Mmkay, finally got around to rewriting the Hoersch-Kessel thing. I think that should be more what people were expecting as a reward and fits given the degree of success.

Will finally get around to acknowledging omakes shortly.
 
@ everyone, here's the new text. Thanks @Dr. Snark!
The plan had been to just get into contact with Hoersch-Kessel, feel out their situation, and maybe work out some short-term deals while looking forward to longer-term ones.

That was before Mungo showed up and dropped his name, and within a matter of hours he was flooded with requests for loans, leases, and basically any form of money for the company to get its hands on to at least keep it afloat. After confirming the validity of the many deals Mungo took the initiative and contacted the rest of his family on Manda, who after considerable persuasion agreed to invest in the flagging company. This has made the Baobabs a major shareholder, and with that you were able to use your connections with the merchant fleet to encourage the H-K execs to work out some deals that will give your proxies controlling interests in quite a few of their shipyards.

In short: A mess, but one that turned out to be far more useful than you expected.

Reward: Controlling interest in H-K shipyards allowing production of ships for CNS planets, +50 investment income
 
I think he's under our employ as a privateer. We did meet him all those years back and Silas certainly knows him.

I just feel like there is some great potential with the character you know, in terms of comedy. Just imagine Hondo and HK-47 together.

(also think we could perhaps look for the katana fleet cuz ya know... 50 dreadnoughts.... that could be improved by force-droid-ai-finnagling)

Also, some Old republic era Mandalorian Warships had large mass driver capital ship killer weapons, and they had pretty good Warship designs in general.
 
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[X] One Mean Witch: You need to know where you lie with Talzin, and if things go south you need to let her know that you're not going to stand for her getting in your way. You may have been unnerved by her power before, but that was before you became Darth Traya and gained the Dagger of Mortis. You're not going to let her have her way again. Chance of Success: ??? Reward: ???
-[X] Personal Attention
-[X] Asajj Ventress

Rolled: 20 + 15 (Bonuses) + 20 (Omakes) + 44 (Ciaran) + 14 (Asajj) + 10 (Force Bond) = 113
I'm pretty sure that's supposed to be 123.

44 + 14 = 58 + 10 = 68 + 20 = 88 + 15 = 103
 
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Is this what the Commerce Guild is? The 40 or so shared board members that make the economy this big incestuous mess?
 
Is this what the Commerce Guild is? The 40 or so shared board members that make the economy this big incestuous mess?
Interesting, I hadn't considered that possibility.

There's little rhyme or reason to the specific members in the Commerce Guild -- there are plenty of mining corporations (including the Mining Guild), plenty of affiliated shipyards and starshipwrights (like Free Dac Volunteers Engineering Corp), and there are plenty of industrial corporations (especially SoroSuub). Ironically, for a megacorp called the Commerce Guild, there seems to be vanishingly few members based on trade and commerce.

My take on the situation, is that the Commerce Guild seems like an economic version of NATO -- each member (corporation) has its own military (economic activity), but there's also a clear command & power structure independent of any individual.

The question then arises: if the Commerce Guild is NATO, what was their Warsaw Pact? That is, why would so many powerful megacorps give up their autonomy to join forces? Why did they find it necessary?
 
The question then arises: if the Commerce Guild is NATO, what was their Warsaw Pact? That is, why would so many powerful megacorps give up their autonomy to join forces? Why did they find it necessary?

I think it started out as a loose alliance of corporations to compete with groups like the Trade Federation and the Techno Union. Then they used their combined economic might and security force to strong-arm other small corps into the Guild. The Megacorps of Star Wars seem to function akin to the big business of the Guilded Age, the Commerce Guild even tried passing a bill through the Senate that would basically turn the Outer Rim into a Corporate Playground.

I'd imagine they're not as united as they claim to be, for all the claim of a unified structure the big corporations seem casually willing to stab each other in the back.
 

I am absolutely sure that this will have no ramifications in the future whatsoever especially given Things that would be spoilers to mention right now. Really. Really. Canon, +10.

The Hunter Becomes the Hunted

Truly the darkest of all possible timelines. Non-canon (thankfully), +10

A Difficult Responsibility​

I forgot to mention this sooner but I actually drew from this a bit when I was writing up Galen's report in the turn results since it fit so well, so props for that. Canon, +10.
 
