So to use a real world example rather than arguing about the events of a 6 year quest with discussions I've not read in the 4k pages, I'll refer to russian poisonings.

One spy got poisoned in the UK, it was pretty obvious to everyone it was Russia who'd done it, there was a lot of talk about how this was unacceptable behaviour for a state etc, however nothing was actually done about it. For example, russian plutocrat money, houses, and various other issues of dubious legality were left untouched, the attack was ignored. Fast forward and another spy was poisoned, with collateral damage killing another person. It was widely speculated at the time that because of the feeble response to the first attack there was no deterrent to the second.
.........And that applies to Freddy...how exactly?

Like, sorry, but I think you're completely missing the Point I and others made here. I have no idea how this Russian-Spy-Tale is supposed to apply in any way, shape or form to Frederick and his Actions. It's just not comparable.

This isn't the real world, this is Mallus, and every time Frederick has gone through one of these things successfully it has only increased opinion of him.

Please do not try and equate RL politics and situations with the magical death world.
Basically this.
 
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Could you fix the Kislevan Way choice so we do not go there looking for rumors on purpose. If we stumble across rumors because we are there fine.

As for "Remas Way", "North Miragliano", "Wine Sack", and dealer's market. Just a reminder to organize their placement on the list carefully if you choose to add them. "Remas Way, North Miragliano, and Wine Sack" don't have descriptions and torroar will need to come up with what they hold himself. However, they are basically areas of the city populated by Remas natives, Miragliano natives, and most likely Brettonia natives. Adding them is going outside the choices the QM listed from the map.


As for Dealers Market. Doesn't actually have a description that I found on the wiki. Here's something the QM said about the place.

Done for the Kislev part. Slight edit made.

That information and quote was helpful, thanks.

From the quote it looks like the Palace District would be the place to go for a play. I can put that in as the 'Natasha' action and put it between Dwarf's Hold and Elf Town.

Little Moot
Wine Sack-alcohol sampling/trade, etc.
North Miragliano-alcohol sampling/trade, etc. and learning more of the culture of Tasha's father.
Remas Way-alcohol sampling/trade, etc.
Dwarf Hold

If anyone has any other specific ideas/thoughts for those parts (or if I shouldn't add them at all) please contribute.

Dealers Market would be right after Arabtown. That seems like a place that we could find a bunch of likely gifts at once, so I could adjust that part.

@spudman This is probably nitpicking but torroar has just added a non write in option for Hertwing, so you may want to change your reaction of the pla a bit...

I'm willing to adjust that part. That said, I just added that part in before just because. Do we have a reason to want to talk to Evangeline? She's a family friend, sure, but she's there on business.
 
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@spudman Would you be willing to change the position of the vote [] If you have any energy leftover (and along the way through these other areas) scour the markets for artifacts, technology, flora or fauna that your wizards and engineers might be able to use to improve the lot of Ostland. From its current position until it is just after [] Be on the lookout for gifts for our family. Perhaps look for something ideally wizardly for Adira to show our gratitude, or would that be gauche? Ask Natasha.

I have here my reasoning on why I think it would be significantly more optimal to put that vote there instead that at the end of everything.
I have a suggestion for @spudman whereas I really like your plan I think that we should not put the [] If you have any energy leftover (and along the way through these other areas) scour the markets for artifacts, technology, flora or fauna that your wizards and engineers might be able to use to improve the lot of Ostland at the end of the plan, it should be placed either just before or after [] Be on the lookout for gifts for our family. Perhaps look for something ideally wizardly for Adira to show our gratitude, or would that be gauche? Ask Natasha. ...

My reasoning is that since we have put the action for looking for gifts as one of the first things to do because we plan to search for them as we move along the different districts of marienburg, it would make much more sense to put the action of looking for artifacts, technology, flora or fauna at a similar level of priority to actually search for those things as we travel through the city, instead of leaving that action for last... I mean as it is redacted now it seems like we are traveling though Marienburg and one we are finished we will have to travel through Marienburg again looking for artifacts, technology, flora or fauna.
 
I have no influence on that, but these are the effects I would anticipate given the events previously.



So to use a real world example rather than arguing about the events of a 6 year quest with discussions I've not read in the 4k pages, I'll refer to russian poisonings.

One spy got poisoned in the UK, it was pretty obvious to everyone it was Russia who'd done it, there was a lot of talk about how this was unacceptable behaviour for a state etc, however nothing was actually done about it. For example, russian plutocrat money, houses, and various other issues of dubious legality were left untouched, the attack was ignored. Fast forward and another spy was poisoned, with collateral damage killing another person. It was widely speculated at the time that because of the feeble response to the first attack there was no deterrent to the second.
Wow, reactions are not generous to your post.

Okay, the major factor that makes your concern nonexistent is religion is a major deal in the Empire of Man. Lots of Freddy's major achievements can be linked to religion, few people would scoff at Freddy because religion is a big deal.

Next thing, Freddy is not humble about his achievements. He's done things, there are stories about him doing those things. For many years the populace of Ostland had a 10/10 opinion of Freddy until the law reform happened. Freddy being well known for murdering these incredibly hard to perma kill individuals that others did not, affected the political landscape in noble circles. Freddy was the poster boy for a warrior elector count, which while insanely subtle, affected much. The current emperor was a martial hero better known for diplomacy. The northern counts are also martial Counts. The southern electors did not have such impressive achievements as Freddy or Ortrud. The rumor mills reflected this political issue as more martial acts of the south occurred many years after Freddy gained a reputation.

