I think the last of the last update segues well into talking with Oriko about hoe she's wrong (tm), how she shouldn't try to be the cartoon villain we can all rally against.

How about this, Redshirt Army's vote, but with less hypothetical stuff:

[] Telepathy Homura, keep Mami on the line: Inform her that the meeting went... decently.
-[] Make sure Homura understands that Sayaka's calmed down a bit and has a clean gem.
--[] But she left alone and upset, and you're a little worried that she might do something rash and get into trouble.
---[] Apologize for not letting her know in advance that we'd be showing up at Oriko's.
-[] Inform her you'll be putting up a privacy construct while speaking with Oriko in a bit - unless she comes inside, we'll (Sabrina and Mami) be out of touch for a bit. We'll contact her once we're done?

^That's just updating Homu about Sayaka and Privacy Construct so KB doesn't hear the next part.

[] Ask for a moment and create a Privacy Construct.
-[] Yeah, it's too late to change it now, but please don't do stuff like that in the future. I don't... fatalism is one thing, but you aren't doing anyone any favors by taking all the blame in the world onto yourself. Not me, and not yourself.


-[] I've danced around this, because telling someone to change their mental state doesn't really work. But... look. When you made your wish, you sought to martyr yourself for your father's crimes. And that's exactly what your wish magic did: show you how to improve the world in a way that would get you killed - by me, by Homura, by Mami.

^Get rid of this.

--[] Oriko, you don't owe the world anything for what your father did. Your actions, and your responsibilities, are your own. And for what it's worth, I forgive you. You wanted to help, and your motivations were good even if your actions weren't perfect. You wanted Mami and Homura to cooperate for Walpurgisnacht, and on future problems, so you sacrificed yourself as a common enemy. You wanted Sayaka and Hitomi to maintain a positive relationship, so you hurt them in ways that would make them rely on each other, knowing you'd take the blame. And that's not a healthy mindset.
--[] I knew your background from the moment I woke up. I refuse to believe there wasn't a single possible chain of events where you couldn't have cooperated with us without acting like a cartoon villain - I convinced Homura to tolerate you after you burned down Sayaka's house, do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?

So,
[] Telepathy Homura, keep Mami on the line: Inform her that the meeting went... decently.
-[] Make sure Homura understands that Sayaka's calmed down a bit and has a clean gem.
--[] But she left alone and upset, and you're a little worried that she might do something rash and get into trouble.
---[] Apologize for not letting her know in advance that we'd be showing up at Oriko's.
-[] Inform her you'll be putting up a privacy construct while speaking with Oriko in a bit - unless she comes inside, we'll (Sabrina and Mami) be out of touch for a bit. We'll contact her once we're done?

[] Ask for a moment and create a Privacy Construct.
-[] Yeah, it's too late to change it now, but please don't do stuff like that in the future. I don't... fatalism is one thing, but you aren't doing anyone any favors by taking all the blame in the world onto yourself. Not me, and not yourself.
--[] Oriko, you don't owe the world anything for what your father did. Your actions, and your responsibilities, are your own. And for what it's worth, I forgive you. You wanted to help, and your motivations were good even if your actions weren't perfect. You wanted Mami and Homura to cooperate for Walpurgisnacht, and on future problems, so you sacrificed yourself as a common enemy. You wanted Sayaka and Hitomi to maintain a positive relationship, so you hurt them in ways that would make them rely on each other, knowing you'd take the blame. And that's not a healthy mindset.
--[] I knew your background from the moment I woke up. I refuse to believe there wasn't a single possible chain of events where you couldn't have cooperated with us without acting like a cartoon villain - I convinced Homura to tolerate you after you burned down Sayaka's house, do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?

And afterwards we can ask about movies and games and leave and talk with Mami and Homu or whatever. Check on Sayaka, call Madoka...

But right now, I think this might be good.

Though, I'd like to check how bad Oriko's Soul has twisted itself before leaving.
 
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Okay, so, as the owner of the PMAS Discord server, I'm ruling that discussion about the current vote must be done here.

@Firnagzen, if you could edit the story posts to reflect that, to prevent the thread from fragmenting between SV and Discord, that would be greatly appreciated.
Does this include the private convo's and stuff? Because I can get behind that.
 
