EDIT: also, did anyone notice that the University was founded by a DRAGON?!
...You have my attention.
Not much here -- I just want to point out the 200-story (2,000-ft-deep) artificial lake that was built on top of 5,000 levels of ecumenopolis. That's a thing.
On one hand, I have a half written conversation between Ciaran and Maul. On the other hand, beach episode...
Especially that 'Great Holocron'. (My kleptomania knows no bounds...)
Out of curiosity, what makes it 'Great'?
Also note that there is apparently a dark-side Force sect on the planet, that I didn't know existed.
This feat alone qualifies them for most secretive Dark Side sect.
It's a waterworld, populated with otters
 
Out of curiosity, what makes it 'Great'?

It's basically the Jedi Encyclopaedia of knowledge. With topics ranging from lightsaber construction and the unedited version of Galactic History to debates on resisting the Dark Side. Not to mention Jedi Masters have a habit of adding their own bits of research to the holocron, including the Prophecy of The Chosen One, Mace Windu's instructions on Vaapad and Kit Fisto's techniques in waterproofing lightsabers.

Of course, though it's easy to access, it's difficult to use and even Master Yoda struggles not to fall into the mysteries it holds.
 
On one hand, I have a half written conversation between Ciaran and Maul. On the other hand, beach episode...
Beach episode! Also, I think you should scrap the conversation. If it's at all possible, I want to make sure Maul never even knows about Ciaran aside from what's publicly known.

EDIT: I mean, write it if you want, but I'm going to ask Snark for it to be non-canon.

EDIT2: That sounded a bit assholey too. Sorry. I really don't want to impede your creative activities, especially since you always write entertaining things, but at the same time, Maul and Ciaran meeting is not something I want to actually happen.
 
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How is Karada the best thing to happen to galactic medicine in several millennia? All we've done that the public knows about is sell off-brand medical gear, off-brand medicine, and now the base upgrade stuff. Medically speaking, nothing we've done is new or revolutionary, save for the stuff we've kept secret like gene mods and medical nanodroids.
Fair enough, it's mostly the Arkanians who think we're the best. For everyone else, I was mostly anticipating our 'Grand Theft Bacta' Intrigue action -- when Karada is responsible for ending the bacta monopoly and making the galaxy's best miracle cure available for dirt cheap to everyone, you better believe we'll be the best thing since sliced bread. Still, that hasn't happened yet, so I fixed the original phrasing. :)

...You have my attention.
I figured that would, yeah. The University grounds apparently has statutes of the two Founders, a mental image I find hilarious -- the one founder is a normal-looking human, the other a massive 'Star Dragon' between 10 and 100 meters long....

Out of curiosity, what makes it 'Great'?
Many, many things. As far as I know, it's the only dodecahedral holocron, because it wasn't made by a single User but made for the entire Jedi Order to contribute to, and the best Jedi from each generation add knowledge from their specialty. Most of what's listed on the wiki is historical stuff (encounters with different Sith over the generations), but there are a few instances where a Jedi develops a new skill and adds it to the Great Holocron. Plo Koon added his whole light-side Force lightning technique ('Electric Judgment'), while Mace Windu did the same for the Vaapad lightsaber form. Imagine that steady drip-drip-drip of new skills and techniques, sustained over 25,000 years, and you get The Great Holocron. :cool:
 
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The Great Holocron is the Jedi version of the Telos Holocron, except considerably larger and, ironically, much less user friendly.

Although how we'd gain access is the big question, it's rather well guarded.
 
The Great Holocron is the Jedi version of the Telos Holocron, except considerably larger and, ironically, much less user friendly.
Sheev Palpatine, ironically enough, makes a perfectly reasonable and polite Guardian. He also cleaned up the indexing and updated it all to modern terminology.

Not really sure why, honestly it might just be his hobby.
 
...Which ended up being slightly redundant because as it turns out that one Ahsoka Tano was also captured during the raids, and she had quickly broken out, gathered several prisoners together, and began launching several attacks to help free even more. By the time your forces arrived the island she had been taken to had been completely liberated, letting the rescue forces launch attacks on other areas of the moon. While the Trandoshans quickly called in reinforcements from Trandosha, the rescue teams were still able to rescue a considerable amount of prisoners from the moon.

When one of your people asked Tano about how she managed to be so successful at her insurgency on Wasskah, she downplayed her role and said that it was because she had good help. When they asked one of the others who were with her, they said that she had displayed tactical and strategic acumen far beyond her years, to the point where the Trandoshans thought they had been fighting a Jedi Master.