I think it started out as a loose alliance of corporations to compete with groups like the Trade Federation and the Techno Union.
Per the wiki, the Commerce Guild originates from at least 700 BBY (there's a tradepost in Bpfassh system that dates to that point). The Trade Federation started as a shipping company hundreds of years later, around 350 BBY. It's unclear when the Techno Union was founded, but it probably began as a high-tech/heavy-industry cartel during the New Sith Wars. It was wealthy enough to purchase the Foerest Shipyards from the government when the Republic Navy was disbanded in the Ruusan Reformations. However, Foerost was promptly converted into the center of its economic empire, as the TU poured capital into making it their biggest industrial asset. So the purchase of Foerost was probably a high-leverage investment, that would have turned the Techno Union into the galactic-sized megacorp we see in the prequels.

...It's interesting to envision both the Commerce Guild and the Techno Union as cooperative ventures started during the New Sith Wars, especially as businesses struggle to survive the hundred-year Republic Dark Age. That would explain why there's so much autonomy (e.g., mining companies often compete to claim resource-laden planets, even if they're both members of the Commerce Guild) while preserving a central leadership. The Commerce Guild 'Presidente' may exercise a veto over where member corporations can and cannot expand to, or negotiate agreements between rivals, or (in case of crisis) dictate terms to ensure the organization survives.


Then they used their combined economic might and security force to strong-arm other small corps into the Guild. The Megacorps of Star Wars seem to function akin to the big business of the Guilded Age
Not quite sure that analogy works in general; certainly in the prequel-era, when the megacorps are puppeted by the Sith, and even the Trade Federation has turned ludicrously corrupt. Prior to Sith involvement, most megacorps seem to have a light touch with little centralized power. The IGBC, for instance, was basically sci-fi Switzerland, known galaxy-wide as far more secure and far less corruptible than the banks of the Core Worlds.

Also, the 'robber barons' of the Gilded Age were largely defined by government subsidy and cronyism; the megacorps of Star Wars seem to have their centers of power out in the Rim worlds, not in the Core. This is of course before the Sith influence that led them to seek and obtain special favors from the Senate. But most of the corruption and stupid!evil we see in these megacorps canonically dates to the very recent past, within a few decades of Episode I.


I'd imagine they're not as united as they claim to be, for all the claim of a unified structure the big corporations seem casually willing to stab each other in the back.
How so? I don't know of any cases where SoroSuub betrays the Mining Guild, or where members of a single megacorp engage in 'civil war' behavior. Certainly there's competition between the megacorps (which is why it's so remarkable and laughable that they'd cooperate to form the leadership of a new & independent polity), but within each one? Given the Sith influence, I'm not surprised that the executives of each megacorp consolidated power (Nute Gunray came to power after the entire TF leadership was assassinated by Sidious; Shu Mai killed all of her rivals; etc.) and ensured that their megacorp would speak with one voice.
 
(Omake) Return of A Jedi (Canon)

Return of A Jedi


A few days after I was knighted, I got a call to my ship from my Matukai Master Jansen.

"A dear friend of mine, someone I've trained in the past, is leading a group going to Ossus interested in contacting the Ysanna to learn from them. Given your recent ascension to Jedi Knight, it was felt that there might be a benefit to your assistance. Do you have the time free?"

I knew what that meant. There was a Watcher diplomacy team going there and this was an official request. It was an official request that didn't involve combat. Throw in that I already had the translation module on my datapad for anything in the Library at Ossus I might come across, and this could be a lot of fun.

I sent Jedi Master Rogan a short message.

"Master Rogan-

I'm going off-planet for a bit. My Matukai master asked me to help a friend's archaeology expedition to an old Jedi heritage site. I'll make sure you guys get a copy of anything I find.

-Knight Althean"

I told Darra what Veskasa told me; that a friend of my old master was going to Ossus and she wanted my help.

"Riphath, you have got to be the strangest Jedi to ever make Knight. No training until you were already an adult, born with no real power to speak of, seek out the Jedi yourself rather than them finding you...but a Jedi Knight you definitely are. I'm doing a little investigating of my own, so I might not be here when you get back," she said, giving me a brief kiss. "We'll be together again soon," she promised.

I got in the Nuffin Doin' and headed for Ossus. It wasn't as long a trip as I was expecting. The Perlemian Trade Route would take me there easily, and I'd have plenty of time to study up on the history of Ossus, the history of the Jedi Order in connection with Ossus, and how history has a tendency to rhyme.

