Okay, on re-reading I'm
certain that something bad is up in Sendai.
Rin looks a little... heavier than she used to. Not literally. Physically, she looks the same emerald figure-shrouding haori wrapped around a cream-coloured undershirt, trimmed with frills and bands of yellow. But the worry lines around her deep green eyes and across her forehead are perhaps etched in a little harder, her motions perhaps a little weightier as she releases Sakura's arm and starts forward.
Rin is haggard, weighed down by something.
"Hey!" you say, grin already on your face. "Thanks for coming to pick me up, Rin-san, Tachibana-san!"
"Fuck you, Witch Girl" Sakura snaps, almost on reflex.
Sakura studies you for a second, and snorts. "Fuck you, you're not sorry. You don't know how to keep your hands to yourself."
"If I'd known, I'd have done it differently," you say, letting your arms drop. "I don't want people to suffer. In any way."
"We've got nothing to fucking talk about," Sakura snaps "Get on with it. The... stuff in the air's yours, right? Pull it in."
"Keep your resolving to yourself," Sakura spits. "We going, or we going?"
Sakura is
furious with us, more so than she was before.
"How's things in Sendai been?" you ask, glancing at Rin.
"Uneasy," Rin says. "We're not really sure what to do. We give the University group a wide berth, and we just... hang out, now that we're not forced to fight."
And when combined with all that,
this reads like Rin is avoiding a topic.
[ ] Yuki
-[ ] Ask to see the location.
-[ ] Finalize details.
--[ ] Include Anti Magic enchantments. Hint they're a great help for ending fights without harm.
--[ ] Sabrina Vee guarantee™: They don't have to trust our Clear Seeds. Wether those pan out or not, we're ending the Grief Seed scarcity problem.
-[ ] Talk about the effect of our actions, and how they will affect mercenaries such as her.
-[ ] Mention the possibility of long term cooperation, with us and other groups.
-[ ] Mention Walpurgisnacht.
[ ] Rin. Try and find a chance to talk to her alone.
-[ ] Ask about Sakura's mood.
-[ ] Ask how everyone is doing. Thought about going back to more normal lives?
-[ ] Ask about getting Akiko professional help.
[ ] Kyuubey.
-[ ] Grief Seed dump. Keep enough for large Witch effects and the cloud.
[ ] Bring Anri over.
-[ ] Thank Oriko and Kirika again.
-[ ] Ask them to invite you and Mami to dinner some time?
I want to make some changes here:
[] Payment
-[] Call O&K and Homura. Explain request.
[] Yuki
-[] Ask to see the location.
-[] Various chat topics (intersperse as appropriate):
--[] Ask if Nishimura, Koizumi, and
Kuvira Akiyama are alright.
--[] She said she had "supervillains" in town... You're
really curious.
--[] Recommend saving grief seeds. Hint at dewitching research.
-[] Finalize details
--[] You're happy giving them Anti-Magic, and nonlethal options generally.
-[] Discuss hiring them again in the future. You like them already.
--[] Ask other payments/services she might be interested in.
--[] If amicable, explain various ideas. And that unnatural disaster, Walpurgisnacht.
Cut the "Vee guarantee" and the "hinting," since I don't think the tone of either of those things play well here. I think it's much better here to be open and frank. Let our capabilities demonstrate themselves.
Added some of Veb's stuff.
Added general chat.
[] Telepathy Rin.
-[] You've got the impression something's rotten, and you're to blame.
--[] Ask if something's happening. Particularly with Akiko and/or power-loss.
Didn't like the idea of getting Akiko "professional help," since that seems pretty condescending. Stuck to examining what's wrong this round.
[] Kyuubey.
-[] Grief dump. Keep two clear seeds' worth.
Shortened.
Cut the final talk, since there's likely more to get to.
--[] Explain welcome expected decline in witch-hunting motivation.
I think this is missing important details. I don't think the decline of witch-hunting is something to so much call in Fukushima
for, as to ask their help in setting up a system to outright replace the current way things work. We'd do just as much to call in the University group for it.
I'm not sure how to handle that, but it's been a while already, so I'm posting.