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One and Many
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Well, Mathilde, the odds of this happening are exactly 0.01%. You can disregard it being coincidence.
Well, Mathilde, the odds of this happening are exactly 0.01%. You can disregard it being coincidence.
Ranald would be the safe sane and sensible option... but there is a part of me that wants to go wizard just to watch the fireworks.
"Broadly correct. It was a Dryad warweald aligned with Coeddil."
He coughs into his flagon and only just manages to keep from propelling some of it across the crowd. "Drycha?"
"Who?"
He blinks at you as he wipes his mouth. "Was it led by an Ulgu Branchwraith?"
"Yes, but I didn't get her name before I cut her in half."
He stares at you for a while, and sighs when he realizes you're serious. "I think we need more kestrels. Can you tell me the full report?"
Giving Paranoth a spittake and having Heidi open up to her friend, co-religionist, and godmother of her child bumps this update up to my top ten overall favorites.You're his godmother, you're a Wizard, and you have a more well-rounded relationship with our God than I do. And you're the only one, apart from Him, that I can talk to about this. Please, give me your advice."
It really isn't. Ranald option risks it all. Wizard Mandred probably won't be Emperor, but Ranaldian anointed Mandred might even lose the title of Grand Prince.
Think this is meant to be 'presenting gifts'.
The 'either' here should probably be removed.which is a strong indication that either the groom has already been selected and there is no need for the engaged couple to get to know each other.
'eyes than hands' doesn't look right.You would rather lose your eyes than hands than your capacity for magic
It really isn't. Ranald option risks it all. Wizard Mandred probably won't be Emperor, but Ranaldian magic-using Mandred might even lose the title of Grand Prince.
The update itself rather puts a hand on the scale when it comes to describing each option. The only big downside Wizard is given is that he won't become Emperor but will still become the Elector Count, and that's not exactly the biggest one considering that it still talks up the benefits. The other options don't really get their benefits talked up and instead get their downsides focused on.
You use "ever since" twice.Drycha has been scouring the continent ever since for magical power ever since, in what we assume is an effort to free him.
You could've at least had the Ranaldite priest present do some talking up of her own side of things.