Ashoka was already a great character and now she's getting even better.

Not to mention that he somehow managed to transport an exogorth corpse to Kalee as a colossal trophy.

You know, I'm fairly sure Grievous cemented his position as Kalee Legend several [Insert Ludicrous Thing]s ago, he doesn't need to keep doing it. :p

"...Maul."

"You've got to be...alright, continue."

"Savage, are you kidding me

Not just Savage, no no, Savage Oppress. 3edgy5me

"Right now I wish I hadn't. The man managed to keep himself alive through sheer hatred, at the cost of being in perpetual agony. If Maul is anything like him..."

Not...all the way, but there are definitely similarities. Maul is a full on proper Sith (Former Sith now, obvs), with all that entails. He is full of rage but manages to keep that as a power source rather than going pathetic Sith crybaby with it. ( *cough* Malak *cough*)

"...Damn you Talzin, this is your plan!? Sending a crazed Sith hungry for revenge out into the galaxy at a time like this!?

It...could actually be useful for us. Maul is ridiculously dangerous, so just having an obvious enemy to draw Dooku and Palpatine's attention could be quite the thing. Maul is both a very dangerous combatant, and an intelligent manipulator. (Rebels did a good job showing just how dangerous he is, what with completely trashing a few Inquisitors (Read: Dark Side Adepts), showing the difference between a Dark Side user and a Sith. He was also very proficient at controlling the situation and getting people to do what he wanted)

...You're not exactly looking forward to this after the time you told Anakin about Vectivus...but you have to do this. Far too much is at stake. (To be continued in Legacies Of The Force)

I have to say, even with that absurd roll I don't think we're going to actually recruit Anakin. I'd place it as more making it impossible for Palpatine to recruit him, and shoring up his personality so he doesn't go off the deep end. So he's more secure in himself and his beliefs, feelings and choices. Manipulating him to be less manipulable, as it were :p

Maybe give him the strength to admit that he doesn't agree with the Jedi on all things, and even if he isn't to turn on them he won't let them tell him what is right and wrong, and that he can't have a relationship with someone he loves.

"If I remember right, your pleasure cruiser is called Obi-Wan's Love Nest, so allow me to show you Padme and Anakin's Romantic Getaway."

Ciaran will never stop trolling.

Even among Jedi, he is a superior pilot, but more usefully he's an adept mechanic.

Ya, Anakin is surprisingly proficient in a lot of non-jedi mundane skills.

s. The escape pods took the longest to engineer. The General asked that the escape pods be altered to be more useful offensively, for whatever reason."

Here's a hint Raith, that reason is because Grievous doesn't understand what the point even having an escape pod is.

Grievous u r gr8

Asajj Ventress
Vectivus - Personal Courier/Starfighter

I don't think Asajj agrees with all of Vectivus's opinions and views on the force, but despite that he was still an important part of her reaching new resolutions, so I can buy that as a reasonable name. I dunno, she's complicated. She isn't a Sith anymore, but she is a Dark Side user, and she's pretty different to Ciaran.

Oh, sure, it'll be fine, what could-

Coruscant: 87 (+75)
Nar Shaddaa : 1
Taris: 99 (+100 and Event)
Space: 23 (+25)

why

whyyyyyyyyyyy

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAH

I'm approximately 80% certain that'll be a free Personal action next turn due to [SPOILERS].

Honestly I've been meaning to make that a thing but it's another one of those things that's been slipping my mind unfortunately.

Things I think are relevant to Ciaran building herself a proper lightsaber here:

- Asajj's own skill in building lightsabers
- Vectivus for the same
- Lava crystal she picked up a way back
- I believe we actually still have the Darksaber sitting in the Vault?

But using proper construction knowledge, complete with snazzy crystal and possibly modelled at least partially after the preposterously old Darksaber would be hella rad.

"Query: How much longer must I remain here, silicate?"

HK might be fond of using meatbag as an invective, but that doesn't mean he'll be inaccurate.

As the battle droids marched forward and began to open fire, HK rolled to one side, raised an arm, and from his forearm a blaster came out, allowing HK to return fire on the B1s.