I'm willing to adjust that part. That said, I just added that part in before just because. Do we have a reason to want to talk to Evangeline? She's a family friend, sure, but she's there on business.
She's a family friend, my original intention with the write-in was to check in on her and let torroar come up with something. I'm not sure if she's done Freddy's take on Karak Ungor yet or not. But even then just having a scene with Evangeline would be nice. if you reallly need something, go with requesting advice on Freddy's law reform consequences.
 
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So to use a real world example rather than arguing about the events of a 6 year quest with discussions I've not read in the 4k pages, I'll refer to russian poisonings.

One spy got poisoned in the UK, it was pretty obvious to everyone it was Russia who'd done it, there was a lot of talk about how this was unacceptable behaviour for a state etc, however nothing was actually done about it. For example, russian plutocrat money, houses, and various other issues of dubious legality were left untouched, the attack was ignored. Fast forward and another spy was poisoned, with collateral damage killing another person. It was widely speculated at the time that because of the feeble response to the first attack there was no deterrent to the second.
That's probably not the best example, because if that specific event happened to Ostland, Freddy would probably outright trample the person responsible. And given Freddy's reputation, everyone would expect Freddy to react violently to something like that.

Perhaps a better example would be that Freddy did not react to the Jax Starbrook/Marieburg trade law ploy by vindictively responding in response. Instead he recognized what their (subtle) attempt was, called it out in the middle of the Elector Meet, and had it shot down in flames because of that. ... And had the people shamed and nervous and gulping in front of Magnus the Pious himself.

Freddy did not immediately retaliate against Marienburg and the Moot (I think he brought out the intrigue knives against The Lodge, but that may have already been a thing that was already happening?) but part of that is due to the fact that... ... our external Intrigue is kind of weak, frankly. And also because we did not want to start a trade war in the internals of the Empire; we don't want the Empire to be weakened, after all. We believe in standing together and fighting the foes of mankind. We'd rather not fight or feud with people... if we can avoid it. (Even if Frederick himself realizes he has hangups and issues with trusting, say, Gunthar or Hochland's Ludenhofs. Though he also, in his conversation with Naraiel at the epilogue to Love Laurelorn, said something along the lines of 'It's not my fault those damn Ludenhofs can't be trusted!' Though even Freddy also had a 'Ugh, I wish I could Magnus, but the problems between our families go deep and I'm not even sure how we can just get along simply...' long long ago during an old Elector meet.) (So... a mix of willingness and ability, basically. 'Don't fuck over the Empire.' And 'Our ability to play spy games or economics games is, comparatively comparing to that of other provinces and rulers, not stellar.')

We kind of don't have a lot of offensive externally-targeted intrigue and a lot of information about what is going on in all the other provinces, nor do we have a lot of opportunities to fuck 'em up.

We're slow on the uptake in intrigue wars and economic wars, simply because we're not great at that. Due to not having focused on it, or been busy with other things, or preferring to handle internal matters, or not wanting to harm or pull down others but instead to raise ourselves and the entire Empire up. Various reasons there.
 
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This isn't the real world, this is Mallus, and every time Frederick has gone through one of these things successfully it has only increased opinion of him.

Please do not try and equate RL politics and situations with the magical death world where religion is enormously impactful.
That doesn't seem a helpful response to me. I'm perfectly aware of the issue of religion but that doesn't answer the central point of my initial post. My point is that I think, based on how the politics of intrigue, deterrence and aggression work in the real world, that the various embarrassments and injuries to Ostland's gravitas should have more negative effects, as similar events do in real life. If we simply say 'the events are too different for any real life things to be the same' then what's the point in examining such issues at all? No statement could be sustained.

As for your and @Marlin 's point about religion itself, that solves the problem of Sigmarites, and only pious ones. The Zufbar adventure demonstrates perfectly well that although one section of a population may admire Freddy because of religion, others may be opposed. There are plenty of people to whom your religion argument would not apply.
Like, sorry, but I think you're completely missing the Point I and others made here. I have no idea how this Russian-Spy-Tale is supposed to apply in any way, shape or form to Frederick and his Actions. It's just not comparable.
And equally you appear not to be engaging with my point. I've never claimed that freddy's not done anything impressive, I'm saying that while he has done so, he's also frequently failed to take revenge, defend his honour, and conceded ground on different situations. I acknowledge that there are also reasons people would be deterred in a 'positive' manner because they're impressed, but there are plenty of groups which would have to be deterred 'negatively' through demonstration of vengeful actions.
We kind of don't have a lot of offensive externally-targeted intrigue and a lot of information about what is going on in all the other provinces, nor do we have a lot of opportunities to fuck 'em up.

We're slow on the uptake in intrigue wars and economic wars, simply because we're not great at that. Due to not having focused on it, or been busy with other things, or preferring to handle internal matters, or not wanting to harm or pull down others but instead to raise ourselves and the entire Empire up. Various reasons there.
See this is a much better response which provides reasons why vengeance wouldn't have been able to be taken in the first place, and yea, I'd generally agree with these. I'll also say that it sort of proves my point though. If X hostile party knows that Freddy is generally disinclined to strike back, has intelligence services without close oversight, the leaders of which largely concentrate on their own issues, and also lacks the capability to strike back, why wouldn't you try and attack anyway? If you're deterred by religion, by respect, by other issues sure, but if you're not and you live outside Ostland you're apparently basically safe, you can poke the bull as much as you want, its a strong creature and its gorred stuff before, but as long as you stay out of its way and stab it in the back it can't do anything to you. Why not take advantage of the situation?
 
