Huh. I thought Orchestrating the Silence ended with the two of them in a pretty good place, and I remember Ravist mentions he'd wanted to write an M rated fic where they didn't even kiss, in favor of the emotional development. It'll be interesting to see where you take it.


Oh, maybe something kinda like the Epilogue of Evangelion doujin?

well, as the emotional development was already pretty much set for where I started, so I just let my mind wander... not sure id be able to post it without spoilering out some of the developmental parts of the story, for maturity sake. some scenes are very adult themed... I just took what Ravist left on the table, and went my own way with it. gendo and yui take pride in being grandparents, gendo doing so without being forced to by yui. lots of introspection. it's chock full of WAFFy goodness, almost to the point it may need some darkness to balance it out (had some at one point, but wrote it out because it was too dark). all in all I think its a great fic, but i'm biased. not finished yet either, as the project I am working on for profit has taken priority, as I plan on putting $$ into it, being a from the ground up fiction story and all, i'm shooting for amazon, iTunes, and barnes and noble for sales points on it.

Don't know. WAFFy story and all, but I don't like how it mostly ignores post-apocalyptic survival and some of the implications the narration brings.

never read it, so I don't have anything to go by in reference.

once I get the last 2 chapters finished, i'll be looking for beta's, then I will figure out the whole posting thing. it's standard novel format, so 4-7k words/chapter, and it's at around 125k words currently. it really was a test run for seeing if I could keep the patience long enough to write a legit novel, the only bad part was that the idea for the real novel came before I was done with brand new day.

Edit to clear my reply out of the quoted text. a tad too eager to reply I guess.
 
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You're thinking of Higher Learning. Except Kaworu's not an Angel, he's... Well, that would be a spoiler.

Now I'm picturing Older! A&T pilot cast waking up in Canon Tokyo-3 but as like... teachers. With cover identities... or something.

Shinji: OK OK... I'm a music teacher I can handle that.
Asuka: and High School physics are nothing for me but what about you know... making sure we fix the timeline!
Shinji: Are we sure this is *our* timeline maybe this is the one from the weird laserdiscs!?
Asuka: Oh man then we have SOO much to fix... wait where's Ariel?!
Ariel: Mama... why is my room different?
Asuka: oh thank god

ummm.....

Shinji: Music
Asuka: Science
Kaworu: English
Rei: Math
Toji: Gym
Hikari: Japanese

Misato: ... Principal :p
 
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Now I'm picturing Older! A&T pilot cast waking up in Canon Tokyo-3 but as like... teachers. With cover identities... or something.

Shinji: OK OK... I'm a music teacher I can handle that.
Asuka: and High School physics are nothing for me but what about you know... making sure we fix the timeline!
Shinji: Are we sure this is *our* timeline maybe this is the one from the weird laserdiscs!?
Asuka: Oh man then we have SOO much to fix... wait where's Ariel?!
Ariel: Mama... why is my room different?
Asuka: oh thank god

ummm.....

Shinji: Music
Asuka: Science
Kaworu: English
Rei: Math
Toji: Gym
Hikari: Japanese

Misato: ... Principal :p

Misato's cooking more than proves her suitability for the Chemistry class and you know it.
 
Misato's cooking more than proves her suitability for the Chemistry class and you know it.
That'd only be if she did it on purpose.
So maybe if Misato is purposely trying to do chemistry, she'd whip up a decent curry instead?

If you need any goat meat or angel flavoring, you know who to ask :whistle:
HA! In the Neon Genesis Evangelion Angelic Days manga Misato is a teacher that teaches cooking as she's actually VERY good at it.:D
 
Now I'm picturing Older! A&T pilot cast waking up in Canon Tokyo-3 but as like... teachers. With cover identities... or something.

Shinji: OK OK... I'm a music teacher I can handle that.
Asuka: and High School physics are nothing for me but what about you know... making sure we fix the timeline!
Shinji: Are we sure this is *our* timeline maybe this is the one from the weird laserdiscs!?
Asuka: Oh man then we have SOO much to fix... wait where's Ariel?!
Ariel: Mama... why is my room different?
Asuka: oh thank god

ummm.....

Shinji: Music
Asuka: Science
Kaworu: English
Rei: Math
Toji: Gym
Hikari: Japanese

Misato: ... Principal :p
I... actually I don't got this one, but I still gotchu fam. Read In Tune; first half's waaaaaay better than the second half imo but it does pull it off. Classic case of the setup being more fun than the explanation.

HA! In the Neon Genesis Evangelion Angelic Days manga Misato is a teacher that teaches cooking as she's actually VERY good at it.:D
You'll also remember she doesn't do any of the cooking herself! :V
 
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Now I'm picturing Older! A&T pilot cast waking up in Canon Tokyo-3 but as like... teachers. With cover identities... or something.