"As an assassin droid HK should always be armed, and the best way to do that is to integrate the weapons into his chassis," Cheriss explained as HK began to tear apart the B1s. "Based on schematics from the B2 Super Battle Droids as well as records of the HS-1 units encountered on Kamino, HK now has a blaster rifle embedded in each forearm. Of course he can still use regular rifles as well, but now he has more effective holdout weapons."

I expect he'll still use other weaponry, but backup stuff is always good.

HK-47 - Definition: 'Love' is making a shot to the knees of a target 120 kilometers away using an Aratech sniper rifle with a tri-light scope... Love is knowing your target, putting them in your targeting reticule, and together, achieving a singular purpose against statistically long odds.

The best definition of Love. Ever. In all time.

As Cheriss said that, a loud noise came from the room's speakers and the two combatants broke apart, saying nothing before simply turning and walking in opposite directions. Shaking her head, Ciaran turned to Cheriss. "Could you do the same for our other droids? Like PR-1 for instance?"

Cheriss made several "hmmm"-ing noises before replying. "I mean, I can't do exactly what I did with HK for all of them, but I can definitely improve on the designs if you want me to...I could create the schematics in my spare time, though any actual refits are going to need time and lots of credits."

I kind of expect with her new found skill Cheriss will make herself a fresh body. Her current improved body is nice and all, but she understands things much better now, plus force-friendly cybernetics research would probably help make it even better.



Okay, for next turn we really need to get Ciaran doing some training actions. Personally I'd like to get her doing the pilot training, she already has survival training, and adding on to general proficiency is a good thing. Obvs getting Blazing Chains beyond just the basics would be good, and Shatterpoint is an obvious thing to look into.

I'm not exactly into Star Wars minutia but I did some cursory googling on Saber forms and I'll admit I don't really see the attraction of Form III, it doesn't seem like a good match for her, idk, I could be convinced. Looking into that sect that uses force lightning and getting that for her would also be a good. I mean, she needs some more classic dark side abilities beyond Force Choke and Dun Moch.
 
I'm not exactly into Star Wars minutia but I did some cursory googling on Saber forms and I'll admit I don't really see the attraction of Form III, it doesn't seem like a good match for her, idk, I could be convinced.
Form III is the best for survival, which is necessary for Ciaran to not instantly die the moment Sidious attacks her like those Jedi Masters he killed in Episode III. Furthermore, Form II is specifically meant for lightsaber duelling, not for dealing with blasters, so Form III will make her more effective at dealing with the most common weapon in the galaxy. Finally, learning Form III will make her a better fighter overall.

Looking into that sect that uses force lightning and getting that for her would also be a good. I mean, she needs some more classic dark side abilities beyond Force Choke and Dun Moch.
Force Lightning is a generic technique and so Ciaran cannot learn it. Dun Moch is a Sith technique but it's not a Dark Side ability because it doesn't use the Force at all.
 
It's a generic ability so she auto-learns it.
The power of it simply scales to her Lore.

But there will never be an action to really learn the ability and master it like 'Evil-Talk No Jutsu' or 'baby banthas are cute'
 
Given that Sith Lighting is the iconic Sith ability and Ciaran is quite proficient in Sith teachings, I'd be surprised if she didn't know it. I'd just advise against trying to out-lightning Palpatine.

I also don't see Lighting being part of Ciaran's go to abilities unless she's intentionally showing off as a Sith Lord for some reason.
She seems to like smashing things with telekinesis to be honest, plus for terror she can shatter...damn near everything actually.
 
Ultimate terror mode, shoot lightning at things, apply telekinesis to the shatterpoints of things you just shot at, laugh evilly.
 
It's a generic ability so she auto-learns it.
This is only for techniques which aren't faction-specific, like Telekinesis and Force Jump. Generic techniques specific to Jedi or Sith are out of her reach.

Given that Sith Lighting is the iconic Sith ability and Ciaran is quite proficient in Sith teachings, I'd be surprised if she didn't know it.
She knows Force Phantom because that was the one unique technique present in Vectivus' holocron, but that's it. Sith Lightning is generic and thus she would not know it.
 
This is only for techniques which aren't faction-specific, like Telekinesis and Force Jump. Generic techniques specific to Jedi or Sith are out of her reach.


She knows Force Phantom because that was the one unique technique present in Vectivus' holocron, but that's it. Sith Lightning is generic and thus she would not know it.

I don't think so, generic Jedi techniques will definitely be in her repertoire thanks to the Dantooine Holocrons and a Sith Holocron typically everything one needs to be a Sith, assuming said Sith doesn't intentionally dick you over.

