On the other hand, there's an argument to be made that his cautious mind and pacifist ideals make Galen Erso the perfect person to be in charge of the Foundry. It would also be a clever place to hide him and his family--the last place you'd look for something/someone you're trying to find is in an ancient mythical facility lost to the ages.
 
On the other hand, there's an argument to be made that his cautious mind and pacifist ideals make Galen Erso the perfect person to be in charge of the Foundry. It would also be a clever place to hide him and his family--the last place you'd look for something/someone you're trying to find is in an ancient mythical facility lost to the ages.

In all sincerity, that man would want to say far, far away from a place like that.

Much like its sister station (the Star Forge) the Foundry was designed for one thing only: war. And anyone who understands it on even the most surface level can tell.
 
In all sincerity, that man would want to say far, far away from a place like that.

Much like its sister station (the Star Forge) the Foundry was designed for one thing only: war. And anyone who understands it on even the most surface level can tell.
And that is why its good.
Only the man who doesn't want it can be trusted with it.
 
And that is why its good.
Only the man who doesn't want it can be trusted with it.
I can see Doc's point, though: he would never, ever want anything to do with it, let alone be there, or expose his family to it. It's one thing to pass a responsibility on to a capable yet reluctant individual (e.g., Washington being named commander of the army--he literally tried to flee out the back of the room when Adams was nominating him) it's quite another to do it to someone who emphatically Does Not Want. Then it goes from poetic, generally good idea into punishing, almost sadistic thought.
 
I can see Doc's point, though: he would never, ever want anything to do with it, let alone be there, or expose his family to it. It's one thing to pass a responsibility on to a capable yet reluctant individual (e.g., Washington being named commander of the army--he literally tried to flee out the back of the room when Adams was nominating him) it's quite another to do it to someone who emphatically Does Not Want. Then it goes from poetic, generally good idea into punishing, almost sadistic thought.
That said, he would probably do well as part of the board anyone wanting to use the facility would have to get their request approved by. Him, Thrawn and Ciaran. To some level, Ciaran is wary of herself in situations like this, and while Thrawn is a very thoughtful and intelligent person, he is every inch a soldier. Galen would balance them rather well, I think. That, and the sorts of requests they'd be getting could make for great omakes.
 
So, @Dr. Snark, I have a question.



Is there any chance of these still becoming canon, or have things gone too crazy since they were written for them to still happen?

Hmm...looking at it, I think things have gone to crazy for those now that you mentioned it. Yeaaaaah, those are going to have to be non-canon now.
 
Would an Omake from the perspective of a low-ranking Kalee grunt be out of place?
Riphath got his start as a low ranking grunt who was the medic for grievous and his Kaleesh.
I'm now a silly number of omakes deep and he's gone on quite a journey.
Run with it, friend.

Worst case, you write something you enjoy and we get a +10 bonus out of it.
 
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(Omake) In The Heart of Battle, There is Serenity (Canon)
In the Heart of Battle, There Is Serenity

Sahltag ael Sumis winced as a blast landed a bit too close to his squad. The Vulture droids seemed to be fairly bad at aiming, at least. Small consolation for the dead that they were killed by soulless machines that relied on volume of fire, rather than any particular skill. At least the rain seemed to be confusing their sensors, though he wondered why. Wouldn't droids have thermal or infrared sights that could see beyond the visual spectrum? He resolved to ask his brother about it after Kalee was safe once more, maybe when they went on that hunting trip they had been talking about for several years now.

He distantly heard his General shouting something off to his right, but the sheer background sound drowned out what was undoubtedly an excellent speech, talking of Kalee martial valour and prowess. When the speech seemed to finish, he raised his slugthrower with a shout.

Blessed Garthen dae Ai'ns, hear my prayer. Guide my aim, strengthen my spirit, and grant me victory over those who oppose me.

"Acklay Platoon! Hold fire until you see the red of their photoreceptors!" The voice of Huntmaster Preskotta came from Rumis' right. He was a good officer, a kind, if tough, leader.

The sound of a heavy AA shot passing directly over him caused his teeth to clamp down. He knew that the plasma was extremely unlikely to detonate directly over his head, but as the fairly impressive explosion blossomed in the distance, he couldn't help but feel relieved he wasn't on the receiving end of that. It was a roar of defiance against those invading sacred Kalee, backed with her steel.