I passed the planet Castell, where I knew the Commerce Guild would be changing leadership soon. I hoped the Watchers would put their weight behind Public Cola. The droid was sorting and filtering all the information from numerous specialists and likely wouldn't find it too hard to add "providing order to multiple galaxy-spanning corporations" to that list.

I passed the planet Roche, where I had heard Space Curling had gotten its start due to the Roche Asteroids.

It wasn't long after that before I reached Lianna, the rendezvous point where I would meet up with the diplomat team. I'd been informed that I'd go to the Surprising Discovery Cantina and order an Emerald Fogblaster.

Lianna being a big city-planet wasn't that off-putting to me. I'd spent years on Byblos, so big cities weren't that weird to me. It didn't take me long to get to the cantina in question, though what I would find there was a mystery. I took hold of the handle and opened the door.

It was what I'd heard of in my college days as a "quiet bar", the sort of place you could sit and talk without being overheard but while still being able to have a conversation.

I got my Emerald Fogblaster and met the diplomatic corps. They were excited to meet and work with a Jedi Knight. "I'm probably the strangest Jedi Knight you'll ever meet. I got named a Jedi because they felt I was what they wanted, and then they more or less rushed my knighting because my betrothed is a Jedi Knight and they didn't want her to outrank me," I joked. "Tython Jedi. Ever since the Temple Bombing, some Jedi left Coruscant because they wanted to not be associated with the War. Which is a good thing, as I understand it. It'll let the Jedi determine how they want to define themselves as Jedi, in relation to the Force and the people of the Republic, instead of in relation to a war or a Senate. The data files and images from Tython...yeah, I sent those. We get anything good from them?"

The conversation went back and forth. That stuff isn't important. The people...look, they told me not to give their names or descriptions. That their work was enough.

So we went to Ossus on board their ship. "Four thousand years ago," I began in the crew quarters over caff, "the Cron Supernova seared, irradiated, and otherwise seriously messed up the planet. It was during the Great Sith War, the series of battles just before the Mandalorian Wars. The Jedi knew it was coming and managed to evacuate a lot of important artifacts and information, but not all of it. Legend has it that Exar Kun attempted to steal treasures from the temple, and a Neti Jedi Master by the name of Ood Bnar stopped him, becoming a tree and taking root over a number of ancient lightsabers. After the disaster, some of the Jedi survived, but with the radiation nobody would come to evacuate them. Eventually their descendants became more tribal, protecting the Great Jedi Library and calling themselves the Ysanna. They use the Force and call it their magics, and they largely stand for Jedi philosophies."

"When did you become an expert in ancient Jedi history, Ossus, and the Ysanna?" the leader of the diplomatic corps asked.

"Well, it isn't exactly a short trip here from Tython, and I had a lot of quiet on my ship with not much else to do. I thought it might be a good thing to learn a thing or two, and I have a knack for remembering things I'm pretty sure is the Force," I answered.

"That trip is less than a week, and you summarized the briefing packet that took me the better part of the past month to pick up to the point where I can talk about this stuff like I know what I'm talking about," the leader replied.

I blew out a breath. "I cheat. I use the Force to remember things. It's...not something I would recommend, because it came with a world of scary things that have been very good at almost killing me, but it's worked out for me thus far. Right, Jedi Philosophy. That's the thing you brought me here to actually be an expert in, although I imagine actually knowing the history of Ossus and the Ysanna won't hurt."

"Well, no," one of them said. "Might even help. So, Jedi Philosophy."

I cleared my throat. "The Old Code might help, the one before there was a well-meaning oversimplification that led the Jedi down a path of impossible absolutes for mortal and finite beings. Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force. To have feelings but not let them rule you is the way of the Jedi. To acknowledge that you do not know all things yet but constantly strive to learn is the way of the Jedi. To have deeply-held convictions about the way things should be and urge the world towards them in a calm and peaceful way as much as possible is the way of the Jedi. To have a unique perspective, understanding, and voice while acknowledging the value of shared goals and efforts and contributing to a united task in the way one can is the way of the Jedi. To acknowledge mortality but be connected to all life through a supernatural energy field that sustains everyone is the way of the Jedi. At least, that's my understanding of the Old Code. There are some other things. Little bits I've heard in training or heard students reciting to themselves."

I knit my brow in thought, remembering. "Jedi are the guardians of peace in the galaxy. Jedi use their powers to defend and protect. Jedi respect all life, in any form. Jedi serve others, rather than rule over them, for the good of the galaxy. Jedi seek to improve themselves through knowledge and training. I'm not sure how much of this will have been maintained by the Ysanna, but it's at least a window into the mindset they're going to carry with them."

