We stepped on a landmine and apologized to Mami for worrying her.

Well, that's because we worry about Mami's comfort more then our own and - unlike Mami - we get that stepping on a landmine isn't THAT big of a deal for us.

((To be clear - I totally agree with you, but working out how to double-think one's self into believing certain things is occasionally fun.))
 
Okay, so. I'm... not really a fan of the current vote, as it's written out. I agree with the intentions, more or less, but I've never really liked dictating what Sabrina says to that fine a level of detail.

Firn will filter it through Sabrina's character and the scene anyway. I've largely given up on rewriting votes in this way, it seems to pollute intent without actually accomplishing anything.

I mean, your rewrite only loses the entire punch of the first line -- turning into a weak generic tossout -- and the entire "use specific example of the time Mami literally stuck Sabrina in a ribbon cocoon" of the second line... and everything else...

Honestly, it seems to me that when we don't tell Firn specifically how we want something done, he does it in a generic manner. Oftentimes a generic implementation is much weaker than, say, what I'm doing here. Based on that, I am not going to change my vote to reflect your suggestion.
 
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Unifying the vote for Sabrina's sake.

[X] Kaizuki
Adhoc vote count started by Godwinson on Jan 26, 2019 at 8:39 AM, finished with 149204 posts and 19 votes.

  • [X] You don't think Kyouko knows this, but if she were to just show up on Mami's doorstep tomorrow and say nothing at all, the reception she'd get from Mami would be this: repeated, tearful apologies mixed with offers of food and friendship, and possibly also housing. Mami has no problem with her whatsoever.
    -[X] In response to Kyouko disbelieving: Mami has no problem with Kyouko. Mami's problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. At one point, you accidentally convinced Mami that you were breaking ties with her, and promptly ended up in a ribbon cocoon -- and you weren't even transformed. The only thing you've ever heard from Mami on the topic is how much she regrets what she did that last night -- and based on everything you know about her, the sentiment there is that she wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    --[X] If it becomes relevant: "Mami tried to kill Kyouko that night" is a false statement.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're out here saying all this stuff to her because you're a saint or somesuch, preaching about how everyone deserves redemption no matter who they are. But the fact of the matter is, there is literally only one person who has a problem with Kyouko, and that's Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [X] ... You're sorry about what you said about housing.
    [X] There doesn't have to be a problem. I'm not gonna push you to do this as my "favour" or whatever, but frankly, with what I know? You and Mami can work things out when that day comes.
    [X] See, Mami responds poorly whenever you're brought up because up until I showed up, everyone in her life had eventually left her, or had been abusing her trust. She gets upset because she blames herself for not being able to help you, and for how poorly the two of you parted. Because even with you picking a horrible thing to outrage her over to get her to drive you away -- and no, I know that's part of what that argument was about -- she felt horrible for doing so.
    [X] That's how I know that you and Mami can rebuild your friendship. Because Mami never wanted it to end in the first place, and the only reason you wanted it to end was because you were trying to punish yourself.
    [X] There's a lot less of an issue with her hanging out than she thinks there is. Nobody really has an issue with her - not even Mami.
    -[X] Mami's issues aren't with Kyouko. Mami's main problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. As far as you can tell, when it comes to that night, Mami wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're here just because you're that much of a bleeding heart. But truthfully the only one who has a problem with Kyouko is Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [x] There is no problem with you hanging out with the rest of my friends. Mami for one would jump for joy if you came back.
    [X] Wait until the great bubble debacle is over. Help if neccessary.
    [X] When you are alone again:
    -[X] So she's asking what she can do in return. Repeatedly. Heh, guess you're not the only one with a bleeding heart in the room, not that you didn't know.
    -[X] Can you punch her for making your girlfriend sad and lonely?
    --[X] ... Is that what she wanted to hear?
    -[X] The problem with having knowledge of private things is that you've taken their privacy away without consent or giving anything in return. You are uncomfortable with that.
    --[X] You're even more uncomfortable with her defeatist attitude. Plough on.
    ---[X] You know what she said and what she did. You know why she said and did what she did.
    ---[X] It was selfish and self-destructive, making Mami hurt to hurt herself. Get over it.
    -[X] The one thing you want from her is to stop punishing herself, to stop being a coward and get on with the rest of her life.
    --[X] Fix what she can, and let go of what she cannot. You both know where their with Mami issues lie. This is your price. Does she still think it's too small?
    [X] Roll things back a bit, you're worried you may be being pushy and inconsiderate... again: Ask Kyouko if she's insistent because she feels obligated to return the favor, or if helping us is something wants to do. You don't want obligation, but you could accept Kyouko doing things because she wants to.
    -[X] Part of your problem accepting things from her thinking they're her obligation is that the things you could ask are also things you have no right to ask. Ever.
 