A transport exploded somewhere in front of Sumis, a flash of light and the shriek of ripping metal that was swallowed by the rush of water as another of its kind burst from beneath the waves.

Sumis knelt as he had been taught as a boy, sighting down his scope as the first droid dared set its feet on the sacred ground, the metal B1 body instantly dripping with water in the heavy rain. As more like it began to surge out, he gently pulled the trigger, yellow eyes tracking his target's forward movement. An eternity of instants later, his first kill of the day dropped backwards, sparks shooting from a destroyed chest cavity. The cracks of slugthrowers around him told of his comrades' steady fire.

He took a breath, then sighted another droid, this one seemingly slogging through the knee-deep mud near the shore, every step difficult for its servomotors. He put a shot through its chestpiece and moved on.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

A grunt came from his left, and he glanced over. Narook san R'kas bent over, arms clutched around her stomach where a blaster had struck. Already another was moving to assist her, so he raised his gaze back to the front.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

With a shudder, he felt, more than heard, the impact of a B2's wrist-fired rocket into a nearby tree. Surprisingly, he heard few screams, but a look showed why. Bodies surrounded a now-burning tree, most of the Kaleesh killed instantly by the wooden shrapnel. No time to be mourned, the surviving wounded were pulled back.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

Sight, shoot, pull trigger, confirm kill, retarget.

A mass of Hssiss droids grew in the distance, beginning to surge forward as slugs cut the leading edges down.

"Acklay! Prepare to charge !" Huntmaster Preskotta's command cut over the din of slugs and blasters. Sumis slung his rifle over his back, carefully securing it in place. His Lig sword glistened as he drew it, the inscribed design depicting the war against the Bitthævrians. The glories of a past war spurring him to fight harder in this one. He ran toward the battle ahead, a chant coming from his lips, taken up by those around him.

Blessed Camrod geo Usrak, hear my prayer. Let my arm be strong, that my enemies might fear me.

A warrior, marked with the colors of the Nashlek tribe, lay in front of him, blood still flowing from an open wound in their side.

Let my wrath be great, that I might gain victory.

Beratha, who lived a village over from him, screamed as a blaster shot sailed closed enough to burn the side of his face but seemed to run even faster.

Let my death be glorious, that my legacy live on.

Sumis lunged forward, his blade piercing the torse of a Hssiss droid. It shrieked at him as it lost power, going completely limp as he yanked his oil-covered weapon out.

A flash of lightning showed someone falling to a Hssiss's cutting blades, avenged but a moment later by a point-blank blaster pistol from another Kaleesh.

A Hssiss droid ran toward Sumis, weapons flailing. He parried the first blow, dodged the second, before pulling out his sidearm and blowing off its head, not risking a third.

Another leapt at him from his right, knocking him to the ground. Its mass bore down on him, pinning his pistol to his side and not giving enough space to use his sword. Before it could take advantage, it went limp, now just dead weight.

"Rise warrior, this is no day to die." The voice was instantly recognizable.

Sumis threw the body aside, staggering upright. "General, you have my thanks."

As the General turned away towards another droid, Sumis heard him say "One less death is one step closer to victory."

Another droid ran in, cutting off Sumis' extremely brief rumination on those words of wisdom. This one he simply shot, before slamming his sword into its head with a cry of rage.

And so the Kaleesh fought on.
 
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Blessed Garthen dae Ai'ns, hear my prayer. Guide my aim, strengthen my spirit, and grant me victory over those who oppose me.
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Blessed Camrod geo Usrak, hear my prayer. Let my arm be strong, that my enemies might fear me.
Brilliant. Of course the Kaleesh would have different gods for ranged vs. melee combat. Heck, I could easily envision an entire pantheon of combat deities, from ranged/melee, to individual/squad/army, to land/sea/air/space combat. This has potential...
 
I'm pretty sure they have deities whose dominions are non-combat.

It's just that all of them are also One Person Armies, same as the ones who are in charge of some aspect of combat. :V
Like Dro'Kai, God of Poetry, who ascended after annihilating an entire army when they interrupted his writing. He did it all with his quill and used the leftover blood as ink.
 
