Order Four is the one that concerns me. Orders Five and Sixty-Five both involve some kind of parliamentary procedure, whereas Order Four is clearly set up as the emergency measure, and it puts power over the GAR in the hands of (atm I believe) Mas Amedda in the event of the Chancellor's incapacity or absence. If he is still the Vice Chair, he needs to be next and top on our list to neutralise and replace of Palpatine's inner circle--canonically, he's aware of Palpatine's true identity by this time, and is unopposed to the coming Empire. So, if we still have the option (and time) in the next round, we should probably move against him, and try to get him replaced with someone more reliable.

I confess, I'm not as well-versed on the Clone Wars as I am with post-war stuff, so does anyone have ideas as to who would make a good replacement for Amedda?
I couldn't mention any names, but anybody we put there needs to be someone Palpatine can tolerate, because otherwise he'll just kill them. The position is important and spends a lot of time near the Chancellor after all, not a place for one of our allies.

Preferably we want an unambitious puppet there, who'll fold the second they're told Palpatine is dead.
 
I couldn't mention any names, but anybody we put there needs to be someone Palpatine can tolerate, because otherwise he'll just kill them. The position is important and spends a lot of time near the Chancellor after all, not a place for one of our allies.

Preferably we want an unambitious puppet there, who'll fold the second they're told Palpatine is dead.
At the same time, though, the Vice Chair canonically has a great deal of procedural power and could be an excellent check on the Chancellery. It would be a proverbial coup to get someone aligned with our way of thinking & goals, if not an outright ally, into the office. Perhaps someone not openly opposed to Palpatine, someone relatively guileless so he isn't immediately suspicious of them and their actions, someone capable of gumming up the works and not being immediately removed or destroyed by Palpatine...

I hate to say it, and can't believe that I am, but this almost sounds like a job for Jar-Jar. Heavens help us.

 
At the same time, though, the Vice Chair canonically has a great deal of procedural power and could be an excellent check on the Chancellery. It would be a proverbial coup to get someone aligned with our way of thinking & goals, if not an outright ally, into the office. Perhaps someone not openly opposed to Palpatine, someone relatively guileless so he isn't immediately suspicious of them and their actions, someone capable of gumming up the works and not being immediately removed or destroyed by Palpatine...

I hate to say it, and can't believe that I am, but this almost sounds like a job for Jar-Jar. Heavens help us.

"Jar-Jar, you're a genius!" :V
 
I hate to say it, and can't believe that I am, but this almost sounds like a job for Jar-Jar. Heavens help us.
I guess that really depends on Dr. Snark's views on the Darth Jar Jar theory. Because if we do put Jar Jar into power, it'd be pretty easy for Dr. Snark to sweep the rug out from under us.

In all seriousness, another possibility would be to handpick an established political figure who isn't associated with the CNS or with the anti-Palpatine Loyalists, but who would be sufficiently corrupt and gutless that we could control them after Palpatine's departure. Orn Free Taa is one name that comes to mind; he was responsible for nominating both Palpatine and Mas Amedda to their current positions (so he has some measure of trust) but he's the leader of the 'Rim Faction' that opposes strong centralized power, and he's also one of the most corrupt Senators on Coruscant so it shouldn't be hard to sway or blackmail him.
 
What would you suggest? "high-level source in the CIS leadership" has a similar issue, and I can't think of any other word that conveys the absolute credibility of our source as a representative of the CIS -- remember that a big concern is to reassure our own allies within the CNS that this was not a Separatist-sponsor attack.

Just this:

[] "'This brutal and unprovoked attack was committed with a Separatist fleet, yes, but this was not a Separatist attack. We were warned by a high-level source within the CIS, that Admiral Trench had gone rogue and was no longer responding to commands from the Separatist Council or Parliament. It was because of that warning that we were able to prepare for and defeat Trench's attack here on Kalee. It is not clear whose orders Trench was following, but we are confident they did not come from the Confederacy of Independent Systems.' We take a strong stand, laying no blame on the CIS and using our media outlets to tamp down on the calls for war, while we dangle bait in front of Palpatine by revealing that we have allies and assets within the Separatist government. That way, he'll have to commit some of his agents to investigate the leak, while we plant evidence and lead them by the nose to the wrong conclusion."