[x] Telepathy Homura, keep Mami on the line: Inform her that the meeting went... decently.
-[x] Make sure Homura understands that Sayaka's calmed down a bit and has a clean gem.
--[x] But she left alone and upset, and you're a little worried that she might do something rash and get into trouble.
---[x] Apologize for not letting her know in advance that we'd be showing up at Oriko's.
-[x] Inform her you'll be putting up a privacy construct while speaking with Oriko in a bit - unless she comes inside, we'll (Sabrina and Mami) be out of touch for a bit. We'll contact her once we're done?

[x] Ask for a moment and create a Privacy Construct.
-[x] Yeah, it's too late to change it now, but please don't do stuff like that in the future. I don't... fatalism is one thing, but you aren't doing anyone any favors by taking all the blame in the world onto yourself. Not me, not yourself, not the world.

[x] Oriko, you don't owe the world anything for what your father did. Your actions, and your responsibilities, are your own. And for what it's worth, I forgive you for what you've done. You wanted to help, and your motivations were good, even if your actions leave much to be desired.
-[x] You wanted Mami and Homura to cooperate for Walpurgisnacht, and on future problems, so you sacrificed yourself as a common enemy.
--[x] You wanted Sayaka and Hitomi to maintain a positive relationship, so you hurt them in ways that would make them rely on each other, knowing you'd take the blame.
---[x] That's not a healthy mindset, Oriko.

[x] I knew your background from the moment I woke up. I don't - I refuse to believe there wasn't a single possible chain of events where you couldn't have improved the world, and accomplished those goals, without acting like a cartoon villain - I convinced Homura to tolerate you after you burned down Sayaka's house, do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?
 
[X] Redshirt Army

Simple enough.

Let's keep it simple. Let's keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple. Keep it simple...

(inb4 SV)
 
Keep it as simple as possible but no simpler, and I think that this has made it too simple to work. Without a stronger argument it's just repeating what we've already said and Oriko's way too stubborn for simple tactics like that to work. I think that this block:
[x] Oriko, you don't owe the world anything for what your father did. Your actions, and your responsibilities, are your own. And for what it's worth, I forgive you for what you've done. You wanted to help, and your motivations were good, even if your actions leave much to be desired.
-[x] You wanted Mami and Homura to cooperate for Walpurgisnacht, and on future problems, so you sacrificed yourself as a common enemy.
--[x] You wanted Sayaka and Hitomi to maintain a positive relationship, so you hurt them in ways that would make them rely on each other, knowing you'd take the blame.
---[x] That's not a healthy mindset, Oriko.

[x] I knew your background from the moment I woke up. I don't - I refuse to believe there wasn't a single possible chain of events where you couldn't have improved the world, and accomplished those goals, without acting like a cartoon villain - I convinced Homura to tolerate you after you burned down Sayaka's house, do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?
Is part of an effective Orikotalk, but not sufficient as an entire Orikotalk.
 
Keep it as simple as possible but no simpler, and I think that this has made it too simple to work. Without a stronger argument it's just repeating what we've already said and Oriko's way too stubborn for simple tactics like that to work. I think that this block:

Is part of an effective Orikotalk, but not sufficient as an entire Orikotalk.
We can keep Orikotalking next update after she answers. We haven't voted to leave yet.
 
We can keep Orikotalking next update after she answers. We haven't voted to leave yet.
That's fair.
do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?
Oriko: "Yes, I do believe that. My precog said so." It's pretty much what she said the last time we brought it up, that's why the discussion has revolved around undermining her belief in her precog.
 
[X] Redshirt Army
It covers stuff that's useful to cover, without dragging in unneeded crap.
 
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Actually, Oriko said that her precog told her that if she approached Sabrina that it would cause things to go very poorly with Homura.
 
"It doesn't work. For example, without a clear and present threat, you fail to convince Miki Sayaka, barring extraordinary changes," Oriko denies. "Kaname Madoka..." her eyes slide over to Homura, and she cuts off the rest of the sentence.
And I guess we did believe her, it just didn't help. So same result - precog says it won't work - but I had the wrong details.
 