They're just things not worth specifically mentioning.

Why on earth wouldn't she have the standard abilities after studying the general teachings?
 
I'm not exactly into Star Wars minutia but I did some cursory googling on Saber forms and I'll admit I don't really see the attraction of Form III, it doesn't seem like a good match for her, idk, I could be convinced. Looking into that sect that uses force lightning and getting that for her would also be a good. I mean, she needs some more classic dark side abilities beyond Force Choke and Dun Moch.
Mixture of reasons really. Having a backup form is always handy, not to mention it's the endurance form, which means its training always helps when you are stuck in a prolonged and tiring fight for your life against an angry and thwarted sith lord.
 
She's already great at Form II, and couples that with the use of telekinesis and blasters. She's not as good as Dooku in terms of swordsmanship, but she has tricks up her sleeve to make up for that.

Makashi has difficulty with defending against ranged opponents though, which Soresu can easily handle. Both stress efficiency of movement too, so Form III wouldn't be as difficult for Ciaran to study compared to say, Juyo, Dyem-So or Ataru.
 
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Form 3 is The Defense form, aka something we desperately need in a fight against a WTFOMGBBQ PWNAGE monster like Sidious.
Total Defense + Anti-Lightsaber is a pretty good combo to play defensive while our pet Chosen One, cadre of Jedi Councilmembers and Hero Units whittles down his HP
 
Form 3 is The Defense form, aka something we desperately need in a fight against a WTFOMGBBQ PWNAGE monster like Sidious.
Total Defense + Anti-Lightsaber is a pretty good combo to play defensive while our pet Chosen One, cadre of Jedi Councilmembers and Hero Units whittles down his HP
Who says it will be a matter of HP attrition? Lightsaber duels tend to end at first hit.

And we do not know if bringing in the Jedi will be feasible at all. The stability of the Republic in the aftermath may necessitate that Jedi are not involved in any way. I for one would like to avoid the newly decapitated Republic army from launching a retalitory strike on the Jedi. Our plan to kill Sidious cannot be contingent of us removing him from his Chancellor position.
 
Who says it will be a matter of HP attrition? Lightsaber duels tend to end at first hit.

And we do not know if bringing in the Jedi will be feasible at all. The stability of the Republic in the aftermath may necessitate that Jedi are not involved in any way. I for one would like to avoid the newly decapitated Republic army from launching a retalitory strike on the Jedi. Our plan to kill Sidious cannot be contingent of us removing him from his Chancellor position.

HP doesn't necessarily mean actual physical hits. Taking out his contingencies or working him into an untenable situation could both be considered HP whittling. Either way, when we have all the pieces in play the countdown begins and we need to Tank like the Hulk. We are the main rival for Sidious, we are his first target.
 
Not just Savage, no no, Savage Oppress. 3edgy5me
:rofl:

HK-47 - Definition: 'Love' is making a shot to the knees of a target 120 kilometers away using an Aratech sniper rifle with a tri-light scope... Love is knowing your target, putting them in your targeting reticule, and together, achieving a singular purpose against statistically long odds.

The best definition of Love. Ever. In all time.
How did I not know about this?!

I kind of expect with her new found skill Cheriss will make herself a fresh body. Her current improved body is nice and all, but she understands things much better now, plus force-friendly cybernetics research would probably help make it even better.
Good point! I'll add it to the list of Hero Actions.

I'm not exactly into Star Wars minutia but I did some cursory googling on Saber forms and I'll admit I don't really see the attraction of Form III, it doesn't seem like a good match for her, idk, I could be convinced.
I'm pretty much where you are. Sidious is ludicrously good at lightsaber combat -- it's not just that he killed three Jedi in a matter of seconds, it's that he killed three Jedi Masters, who had been chosen by Mace Windu specifically to take a Sith Lord into custody. We could invest time in learning Form III, but we'd need to dedicate a lot of time to it to get good enough to defend against Palpatine, and that's time we wouldn't be able to use for other things.

My preference is to spend that time developing out-of-context Force skills that Palpatine wouldn't expect or have a counter for. Palpatine is good at lightsaber combat? Don't give him the chance! Snipe him from distance with Blazing Chain, keep him off balance with Fallanassi illusions, pick apart his weak points with conceptual shatterpoint, borrow Zieson Sha telekinesis to surround him with a whirling dervish of sharp things, destroy his footing with physical shatterpoint, and move faster than he can possibly follow with Matukai physical enhancement.