See this is a much better response which provides reasons why vengeance wouldn't have been able to be taken in the first place, and yea, I'd generally agree with these. I'll also say that it sort of proves my point though. If X hostile party knows that Freddy is generally disinclined to strike back, has intelligence services without close oversight, the leaders of which largely concentrate on their own issues, and also lacks the capability to strike back, why wouldn't you try and attack anyway? If you're deterred by religion, by respect, by other issues sure, but if you're not and you live outside Ostland you're apparently basically safe, you can poke the bull as much as you want, its a strong creature and its gorred stuff before, but as long as you stay out of its way and stab it in the back it can't do anything to you. Why not take advantage of the situation?
I actually ended up editing my post literally just half a minute ago, heh. The stuff in parenthesis is new.

I will say however that it...

Absolutely does not prove your point.

Because your point, from the very start, has been: "Frederick is humble! People are taking that as a weakness!"

And everybody chimed in to say: "What? No. What are you talking about?"

And then you said: "Look at these things he's done and has acted like, that's humble."

And then we said: "What. No it's not. Th--that's more like... physical courage or willingness to spend of your own flesh and blood in order to undergo religious trials and tribulations and stuff."
"And also, your general reasons for why people would be willing to mess with Frederick are wrong too! They'd be willing to mess with Frederick either because they think they're better at intrigue than he is and can get away with it, or... actually, basically just that."
"Also, it has more to do with the personalities and histories and motivations of the people doing the thing. Like greed or overconfidence on their part or whatever."

The overall point, however, is that...
On a point regarding politics and something that came up recently, I'd like to see more consequences of Fredrick's lack of pride. The character has been effectively characterised as self-sacrificing, willing to go to unnecessary lengths to safeguard his people, that sort of thing. That's fine and is a joint result of his characterisation and of the general discussions in thread (apparently, I haven't been here reading for 6 years after all), however this humbleness would realistically result in people not taking him seriously. In a medival society based on concepts which modern societies don't have insults against the dignity of a person can be perceived to insult the state in general and threaten the social fabric. Sometimes this is fisher king logic, bad king=bad things happening eg famines, other times this is merely various other political figures observing that an individual doesn't defend themselves and can therefore be taken advantage of. There's various examples of this in the quest so far, but I think the most egregious example is the witch hunters who've largely gone unchallenged and have (potentially, Im not the author so don't know) therefore ignored the Count and not bothered to inform him about important matters.
We disagree with this bit.

Our disagreements stem from both "That's not 'lack of pride' though?" and "It is not this characterization that would get people to Start Shit with Freddy."

So even if you were somehow right about people being willing to start shit with Freddy, you would still be basically totally wrong because you only got to that point by shifting goalpoints from where you started. Which was about lack of pride and insults.

For example, let's look at the slave traders that were willing to snatch people in Wulfenburg itself and sell them as slaves. Did they do that because they thought Frederick wouldn't do anything about it if he found out? Heck no -- they quite sensibly knew that if Frederick ever found it out, he would literally and physically tear them apart. No, they did that because they thought they could get away with it. They thought that if they kept it small and infrequent, nobody would catch on to their crimes.

And, to be fair, these slavery operations went on in various provinces, not just Ostland. It was, IIRC, various provinces that fed slaves to the Bandit Kingdom in... I think the Bandit Kingdom was in Talabecland? Regardless. The point is, they didn't start doing that because they thought Frederick wouldn't do anything to them if he found out. He absolutely would have wrecked them if he found. They did that because they thought they could do it and succeed at hiding it.
 
The only time I think he ever conceded ground was handing parts of the Middle Mountains over to Gunthar. Other then that he has never spared any expense to take down those who wrong him or those he cares about, furthermore he has always gone to great lengths to prove his personal honor, like just now when he almost shredded himself to bits to make things right with Mannan.
 
The political issue is how much a martial elector count has done, while the non-martial elector counts are sitting on their ass doing squat.

There, elaboration done.


That doesn't seem a helpful response to me. I'm perfectly aware of the issue of religion but that doesn't answer the central point of my initial post. My point is that I think, based on how the politics of intrigue, deterrence and aggression work in the real world, that the various embarrassments and injuries to Ostland's gravitas should have more negative effects, as similar events do in real life. If we simply say 'the events are too different for any real life things to be the same' then what's the point in examining such issues at all? No statement could be sustained.

As for your and @Marlin 's point about religion itself, that solves the problem of Sigmarites, and only pious ones. The Zufbar adventure demonstrates perfectly well that although one section of a population may admire Freddy because of religion, others may be opposed. There are plenty of people to whom your religion argument would not apply.
Nope, this is how the religion argument overrides you.

Zhufbar adventure had little to do with human religion. So that`s a bad example choice. Religion permeates throughout humanity in The Empire. If someone comes to attack a notable figure linked to a religious act by a major religion. That fool will need to voice their displeasure not too loudly. Or be somewhat cautious about what they say and if what they are saying relates to a religion.