Clearly this post failed in its intended goals and instead only served to get people to go "What the fuck Kaizuki, how can you say those things."

So, it's not here anymore.
 
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[x] Telepathy Homura, keep Mami on the line: Inform her that the meeting went... decently.
-[x] Make sure Homura understands that Sayaka's calmed down a bit and has a clean gem.
--[x] But she left alone and upset, and you're a little worried that she might do something rash and get into trouble.
---[x] Apologize for not letting her know in advance that we'd be showing up at Oriko's.
-[x] Inform her you'll be putting up a privacy construct while speaking with Oriko in a bit - unless she comes inside, we'll (Sabrina and Mami) be out of touch for a bit. We'll contact her once we're done?

[x] Ask for a moment and create a Privacy Construct.
-[x] Yeah, it's too late to change it now, but please don't do stuff like that in the future. I don't... fatalism is one thing, but you aren't doing anyone any favors by taking all the blame in the world onto yourself. Not me, not yourself, not the world.

[x] Oriko, you don't owe the world anything for what your father did. Your actions, and your responsibilities, are your own. And for what it's worth, I forgive you for what you've done. You wanted to help, and your motivations were good, even if your actions leave much to be desired.
-[x] You wanted Mami and Homura to cooperate for Walpurgisnacht, and on future problems, so you sacrificed yourself as a common enemy.
--[x] You wanted Sayaka and Hitomi to maintain a positive relationship, so you hurt them in ways that would make them rely on each other, knowing you'd take the blame.
---[x] That's not a healthy mindset, Oriko.

[x] I knew your background from the moment I woke up. I don't - I refuse to believe there wasn't a single possible chain of events where you couldn't have improved the world, and accomplished those goals, without acting like a cartoon villain - I convinced Homura to tolerate you after you burned down Sayaka's house, do you really think I wouldn't have given you the benefit of the doubt if you just asked?

Redshirt...

I just...

No. Okay, here is what I'm going to say instead.

Instead of arguing against you, I'm going to ask that you take your vote, and you reprint it for me as [] Objective of this line.

Because I can't argue against this -- or vote for it -- until I thoroughly understand what you're trying to do here.

Please don't just post a paragraph explanation. Because I can see it in my head now and if I have to read it I'm just going to walk out the door, because I almost walked out the door instead of writing this and looking at your vote. So please.
 
[] Objective of this line.
Can we just... make that a general policy, please?

Sabrina can wordsmith herself. We'll get better results if we do that because then Sabrina is on the same wavelength as the rest of the characters in the quest. There are circumstances where you have to micromanage votes. Jade in Ignition was, for a long time, so depressed and had so many issues that we had to choose every word carefully to avoid poking her anxiety triggers. But Firn isn't a dick and Sabrina can social reasonably well, and we can and should trust Sabrina to choose the words for us.

Even if we decide to do wordsmithing, can we please leave it to the end of the vote, as a final pass before we actually send it off to be spoken?
 
Can we just... make that a general policy, please?

Sabrina can wordsmith herself. We'll get better results if we do that because then Sabrina is on the same wavelength as the rest of the characters in the quest. There are circumstances where you have to micromanage votes. Jade in Ignition was, for a long time, so depressed and had so many issues that we had to choose every word carefully to avoid poking her anxiety triggers. But Firn isn't a dick and Sabrina can social reasonably well, and we can and should trust Sabrina to choose the words for us.

Even if we decide to do wordsmithing, can we please leave it to the end of the vote, as a final pass before we actually send it off to be spoken?

You know what, this. Because it will make stupid shit really fucking apparent.