Leave it at "high-level source within the CIS". Don't say WHERE in the CIS structure this is.

fasquardon
 
[X] "'This brutal and unprovoked attack was committed with a Separatist fleet, yes, but this was not a Separatist attack. We were warned by a high-level source within the CIS government, that Admiral Trench had gone rogue and was no longer responding to commands from the Separatist Council or Parliament. It was because of that warning that we were able to prepare for and defeat Trench's attack here on Kalee. It is not clear whose orders Trench was following, but we are confident they did not come from the Confederacy of Independent Systems.' We take a strong stand, laying no blame on the CIS and using our media outlets to tamp down on the calls for war, while we dangle bait in front of Palpatine by revealing that we have allies and assets within the Separatist government. That way, he'll have to commit some of his agents to investigate the leak, while we plant evidence and lead them by the nose to the wrong conclusion."
 
I guess that really depends on Dr. Snark's views on the Darth Jar Jar theory. Because if we do put Jar Jar into power, it'd be pretty easy for Dr. Snark to sweep the rug out from under us.

In all seriousness, another possibility would be to handpick an established political figure who isn't associated with the CNS or with the anti-Palpatine Loyalists, but who would be sufficiently corrupt and gutless that we could control them after Palpatine's departure. Orn Free Taa is one name that comes to mind; he was responsible for nominating both Palpatine and Mas Amedda to their current positions (so he has some measure of trust) but he's the leader of the 'Rim Faction' that opposes strong centralized power, and he's also one of the most corrupt Senators on Coruscant so it shouldn't be hard to sway or blackmail him.
My hesitation with someone corrupt is that, at the end of the day, they're still someone who benefits from the status quo and will be likely to aggressively defend it. On the other hand, Jar-Jar (Secret Evil Genius, Praise be unto Him) isn't particularly invested in the system and its preservation--he strikes me as more invested in a) what seems like the right thing to do at the time, and b) what Padmé tells advises him to do. Those traits are something we're going to want to lean on when we do get around to those tripartite talks, which will quite possibly result in the Republic ceasing to exist.

Plus, if it does collapse or cease to exist, who better to be the final footnote of the Republic than friggin' Jar-Jar?
 
While I'm around, I want to acknowledge this trio of omakes:

In the Heart of Battle, There Is Serenity

Battle of Kalee: In the Trenches

Falling with Style, Part 1

And I wanted to apologize for not acknowledging these sooner, because they're all great and fun perspective flips on the Battle of Kalee in their own ways. All of them are canon, and all of them get +10s.
 
(Omake) At the Core of the Web (Canon)
I wrote a thing.

At the Core of the Web.

In the shadows of her large office on the Oracle, Ciaran slowly swiveled on her expensive office chair, carefully manicured fingers drumming against each other as she reclined lost in thought. A dozen schemes and strategies were evalued and discarded, the fate of planets and desperate sentients decided solely upon the risks and opportunities they offered in the shadow war between her and her opponent.
A soft alarm sounded in the room and brought her back to reality. A rapid glance at a hidden screen showed her next appointment a few corridors over. Sorma Maal, veteran officer and trusted hand to call upon when a stain on the Watchers' reputation had to be washed away.

One of the many problems inherent to directing a spy network, she had discovered early, was keeping the appropriate level of surveillance on her own men. Sources and assets came in all forms, but to work in the intelligence field it took a particular kind of person; unfortunately, it often was also the kind that kept dangerous secrets and held hidden agendas. On Coruscant, she had made sure to run a tight ship, but as the Watchers grew, so did her distance from the mass of agents in her service and problems started to pop up beyond her sight. Sorma and a few others were her solution to the small problem of disloyalty in the Watchers and everyone had learned to keep major personal matters away from the organization, unless it stood to profit from them.
It was just one of the many ways she kept her finger directly on the pulse of the Abyss Watchers, and a hand on their short hairs.