The leader of the group smiled. "So we tell them we're looking for an end to the war currently tearing the galaxy apart, that we do not seek to rule but to serve the people caught in the middle and we think that the knowledge in the Jedi Library might help us. To that end, we brought with us a Jedi. You. You're here to arrange for our Force teachers to learn their Force styles, to learn their insights on the Force. To be an acceptable visitor to the Jedi Library and pave the way for the archaeology teams."

"So, no pressure, right," I laughed.

"Arrogance, overconfidence, defeatism, stubbornness, recklessness, aggression. These are the enemy of Jedi discipline. Treat people well and acknowledge that they have a right to privacy greater than my desire to invade their minds and acquire their secrets. Be honest. Keep your word. Respect your students, your teachers, and your authorities. Value life, and follow just laws. Assist others, defend the weak, and do what you can to ensure things will not become worse once your ship hits vacuum again. You are already so good at these things, but some of them will be a challenge for you your entire life. How do I know this? I have my own challenges, and I acknowledge that I am mortal. Limited. The Force is infinite, and as we listen to it we join our voices in harmony with its melody and create a song that will echo through time and space." The voice of Master Rogan resonated in my memory. He'd spent a lot of time teaching me the ways of the Jedi, while we were healing their war-wounded and weary. It all seemed solid and sensible, when approached as a set of maxims and guidelines for living.

I'd told him that the whole "will of the Force" thing was something I was still working on, something I might struggle with a while. I still remember his response. You will know, when you are calm. At peace. When you ask what the next obvious thing is to the benefit of other living beings. It's been all I've been doing for the last thirty years. Keep my calm and ask what the next obvious thing to do is. Sometimes that next obvious task is for me to submit to sleep so I can be capable of handling things tomorrow.

The group of diplomats approached a village near the Jedi Library. I walked among them, wearing my green Matukai robe in the manner similar to the Jedi, with my lightsaber at the ready, on its belt clip with my hand near it. We'd just gotten out of some dense woods and reached a clearing. Every fiber of my being screamed "trap". The killing ground, the seeming ease of travel, the fact that I know Grievous would let someone get in close enough to smell what they were looking for before closing the net around them and never letting them out until they were demolished.

"DOWN!" I called, my lightsaber going to life as I bounded across the open space between me and the first tribal-rifle-wielder, whose projectile launcher I severed. Another weapon spoke, sending an arrow at one of the diplomats. I waved my hand at the arrow, sending it harmlessly into the ground. "I am a Jedi, and these people are under my protection. I have injured none of your people and come in peace." I extinguished my lightsaber, gesturing to the diplomatic corps leader. "Go ahead, man."

The exact phrasing I don't recall, mostly because I was only partially paying attention. It was, as advised, something about seeking their wisdom to stop a galaxy-spanning war. Most of my attention was on the other slugthrowers wielded by several different ambush parties. A closer look and I started to put together what they were. Imagine a cross between a bowcaster and Grievous' favored Outland Rifle. Rather than shooting bullets, they shot a vicious-looking bolt. Arrow. Whatever. A big enough thing that the shooter could track it, and thus affect it with the Force more easily. Exactly the sort of thing I could see Grievous getting excited about. By the Force, I had to make sure he never discovered these things.

I pored over everything. Recorded everything I could get my hands on. Another approach to Blazing Chains, and an approach to creating Force Ghosts. More ships started coming to Ossus. Trainers, archaeologists, the Watchers were coming in earnest, and the initial uncertainty of the meeting was over. My part in this was done, and the call came that they should take me back to my ship.

The Disciples of Twilight were teaching their skills and as a Walker I was on the short list of people who the organization felt needed to learn them.

A/N: Being able to legitimately present the Ysanna a Jedi like out of their mythology and know the philosophy they live might help give the diplomacy team a strong bargaining position and get a lot from the Ysanna.
 
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Interlude - Howls In The Dark
Forefather's Charm
On Final Approach to Nar Shaddaa

Silas felt his heartbeat speed up as he entered Nar Shadaa's atmosphere and made his way towards the landing pad closest to his meeting location with Vos. There were a lot more unknowns than he liked - Vos had suggested the location himself, it wasn't anywhere near Ciara's properties in the slightest, and worst of all he had no idea if there would be any old enemies down there waiting for him. After touching down and making his way into the streets he could feel some kind of tension in the air, his instincts from years of smuggling and the like starting to warn him that something was about to happen.