Like...

x] She nearly took my leg off with a landmine. I've got at least as much right to pass judgment as either of you.
[x] And no, I didn't deliberately take Oriko's arm as some sort of retribution. I would never do such thing. Heck, I didn't take her arm off at all. This was combat. Real battles between magical girls aren't like anime, where they throw glitter at each other and everybody comes out okay. They're brutal, and people get hurt very badly. All of us took injuries that would have hospitalized a normal person. During the fighting Oriko got hit by fire from a medium machine gun. A normal person would have died, but a magical girl can survive anything as long as their Soul Gem is intact. Homura and I spent hours just reattaching her head so we could talk to her.
[x] Or maybe you think that getting shot to pieces and put under house arrest wasn't punishment enough? Well, what would you suggest? Turn her over to the police? Human authorities can't stop a magical girl, and human prisons can't hold them. And that's assuming that the police could even remember that she existed, or have you forgotten about Kyubey's habit of erasing people's memories to keep magic a secret? The only justice for magical girls is what we make for ourselves. So what would you have done? Do you think I should have executed them? Could you have done such a thing? Because I don't think I could. You don't know how hard I had to argue for sparing their lives.
[x] Maybe I should have told you sooner. It's not exactly an easy thing to bring up! I was worried you might do something rash. Which, if you'll note the shards of glass around your feet, turned out to be the case. Maybe I didn't have to right to make that decision, but I wanted to protect you. I didn't want you to end up selling your soul to Kyubey for revenge. I wouldn't want any girl to ever have to subject herself to this life, to being a child soldier for Kyubey, if I could prevent it. God knows I never would have if I hadn't already been dying! But it didn't do any good. You wound up making the contract anyway. It would have been a lot easier to keep this secret forever, but I'm telling you now because I thought you deserved to know the truth. Maybe I was wrong, and if you want to hate me for that, that's your right, but all I ever wanted was to protect the people I care about. All of you.

Try voting that as a list of objectives. Fucking try.
 
Yes and no.

The fact of the matter is, there's a lot of reasons why people discuss things in other settings besides the thread. Notably, when people routinely feel like some users are continually present who don't make meaningful, reasonable debate but who nonetheless criticize, there's a lot of push towards not dealing with those people.

Why post where there's stuff like that, when you could instead post somewhere where you'll still reach everyone you feel is important -- the other people who engage in debate -- without having to deal with the other garbage?

...

Due to the quest premise, it is desirable that all goings-on be conducted in-thread.

Due to the uninvolvement, negative involvement, and the perception that only some users actually matter -- which, may I note, arises from the uninvolvement and the negative involvement! -- it becomes desired to conduct important goings-on outside the thread.

There are times when conducting things outside the thread is necessary for other reasons. Particularly, during the metabomb, utilizing a private conversation -- essentially, a closed-doors meeting of the people who had large voting blocks -- allowed for calmer, more advanced, and more intelligent decision-making.

But things aren't that way much of the time.

The ideal here is that under normal conditions all business that can be conducted in-thread should, and users should be constructive, responsive, and willing to acknowledge when they are simply being overruled -- because that will happen.

A lot of what we've seen lately has been that, basically, Redshirt, Myself, and maybe a couple of other people actually have a goddamn thing to say about votes, and then people hop onto the votes and that's that.

What the discord server rather quickly revealed is that a whole bunch more people than just those few actually would like to be involved in the votesmithing process, and were capable of being involved, despite all the evidence to the contrary from thread and the ever-present anecdote that "Only special people make votes in PMAS."

This raised the question of why the hell that was the case. Why were these people participating over there, when they weren't before the discord went up.

And part of the answer to that is private conversations, and part of the answer to that is they were apathetic about being involved until people plopped down in front of them and started line-by-line votesmithing in front of their faces.

Make no mistake, it's been possible to be involved in votecrafting without being in the PM circles. @Sereg has shown us that. It's harder because the PMs do exist. But it's not fucking easy, with or without the PMs existing. Because PMAS is a hard quest, and it requires a lot of thinking. It's easy to be involved in votecrafting on the discord because there's a very low minimum commitment, you can just hang around and watch as the usual suspects hammer away and then if you have something to add you can add it at the moment that it becomes relevant. The votes take shape over there over time rather than appearing in one big chunk. It makes it a lot easier to give input.

Whereas here, on SV, you votecraft a whole vote, you post it, then a bunch of people look at it and go "Uh... sure i guess" and wander away because it's hard to interject ideas into that. And then some guy inevitably frankenvotes the two initial leaders and usually the result gets pushed away. Nobody ever gets to see the reasoning the votecrafter puts into the vote unless the vote is questioned, and then it becomes arguing against the questioner's proposals instead of explaining the original reasoning, although that does get worked in fairly often.