Leading vote understands the issues at "S" rating. These things should happen.
The timing is aggressive, given the stress cues from Kyouko.
Failure mode would be getting Kyouko to end the day on a hard break.
Despite having a lead to open the talk, is this day the time to fix the Mami-Kyouko rift?
It is too much to ask in my view.

Consolidate our gains, prepare for the future is my advice.

Did we get far indeed with Kyouko already? While there is no action agreed upon, she has granted us a better emotional access / status than before. Is that as much progress as we can expect in one go?

My read is that emotional fatigue / resistance is a factor right now. The limiting factor. Kyouko doesn't have a lot of ability to carry on at the pace we want her to. Yuma seems to perceive this.

What can we do immediately?
Pursue further goals in conversation - or action?
Reinforce the conversation we already had?
Finish up for today?
Change the mood?

In large measure, trying to 'solve' Mami-Kyouko is a large reach ATM. So starting now will leave this issue hanging. Agreed? I understand the topic is 'opened,' my caution is that we have not got her ready for success yet. The odds of finding a setback with Kyouko are not something I suggest we test.

Our progress today stands upon preparation and effort Sabrina and Sayaka are putting towards this end. We need further preparation? To begin with, Kyouko might need more time to adjust, from hours to days. It is very possible to reach Kyouko, if, IF, IF, we carefully choose the "teachable moments." We just went through the proof. Letting us in to this extent might be the size of our current window. Sabrina is still adapting to Kyouko, we are not level-capped yet.

Our preparation to bring Kyouko in the rest of the way has at least three checkpoints for us to navigate. Her pride, her guilt and her apprehension.

I see us as working on the Pride requirement. So far, her very hard work isn't an externally rewarding experience. Wouldn't we do best by increasing her healthy affirmations, while slowly challenging her obstructive pride? Our intention so far adds up to this, and there are some results. Aside from us paying her for training, she needs other external valuation / validation. Our role is to help her find and turn those positive experiences into a feeling of safety. Parents can't do that for her now, but her peers might.

Instead of "defending herself with inflated pride" in a preemptive manner, the nice goal would be "internalizing the feeling of confidence." Owning the support and love of her chosen people, such that there is no threat she needs to defend against anymore. With confidence, Kyouko might consider normal risk-taking in relationships again.

Kyouko has a lot of work to unseat her guilt, because she has written a lot of her narrative around that. We are going to need assistance before she gets a handle on that thinking. Ultimately, our best help will come from Mami, once she becomes healthier. Mami has personal insight into the feeling of survivors guilt. Mami is also very experienced at talking with Kyouko. If only this were possible today! In the present, we need to hold relations and lives together for that future, and without that help. Our ability to truly affect Kyouko's guilt is incomplete right now, so the better goal should be to "place Kyouko in the circumstance similar to being healthy." In our world of "everything can be fixed," the options aren't zero. The option is Yuma, so conditionally following her lead and supporting the heck out her narrative is the best way to lift Kyouko for now.

Apprehension is perhaps the available challenge to us. Kyouko isn't playing the Tsundere here as part of a school romance plot. Her concerns are likely simple and visceral, computations of survival. Likening her aspect to a cat makes sense, and part of the reason we have trouble catching cues from Kyouko is because she is holding them in. The proximal motive is her goal to maintain dominance. When everything is scarce, and anyone might fight with her, it just makes sense to tell everyone who the boss is. Valid point?
Our first move was establishing the current resource alliance. That has stalled, likely not over any issue with her opinion over Clear seeds, but her instincts regarding personal power. Those won't disappear soon. That doesn't mean we can't soften them substantially with proof of our position. Safety and effectiveness are not what we should aim to prove. The social outcome is what we need to drive home. If Kyouko has the confidence to understand the relation of help and power as Sabrina sees it, things would get easier.

We will need to send more input to Kyouko in order to deliver this proof, and the manner of starting this is something it has come time to deliberate.

