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Advice and Trust [NGE]

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Strypgia said:
I speak it fluently. ;v
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And i have a good idea has to how that happened:o.
Prince Charon said:
A two man tent can be made to fit three if they're small, very friendly, or both. Not sure about 'small' relative to Japanese adults at this point, but they are indeed very friendly, and in a quite plausible way.
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There not adults though, so maybe it be more like fitting the equivalent of two people into a two man tent.


Also i got to call bull on Kyouko loosing out on being load. That girl has the loudest voice of the PMMM cast.
 
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Also i got to call bull on Kyouko loosing out on being load. That girl has the loudest voice of the PMMM cast.
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IDK, I still think her Tsundere character gives her a meek kind of voice. Or maybe she saw it better to quiet down after Ken didn't hold back with his feelings. :rofl:

Also, I just realized the similarities with names Kyousuke and Kensuke. Maybe Sayaka being paired with Ken isn't too far off. (Like her being with Kyoko seemed to reflect on name "Kyousuke")
 
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Best savor this feeling, and whatever we get from "Hangover in Vegas"... because the fecal matter hits the rotary impeller once we get back to the main story... We can be fairly certain that the ending of A & T will provide a nice enough cap to things, but alas, the path there is supposed to be rather gripping..
 
BadRoad said:
It's like dakka. "Enough" is less than "too much" and more than you've got. (There's no such thing as too much.)
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"There's no such thing as overkill. There's only "fire", " i need to reload" and "i'm out of ammo"." "There's no such thing as too WAFFy. There's only "i love you", "marry me", "i'm pregnant", and "our child is in love, asked them out, and they said yes"."
 
Fate/Online said:
"There's no such thing as overkill. There's only "fire", " i need to reload" and "i'm out of ammo"." "There's no such thing as too WAFFy. There's only "i love you", "marry me", "i'm pregnant", and "our child is in love, asked them out, and they said yes"."
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You know, I sometimes had been thinking if to take the plot of Certain Magical Index and rewrite it like Advice and Trust, with Touma Kamijou and Mikoto Misaka getting together much earlier and using their collective WAFF to restore back Touma's memories, make Index less bratty, resolve out some weirder plot points in the series, and more.

It's kind of been tempting now and then because I kind of find Index-series little bit too formulaic and sometimes tad aggravating with it's very archetypical characters.
 
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IndyCotton said:
You know, I sometimes hadd been thinking if to take the plot of Certain Magical Index and rewrite it like Advice and Trust, with Touma Kamijou and Mikoto Misaka getting together much earlier and using their collective WAFF to restore back Touma's memories, make Index less bratty, resolve out some weirder plot points in the series, and more.

It's kind of been tempting now and then because I kind of find Index-series little bit too formulaic and sometimes tad aggravating with it's very archetypical characters.
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I would read it.

I'm one of the few people who actually genuinely like the series and both main characters instead of Mikoto.

So, yeah, you already have one guaranteed reader.
 
King Arthur said:
I would read it.

I'm one of the few people who actually genuinely like the series and both main characters instead of Mikoto.

So, yeah, you already have one guaranteed reader.
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The series does have a kind of active fanbase that I've frequented - I just seem to have bit of a picky standards, since the world-building is pretty good (if given overly exposition). So I kind of been wondering if to give this thing a shot - nice to see vocal interest though. My biggest concern however would be where I'd end the story, since the novels keep on being on-going.

But yeah, I certainly am tempted by the power of WAFF to completely change the course of franchises. @Strypgia, you bloody genius. ;)
 
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IndyCotton said:
You know, I sometimes had been thinking if to take the plot of Certain Magical Index and rewrite it like Advice and Trust, with Touma Kamijou and Mikoto Misaka getting together much earlier and using their collective WAFF to restore back Touma's memories, make Index less bratty, resolve out some weirder plot points in the series, and more.

It's kind of been tempting now and then because I kind of find Index-series little bit too formulaic and sometimes tad aggravating with it's very archetypical characters.
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Go for it bro. But check your messages in a few minutes.
 
IndyCotton said:
The series does have a kind of active fanbase that I've frequented - I just seem to have bit of a picky standards, since the world-building is pretty good (if given overly exposition). So I kind of been wondering if to give this thing a shot - nice to see vocal interest though. My biggest concern however would be where I'd end the story, since the novels keep on being on-going.

But yeah, I certainly am tempted by the power of WAFF to completely change the course of franchises. @Strypgia, you bloody genius. ;)
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If you do start it please tag me. I don't check for new stories often.

@Strypgia You are wonderful, thank you for all your hard work.
 
I know the second KSK came out. And I promise I will give my thoughts when I read them both but I think I found Misato's note in the Hangover and some part of me feels compelled to share:
 
IndyCotton said:
You know, I sometimes had been thinking if to take the plot of Certain Magical Index and rewrite it like Advice and Trust, with Touma Kamijou and Mikoto Misaka getting together much earlier and using their collective WAFF to restore back Touma's memories, make Index less bratty, resolve out some weirder plot points in the series, and more.
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If you do it, PM me for beta reading and an invite to a decent Discord so you've got a decent "backup brain" so to speak to help you hash out the brain sweat so all you need to do is write.
 
Strypgia said:
"Sure got myblood going," Kyoko purred from behind him.
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Missing space, there.
Strypgia said:
"I mean... if you'd told me six months ago 'two lesbians want you to jump in a sleeping bag with them and'," he swallowe, "'l-lose your virginity', I'd have thought it was a joke or a fantasy.
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'swallowed'
Strypgia said:
You even agreed to 'date' you when you knew it was just a smokescreen for our parents and friends.
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'us'
7734 said:
first rule of buying a tent is take one man away from the listed capacity!
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Prince Charon said:
A two man tent can be made to fit three if they're small, very friendly, or both. Not sure about 'small' relative to Japanese adults at this point, but they are indeed very friendly, and in a quite plausible way.
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Also, it depends on who you stick in, if they are friendly to each other (as Charon said) and their sleeping habits.

For example, putting Ranma and Ryouga together would make a three man tent too small; for Ranma and Akane, a one man tent would suffice - at least until Akane wakes wrapped around Ranma. :V
 
7734 said:
If you do it, PM me for beta reading and an invite to a decent Discord so you've got a decent "backup brain" so to speak to help you hash out the brain sweat so all you need to do is write.
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This much positive reception and help is quite happily surprising... but don't mind if I do to take on your offer. Hope you've done enough veteran beta writing before too~
 
Ranma-sensei said:
Also, it depends on who you stick in, if they are friendly to each other (as Charon said) and their sleeping habits.

For example, putting Ranma and Ryouga together would make a three man tent too small; for Ranma and Akane, a one man tent would suffice - at least until Akane wakes wrapped around Ranma. :V
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Ranma and Ryouga together in one tent would take an entire freaking barack tent, much less a three man. Thing is, the opposite way you run into the issue of people and their equipment- mostly because two people's gear equals three quarters of a person of space unless you keep it in a backup tent. Now, while they have a backup tent here, I'll choose to believe they have enough collective experiance to bring in the necessities (read, rain gear and spare pants/undies) which is still a fifth of a person in space. This is before you hit tent wall slope issues and the -1 inch rule, too.

IndyCotton said:
This much positive reception and help is quite happily surprising... but don't mind if I do to take on your offer. Hope you've done enough veteran beta writing before too~
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I've waded through some pretty raw stuff, including rough drafts of translations. I think I can handle it, as long as you don't secretly need a proofreader too.
 
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