The problem of course is that, quest premise being that not merely votes but ALL THREAD POSTS play into Sabrina, having these discussions elsewhere undermines the quest.

...

One potential thought would be to try a very large lockout after every post. To the degree that anyone who posts a vote of more than one line within two days of a story post is temp threadbanned for a week. That might encourage votesmithers to format things as thoughts, first, instead of votes, in a way more like what we've seen from the discord. Of course, the tradeoff would be that it would come at cost to the people who actually make the fucking votes, which... We put in a lot of fucking work. And it would come at cost to the quest, potentially, since there might be less time for votes to be scrutinized. But if the system could be made to work that way, to work more like things ran over at discord, that might lower the bar for involvement.

...

That said...

SV policy on violations is "Report it and move on." And that's how negative influences are supposed to be dealt with.

But, and this is going to be potentially controversial but I'm going to fucking say it, there can be and have been negative influences, in this thread, without the existence of violations.

They are what drove Ugolino to madness. They are a constant nuisance, not a public disruption but a nuisance to those most involved in the thread.

Stuff like "Let's witchbomb Mami," that's an extreme example, it's both a problem and at the same time intrinsically not one because new users or users with ideas from outside the mainstream must be tolerated because that's site policy, that's thread policy, because it's necessary to allow that sort of thing. Because otherwise you don't get a lot of the new ideas and users that you otherwise might.

But these are by their very nature the things that drive experienced veteran users to PMs and outside settings. Because somebody who has sunk hours and hours into this quest and who has learned to look at things in it with a mature viewpoint and to respect the characters in the quest and who has seen, too god damn many times these nuisances, they get sick of dealing with them. It's part of why we get giant block votes out of nowhere. Because people have seen that when they start trying to construct these things piece by piece, they get a lot of thoughtless questions and comments, a lot of nuisance posts, and if they succumb to the temptation to endlessly respond to the nuisance posts -- they get nowhere! If you go look at the metabomb discussion in this thread, that's the best example of that behavior. There was a constant effort on many parts to do a lot of vote discussion and building in-thread, partly because there were a bunch of users who weren't normally involved in things (and so were outside all the PMs, etc) who came in and had vote blocks and built votes. But every time somebody wandered into the thread, and didn't read anything, and posted "oh I think this," the people trying to build the votes got derailed from building the votes.

...

So, look. We can make a community where all the votecrafting goes on in this thread, and potentially one where the votecrafting is done gradually, in thread, with active discussion from lots of participants. But doing that is going to require a lot of effort from everyone involved, at first. The nuisance posting has to be reduced somehow, both by new users and by people who are hanging around. The people who the veteran users view as just plain undesirables, and avoid using the thread because of them, something would have to be done about that, there's not a lot of those people, they're not doing anything infraction-worthy, but there is a reason that Ugolino has been banned so many times, and it's not because he's insane, it's because he's highly moral and extremely vocal about it, but for that quality to get him banned there were people to trigger that off. And the people who have constantly rejected the votes to take people to task, to do X violent thing, to do Y mean thing, to do Z crazy idiotic thing, blah blah blah, they have some of Ugolino in them too and they tend to do a lot of votebuilding because they're the ones who care.


... To cut out some of the ambiguity, on that topic: personal experience, I have since the metabomb repeatedly found that I preferred to discuss votes in PMs with other people I respected because it meant not dealing with... Well, for instance, with TheEyes. The PMs are a calmer environment, where I can expect to get reasoned and levelheaded feedback, at a consistently high level of detail, absent the various negative social pressures found in the thread.

So, and I guess if I haven't made this clear enough by now I should be shot, but, there's two problems between us and a more involved style of votebuilding being conducted in this thread. Other people have to be willing to be more involved. And the reasons that the usual suspects for building votes go to PMs to do it need to be addressed.

That was why discord worked so damn attractively (as opposed to working well -- the lack of archiving capability was a pain in the ass) for votebuilding in the few days since it was set up. We got a whole bunch of veteran users on there, they talked, a bunch of other equally reasonable users got on, nobody was nuisance posting, and suddenly we had the votebuilding going on in an environment that the veteran users liked being in and the other users were also there.