The latest mishap was also the worst to appear in quite some time. Whispers from the lower ranks came to her ear almost unobstructed, yes, but it took her months to piece them together with the information from the Galaxy at large. A few false identities. A mercenary contract to hunt down a few pirates. An unimportant planet in the Outer Rim put on its knees by crop failures. Minor shuffling of personnel among Silver Cross bases. A Watcher team KIA during a mission. A temporary upturn of unsanctioned piracy in an otherwise calm area of the Expansion Region. Relatively small transactions between between manufacturers and a few shell companies. A few errors in the Karada production schedules. A group of new recruits kept united because of their effectiveness.
None of these were remarkable by themselves, but put together painted a grim picture. A maggot had been left to worm its way in her garden and she didn't like it. Not one bit.
As her headsman of choice came nearer step by step, Ciaran reviewed again the story as it had unfolded.

Burdin IX was a remarkable planet, in that it was utterly devoid of anything worthwhile; it wasn't even a particularly hard place to live in, just miserably monotonous and inconsequential. When the blight struck its grain monocolture, the Silver Cross may even have intervened, using the situation to paint itself ever more as the sole befactor of the downtrodden, but nine other planets, more populated and with worse ongoing famines, were brought to her attention and in the end Ciaran had chosen one of them instead. The planet wasn't ever part of the Republic and the CIS had nothing to gain by aiding it, so Burdin was left to rot.

What was a good Burdinoan to do, after even his boss had declined to help, you ask? Why, wire his own substantial savings to help his homeworld, of course. And, when they didn't suffice anymore? Start using the funds secretly squirrelled in many years of service to order necessary products wholesale from the producers. And when that wasn't enough? Maybe set up a piracy operation somewhere quiet and feed it juicy morsels with his inside informations.

Pirates are unreliable, though, how to keep them under control? How about putting his own sister in charge? She had turned to piracy after her smuggling business was strangled by the crisis. Ciaran wondered what the man's thoughts had been when a greedy crew had finally acted on its own and irritated someone close enough to her interests to know who to contact, or when one of the Watchers' many mercenary facades had accepted the contract to exterminate his sister's operation.

All in all, extracting her and her crew while the rest of the pirates was brought down was a sign of his skill in the field, if nothing else. Setting them up with new identities was sensible, of course, but their options from then on would have been to either go legit or disappear and hope the Watchers never caught wind of them again. Inducting them in the very organisation hunting them, though? That took courage.
Too bad he never came clean with it, she may have decided to spin the whole thing in her favour and gain some more unquestionably loyal agents.

Obviously, the obliteration of his pirate ring left the problem of Burdin's ongoing collapse without a solution, again, but this time our well-meaning Burdinoan had no assets, no useful contacts, no money and no plans. Time for desperate solutions, then. From inside the Watchers, slotting in a few more hours of production here and there at some Karada facilities wasn't that difficult, and with all the traffic in and out of refugee camps a few containers more or less aren't even noticeable.
With the Galaxy at war with itself, Ciaran herself had made much greater things disappear with ease. And if someone suspected something? Well, it's not like exchanges of favours didn't happen in the Abyss Watchers: a few promises, a few transfers going through and the problem went away. One of the many advantages of seniority.

Things seemed to have worked themselves out, hadn't they? Nobody got hurt, everybody was happy. Wasn't that what we were all about? Well, yes.
Until someone under our man's command started putting things together like the trained agent she was, discovered his sister's identity, the piracy, the embezzlement and suddently he realised he was way too deep in it and the only way out was to silence the agent or lose his career, his clout and thus have his secrets be discovered anyway.

He set the nosy Watcher's whole team up, sent them on a high risk mission and secretly put his sister's squad as backup; one slight act of sabotage, and the Watchers were reported killed during extraction.