Palpatine has prepared his whole life to fight a Jedi. Let's not match his expectations.

Makashi has difficulty with defending against ranged opponents though, which Soresu can easily handle. Both stress efficiency of movement too, so Form III wouldn't be as difficult for Ciaran to study compared to say, Juyo, Dyem-So or Ataru.
OTOH, this is a pretty good argument -- if Soresu is our best bet for dealing with blasters & ranged attack, it might be worth picking up, especially if it meshes easily with Makashi.

Looking into that sect that uses force lightning and getting that for her would also be a good.
Force Lightning is a generic technique and so Ciaran cannot learn it.
...Pretty sure @deadcrystal was referring to the Baron Do Sages:
Something else to consider, however: Electric Judgment was developed by Plo Koon, a 'Kel Dor' Jedi Master from the planet Dorin. Notably, the first time he used this Force technique was instinctive, which indicates that it may be related to his species. As it turns out, Dorin is also the center of the Baran Do Sages Force sect, which specializes in (wait for it...) Weather Control. Sure enough, here's what the wiki has to say:
They were also proficient in a white lightning technique, possibly a variation of Electric Judgment.
This is apparently considered part of the hasset-durr family of Force techniques, which provides an impressively fine control over electricity -- for Force lightning, sure, but more notably for disabling cybernetics or electronics, boosting radio and comm signals, and of course controlling lightning storms.

So, it's ultimately up to @Dr. Snark, but yes, it seems like spending a Lore Action to learn from Baran Do would let us start learning Force lightning...
 
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@Dr. Snark, can I request that the subjects of the Briefing the Boss omakes be present within the titles? I only found the one pertaining to the Inner Rim on the third try.
@Dr. Snark, I'm not sure if you saw this earlier, but I thought it was a good idea. I went back and added a brief description to each omake title. Would you be willing to change the threadmarks titles to match these?

EDIT: on second thought, with the more descriptive titles, I'm not sure the numbering is needed. You can get rid of the "Pt. __" from each if you prefer.
Briefing the Boss, Pt. 1: Northern Outer Rim​
Briefing the Boss, Pt. 2: Northern Mid Rim​

While I was doing that, I had a thought -- my omake on the Anti-Palpatine Senators doesn't really fit the rest of the 'Briefing the Boss' series, since it's not part of the galaxy survey. Since I'm planning on other similar omakes (related to Borvo's criminal empire, Clan Skirata, Palpatine's Inner Circle per @Stealthy's list, etc.) I figured it'd be better to make it the first part of a different series.

This one was originally "Briefing the Boss Pt. 3":
Dossier In Depth, Pt. 1: Anti-Palpatine Senators​

Unfortunately that threw off the numbering for the other two. This was originally "Briefing the Boss Pt. 4":
Briefing the Boss, Pt. 3: The Inner Rim​

And "Briefing the Boss Pt. 5":
Briefing the Boss, Pt. 4: Hutt Space​
 
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Good point! I'll add it to the list of Hero Actions.
Don't. A Cheriss Hero Action that's about making her body better is already present in the form of Continued Frame Development. An additional action would just be a duplicate.

My preference is to spend that time developing out-of-context Force skills that Palpatine wouldn't expect or have a counter for. Palpatine is good at lightsaber combat? Don't give him the chance! Snipe him from distance with Blazing Chain, keep him off balance with Fallanassi illusions, pick apart his weak points with conceptual shatterpoint, borrow Zieson Sha telekinesis to surround him with a whirling dervish of sharp things, destroy his footing with physical shatterpoint, and move faster than he can possibly follow with Matukai physical enhancement.
The whole reason why we're going to fight Sidious isn't because it makes any kind of sense for us to personally fight him, but because Dr. Snark wants to make our final fight with him as dramatic and typical as possible. Thus, lightsaber fighting will be a major component of the fight whether we want it to be or not. I agree that we should pick up as many unorthodox techniques to use against him as possible, but we shouldn't let our lightsaber skills fall to the wayside because they are what we will use the most.
 
Form III was initially devised for blaster fire, because Form II wasn't good at it, but also grew into all around excellent defensive lightsabering built to survive and outlast rather than attack and kill. Surviving long enough to not lose is, like, exactly what we want for taking on Sidious. Mix defensive survivalist lightsabering with all the Force tricks and the dueling focus of Makashi is a solid combo.
 
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