I guess I've written an essay at this point. And, you know, some people are going to disagree with it I guess. Some might be offended. I've certainly gone ahead and called kind of a whole nebulous group of people negative influences, which I guess is probably edging site rules. But there's simply no effective way for me to discuss this without raising that point. Because I'm trying to explain what I feel are the stimuli pushing me towards using PMs instead of the thread, and saying that that wasn't one would be lying. So if I'm to talk about the facts here... Then, well, yeah.


I disagree with nearly all of this. Let me be clear - I love PMAS. I have spent hours and hours crafting votes, debating issues, creating fanworks, and generally enjoying myself in this thread. My immediate response to the Discord channel - and those that were there can attest to this - was "why does this need to exist?". So to say that PMAS cannot exist in its current state - that those who aren't 'power users' are worthless distractions, is deeply concerning to me. This has not been a serious issue for literal years, and while a thread environment might not be conducive to your particular brand of votecrafting, insulting vast swathes of the playerbase and demanding a general rework of the system to fit your preferences is out of line.

If you want to talk about 'negative social pressures', bear in mind this - I believe that every opinion in PMAS deserves to be heard. I didn't agree with all of @Ugolino 's points - far from it, we were the leaders of opposing vote blocs for a significant period of time - but I opposed commentary that his opinion should be dismissed on several occasions, and directly petitioned @Firnagzen to oppose his threadbans repeatededly. @Sereg can attest that I did the same for him.

Your opinion - and my opinion, and anyone's opinion, IS NOT ELEVATED. What makes @TheEyes worthy of dismissal and ridicule, but not you? He has put forward well formatted posts that explain his opinions on many, many occasions, and has been a thread participant for longer than you - I suspect he has more successful votes than you across his time here as well.

You bring up the "witchbomb Mami" issue as an example of a repeated and annoying argument - but it's a valid point, and will continue to be a valid point well into the future of this quest. Keeping secrets has an inertia, and perhaps if someone new had brought up Orikobombing Sayaka when we got distracted by Kyuubey's memory wipe, we could have avoided the current issue.

You have just directly insulted a large portion of the playerbase of a quest I love, saying that their discussions make it impossible to have an intelligent discussion - and you bring up Discord, that rotting cesspool with no easy access to logs, where discussions derail each other constantly and it's impossible-to-get-a-word-in pace as your escape? You are entitled to your opinion, but I find that a very strange view indeed.

Redshirt...

I just...

No. Okay, here is what I'm going to say instead.

Instead of arguing against you, I'm going to ask that you take your vote, and you reprint it for me as [] Objective of this line.

Because I can't argue against this -- or vote for it -- until I thoroughly understand what you're trying to do here.

Please don't just post a paragraph explanation. Because I can see it in my head now and if I have to read it I'm just going to walk out the door, because I almost walked out the door instead of writing this and looking at your vote. So please.

My goal is to answer Oriko's response at the end of the previous update cogently and reasonably, in a way that makes it clear that we disapprove of her martyring herself.

My goal is for Sayaka's safety to be ensured, and for Homura Akemi to not be present during the following discussion, as I believe her presence at the current moment will unavoidably lead to additional frission between us and Oriko. I seek to do this in a way that is polite and not dismissive of Homura.

When addressing Oriko, I intend to impart some of the revelations that Oriko had in Symmetry Diamond which led to an improvement in that Oriko's mental state. I intend to do this with Mami present, as part of my larger push to involve Mami more deeply in our plans now that she is aware of our unusual knowledge.

All of this is made in the aims of:
a). Maintaining positive relations with Mami Tomoe and Akemi Homura, allowing us to make use of their abilities to advance our agenda and oppose conflicting agendas.
b). Improving Oriko Mikuni's mental state, because:
I. Doing so will potentially allow her to regain access to her precognition, allowing us to more effectively deal with threats and advance our future plans.
II. Doing so will improve Oriko's quality of life and expected lifespan.
 
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I think discussion of PMAS on discord without thorough copying to SV should probably be fucking banned in the future, because I see no reasonable alternative that doesn't directly undermine quest premise.
Having slept on it, I have decided that-
Okay, so, as the owner of the PMAS Discord server, I'm ruling that discussion about the current vote must be done here.