What are you expecting? Physical weakness, people mocking Freddy? There was a recent rumor mill about the seed drills equating "I want seed drills, now! Ostland! Gimmie!". So yeah, there are already situations where the giant prestige pit does not save Ostland and Freddy, but there are situations where it does.

There was a big deal made about Freddy, Freddy was proven pure, then aided the dwarfs. That was major news. Would people ignore that?
 
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So I read this over several days. I broadly enjoyed it and given its length though I'd note a few bits. Firstly, I broadly agree with points previously brought up, eg issues with pacing, but as mentioned this has been brought up before.
Glad to have you! As a fellow reader who only got caught up recently I know this thread is a wild ride. That being said, before you discuss issues make sure you look them up first for answers. It's a long thread and a lot of questions have been answered. You will probably find the answer you seek.

I particularly enjoyed the descriptions in certain parts, for example the lava scene in Ungor was cool. However, I've often found the torture porn parts whenever Fredrick gets tortured to be quite tiresome. There's only so many times you can read 'his spine got torn out but he was fine' without the tension being entirely scattered.
Same, honestly. It's the product of player choice and I can't recommend anything beyond sticking it out and making sure to vote for plans that don't involve Freddy doing the maximum punishment.
I'd bring up a couple of broad criticisms. Firstly, the use of magic seems to be far too easy generally. Yes the various ice mages have had various negative effects, but I'd also liked to have seen something more negative which would have emphasised the winds of magic being so chaotic etc.
This is a rather strange complaint. Consider Anna, and who she was pre Ungor and how she is now. That was the result of a miscast which permanently mutated her soul. She no longer who she once was and she can never get that back. Lovely Laurelorn had an elf mage explode into giblets as the magic she wielded went out of control. Natasha has iron nails, changed hair and a mutated eye. Nothing about those are small. This:
For example, say a jade wizard has to overcast something because the training got out of hand and instead of it working find they explode or turn into a chaos spawn. Otherwise the dramatic nature of magic is avoided which I think is to the detriment of the story.
is sort of bullshit. Magic is unfriendly and occasionally downright hostile to wielders but it's not randomly 'lol die'. If it were literally nobody would become a mage and instead wear suppressors. Magic is just a trainable skill with dedicated teachers who actually know what their doing and even still you can be changed like Adira or Natasha if you draw too deep. It's just not 'randomly spawndom' like you think it should be. Story has nothing to do with this, it's just training, preparation and good rolls have mostly kept the bad out of sight.

On a point regarding politics and something that came up recently, I'd like to see more consequences of Fredrick's lack of pride.
Ok, this bit. Let's go over this and break it down.

That's fine and is a joint result of his characterisation and of the general discussions in thread (apparently, I haven't been here reading for 6 years after all), however this humbleness would realistically result in people not taking him seriously. In a medival society based on concepts which modern societies don't have insults against the dignity of a person can be perceived to insult the state in general and threaten the social fabric. Sometimes this is fisher king logic, bad king=bad things happening eg famines, other times this is merely various other political figures observing that an individual doesn't defend themselves and can therefore be taken advantage of. There's various examples of this in the quest so far, but I think the most egregious example is the witch hunters who've largely gone unchallenged and have (potentially, Im not the author so don't know) therefore ignored the Count and not bothered to inform him about important matters.
I'm going to need examples for 'In a medival society based on concepts which modern societies don't have insults against the dignity of a person can be perceived to insult the state in general and threaten the social fabric.' What concepts?

And two, you are misusing the concept of The fisher king; considering Ostland has advanced more under Freddy's rule than under anyone else's. It also does not apply to foreign policy. Your witch hunter example is also bogus. The hunters don't go unchallenged because we like them but because they don't answer to us. Only the Grand Theologist and Magnus the Pious can order them around and expect to be obeyed. The reason they don't tell us shit is mostly because the previous leader was both racist and never fit for the job even if she wasn't. As it is we have challenged them, by marrying a foreign magic user and more recently building that library. This is all information you can find in the regular turn updates. Please read them.

She's a family friend, my original intention with the write-in was to check in on her and let torroar come up with something. I'm not sure if she's done Freddy's take on Karak Ungor yet or not. But even then just having a scene with Evangeline would be nice. if you reallly need something, go with requesting advice on Freddy's law reform consequences.
She has not. The most recent interlude with her showed she assumed Freddy was a dumb brute and that it wouldn't be worth interviewing him. I also don't think she would be spectacular for advising on consequences considering we're already in the midst of doing it and she probably can't offer advice Freddy hasn't already thought about.
 
She has not. The most recent interlude with her showed she assumed Freddy was a dumb brute and that it wouldn't be worth interviewing him.
That's harsh, she thinks well of Freddy man she just wanted the dwarf opinion since she already had plenty of sources from Imperial side.

On another note, since I'm lacking ideas at this time does anyone have any omake requests of things we haven't explored as much? Ideally things within Ostland and such?
 
That's harsh, she thinks well of Freddy man she just wanted the dwarf opinion since she already had plenty of sources from Imperial side.

On another note, since I'm lacking ideas at this time does anyone have any omake requests of things we haven't explored as much? Ideally things within Ostland and such?
Beastmen activities in the interim period.
 
Because your point, from the very start,
I do not accept your summation, I have never argues that people are taking it as a weakness, my post specifically said
I'd like to see more consequences of Fredrick's lack of pride
I acknowledge that in the story there isn't currently this reaction to what I would perceive as this lack of pride, and as a critique of the story I'm suggesting one thing to include more, just as I noted a point about the pacing in my initial post.