Even so, the Nar Shaddaa streets seemed normal enough. Granted, Silas did see three muggings and at least five spice dealers on the way to his meeting place, but that was just part of the local atmosphere. As he looked around it didn't seem like anyone else was looking at him oddly or moving out of his way, so he was reasonably certain he wasn't heading into a trap. Still, he couldn't shake the feeling that something was off...

Just before he went into the dodgy cantina that would serve as the meeting place he surreptitiously swept the area around him, trying to see if he was being followed. It didn't seem like there was anything out of place, but his feeling that there was something out of place stuck with him. Unnerved but concluding that he'd probably be safest the sooner he got to Vos, he entered the cantina to the familiar sounds of loud music and the noise of the crowd.

After weaving through the center floor he spotted Vos staring out towards the center of the cantina, looking bored at first glance...but Silas had been in the game long enough to recognize that he was a lot tenser than he looked as he made his way over to the Kiffar, who looked at him with mild surprise as he sat down.

"Surprised to see you here, old man!" Quinlan said, his face lighting up slightly in amusement.

"If you start cracking wise about how 'I'm too old for a place like this,' I'm leaving," Silas replied with a smirk. "I was visiting dives like this before you were even born."

"In that case, I'm amazed you didn't drink yourself to death!"

"Well, I..." Silas' eyes wandered slightly as he saw an attractive Zeltron woman stroll by him. "I had plenty of exercise. Not that you'd know," Silas quipped as he tore his eyes away and briefly glanced towards the entrance. As he turned back to face Quinlan he noticed that the Kiffar's eyes seemed to have stayed on him the whole time...

"...You get the feeling that someone was following you?" Silas asked carefully, his instincts starting to scream at him that something was wrong...

Quinlan's lack of an immediate response caused Silas' paranoia to go up a few more notches. "...So...are you expecting company?" Silas said as he started to reach for his blaster -

Only to freeze as he felt a hand softly grab his.

"Please don't, Master Cata. I assure you that I come in good faith."

Silas slowly turned to face the speaker, a man with a rugged face and a vivid scar over his right eye, which Silas noticed appeared to be cybernetic. As he casually walked over to sit alongside Vos he noticed that he seemed to be using a cane, though he couldn't tell if it was only for appearances' sake or if he actually needed it.

As he sat down Quinlan spoke up again. "Sorry for not telling you myself, but we both wanted to make sure that nothing about this meeting got traced. Silas, I'd like you to meet my former Master Tholme."

Silas looked warily at the newcomer. "The pleasure's mine, I guess..." he muttered out before he focused on the new arrival. "So what exactly brings you here?"

Tholme clapped his hands together slightly. "It's quite simple really. Vos and I would..." he glanced at Vos, who shrugged. "...how do I put this...I think the best way to put it is that the two of us are requesting that the Abyss Watchers grant us asylum in whatever capacity is possible."

Everything seemed to go quiet as Silas tried to process the words he had just heard.

"I...I don't think I follow. The hell do you mean, 'grant you asylum!?'"

"It's exactly as it sounds, Master Cata. Quinlan and I are requesting asylum within the Abyss Watchers or Council space itself if the first option is not possible," he said as the Kiffar in question nodded in affirmation. "I understand there would be some issues with that given both our circumstances-"

"T-that's not what I'm concerned about right now!" Silas hissed. "Why in the hell are you asking me!? And more importantly what do you want protection from!?"

"I chose to approach you and not the Lady Ciaran because you perceive things differently than she would," Tholme casually replied. "From my understanding she has her own perspectives on the Jedi Orders that might color her decisions - I could be wrong in that regard, but I felt that I would have a greater chance at persuading you than I would her."

"Plus, I got a feel for you and I don't have a feel for her," Quinlan pointed out. "What, you didn't think I was getting a read on you while you were doing the same for me?"

"I..." Silas clenched his fists, not liking how he had lost control of the situation. "Alright, but that brings me to my second question-"

Before he could finish he noticed Quinlan and Tholme's faces visibly fall, a detail that unnerved Silas greatly.

"...Perhaps 'asylum' was somewhat too leading of a term," Tholme said quietly, before his gaze on Silas intensified. "Allow me to explain. As the war began I came to the conclusion that the war in the shadows would be far more important than the war in the light. To that end I worked with Quinlan to set up a spy network within the Separatists, and had him go so far as to act as an apprentice to Dooku alongside various other acolytes. But..."