Will we play the Michiru card, and how? I think that setting Kyouko into contact with the Pleiades can prove our point for us, and has the synergy of a "sister student" relation that should also help Kyouko find her way back to Mami. And witnessing Magical Girls that DO help one another has to help.

For today?
### Let's establish an agreement to have another serious talk, and schedule that. We can invite her along to visit Yuki, if we want to spend a bit more effort on opening up the view of us Kyouko gets. We don't need her to do anything. As far as I know, the more she learns the truth of Sabrina first-person, the better for us. Invites aren't expensive, and Kyouko retains control to say no.

### Let's clean up the spill with her, and make it a fun event. Grief IS the quicker-picker-upper, which is to say we have plenty of capacity to fool around while we do that. Animated foam characters is one possibility? Using our Control enchantment would be appropriate, but I fear that might be too slow today.

### As a direct answer to Kyouko, the right tact is to let her see our intent, but give her control. The short form could be "If it that is what you do, you will get more than my support. It is something that would happen for you."
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Lord Chungus on Jan 26, 2019 at 10:22 PM, finished with 149205 posts and 19 votes.

  • [X] You don't think Kyouko knows this, but if she were to just show up on Mami's doorstep tomorrow and say nothing at all, the reception she'd get from Mami would be this: repeated, tearful apologies mixed with offers of food and friendship, and possibly also housing. Mami has no problem with her whatsoever.
    -[X] In response to Kyouko disbelieving: Mami has no problem with Kyouko. Mami's problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. At one point, you accidentally convinced Mami that you were breaking ties with her, and promptly ended up in a ribbon cocoon -- and you weren't even transformed. The only thing you've ever heard from Mami on the topic is how much she regrets what she did that last night -- and based on everything you know about her, the sentiment there is that she wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    --[X] If it becomes relevant: "Mami tried to kill Kyouko that night" is a false statement.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're out here saying all this stuff to her because you're a saint or somesuch, preaching about how everyone deserves redemption no matter who they are. But the fact of the matter is, there is literally only one person who has a problem with Kyouko, and that's Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [X] ... You're sorry about what you said about housing.
    [X] There's a lot less of an issue with her hanging out than she thinks there is. Nobody really has an issue with her - not even Mami.
    -[X] Mami's issues aren't with Kyouko. Mami's main problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. As far as you can tell, when it comes to that night, Mami wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're here just because you're that much of a bleeding heart. But truthfully the only one who has a problem with Kyouko is Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [x] There is no problem with you hanging out with the rest of my friends. Mami for one would jump for joy if you came back.
    [X] Wait until the great bubble debacle is over. Help if neccessary.
    [X] When you are alone again:
    -[X] So she's asking what she can do in return. Repeatedly. Heh, guess you're not the only one with a bleeding heart in the room, not that you didn't know.
    -[X] Can you punch her for making your girlfriend sad and lonely?
    --[X] ... Is that what she wanted to hear?
    -[X] The problem with having knowledge of private things is that you've taken their privacy away without consent or giving anything in return. You are uncomfortable with that.
    --[X] You're even more uncomfortable with her defeatist attitude. Plough on.
    ---[X] You know what she said and what she did. You know why she said and did what she did.
    ---[X] It was selfish and self-destructive, making Mami hurt to hurt herself. Get over it.
    -[X] The one thing you want from her is to stop punishing herself, to stop being a coward and get on with the rest of her life.
    --[X] Fix what she can, and let go of what she cannot. You both know where their with Mami issues lie. This is your price. Does she still think it's too small?
    [X] Roll things back a bit, you're worried you may be being pushy and inconsiderate... again: Ask Kyouko if she's insistent because she feels obligated to return the favor, or if helping us is something wants to do. You don't want obligation, but you could accept Kyouko doing things because she wants to.
    -[X] Part of your problem accepting things from her thinking they're her obligation is that the things you could ask are also things you have no right to ask. Ever.

Adhoc vote count started by Lord Chungus on Jan 26, 2019 at 10:25 PM, finished with 149206 posts and 19 votes.