I will however acknowledge that I could have been clearer in what exactly I meant as 'pride'. I thought my references to the fisher king logic and the idea of gravitas were sufficient, but evidently not.

My point, to restate it more carefully, is that in history rulers have a certain 'public pride', their gravitas or dignity. A ruler without this mystic quality is less likely to be obeyed. Sometimes in history kings were compelled by their nobles, the church, or other powers to do various things, or their dignity was injured in other ways. My argument has been that I think, based on the historical examples I'm aware of, that the various injuries to Frederick's dignity (again acknowledging that my use of 'pride' may not have been the best descriptor), would increase the likelihood that various actors might oppose him because he's been shown not to be overly concerned with defending this dignity.

In my defence regarding the 'pride' issue, I think I'd been thinking about one of the GM posts regarding the whole marienburg situation which has couched it in those terms.

Please provide examples.
The two that stand out are Marienburg TriClaw and the Lodge. Both of these are cases where a hostile state has attempted to damage Ostland for years without significant pushback. Yes it was brought up at the Meet, but no direct action was taken by Ostland, it was passed up the chain to Magnus, who even remarked that Freddy had suffered various

Another example would be conceding the Middle Mountains, though I'll also acknowledge that there was indeed a confrontation there.

The various insults of the previous Hochland ruler, from being suspicious about questions regarding the disappeared villagers and the smoke, to the various threats when the Ostland army was clearing the province.

Talebheim, the initial response might have been acceptable, but then the paying off, the various subsequent insulting messages and opposition in the Meets.

The Meets themselves, specifically the one where the new tax thing was brought up. I have no specific proposals for what sort of revenge or pushback would have been appropriate for each elector who'd clearly been influenced against ostland. Irl we normally see sanctions, diplomatic battles, that sort of thing in these cases.

Engineer grudges, see talebheim basically

This whole marienburg thing

That witch hunter guy slinking off after he tried the stake thing

Intelligence services, specifically the witchhunters failing to inform of the 20 years of events of their interlude, baggins regarding the lodge, that sort of thing

Kislev and Laurelorn insults by word or deed, I'm grouping them together as essentially these are foreign diplomats or rulers apparently unwilling to do diplomacy properly. One might explain the actions with reference to the arrogance of the different parties, but this doesn't mean the insults aren't insulting.

I'll leave it there for now, possibly more but I think that's sufficient for examples.


Zhufbar adventure had little to do with human religion. So that`s a bad example choice. Religion permeates throughout humanity in The Empire. If someone comes to attack a notable figure linked to a religious act by a major religion. That fool will need to voice their displeasure not too loudly. Or be somewhat cautious about what they say and if what they are saying relates to a religion.
Somewhat missing my point. I wasn't referring to the empire's religion there I was talking about the dwarves. Even though he's drunk Gazul's beer he still had to deal with the engineers. I don't recall precisely when the engineering grudge was levied but I'm pretty sure it was some time after Ungor, meaning news of Ostland and its leader's accomplishments would have had time to percolate through the Dwarven realms. Despite the many impressive things accomplished there the engineers still put the grudge in. By the same logic, certain sects of the Empire wouldn't be impressed by Sigmar's blessing, though I entirely acknowledge that they might be impressed anyway by various other things.

I'm going to need examples for 'In a medival society based on concepts which modern societies don't have insults against the dignity of a person can be perceived to insult the state in general and threaten the social fabric.' What concepts?

And two, you are misusing the concept of The fisher king; considering Ostland has advanced more under Freddy's rule than under anyone else's. It also does not apply to foreign policy. Your witch hunter example is also bogus. The hunters don't go unchallenged because we like them but because they don't answer to us. Only the Grand Theologist and Magnus the Pious can order them around and expect to be obeyed. The reason they don't tell us shit is mostly because the previous leader was both racist and never fit for the job even if she wasn't. As it is we have challenged them, by marrying a foreign magic user and more recently building that library. This is all information you can find in the regular turn updates. Please read them.
On the first point, in modern societies we generally accept things like freedom of speech, conscience etc. It's permissible, though rude, to insult people, even insulting them with particularly unpleasant slurs etc. Comparably, in various medival societies where concepts like honour were considered more important you could permissibly kill someone for insulting you. I would specifically use the example of medival iceland in this case, but there are plenty of others going through up to the Modern period.

On the other more societal concepts we have things like the divine right of kings. By what right does the king rule? From where does his legitimacy lie? This doesn't match 1 to 1 onto the Empire here, but it does at least look like it with things like the Runefangs giving legitimacy. I mention gravitas above, this is a concept predating the medival period but pretty similar.

I also mentioned the fisher king, I'm not saying ostland hasn't advanced, and therefore people might still perceive freddy's rule as beneficial and him as a good ruler on the basis of 'good country MUST = good ruler', but I'm saying that I'd like to see more examination of the consequences of allowing the dignity of the ruler being insulted. Here 'insulted ruler = insulted country'. Therefore the 'concepts' I was referring to would normally mean a ruler must avenge insults against him or be mocked and disobeyed.