"...It almost destroyed me," Quinlan softly interjected. "I did a lot of things that I'm not proud of in the slightest, and I kept justifying them as 'sacrifices for the greater good' and 'necessary evils to find out more about Dooku and his master.' I was told to infiltrate the Republic as a double agent, which let me work with my friends back in the Order while still looking like I was in Dooku's good graces. Then...then the Temple Massacre happened."

"The Massacre threw our plans completely out of the window. The majority of Dooku's acolytes died during the mission and Bulq's betrayal also caused significant issues that threatened to blow Quinlan's cover. Faced with that I was prepared to simply have him abort his mission and return to the Temple..." He trailed off, and Silas' eyes narrowed.

"So what's the issue? Things got crazy, and you thought it'd be a good idea to pull out. Seems legit to me, so where the hell does this asylum nonsense come in?"

Silas suddenly felt a chill go down his spine as Tholme focused on him again with incredible intensity. "Simply put, I have come to the conclusion that the Coruscant Order has already lost this war and there is nothing that can be done to prevent that. The Coruscant Temple is no longer safe, and the Tython Order is currently too isolated for us to continue our work."

"Wha - Y-you're dancing around the issue," Silas growled out, trying not to let Tholme's comment about "already lost the war" rattle him. "What are you afraid of!?"

"The Coruscant Temple is now the site of a wound in the Force," Quinlan said flatly.

The moment Silas heard those words he felt something go cold in the pit of his stomach. He didn't know much about the Force, and didn't care much for it.

But Ciara did.

Once he finally managed to pry details about her trip to Malachor out of her she explained the phenomenon to him - apparently it was a location where enough death and pain had occurred that it created a Force anomaly that caused bad things to happen to anyone present - nightmares, hearing echoes of the event that caused the wound, and other things that would generally drive anyone insane if they stayed there for whatever foolish reason they had.

That description alone had unnerved him once he fully processed it, but hearing it now was...!

"It would seem that you already have some idea of what Quinlan is referring to. Good, that save us a considerable amount of time," Tholme said, interrupting Silas' processing. "Now then, let me reiterate my request, but with an additional incentive: I request that Quinlan and I be granted asylum in whatever capacity the Watchers can grant us, and in return we would be willing to give you information on the current state of the Coruscant Order that I believe would be vital to Lady Ciaran's continued survival."

That last comment from Tholme caused Silas to shoot the Jedi a vicious glare before he leaned back and sighed. "Quite frankly I don't have the authority to do something like that on my own, but I could convince Ciaran and the rest of our people to help you two out. That being said," Silas said coldly as he leaned forward, looking Tholme in the eyes, "I don't trust you at all, what with this showing up out of nowhere and suddenly demanding asylum and all this. So I'm not doing a damn thing until you explain why you threatened her life like that."

Quinlan looked somewhat concerned as he glanced at Tholme, who was in deep contemplation before he spoke again. "Not here. Too many ears. If we could continue this conversation somewhere more private?"

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Bolthole #253

"You know, you take us to the nicest places," Quinlan muttered sarcastically as Silas shut the door to the cramped bolthole, the room just barely big enough for the three men to stand at arm's length from each other.

"There's no one on the planet who can hear us now aside from me," Silas said, internally thankful that he wasn't sure if this particular location had any cameras or anything similar - no way for Tholme to read his mind. "Now spill."

"I have every reason to believe that the majority of the Jedi Council are being affected by the wound in the Force and are becoming increasingly vulnerable to the corruption of the Dark Side," Tholme bluntly said without hesitation. "The wound has been causing nightmares for every Jedi staying in the Temple, and while I haven't spoken with the Council in person for reasons I would hope are obvious at this point I've received reports that their behavior is starting to becoming more erratic."

Silas snorted. "That's a hell of a thing to say, which means you're going to have to really convince me."

"It's more of a subtle thing, but the signs are there if you know where to look. The Tython Order is a particularly hot topic for one; some Masters have suggested taking 'punitive measures' against them, though so far no one can justify it. So far."

"Okay...who is making those suggestions? I've had to testify in front of the Council before so I know some names. Lemme guess...that sounds like Mace Windu, that Cerean one also seemed like the type..."

"Ki-Adi-Mundi." Quinlan helpfully said.