Shinji: OK OK... I'm a music teacher I can handle that.
Asuka: and High School physics are nothing for me but what about you know... making sure we fix the timeline!
Shinji: Are we sure this is *our* timeline maybe this is the one from the weird laserdiscs!?
Asuka: Oh man then we have SOO much to fix... wait where's Ariel?!
Ariel: Mama... why is my room different?
Asuka: oh thank god

ummm.....

Shinji: Music
Asuka: Science
Kaworu: English
Rei: Math
Toji: Gym
Hikari: Japanese

Misato: ... Principal :p

Waittttt... of ALL the possible girls' names their daughter could have, it's the one that sounds just like, and is equivalent to, ARAEL??

Asuka. You watched those laserdiscs. WHY.
 
R: "This was fun."
M: "We have odd definitions of fun, don't we?"

Guy, I think we just found the perfect motto for the board :rofl:


M: "Getting fucked by an Ikari? In what senses do you mean?"
R: "Both."
M: "So both you and your mother got shafted by an Ikari."
R: "In both senses, yes.

R: "...You're enjoying this aren't you?"
M: :whistle:


...apparently she was in Vegas for a vacation,

*Cough cough*

You're smart, make some magic Romulan Ale so you can get drunk without the hangover

*Cough cough*


"Something must be causing these anomalous materials to appear in our world."

Yog-Sothoth: "They're onto us Shub."


"...there's someone else in there. With my mother."

"...do you know who, Shinji?"

"...father."

 
Ouch.

Was that Kaworu? I thought he was one of Shinji and Asuka's grandkids.
You are correct.

Also no one's actually linked it so! It's called Higher Learning, by Strike Fiss, which probably codified the Peggy Sue concept in Eva despite breaking two of the concept's major genre conventions.

(PS Holding Hands 1 and 2 are better, and to this day are tied with Phoenix Rising for best and most believable AxS romance in the fandom. PPS If anyone knows where Phoenix is archived, PM me and thank you).
 
(PS Holding Hands 1 and 2 are better, and to this day are tied with Phoenix Rising for best and most believable AxS romance in the fandom. PPS If anyone knows where Phoenix is archived, PM me and thank you).

Sent you a PM.

I have Phoenix Rising saved on my computer. It was originally mispelled as 'Pheonix' Rising, so that probably wouldn't have helped your search.

If anybody else wants it, PM me.
 
Man, Higher Learning, that's a name I haven't heard in a long time. I used to be on Strike Fiss' forums and things but i kinda dropped off and lost contact with everyone there.

Holding Hands still a best tho.
 
I don't understand why Holding Hands is the best and most believable AxS. Well it's pretty good and I still like it overall but ...

Asuka provoke him.
Shinji beats Asuka.

And 2nd round...

Asuka provoke him.
Shinji beats Asuka.
Asuka can now love him because he grew a spine.

And then there is my reaction: ??? What? Why?
It seems like fandom really like that idea but I really can't grasp why. Entire idea of Asuka accepting beating from him like nothing happened is ridiculous to me.
After that it's great.
 
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Sent you a PM.

I have Phoenix Rising saved on my computer. It was originally mispelled as 'Pheonix' Rising, so that probably wouldn't have helped your search.

If anybody else wants it, PM me.
Yes, thank you! One of my absolute favorite stories.

I don't understand why Holding Hands is the best and most believable AxS. Well it's pretty good and I still like it overall but ...

Asuka provoke him.
Shinji beats Asuka.

And 2nd round...

Asuka provoke him.
Shinji beats Asuka.
Asuka can now love him because he grew a spine.

And then there is my reaction: ??? What? Why?
It seems like fandom really like that idea but I really can't grasp why. Entire idea of Asuka accepting beating from him like nothing happened is ridiculous to me.
After that it's great.
It's something you see a lot in the old Eva fics. Asuka likes Shinji, but she likes the competent & cool Shinji who kills Angels and doesn't afraid of anybody. We know now that it's not true (According to Anno, Asuka likes Shinji's sweetness and is THAT BAD at telling him and gets horrifically jealous/upset if he pays attention to other girls), but it's still all too easy to imagine that Asuka has a specific vision for what she wants in her life partner and is bad enough at communicating to make the budding relationship initially.... unpleasant, shall we say.

The other thing that Holding Hands nails is that canon Asuka and Shinji aren't traditionally good for each other so much as they bring out the best AND the worst of each other. They set up both a virtuous and a vicious cycle where they egg each other on to be better in ways that they need, but also prick precisely at each other's worst traits. A&T shows the virtuous cycle drowning out the vicious cycle before the latter has a chance to really get underway, but in a continuity where that doesn't happen it leads to bad history that needs to be addressed and worked through one way or another.

Beating the shit out of each other is probably the least healthy way of laying to rest years of frustration and mixed signals, but really that just makes it more appropriate. :rolleyes:
 
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Yea beating the shit out of each other don't bother me compared to the fact that Asuka pride let her accept that.
I prefer Phoenix Rising. :p

About AxS :
 
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