@Firnagzen, if you could edit the story posts to reflect that, to prevent the thread from fragmenting between SV and Discord, that would be greatly appreciated.
Yep.

Actual vote discussion will happen in the thread. It's for the sake of people who aren't able to hang out 24/7 in Discord, and it's reflective of Sabrina's mind - the Discord server is just for people to shitpost and whatnot. You can use Discord for short idea crafting and so forth, but I expect the bulk of decision making to happen here.

Also,
Can we just... make that a general policy, please?

Sabrina can wordsmith herself. We'll get better results if we do that because then Sabrina is on the same wavelength as the rest of the characters in the quest. There are circumstances where you have to micromanage votes. Jade in Ignition was, for a long time, so depressed and had so many issues that we had to choose every word carefully to avoid poking her anxiety triggers. But Firn isn't a dick and Sabrina can social reasonably well, and we can and should trust Sabrina to choose the words for us.

Even if we decide to do wordsmithing, can we please leave it to the end of the vote, as a final pass before we actually send it off to be spoken?
I very much like this idea. Not gonna enforce it as a general policy, but I like it.
 
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I disagree with nearly all of this. Let me be clear - I love PMAS. I have spent hours and hours crafting votes, debating issues, creating fanworks, and generally enjoying myself in this thread. My immediate response to the Discord channel - and those that were there can attest to this - was "why does this need to exist?". So to say that PMAS cannot exist in its current state - that those who aren't 'power users' are worthless distractions, is deeply concerning to me. This has not been a serious issue for literal years, and while a thread environment might not be conducive to your particular brand of votecrafting, insulting vast swathes of the playerbase and demanding a general rework of the system to fit your preferences is out of line.

If you want to talk about 'negative social pressures', bear in mind this - I believe that every opinion in PMAS deserves to be heard. I didn't agree with all of @Ugolino 's points - far from it, we were the leaders of opposing vote blocs for a significant period of time - but I opposed commentary that his opinion should be dismissed on several occasions, and directly petitioned @Firnagzen to oppose his threadbans repeatededly. @Sereg can attest that I did the same for him.

Your opinion - and my opinion, and anyone's opinion, IS NOT ELEVATED. What makes @TheEyes worthy of dismissal and ridicule, but not you? He has put forward well formatted posts that explain his opinions on many, many occasions, and has been a thread participant for longer than you - I suspect he has more successful votes than you across his time here as well.

You bring up the "metabomb Mami" issue as an example of a repeated and annoying argument - but it's a valid point, and will continue to be a valid point well into the future of this quest. Keeping secrets has an inertia, and perhaps if someone new had brought up Orikobombing Sayaka when we got distracted by Kyuubey's memory wipe, we could have avoided the current issue.

You have just directly insulted a large portion of the playerbase of a quest I love, saying that their discussions make it impossible to have an intelligent discussion - and you bring up Discord, that rotting cesspool with no easy access to logs, where discussions derail each other constantly and it's impossible to get a word in as your escape? You are entitled to your opinion, but I find that a very strange view indeed.

Your characterizations of many of my statements are inaccurate and exaggerated. Particularly that you think I'm claiming PMAS can't exist in its current state, because clearly it can.

Perhaps I should clarify. This is all largely in response to @Random832's comments earlier today, who found that the existence of Discord actually afforded them MORE ACCESS to the votebuilding process than they'd had before its creation and vehemently protested the ban on discussion.

Every opinion in PMAS does deserve to be heard, to be sure. I think I noted that such is necessary. But it is fact that many people get utterly, completely sick of things after enough repetitions. Ugolino. Luck, in TGWP on SB. Such things.

Noone's opinion is elevated, but many of the frequent vote-builders are veterans, and -- going by my experience, and by my understanding of Ugolino -- do come into conflict with these things.

Metabombing is not witchbombing.

Insulted? Possibly. But I think that to try to express why I found myself preferring to use PMs as opposed to the thread, what option do I have? Should I not express the fact that my annoyance with many of the questers was a large part of that?

I'll be the first to disown Discord as a medium. Even before people started talking about not using it I was getting publicly annoyed with the lack of an archival feature.