"Riiiiight, the hypocritical one! Mr. 'No Emotional Connections But It's Fine If I'm Married Because I'm A Master And Also Screw You.'" Silas said, rolling his eyes as he rattled off the nickname. "I remember now. I liked him even less than Windu when I found that out..."

"If it makes you feel better, those two were the primary voices involved."

"Called it, but those two are kinda obvious. Okay...what about...what about Yoda? I actually kind of liked him, one old bastard to another. He'd better not have been supporting this whole 'punitive whatever' thing."

"He..." Tholme's eyes closed briefly before they reopened. "...I don't know. He barely spends any time in the Temple anymore, and no one has any idea where he's been going when he leaves it. He doesn't leave for long stretches of time but..."

"The Council basically has one less member who doesn't have their head up their ass, got it."

Quinlan snorted at that, earning him a look of annoyance from Tholme. "Yes, well, crude imagery aside the wound has also expressed itself in other forms. Other members of the Council who would oppose such a measure are becoming more and more obsessed with ending the war, no matter the cost to themselves."

"Are we talking 'throwing themselves headlong into fortified positions' or 'sending wave after wave of men to their deaths?'"

"The former, for what little good that does. I have reports on me that will confirm that - in particular how Masters Fisto and Gallia in particular have been noted to be increasingly less concerned with their own safety and have been taking on missions at a rate that-"

"Trust me, I know the signs of someone pushing themselves too far," Silas interrupted. Truth be told he had known that Ciara had been hiding those signs from him in particular but that... "The point being that you can confirm everything you just said with reports and so on?"

Tholme nodded, wordlessly handing over a datapad to Silas, who quickly grabbed it out of his hands and began skimming it over, his eyes widening slightly as he did. "You know if I didn't know better, I'd say you've been spying on your own side here," he commented as he looked over a set of transcripts.

"When I started hearing worrying news from some of the lower-ranking Knights, I feared the worst and took matters into my own hands," Tholme coolly replied.

Silas finished his skim and looked back at Tholme. "Okay, so let's say I'm starting to believe you. Problem is there's still a pretty damn big hole in your story."

"'Why oh why have they not just left the Temple or something?'" Quinlan said resignedly. "That's the one, right? Well, you're probably going to love that one of the biggest reasons is politics."

Silas did his level best to contain his reaction to Quinlan's comment, fully grasping the implications of how Sidious was likely already pulling strings. "It'd be bad if the Jedi up and left while the Republic's debating on how best to punish them, right. If they ran away that might as well be an admission of guilt..." He shook his head. "But hang on, aren't most Council members double timing as generals? I don't get the Force, but it seems to me like you need to stay in that 'wound' or whatever to have the worst of it affect you."

"That is...partly accurate, not to mention that there is a small but constant stream of Jedi leaving Coruscant and making their way to Tython that should be able to shake off the worst of its effects. However there is another, more insidious problem that is exacerbating its effects; there is a genuine fear within the Coruscant Order that they are under attack," Tholme began to explain. "Not just from the Sith or Separatists as usual, but from the Tython Order, from the Watchers, and it would not surprise me if I began to hear whispers that the Republic itself is to blame for their misfortune in the coming months." He folded his arms and sighed resignedly. "...I meant what I said. The Jedi Order as Quinlan and I know it has already lost. Even in death, Bulq managed to do more damage to the Jedi in one night than the Sith have managed to do in a millennium. And in light of what is happening now the two of us concluded that our best hope was to work with you and Lady Ciaran to try and stop the Sith from finishing their work. Hoping that maybe we can at least protect the rest of the Jedi on Tython if nothing else..." He trailed off, staring blankly at the floor as Quinlan folded his arms and leaned against the wall, clearly deep in thought.

Silas went quiet, trying to figure out what to say before groaning and cracking his neck slightly. "If it makes you feel better...your situation might not be as hopeless as you think it is."

That got both Jedi's attention as they quickly focused on Silas. "I can see it in your eyes...You know something - some truth about all of this!?" Tholme said, the intensity in his voice clear as Quinlan's face began to light up.

"Now hold on a minute. You two have to talk to Ciaran if you want any more details, that is not negotiable. But if you're serious about this...my ship's on a landing pad near here. If you end up somehow stowing away on it, well I can always say that you two managed to mind trick me or something, what a shame."