Regarding the witch hunters I find your tone rather insulting. I did read the posts, I'm perfectly aware the witch hunters don't answer to the Elector Counts and that they might not have the best opinion of the family, but they're still in Ostland, presumably taking advantage of the various military forces for support, embedded in the various units and so on. There were constant struggles in Europe regarding autonomous military monastic orders and their relations between secular and religious authorities. Kings didn't just say 'oh actually you're under the pope so do what you like you don't need to report to me'. They're linked by name to the Knights Templar in real life and they operate in a similar manner, under an overall authority for a specific task. Furthermore, in the most recent case the templars are notable for their failure. Regardless of the policies of their order they should have informed the count of such a large and well funded cult, and especially given said cult has a personal connection to the count. They just about have the fig leaf of their specific duties saying 'we didnt tell you because we dont have to', but equally that's another insult to the dignity of the ruler and of ostland. The leader of the witchhunters wasn't even removed from their position (though I'll admit this was a player vote so not necessarily something to be solved in the narrative manner I suggested), essentially, like plenty of other cases, Freddy has said 'ok well dont worry about it this time, just dont do it again yea?'
 
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I am not sure if I am dismembering this but wasn't satine one of the reasons she was scared of Freddy was because we just straight up voted to have the nobles killed and she didn't expect that of Freddy
 
She's a family friend, my original intention with the write-in was to check in on her and let torroar come up with something. I'm not sure if she's done Freddy's take on Karak Ungor yet or not. But even then just having a scene with Evangeline would be nice. if you reallly need something, go with requesting advice on Freddy's law reform consequences.
She has not. The most recent interlude with her showed she assumed Freddy was a dumb brute and that it wouldn't be worth interviewing him. I also don't think she would be spectacular for advising on consequences considering we're already in the midst of doing it and she probably can't offer advice Freddy hasn't already thought about.
When she showed up in Ostland to deliver the rescued Ostland slaves, she interviewed us about Karak Ungor.
"If I may, Count Hohenzollern…I have some questions, if you would do me the honor of answering?"

Blinking, you stare at the young woman and the tome she's somehow pulled out, a quill held in the other hand.

"…about?"

"Karak Ungor."

"Sure thing," you growl, throwing yourself forward ineffectually. "What about it?"

"Oh…everything."
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That's from the Trident meeting, part 1, just right after Lovely Laurelorn. I don't think she views us as just a brute after having actually met us, and after she's attended the Trident Meetings -- or just after having caught up with her family after her travels, and if Freddy came up as a topic during family talks -- more often.
 
Little Moot
Wine Sack-alcohol sampling/trade, etc.
North Miragliano-alcohol sampling/trade, etc. and learning more of the culture of Tasha's father.
Remas Way-alcohol sampling/trade, etc.
Dwarf Hold

If anyone has any other specific ideas/thoughts for those parts (or if I shouldn't add them at all) please contribute.
Just a couple of minor things @spudman , we could add the Look for Leornardo Da Miragliano manuscripts in North Miragliano, I mean it is quite unlikely that we would find any BUT there is no harm in trying, something else that we can get from there are poetry books and novels from Tilea, as a gift for little Tasha so that she can connect a little better to Tilea and her father ... And since we are going to the Little Moot, and we all know about the cooking skills of the Halflings it seems like a good place to go invit Natasha to a romantic brunch/lunch/dinner.

And as I said before, it would be pretty interesting to see Frederick look for the famous forgemasters in nippontown (as a fellow Blacksmith he should be interested) and the legends of samurais and warrior monks... I would even propose to try to recruit some of these colorful characters to our reuitine, because it has lots of potential to be interesting.

Although I admit the Nippon thing mainly because it would be fun to read more than anything else...
 
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Magic is unfriendly and occasionally downright hostile to wielders but it's not randomly 'lol die'. If it were literally nobody would become a mage and instead wear suppressors. Magic is just a trainable skill with dedicated teachers who actually know what their doing and even still you can be changed like Adira or Natasha if you draw too deep. It's just not 'randomly spawndom' like you think it should be. Story has nothing to do with this, it's just training, preparation and good rolls have mostly kept the bad out of sight.
Expanded catastrophic Chaos manifestations table. Realm of Sorcery pages 181 and 252.
Rolling 81-83 result in a mutation on a failed will power test.
84-86 sucks you into the Realm of Chaos on a one-way trip unless you have a Fate Point.
87-89 causes one of the effects on the table to affect one's closest living relative.

Rolling doubles forces a roll on the minor table, triples force a roll on the major table, quadruples force a roll on the catastrophic table.
There's a 3% chance on the expanded minor table to cause a roll on the expanded major table and another 3% chance to upgrade the expanded major table to the expanded catastrophic table.

The chance of rolling 'lol, die' is small, but it's still there.
 
I will however acknowledge that I could have been clearer in what exactly I meant as 'pride'. I thought my references to the fisher king logic and the idea of gravitas were sufficient, but evidently not.
Wait, that was supposed to clear things up? It just confused me further and made even less sense and coherence.
My point, to restate it more carefully, is that in history rulers have a certain 'public pride', their gravitas or dignity. A ruler without this mystic quality is less likely to be obeyed. Sometimes in history kings were compelled by their nobles, the church, or other powers to do various things, or their dignity was injured in other ways. My argument has been that I think, based on the historical examples I'm aware of, that the various injuries to Frederick's dignity (again acknowledging that my use of 'pride' may not have been the best descriptor), would increase the likelihood that various actors might oppose him because he's been shown not to be overly concerned with defending this dignity.
... Okay, so... Okay. Okay, well. On the one hand, your argument point is... self-contained. In the sense of: "In my readings, I find that Freddy lacks <insert-thing-here... let's call it 'Fisher King gravitas' I guess>. This is a bad thing for him."

