EDIT: Are we able to do anything if someone tried to witchbomb everyone for some reason?
We have a member with memory magic of her own with us. If absolutely necessary, we could do to the Tokyo Council what we suspect Chiyoda of having done previously in response to a mass witchbomb attempt and erase everyone's memory of the last few minutes.

Hopefully it won't come to that, but if it does, that would fall under the "we have not improvise now" category.
 
I like it, but I'd change the wording a little.

"Freedom from a system that is ultimately designed to destroy each and everyone of you."

- this seems a little aggressive. I'm thinking a 'we're all in this boat together' message might work better.

Maybe simply exchange 'You' with 'Us' ?

Thought about it. 'Us' is too generalized. It waters down the statement too much. 'You' is a more personalized wording because, yes this effects them directly. It's a more effective wording imo.
 
Thought about it. 'Us' is too generalized. It waters down the statement too much. 'You' is a more personalized wording because, yes this effects them directly. It's a more effective wording imo.
"I come here to give you freedom from the system designed to destroy each and every one of you!"
"Oh, and that system isn't designed to destroy you?"
"Well yes, but actually no."
 
It's definitely treading close to the line, considering the unbombed girls present, but I can sympathize with the position that we have to in order to make our position clear to the bombed girls.
 
Try this:

"Freedom from a system designed to see the destruction of each and every magical girl in existence."
 
[] Introduce yourself and your allies.
[] Start off with an explanation of what The Constellation is. An alliance/partnership of like minded individuals primarily in pursuit of making the lives of all magical girls better. We dedicate our magic, resources, time and efforts to pursue new innovation and new idea's in the hope of one day, each and every one of us achieves freedom. Freedom from a system that is designed to wear you down and eventually destroy you.
-[] (Go into resource scarcity lecture mode if there's too much confusion.)
-[] All things in due time. Actually does anyone on your team need a cleanse after that intro? (Offer and visually cleanse your allies.)
--[] Then turn to the Councilors and offer to cleanse their gems. (cleanse those who agree.)
-[] Proceed with a clear seed demonstration followed by the agreed to offer with Chiyoda.

Gonna go with this. I think it takes care of some of the towing the line issues while still getting the point across for people in the know and can sympathize.
 
Hmm, I think that doesn't quite address the concern of some members of Tokyo's council? The way I understand it, they're basically saying "We don't want anyone having access to post-scarcity because that means the people we don't like get access to post-scarcity and no one's leaving this bucket"

Or at least, that's the impression I got from listening to Toshimichi.
 
Hmm, I think that doesn't quite address the concern of some members of Tokyo's council? The way I understand it, they're basically saying "We don't want anyone having access to post-scarcity because that means the people we don't like get access to post-scarcity and no one's leaving this bucket"

Or at least, that's the impression I got from listening to Toshimichi.
We'll get to that. We got to make our pitch first before these girls can start objecting to it. This vote is more of an introductory phase before we get into the hard debating.
 
"Meguca of Tokyo, unite! You have nothing to loose but your chains! Seize the means of soul gem corruption! The march of progress may be delayed but never stopped, together we will build a brighter future! We will hang our oppressor with the rope it sells us!"
 
"Meguca of Tokyo, unite! You have nothing to loose but your chains! Seize the means of soul gem corruption! The march of progress may be delayed but never stopped, together we will build a brighter future! We will hang our oppressor with the rope it sells us!"
Plan B: copy and make the necessary edits this speech from another great communist thinker.
 
"Meguca of Tokyo, unite! You have nothing to loose but your chains! Seize the means of soul gem corruption! The march of progress may be delayed but never stopped, together we will build a brighter future! We will hang our oppressor with the rope it sells us!"

This is, unironically, the best way to present our case, especially that line "Sieze the means of soul gem corruption!" allows us to lead into the primary goal of creating a meguca think tank capable of using Sabrina's power to bootstrap artificial Grief Cleansing Magitech to spread to all meguca.
 
"The world would be much better if everyone could just be nice," you say, nodding firmly. "Anyway, I've got one, er, more relevant thing to raise before we dive into discussing the presentation first - Miss Niko, you were working on a hypothesis, right? Is there anything we can do that would help you figure things out? I can't help but have a feeling that whatever you can tell us will be helpful."

Niko blinks, almost as if surprised at being addressed, then frowns, tugging thoughtfully on one of her ponytails.

"How old do you think the Imperial Regalia she's wearing are?" she says. Without waiting for an answer, she turns to Sayaka. "You've got a perception power, right? Use it later."

"Right..." Sayaka says, confusion flickering across her face. "I'm not sure if I can tell, but I'll try."

"Within a couple centuries will do," Niko says. She turns back to you abruptly. "If I can get a skin or hair or blood or something sample off her, that's ideal, but fat chance of that. The way she controls magic is deeply unusual - it's like no magical girl or enchantment I've ever seen. I don't know what to make of it."

"... I'll keep an eye out for hair?" you say, frowning. Niko's turning her attention to age, huh? The thought would line up with how Toshimichi seems to like to present herself as older than she looks, an imperial spirit incarnated to rule. Still, not exactly relevant for the moment.
More and more I get the feeling Akane stumbled in from a different anime.
 
I have the sudden urge to make a FNF vs. Sabrina song, and at the same time have absolutely no bloody idea how to make music.

Sometimes I hate being creative with the inability to actually create.
 
I have the sudden urge to make a FNF vs. Sabrina song, and at the same time have absolutely no bloody idea how to make music.

Sometimes I hate being creative with the inability to actually create.

I'm gonna be honest with you. I had no fucking clue what I was doing with most of the stuff I used to make stuff for PMAS.

The Chibis? One of the first big projects I ever made with Inkscape. The Page 5000 video? My first ever attempt at video editing. The Wiki? The first website I ever published. I learned Live2D from scratch to do the animated Sabrina model. The 7 year anniversary video? My first time using Adobe Animate.

So I'm gonna strongly encourage you to just go out there and try doing whatever it is that you want to make. Watch some YouTube tutorials, read some wikis, and just go try it.

In my experience, this kind of stuff is a lot less scary than it seems at first, and you can learn while doing just fine.
 
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