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As the Forefather's Charm climbed up and made its way out of Nar Shaddaa's atmosphere, Quinlan and Tholme were settling into the ship's main hold, Quinlan idly fiddling with his lightsaber while Tholme was going over a datapad. The pair's concentration was interrupted when the two of them heard a loud "DAMMIT" come from the cockpit. Tholme looked at Quinlan who simply shrugged and went back to work while he went to the cockpit to see what had happened.

"Is something the matter?" Tholme asked as he saw Silas crash into the back of his seat and groan loudly. In response, Silas turned to shoot a halfhearted glare at the Jedi before leaning forward and beginning to work with the controls.

"Sorry about this, but it looks like the meeting's going to have to wait - Ciaran's busy with the whole Honoghr thing and you're not going to be able to get time...to..." Silas trailed off as he saw Tholme's face visibly tense up after the name "Honoghr" was dropped, and Silas could tell that he was in deep thought before his eyes snapped back to attention.

"We're not waiting. We're going to Honoghr," Tholme stated without any room for argument. He waited for some kind of protest from Silas, only for him to tilt his head in slight surprise as Silas started punching in the coordinates for the devastated world.

"Again, I'm no Force user, but I've spent enough time around them to notice when they get the feeling something bad is about to happen and to not argue with them when they do," Silas said out loud as his movements visibly hastened, his hands flying across the controls as he kicked the Forefather's Charm's thrusters to maximum, the ship rocketing away from Nar Shaddaa's gravity well. As Silas prepared the jump to Honoghr, one thought was going through his mind...

Please be safe Ciara...

AN: So this is happening now. I actually had this ready a couple of days ago, but for hopefully obvious reasons I really wanted to make sure this was well-polished.

First off, you'll notice a lack of rewards, and no, it's not because I'm trying to screw you over or anything. That's actually because for once in this quest I actually have an honest-to-god continuous story arc planned out that will take place over the course of most of these interludes. I know, it's insanity! I'll be nice and even give you an "episode guide":

Howls in the Dark -> Planet of Death -> The Great Mother -> Black and White

With the other two interludes coming somewhere in the middle of that or afterwards depending on the whims of my muse (though I'm almost certain that the Jebble Box thing is going to come out right after "Black and White" for thematic reasons) and the [REDACTED] one last. Anyway, the rewards for those four things will all be collectively written out at the end of "Black and White."

Aside from that...yeah, yeah I admit that I've basically screwed over the Courscant Order at this point. I honestly have nothing against them personally (no, really!), buuuuuutttt I did mention a while back that I wasn't planning on pulling any punches if/when they made mistakes and I'm not one to sugarcoat the ramifications of your/others' actions so here we are. Fun! (In the Dwarf Fortress sense of the word)

Anyway, stay tuned for the continuation of this arc (man it feels satisfying to say that)!
 
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... Or in other news, Palpatine may not know what to think of this. On one end, it's Ciara, on the other end, in a Sith hindsight. If not for Ciara...

There wouldn't be Jedi being able to relax 'just' enough, to dig an even more hilarious grave of their own making. At least, before he spits over them burying themselves, before he can Sith vengeance them.

More seriously, well... I guess we're going to be dealing with a lot of green issues now, aren't we? That, and Mother is certainly going to be an even bigger danger to Ciara, in a "balance empathy" sense.
 
And on that day, the true Jedi received a grim reminder.
Coruscant's Attack on Tython.

"We have no names. We have no power. We have a lot of hiding places and one guy who knows how to hide from sight and in the Force. He's going to show everyone. Good luck. "
 
I might be missing something by reading on mobile, but how did this wound in the force come about?
It's probably from the whopping great Sith shrine buried under the Temple poisoning the Force Nexus they both sit on, the war's managed to cause enough issues for the Jedi that the metaphysical 'cap' over the top of it (from, y'know, the Jedi Temple being built on top of it) is weakening enough to make it a problem.
 
I might be missing something by reading on mobile, but how did this wound in the force come about?

Remember the Temple Massacre? And how a lot of Jedi and Dark Jedi alike killed each other in what was basically a mini-civil war?

That many Force users dying in one place and causing that much trauma has...consequences.
 
I might be missing something by reading on mobile, but how did this wound in the force come about?
A combination of the people that died in the bomb with the force users that died fighting, amplified massively by the sheer betrayal fealt by all of the other Jedi and the terror that they're it safe even in their own temple.

Add in the fact that the temple is built on a Force nexus and you have a recipe for some really bad shit.
 
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