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(Omake) Battle of Kalee: In the Trenches (Canon)
Battle of Kalee: In the Trenches

After learning the secrets of the Disciples of Twilight, I headed back toward CNS space. There was something itching at the edge of my perception, that I would be needed this month somewhere, and I needed to go there. Thing was, these two were almost on opposite sides of the galaxy. The planets spun by, my movements almost on automatic going to Bespin and then picking up bacta on Thyferra. I continued to do the meditations Darra had shown me that would improve my power in the Force, continued to perform the exercises from my Matukai training to focus my body and with it my mind. Blazing Chains was so strongly rooted in my mind I didn't need to spend much time on it. All the same, I did play around with the gun turrets a bit in empty space, blasting a bit of space trash, just to keep those skills sharp. I dropped off the bacta on Tython, barely making the time to say hello and dropping it off. "The Force is calling me elsewhere, but this was on my way," I explained.

This nudge was joined by my comm around the time I crossed back into CNS space in the galactic north. The message was simple: "Get to Kalee and earn the ridiculous paycheck we give you." Well, Kalee it would be. It had been determined that while Mandalore might be the head of the CNS and Taris its wallet, Kalee was its beating heart.

I landed at the Watcher military compound and wore my mask, my green cloak, my scythe. I still had my blaster and lightsaber on me and within easy reach, my medical kit on my back, but the scythe and the mask were why I had this sort of standing with the Kaleesh, my roots with Grievous and his personal guard. I was directed to the sacred temple of Shrupak.

The temple complex was beautiful and wild, like the rest of Kalee. I wasn't the first there, either. Grievous stood on top of the temple, along with HK-47, Kygeetu, the Silencer, and Ciaran in her mask. So, let's get this straight. A future war god of the Kaleesh, a legendary droid who'd recently gotten a lethal tune-up, the first Abyss Walker, the man responsible for Metalorning becoming a verb, and Darth kriffing Traya.

How the heck did I belong with them?

You're a Jedi Knight. You've got an eclectic collection of knowledge and talents that isn't quite at Ciaran's level but is certainly in her style of gathering obscure bits of lore to assemble something greater than the sum of its parts. You're also the only one with anything resembling medical training and the ability to heal people with the Force. Every raid group needs a healer.

It was probably telling that the voice of my mental pep-talk sounded a lot like Darra. I wasn't too proud to say that my time with her had done at least as much good for me as for her.

Introspection done for the moment, I looked to the skies, trying to find where the enemy would be coming from. It wasn't lost on me that the scene would look like a certain clip from a movie I'd liked. Granted, I felt more like the guy with the bow and arrow or the girl with the blaster pistol, but...I fit. Okay, let's be fair, I was also probably one of the better-looking folks in the group. Except for maybe Ciaran. But...let's not let that train of thought run too far.

I knew, if I was here and Kygeetu was here, the others would be here. "Koliya, any sign of them?" He'd saved my bacon at least once before, so knowing he was around as a sort of guardian angel would be comforting.

"I just asked the new Walker sniper that," I heard his voice purr out of my comm. "Nothing yet. Wait. Yeah, hostiles inbound, I'm hitting the alert."

With the alert came Grievous' usual inspiring battle speech. I drew on my training, and while everyone else was getting more alert and focused, I sat and meditated, bolstering morale and putting an image of victory into the minds of our allies; I pushed fear into the minds of the Huk who I knew would be landing.

<"FOR THE FUTURE OF KALEE!"> I heard Grievous shout.

I stood at that, drawing my Dragoneye Reaper and firing at the droids, with Blazing Chains ensuring I'd hit.

Every raid group needs a healer, the thought sat in the back of my mind. Back before I'd gone to Byblos for school, some friends had played a group computer game. I'd enjoyed the story aspect of it and wanted to participate, but I had other things I was doing and wanted to accomplish the most with the least intellectual effort. They recommended a "nannybot" priest; hang back, cure conditions, heal damage, and let them all do the fighty bits. Even when they weren't on, I could always find people willing to take me through parts of the game and do the fighty bits and other bits so all I had to do was the keeping-people-alive bits.

Why was that thought in the back of my head? Oh. Ciaran was chaining attacks through Separatist Hssiss droids and racking up a combo that would make a fighting game character blanch, her eyes glowing with power.