The post you quoted was and remains an attempt to explain how the positive features of the discord chat might be induced here on SV, to the best of my limited capabilities and with full frankness. I can understand your viewpoint on the matter fully. Know that I am stressed, exhausted, and not here to lambast PMAS' current structure. If I was, why would I stay?

Edit: I should probably also clarify that as an aid to help talk about the stimuli that I was trying to frame, some of my opinions on the matter were exxagurated. And TheEyes is not a horrible person. His behavior over the last week in particular, though, has annoyed me and made me not want to be in the thread at times, which made him a useful example.
 
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[] Objective of this line.
Eh, I usually try and convert vote lines into objective vote lines. Let me try.

[] Inform Homura of how the meeting's gone so far by telepathy; mention Sayaka's taking things in a mostly mature manner, but is still Sayaka.
-[] Apologize for not telling her we were coming. Also tell her we're making a privacy construct.

[] Warn and make the privacy construct.
[] Answer Oriko. She's not doing anybody any favours by trying to take all the blame in the world into herself. (She matters too (add?))

[] Tell Oriko that she doesn't owe the world anything. Not for herself, not for her father's actions. Her actions and responsibilities are her own, and for what it's worth it, we forgive her for what she's done, because she wanted to help, and because her motivations were at least partly good. (Again, her martyr fetish is bad)

Point of this line is basically what Oriko tells Yuma (and herself) in the side manga - it's basically what Oriko wants so badly to believe but doesn't allow herself to, and only manages it for Yuma's sake. That it's not her fault, that it's her father's fault, that all the people who hate her are wrong, that she can live for her own sake and that is fine.

[] Point out that Oriko's accomplished a lot of what she planned (Homu&Mami cooperation; SayaHitomi help), but that she did it by sacrificing herself and that's bad.

[] Point out that Oriko not being able to survive the month is straight up bullshit. Even if we're suspecting enemy action, she could have left and work through other megucas, mercenaries and the like, but she decided to do everything herself. That was her choice. She didn't have to be a cartoon villain. And if we managed to convince Homura to spare her after she burnt down Sayaka's house and blew up our leg (of course there's Orikomanipulations there but still), then we could have all worked together if she had straight up asked at the start.
(I'll add)-[] If not at the very start, she could have waited a few days until we gained Homura's trust, which we were doing fine btw, and then she could have walked up and told us all her story about feathers and what not.
 
My goal is to answer Oriko's response at the end of the previous update cogently and reasonably, in a way that makes it clear that we disapprove of her martyring herself.

My goal is for Sayaka's safety to be ensured, and for Homura Akemi to not be present during the following discussion, as I believe her presence at the current moment will unavoidably lead to additional frission between us and Oriko. I seek to do this in a way that is polite and not dismissive of Homura.

When addressing Oriko, I intend to impart some of the revelations that Oriko had in Symmetry Diamond which led to an improvement in that Oriko's mental state. I intend to do this with Mami present, as part of my larger push to involve Mami more deeply in our plans now that she is aware of our unusual knowledge.

All of this is made in the aims of:
a). Maintaining positive relations with Mami Tomoe and Akemi Homura, allowing us to make use of their abilities to advance our agenda and oppose conflicting agendas.
b). Improving Oriko Mikuni's mental state, because:
I. Doing so will potentially allow her to regain access to her precognition, allowing us to more effectively deal with threats and advance our future plans.
II. Doing so will improve Oriko's quality of life and expected lifespan.

I suppose you were influenced by first reading the essay post, but I'd rather thought my request on this matter was in good faith.

Instead of arguing against you, I'm going to ask that you take your vote, and you reprint it for me as [] Objective of this line.

Because I can't argue against this -- or vote for it -- until I thoroughly understand what you're trying to do here.

Please don't just post a paragraph explanation. Because I can see it in my head now and if I have to read it I'm just going to walk out the door, because I almost walked out the door instead of writing this and looking at your vote. So please.

I don't need to hear the aims of your post. Because that's not helpful to me. I need the objectives of each line, because I don't fucking understand what some of them are aimed at, and/or I believe they fail to accomplish what I think they're aimed at, etcetera.
 
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