.
 
Except, we did just get WoG confirmation that while the time travel is limited to closed loops, predestination paradox is a non-issue. Honestly, in the first place, predestination paradox is just another extension of the law of conservation (specifically, conservation of information, where information can neither be created nor destroyed with a lot of debates involving blackholes), so it wouldn't be the last time Joe broke rules of reality like that through fiat anyway.
Yeah, thinking about it all predestination paradoxes are recursive. That isn't an issue. I can actually kinda imagine a scene with Joe explaining it
"I don't get it, why is this necessary?"
"Because I brought him into the future."
"Why though? Why didn't that future you just resurrect him?"
"Because he couldn't, because he never died."
"But... why?"
"There is no why. This is just the way things are. An Apeiron always kidnaps Hero to the future, and so Apeiron has to kidnap Hero from the past. Endless loop with no origin or end."
"That is..."
"A mess? Absolutely. But it's a stable mess."
There seems to be a missing factor in these hypotheticals that should be raised, moving a parahuman through time does not move the shard as well. Chucking Hero through a Terminator time machine buck naked (as you do) is your prerogative, but we can't assume a shard will be kosher about the displacement. We see in canon what happened to one of Bakudas time bomb victims once he came out of it, Dauntless before he turns into a Titan, and while most of it had to do with Scion being dead and the network a mess, his shard knew he wasn't dead and kept building charges while he was stuck. There's no knowing how a Cauldron cape will turn out if they get grabbed for imminent temporal shenanigans, but a natural trigger might just have a buildup of energy they can't control once they're dropped off, if they don't just drop dead from the shard moving to a new host instead.

I don't know how to make that Dauntless part a spoiler thing, so sorry about that if you wanted to read Ward. Also there has been no instance of a time jump being used to go back to their point of origin in the Terminator series, that was part of what made time travel a closed time loop to my understanding.
This is an issue. Many of these shards may have gotten new hosts via budding or the like. Backups exist but the shard may not like running two powers at once. This issue would persist even if Joe just resurrects from Shardspace, though, so yeah it's weird.

An alternative idea to Time Travel would be Joe causing Eden to crash land and taking her mind out of the shard, and placing her in a human body(well, at least externally) on earth bet to live there for the next 30 years. Maybe then, with a human perspective, she could convince Zion to stop? IDK. It's a shot in the dark.
 
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