  • [x] Kaizuki
    [X] There's a lot less of an issue with her hanging out than she thinks there is. Nobody really has an issue with her - not even Mami.
    -[X] Mami's issues aren't with Kyouko. Mami's main problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. As far as you can tell, when it comes to that night, Mami wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're here just because you're that much of a bleeding heart. But truthfully the only one who has a problem with Kyouko is Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [x] There is no problem with you hanging out with the rest of my friends. Mami for one would jump for joy if you came back.
    [X] Wait until the great bubble debacle is over. Help if neccessary.
    [X] When you are alone again:
    -[X] So she's asking what she can do in return. Repeatedly. Heh, guess you're not the only one with a bleeding heart in the room, not that you didn't know.
    -[X] Can you punch her for making your girlfriend sad and lonely?
    --[X] ... Is that what she wanted to hear?
    -[X] The problem with having knowledge of private things is that you've taken their privacy away without consent or giving anything in return. You are uncomfortable with that.
    --[X] You're even more uncomfortable with her defeatist attitude. Plough on.
    ---[X] You know what she said and what she did. You know why she said and did what she did.
    ---[X] It was selfish and self-destructive, making Mami hurt to hurt herself. Get over it.
    -[X] The one thing you want from her is to stop punishing herself, to stop being a coward and get on with the rest of her life.
    --[X] Fix what she can, and let go of what she cannot. You both know where their with Mami issues lie. This is your price. Does she still think it's too small?
    [X] Roll things back a bit, you're worried you may be being pushy and inconsiderate... again: Ask Kyouko if she's insistent because she feels obligated to return the favor, or if helping us is something wants to do. You don't want obligation, but you could accept Kyouko doing things because she wants to.
    -[X] Part of your problem accepting things from her thinking they're her obligation is that the things you could ask are also things you have no right to ask. Ever.
    [X] You don't think Kyouko knows this, but if she were to just show up on Mami's doorstep tomorrow and say nothing at all, the reception she'd get from Mami would be this: repeated, tearful apologies mixed with offers of food and friendship, and possibly also housing. Mami has no problem with her whatsoever.
    -[X] In response to Kyouko disbelieving: Mami has no problem with Kyouko. Mami's problem is her massive and repeatedly exacerbated abandonment issues. At one point, you accidentally convinced Mami that you were breaking ties with her, and promptly ended up in a ribbon cocoon -- and you weren't even transformed. The only thing you've ever heard from Mami on the topic is how much she regrets what she did that last night -- and based on everything you know about her, the sentiment there is that she wishes she'd told Kyouko that her door would always be open instead of trying to force her to stay.
    --[X] If it becomes relevant: "Mami tried to kill Kyouko that night" is a false statement.
    [X] Kyouko thinks you're out here saying all this stuff to her because you're a saint or somesuch, preaching about how everyone deserves redemption no matter who they are. But the fact of the matter is, there is literally only one person who has a problem with Kyouko, and that's Kyouko. The only person who believes for a moment that she's condemned is her.
    [X] ... You're sorry about what you said about housing.
 
It occurs to me that Sabrina can imbue her magic with emotions as she channels the magic.

It further occurs to me that Sabrina's instinctive first action when confronted with grief was to create wings.

At some point in the future, we should try to create wings of hope. :D
 
It occurs to me that Sabrina can imbue her magic with emotions as she channels the magic.

It further occurs to me that Sabrina's instinctive first action when confronted with grief was to create wings.

At some point in the future, we should try to create wings of hope. :D

Hmmm. Sabrina doesn't really have any special ability to manipulate Hope compared to other magical girls, but I suppose that experience with grief wings might carry over.

I guess we could observe if other magical girls are able to learn the technique, if we're able to pull it off ourselves? If they can, then it's a win because we get to spread the ability to fly to everybody, and if they can't then it's a win because it more or less confirms that we're literally one of Madoka's Angels.
 
I kind of imagine that since Sabrina wants to fix everything her Labyrinth would take the form of a world where everything is broken and it's all her fault.

A world in ruins - a blasted post-apocalyptic landscape with neither civilisation nor even a stable ecosystem. Some familiars pretending to be the witch forms of the magical girls she knew in life - representing her failure to save the magical girls. Others being human cattle lead away in chains by other crueller humans or scrounging through the dirt for scraps - representing a failure to save humanity.

And Delodere itself? Well a giant kyubey would be fitting maybe - I don't think there's much Sabrina would hate becoming more.
 
I assume that a witch *has* a labyrinth even if they're strong enough to not need to hide inside it.