Unfortunately, I don't think anyone has been speaking or using the same definitions as you did. So even if you have a point, I don't think any of us would be able to understand what that point is, because none of what you are saying makes sense to us. Or, well, to me, at least.

You've said that Freddy lacks a certain something. But the explanation you give of what he lacks don't really make sense or fit anyone else's definition of "pride" or whatever.

But your concrete examples like here at least clear things up a bit:
The two that stand out are Marienburg TriClaw and the Lodge. Both of these are cases where a hostile state has attempted to damage Ostland for years without significant pushback. Yes it was brought up at the Meet, but no direct action was taken by Ostland, it was passed up the chain to Magnus, who even remarked that Freddy had suffered various

Another example would be conceding the Middle Mountains, though I'll also acknowledge that there was indeed a confrontation there.

The various insults of the previous Hochland ruler, from being suspicious about questions regarding the disappeared villagers and the smoke, to the various threats when the Ostland army was clearing the province.

Talebheim, the initial response might have been acceptable, but then the paying off, the various subsequent insulting messages and opposition in the Meets.

The Meets themselves, specifically the one where the new tax thing was brought up. I have no specific proposals for what sort of revenge or pushback would have been appropriate for each elector who'd clearly been influenced against ostland. Irl we normally see sanctions, diplomatic battles, that sort of thing in these cases.

Engineer grudges, see talebheim basically

This whole marienburg thing

That witch hunter guy slinking off after he tried the stake thing

Intelligence services, specifically the witchhunters failing to inform of the 20 years of events of their interlude, baggins regarding the lodge, that sort of thing

Kislev and Laurelorn insults by word or deed, I'm grouping them together as essentially these are foreign diplomats or rulers apparently unwilling to do diplomacy properly. One might explain the actions with reference to the arrogance of the different parties, but this doesn't mean the insults aren't insulting.

I'll leave it there for now, possibly more but I think that's sufficient for examples.
And I finally get it. "Oh wait I see. This is the 'pride' of a cliche and archetypical Xianxia main character, isn't it?" I'm glad Freddy doesn't have the thin skin of a Face-Slapping Genre character. That would be terrible. As those are absolutely terrible people and thin skinned to boot. And those genres -- the Face-Slapping genre I mean -- are written to satisfy a kind of mean vindictiveness and that's all.

Most of the stuff you point out doesn't even equate to pride, though.

It refers to getting revenge. To lashing out for every slight or harm or indignity inflicted upon you.

Freddy does not get revenge for everything negative that happens to him -- and you perceive that as humility. It is not. It's... Well I don't have anything to compare it to other than the Face-Slapping stories of Chinese webnovels and fics, basically.

I will note, though. That Jung... lost all political power as a Lector (or Arch-Lector), tried to hang himself, turned to Chaos, and was killed by Freddy. The Zhufbar Engineers were shamed in the eyes of their society, their faction lost some influence, and they literally took the Slayer Oath. Naraiel was eventually shamed into admitting what her spell did, and Freddy claimed that something like that could be an impetus for war, that spell, but that they could move past it.

Also, a lot of the time, it's hugely important to look at the... the regional and cultural places those events happen in. Who's going to know about what Naraiel and the other Wood Elves did and said to Freddy, specifically? Most people won't know the specifics. Furthermore, Elves are generally arrogant. It's... not surprising. The Zhufbar thing happened in Zhufbar, and took place in a Dwarf region and culture.

The Tri-Claw compact... that has nothing to do with pride or humility or whatever. That has solely to do with economic competition and warfare. It's, um. It's just basic... "Our goals are opposed here." They want to make money. Ostland stands in the way of that money. They do stuff to make it harder for us, and to make it easier for them.


If anything, I should say that your viewpoint is totally wrong. Freddy's ability to move on from things has been a strength. It has allowed him to shame Jung into being thrown out of the Cult. His detractors in Zhufbar to fall from grace. And it allowed him to outright befriend Alleria, Sunweaver, and Naraiel. (It also made an enemy in Khalanos, Alleria's former fiance or betrothed or whatever, but eh.) Being able to apologize to Baggins after we scared him (during the post-Laurelorn thing) is good. It is the sort of thing that lets Freddy have people like Baggins willing to work for/with him. Like... if Freddy was harder on people, they'd probably not want to work with or for him, or would want to spitefully strike back at him. And there are already people that are spiteful or bitter about him already. People like Jax or the Marienburg rulers or Gunthar. If we were more vindictive, we'd be making enemies of people like Baggins too, and that's just pointless.

EDIT: Sorry, in hindsight, this is probably a bit more terse or grumpier or snappish than your words merited. I may disagree with your debate points and conclusions a lot, but that doesn't mean you were posting out of hostile intent or... or whatever. I don't think I was too grumpy myself either -- rather, just... sharpy disagreeing with you and going "No way, you're totally wrong." Which, well, disagreement with people happens I guess!