I saw Kygeetu slay another droid and start moving up to support her Lady. My precognitive sense shouted back to me. No. I reached forward, caught her by the shoulder. "I have no idea what the hell's gotten into her, but from what I can sense you should not get close to her right now."

I checked back on the others, watching the Kaleesh fall back to defensible positions and seeing the explosive carnage. The flood of Hssiss droids seemed endless. Time to start in on the tricks. I remembered my training from the Disciples of Twilight and began bending photons away from Hssiss droids, briefly blinding them before they were shot. I'd sling those photons in front of another droid, blinding it with a scattered phantasm of light in front of its photoreceptors. It wasn't much, but it helped. Cheating with cheap tricks and letting my allies kill things.

The droids disgorged from the lander like a river on their way to our lines; a river with an enormous cyan-glowing boulder in the middle of it. That was Ciaran. That was our lady of destruction. That was...the lynchpin of the organization getting drawn way out away from the relative safety of our lines. By the time I'd realized that, her sister Asajj was already on her way.

Something on the air. I couldn't pick up anything else. I holstered my blaster and drew my scythe. While I hadn't quite perfected vanishing in broad daylight, I could certainly try to blind the droid before attacking it. I found my opening and struck, to find that behind the droid was General Kenobi himself. A Master. On the Council. Here?

I held back and let the big players talk.

That was probably a mistake. Apparently Grievous wanted me to go with him to Abesmi to protect it from the Huk. Along with HK and Silencer. Three individuals who could easily make it to the Kaleesh war pantheon...and me.

I'd heard his squad talk about Abesmi. About the last time Grievous went to Abesmi being after his lover died. How he'd begged the gods to see her one more time, how he became the one who grieves after her death. It was their Olympus, on the Jenuwaa Sea.

I'd gotten onto the shuttle, sat down, and began to meditate again. An image of victory. Of lots of defeated Huk. Of our side victorious. I projected that image, with a ring of truth to it. Battle meditation was something I had pursued probably the most of any of the Walkers. Granted, I'd initially pursued it trying to get away from frontline combat, but it was still useful even if I was going to be there.

Grievous began his speech, this time trying to intimidate the enemy. I backed his words with my own meditation, sending wave after wave of fear at the Huk, that this battle was already lost for them, that there was no way they would survive.

<"Since they are so eager for death, it only seems fair that we grant it!">

I drew up my scythe, pitched my voice to sound like an immortal spirit in the business of taking souls.

"Death walks among you, and for the Huk? Things are...grim."

A/N: Does Riphath still have self-confidence issues? Sure. Has working with Darra helped with that? Oddly, yes.
 
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Introspection done for the moment, I looked to the skies, trying to find where the enemy would be coming from. It wasn't lost on me that the scene would look like a certain clip from a movie I'd liked. Granted, I felt more like the guy with the bow and arrow or the girl with the blaster pistol, but...I fit. Okay, let's be fair, I was also probably one of the better-looking folks in the group. Except for maybe Ciaran. But...let's not let that train of thought run too far.
So, thinking about the characters and how they fight, I am going to go with.
Grevious = Captain America (Inspiring symbol for the people, in charge.)
HK-47 = Thor (Really ancient, with modern upgrade)
Kygeetu = Black Widow (The other normal in the group, works as a grunt for a vast conspiracy.)
The Silencer = Hulk (Hardly says anything, destroys everything he comes across.)
Ciaran = Tony Stark (Snarky, Rich, the other one who is in charge)
Riphath = Hawk Eye (He said so, who am I to argue)
 
I think you'll find, if everyone looks deep inside themselves, that the spirit of Hulk was with each and every one there that day. It's a true...

Hulkmas Miracle.

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Feliz Navidad every one.
I wonder if doing the hero action of Jango Fett of the mersinary will ad extra action of martial?
 
I'm always in favor of extra actions. :D Though I doubt we'll get any more from this turn's results. Next turn, though....

Oh, and Merry Christmas to everyone! I'm about ready to conk out, then wake up for a full day of celebrations with family, but I hope all of you are able to enjoy the day as well.
 
Merry Christmas.

Here's an idea for a Mini-Boss fight for our 'Operation Daybreak' a.k.a 'Overthrow Palpatine' Dungeon Crawl:

 
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