Certainly we know Gretchen has one despite certainly being strong enough not to need it. Walpurgisnacht, we don't know.
 
It occurs to me that Sabrina can imbue her magic with emotions as she channels the magic.

It further occurs to me that Sabrina's instinctive first action when confronted with grief was to create wings.

At some point in the future, we should try to create wings of hope. :D
Hmmm. Sabrina doesn't really have any special ability to manipulate Hope compared to other magical girls, but I suppose that experience with grief wings might carry over.

I guess we could observe if other magical girls are able to learn the technique, if we're able to pull it off ourselves? If they can, then it's a win because we get to spread the ability to fly to everybody, and if they can't then it's a win because it more or less confirms that we're literally one of Madoka's Angels.

The legitimate experimental path is to determine if there is any difference between hope, when we experience the emotion or re-live such a memory while flowing magic outside our form, and Hope as a subtle material in the same class as visible Grief.

Can we try to use Grief to interact with other invisible solid emotions, such that a "normal" emotionally-infused 3D area from which we only remove all Grief, might exhibit a positive imbalance of Hope?

That isn't designed to interact with the Hope in detail, just make it observable.

Of course, that would only be a rationalist way to pursue the goal.
We have friends, one of them should have an affinity for Hope that would let her simply tag the Hope wings on us with a slap between the shoulders.
 
I always imagined Dedolere's labyrinth would expand to consume everything, so that she can control everything. Replacing causality with her own will, turning the entire universe into her doll house.

She can do whatever she wants, and she makes everyone happy. But with such perfect control, no one is really anything. She's lonesomely observing a could-have-been world, achieving the smiles she longed for at the cost of the satisfying soul of them.

Dedolere becomes Sabrina's ultimate logical conclusion: A fanfic-author, controlling an imaginary world, with no respect for the original intended plan of the universe, and making all the characters her own.

They all despair no more, but... why doesn't she feel better?
 
Nova Prospekt pt. 15
You unwrap your popsicle thoughtfully and take an equally thoughtful bite, watching Kyouko try to figure out how to get rid of all the bubbles. You... should probably see about helping out with that.

Kyouko produces a spear, which explodes into chains that rear up like a snake, allowing her to step on the blade and try to fish out the vaguely humanoid blob of bubbles Yuma has become. You can vaguely see a mop of green hair somewhere in there.

You take another bite, letting the cold run over your tongue. Sweet and tangy, nondescript lime flavour. You really should go help Kyouko, who's currently trying to rescue a non-bubbled towel for Yuma.

Ah well. Sitting half-twisted around on the sofa and craning your neck around is kind of tiring, anyway. You hop to your feet, a cloud of particulate Grief already rolling down the corridor ahead of you. You flood the bathroom with Grief, popping all the bubbles and scooping the water down the drain. For good measure, you pull the plug on the tub to drain it.

"Couldn't have done that earlier?" Kyouko grumbles, wrapping Yuma with a towel.

"Could've," you agree, punctuating that with another bite of your ice lolly.

"Yuma still wants to bathe!" Yuma declares.

"No more bubble foam," Kyouko chides. "Where did you even get that much this time?"

"Yuma... found it?" Yuma says with a distinctly shifty look.

"That's what we do," Kyouko says, snorting and nudging Yuma back towards the bathroom. "Now go on. No more bubbles!"

"OK!" Yuma says brightly, beaming at the both of you.

Kyouko shakes her head as the door shuts with a click. "How even..."

"You know, I'm beginning to suspect she does it on purpose," you say, taking another bite of your popsicle. "Has she done this before?"

"Oh, she has," Kyouko says, snorting. "Usually not this much."

"Oh," you say, and shrug. "So much for that idea."

"C'mon, she's seven," Kyouko says. "And a damn smart cookie, but she ain't fucking around with us."

"That you know of," you say. You have a vague impression that an older Yuma would probably turn out to be the most unexpectedly, deeply scary spymaster, but you're not terribly sure where that impression comes from.

Kyouko snorts, rolling her eyes as she meanders back to the sofa, vaulting over the back and sprawling out. You follow at a more sedate pace to seat yourself, still snacking on your ice lolly. Kyouko's has long since disappeared, and she fiddles with the stick, staring you down.