Just, still sort of sorry that the first thing that happens to you when you joined this thread was that somebody (or multiple someone's) got into an argument with you and started shaking their head at how you were totally wrong and they were totally right. Even if, uh, I'm one of the people on that arguing side. =/
 
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Ok, I feel like I finally understand what's being discussed here. And while I am inclined to agree that the actions of Frederick do lack a sense of dignitas - which I think is meant nebulously when people use the word pride - I think the overt favor of the gods, plus Frederick's impact on the province and the empire, and the religiosity of the empire have so far worked together to balance out what might otherwise result in a loss of prestige.

I was worried about the plan for going all out with the penances for Manaan because of how it could be perceived that a full and unrestricted "mea culpa" from Frederick re the Witch Hunter/Holders shebang could negatively affect his reputation both with his subordinates and his peers, I was completely relieved of that worry by the overt, direct, and emphatic declaration of support by Manaan upon the completion of the keelhauling.

Frederick allowed himself to be humiliated by the engineers guild, but he also helped to reclaim Karak Ungor, the throne of the dwarf king, and a litany of other equal and greater achievements - these things balance heavily in favor of prestige rather than self abasement.

Rather than recite other contrasts, let me just point out certain facts: he saved the province of Nordland from utter destruction; he killed a Bloodthirster; he was physically blessed and utterly transformed by Sigmar; he's lifted Ostland to unprecedented heights; he's received an overt declaration of favor by Manaan and Matriarch Maghda. His lack of 'pride' and willingness to accept blame I think, in the face of these things I think would ring as humility to a neutral observer rather than be perceived as folly.

I'm sure there are naysayers and people who would prefer he operate differently among the lower nobility and among his peers, but the weight of his accolades and his positive impact has utterly silenced them so far.

Humility is probably Frederick's greatest redeeming feature, as well. If he failed to demonstrate humility before the engineering guild, their whispers rather than be stifled and silenced and result in their own shame, would have taken root. If he was unwilling to pay Talabecland the extreme price asked for in anger for the loss of their army in the Vampire War, his reputation would have suffered throughout the empire. The Cult of Sigmar would not have accepted him. Trade would not flow from the rivers and seas and he would maintain the ire of Magnus for religious discord.

I'm only about 90% sure I'm following the conversation properly so I'll pause there haha. Tldr; yeah Frederick skirts the line of going too far with magnanimity and acceptance of blame, but so far it has only resulted in greater things for him, for Ostland, and the empire.
 
I think... maybe the kind of gravitas/dignity talked about is something more relevant in a different culture? More relevant for, um, a French monarch perhaps? A French monarch, in a French culture.

But this, well, isn't France. It's the Empire. The Empire's Germanic inspired and influenced. The culture's different, and thus so are the values. Things, well, they're just different. Imperials, and Ostlanders, are a more rough-and-tumble people. Frederick does well with what he's got.

But his imperfect Diplomacy, bull stubbornness, chronic alcoholism, and temper which peaks out and can really frighten a person, makes him... ... well, an imperfect person.

It's pretty cool though actually. And, it's pretty cool to try our best to be a good guy and do our best, even while being a flawed and imperfect person, and succeed and do good anyway. Hell. Sometimes we succeed because of (and not despite of) those bullheadedness! Like with us being brash enough to challenge Bugman to a drinking contest... and fortunate enough to win it!
 
So, just here to say this is the best warhammer story I've ever read including canon. Congratulations torroar for keeping this running so long given everything that's happened in this time.

One thing I'm surprised about given usual comment patterns is how little attention the emperor of Cathay got after enslaving two family friends. When the Grand Theogonist sorta did that the discussion lasted pages.

I mean with the twins there it's probably/hopefully gonna change (3 amethyst wizards and 2 vampires escaping a despot seems like the setup for a weird couple style movie so that should be cool), but still.
 
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One thing I'm surprised about given usual comment patterns is how little attention the emperor of Cathay got after enslaving two family friends. When the Grand Theogonist sorta did that the discussion lasted pages.
Not enslaved really, it was their choice to serve honestly even if refusing in general is not easy. Besides, it helped them move around the country without fear by those loyal to him and allowed them to train/fight easier.

The earlier stuff about GT I think people complained more how he is manipulating a woman who thinks she has no other options in life, but GM did point out that she is doing good in the world so its a grey area certainly.
I mean with the twins there it's probably/hopefully gonna change (3 amethyst wizards and 2 vampires escaping a despot seems like the setup for a weird couple style movie so that should be cool), but still.
From what we seen that isn't what is gonna happen and even if they tried Emperor more powerful than all of them combined. The last interlude showed that the Emperor was interested in the goings-on happening west and invited them all to tell him about it.
 
So, just here to say this is the best warhammer story I've ever read including canon. Congratulations torroar for keeping this running so long given everything that's happened in this time.

One thing I'm surprised about given usual comment patterns is how little attention the emperor of Cathay got after enslaving two family friends. When the Grand Theogonist sorta did that the discussion lasted pages.

I mean with the twins there it's probably/hopefully gonna change (3 amethyst wizards and 2 vampires escaping a despot seems like the setup for a weird couple style movie so that should be cool), but still.
They aren't really slaves so much as agents of the state. Agents that are also looked upon with heavy scrutiny for being blood sucking abominations. They may have overcome their nature in some capacity but there's always the chance they snap and go on a rampage. The Emperor would prefer they don't kill his subjects so has them under heavy watch.

Theoretically once she's done training Johanna could just leave the order with Genevieve.
 
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