Once Ciaran unearthed the truth, obviously the story could only end one way, which was why Sorma Maal was just outside her door.
Still, she would have handled it quietly, made the guilty disappear and written off the whole debacle as just another skeleton in her closet. The only problem was that Uxa, that noisy, wonderful Watcher, survived the betrayal of her team and was just a few hours away from meeting Gulan in a secure place, blowing the whole thing wide open. The Bothan had been already following the trail, the agent would only need to say the name of the traitor's sister and then, like magic, Ciaran would lose some of her advisor's respect and probably some of the Watchers' too. Her fame of near omniscience would be broken and so would the pristine faith of the Watchers in their own organization.

So, she would do as she always did: catch the crisis by the horns and twist it around until she ended up on top. When Uxa made the name of Cerima Maal, Kygeetu would be there to lead the Watcher to the ones who had betrayed her team. Everyone on the Oracle would know Sorma Maal had entered her office, hours before any of that happened, and then never came out. This betrayal asked for a personal touch anyway.

The door opened a second after the lights in the room had brightened and Ciaran welcomed the man as he stepped inside.

"I'm glad you could arrive so quickly, Sorma. Shall we adjourn to my parlour?"

The door closed behind him.
 
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The professional ethics of a criminal spy ring are fascinating, but also simple.
There are no forbidden actions. Only inappropriate targets.
Sentient Resources would like to remind staff that when a member of our department would like to talk to you about your retirement plan it is not an thinly veiled innuendo and reaching for your weapon is an over-reaction. Usually.
 
At the Core of the Web.

I do appreciate how this emphasizes that while Ciaran is very much a pragmatist at heart, you do not want to cross her. Canon, +10.

On a related note, with no other votes being cast recently I'm calling the vote for the "tell the truth in a way that makes it completely unbelievable" plan. An interesting way to handle the situation, and one that is definitely very Ciaran. I'm so proud.
 
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I do appreciate how this emphasizes that while Ciaran is very much a pragmatist at heart, you do not want to cross her. Canon, +10.

On a related note, with no other votes being cast recently I'm calling the vote for the "tell the truth in a way that makes it completely unbelievable" plan. An interesting way to handle the situation, and one that is definitely very Ciaran. I'm so proud.
@Dr. Snark, how did the Malevolence escape? Wasn't capuring it a big part of the plan? Plus, we had an interdicot cruiser on it as well.
 
@Dr. Snark, how did the Malevolence escape? Wasn't capuring it a big part of the plan? Plus, we had an interdictor cruiser on it as well.
That, and keeping the Huk off Kalee by sabotaging their transport in transit were indeed major parts of the plan, as I mentioned two pages ago.

Disabling the main Huk transport:
I can't stop the Kaleesh from wanting revenge - hell, if it wasn't playing into Palpatine's hands I'd let them destroy Huk for all I care! What am I supposed to tell Grievous!? That he shouldn't try and get revenge again after the species that enslaved his entire race came back for a second try at it!?
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Grievous himself should unquestionably know about this. But the average Kaleesh on the other hand..."
"Sabotage the Huk forces, and make sure they never show up?
"Alert. Lucrehulk carrying most of our Huk auxiliaries is not present on battlefield. Presumed sabotage has occurred in transit."

Stopping the Malevolence from striking another CNS planet:
Unfortunately I cannot ensure the loyalty of the Malevolence as it is currently being captained by the Super Tactical Droid "Kalani" and there is virtually nothing I can do at this point to prevent my master from simply overriding his current commands.
let's say we decided to spook Trench and prevent the attack to begin with. What then?"

"He would vanish again, and then the probability of us successfully determining where he would strike next would drop dramatically.
 
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Eh. The Huk landing was largely Rule of Cool that didn't get anyone important killed, but I am a bit miffed that we didn't gank or even get a chance at ganking the Malevolence.
Even if casually using it would cause too much heat pre-shit hit the fan, it would make a fine addition to our collection.
 
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