"So the thing is," you say. "I'm pretty sure that you don't know this, but if you were to just... show up on Mami's doorstep tomorrow and say absolutely nothing at all, the reception you'd get from Mami would be this: repeated, tearful apologies, mixed with offers of food, friendship, and housing."

"Bullshit," Kyouko snaps. Burning eyes snap to yours.

You meet her gaze calmly, despite the danger smoldering in her look. You're not backing down over this. Kyouko invited the topic. Kyouko knowingly invited the topic. It's important to you and Kyouko - and it's important to Mami. You need to get through to her, and something tells you this is one of very, very few chances you'll ever get.

"Do you know why you ended up fighting?" you ask. You hold your hand out, gesturing at her with the outstretched palm. "She doesn't have a problem with you. Mami's problem is that until very recently, literally everyone in her life eventually abandoned her or abused her trust."

You laugh, and if there's bitterness in it, well, it's just you and Kyouko - who opens her mouth to say something, but you cut her off with a slice of your hand through the air. Her fist clenches, jaw setting hard, but you are not backing down. Because she's getting annoyed, she's getting angry, but that's her defense mechanism.

"You're not special," you say with a razor-sharp smile. "At one point, I accidentally convinced her I was breaking ties with her, and promptly ended up in a ribbon cocoon. And yet, the only thing I've ever heard from Mami on the topic is how much she regrets what she'd done that night."

"Bullshit!" Kyouko snarls, before softening her voice and darting a look towards the bathroom door, body taut with tension. She turns a blazing look on you. "She tried to kill me!"

You laugh in her face.

"If she wanted to hit you, she would have," you say, folding your arms. "No. She didn't."

Kyouko rears back as if struck, eyes burning and fingers twitching.

"You might've fought," you say. "But believe you me. She felt horrible for it, and she holds the pain still. Close to her heart."

And you smile again, wry and thin as you stand and start to pace slowly around the room, more out of having an outlet for your nervous energy than anything. It also puts you a bit out of immediate stabbing range. Kyouko's gaze tracks your motion as you brush your fingers over the television, over the curtains at the windows.

"You say I'm a saint or something," you say. "Forgive everyone, everyone deserves redemption no matter who they are. And that's... eh. There are some people..." You shake your head, trying not to think about the Soul Gem you're holding locked in Grief. Rionna. "But no. The relevant fact of the matter is this: you, Kyouko, are not unforgivable. There's literally one person who has a problem with you. And that's you."

You shove your hands into the pockets of your coat, facing Kyouko squarely. You've said your piece, and it's up to her to decide what she wants to make of it. And you watch her face flicker from anger, to dismay, to something else you can't really make out.

"Get out," Kyouko says.

Your heart falls.

"Kyouko, I-"

"I said get out-" Kyouko snarls. "Shut up, go away, I want to think. I'll think about it, OK? But I want to not have you throwing wordswordswords at me while I think! I'll think about it, now get out."

"I...," you start, before remembering something very important. "No. Grief Seeds first."

Kyouko makes a wordless, inarticulate noise, plunging her hand into her pocket and producing a handful of half-filled Grief Seeds you silently refresh.

"Happy?" she demands. "I'll be fine. Just- let me think."

"OK, OK," you say. "I'm sorry. Say bye to Yuma for me."

Kyouko's hand twitches, as if clenched around the invisible haft of an invisible spear.

You head out, carefully shutting the door behind you with a quiet click and padding away over the carpet.

Well.

That was...

Probably a success?

You'd definitely gotten through to Kyouko, at any rate. Some of it penetrated her shell. And she didn't actually chase you out because she was angry with you, not quite. Still. You pull your phone from your pocket - it's a little early, but you could conceivably head to Mitakihara Middle School right about now, and be just a bit early.

[] Lunchtime!
- [] Any particular points to hit?
[] Something quick to do before that?
- [] Check in with the Animators (Masami and Hiroko (and Ono))
- [] Check in with the Shiogama girls (Noriko and Akemi)
- [] Something else?
[] Write-in (word count limit: 150 words)


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A day late on the update. Oops? Aiming for an update Thursday again. (And if you wonder why I do this, it's because having a publicly announced target helps keep me on track, as well as letting you guys know what to expect.)
 
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Ok I hope that after that Kyouko still goes through us so we can arrange an encounter if she wants to meet rather than literally just showing up on Mami's doorstep. That ... could be chaotic.

Not that we should have done anything differently, just idle musing.
 
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