Adapting Iron Mask
King crimson
Confusion Will Be My Epitaph
- Location
- Los Angeles
So this one was fairly tricky although I do think that I've done a decent job adapting it. I appreciate any and all attempts at remaking these villains. This is a ramblier post and it does show my thought process even if it isn't as clean as some of the others. Also fair warning, Iron Mask is initially suicidal so this is a good bit more risky than most other adaptations I have done up to this point and may make people uncomfortable. I do not want to alienate people and I understand that suicide can be a touchy subject but I wanted to try and go this direction when adapting the character. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to improve.
Adapting Iron Mask
Adapting Iron Mask is a tricky proposition. Iron Mask is an incredibly nebulous character. Furthermore merging him with other characters is tricky since there are a weirdly huge amount of villains with just the name "Mask". On top of that there is a minor Atom villain named Ion Mask who wears an iron mask and looks nearly identical to Iron Mask.
What are the core elements of Iron Mask? Essentially Iron Mask was a career criminal who got caught in an explosion which scarred his face. Iron Mask then faked his death hid his face behind a mask and then went on to pretend his civilian identity was dead while going on a crime spree. He was primarily a Doll Man enemy. While there is no Doll Man superficially there is another similar hero in the Atom (who fought the incredibly similar Ion Mask). So the core elements of his character are being defaced in some way and wanting to pretend to be someone who he is not and we have set him up as an adversary for a hero who can be tiny.
Now we have run out of source material to work with. Sure we could throw in more characters into the amalgamation but that could swiftly result in the character becoming a mess and I prefer to keep things simple and clean. As such now we begin looking at what we can derive original writing from. We know that Ion Mask was based out of Ivy town and that Iron Mask as an Atom villain will likely be the same. The most notable thing about Ivy Town is Ivy University which is where the Atom works in his civilian identity. So we've got an easy way to set up the scarring with a tried and true comics trope, a lab accident. So we have our setup for how he got scarred but we don't have the motivation for being a criminal. In both Ion Mask and the original Iron Mask's origins they became supervillains because they were criminals. In this adaption that doesn't work as cleanly since I have him in some way involve with Ivy University. I know that he wants to abandon his civilian identity so something about becoming a criminal must appeal to him over retaining his old life. And with that thought in mind I managed to come up with a rather unique interpretation for this character that I hope people find interesting and exciting.
William Jameson was a professor of chemistry at Ivy University. While he had a brilliant mind he was utterly and completely bored of his life. Everything felt meaningless to him. No matter what he achieved he was always overshadowed and insignificant. William slipped further and further into depression. He grew misanthropic and started actively despising those he had to teach as he felt they did not respect him and that everyone mocked him behind his back. His anger towards his students manifested as violent rants at how worthless his students were. Needless to say they didn't like him all that much. One day some of his students decided to sabotage William's lab equipment as a way to get back at him after he unfairly failed him out of the class. One fateful night William decided he had enough. His life was empty and unfulfilling, he was going to end it. As such William decided to commit suicide. However if he was going to die, he wanted people to remember him for it so that he would no longer be insignificant. William set up an explosive calculated to kill him. However because of the faulty lab equipment the explosion went off early and William actually survived the attempt. Volunteers came and saved people from the fire.
When William came to he found himself in the house of an amateur locksmith and paramedic. The hospital didn't have enough room to take care of everyone hurt in the explosion so William had to make do with what he got. The man couldn't recognize William and nobody knew what had happened. Willaim ended up confessing to the man that he set up the explosions. The man was horrified and struck William. In a moment of rage William struck back and killed the man. It was then that William realized something. The act of killing someone gave him joy. He could lash out at those that looked down on him and remake himself into something bigger than all of them. William made a crude metal mask to hide his face before burning down the man's house to hide what had happened.
William left that house and had renamed himself Daniel Vittorio and had gotten involved with the mob. His knowledge of chemistry and viciousness allowed him to swiftly rise up the ranks. He ended up as the right hand man of the leader of the mob and was known for always wearing a metal mask. However once the Atom showed up Daniel was once again overshadowed and was belittled by the boss when he couldn't stop him. Daniel had enough. He murdered the head of the mob and took control of the criminal element to form his own gang. Taking the name Iron Mask, he began a crime wave designed to draw out the Atom so he could go and kill him. Iron Mask soon found he enjoyed being a supervillain even more than being a criminal and that he could live in infamy even when he lost this way. Iron Mask soon realized that his mystique would be ruined if people knew who he really was so he burned off his finger prints and set about trying to kill everyone who might know his real identity. Atom eventually managed to deduce who Iron Mask really was and the two have only grown to hate each other more as time passes on with Iron Mask resenting Atom's refusal to let him become a symbol of terror and Atom finding Iron Mask to be a despicable human being.
I hope that this origin story is interesting. A lot is left open but I think it is a fun adaptation. Let me know your thoughts on what I've come up with.
Adapting Iron Mask
Adapting Iron Mask is a tricky proposition. Iron Mask is an incredibly nebulous character. Furthermore merging him with other characters is tricky since there are a weirdly huge amount of villains with just the name "Mask". On top of that there is a minor Atom villain named Ion Mask who wears an iron mask and looks nearly identical to Iron Mask.
What are the core elements of Iron Mask? Essentially Iron Mask was a career criminal who got caught in an explosion which scarred his face. Iron Mask then faked his death hid his face behind a mask and then went on to pretend his civilian identity was dead while going on a crime spree. He was primarily a Doll Man enemy. While there is no Doll Man superficially there is another similar hero in the Atom (who fought the incredibly similar Ion Mask). So the core elements of his character are being defaced in some way and wanting to pretend to be someone who he is not and we have set him up as an adversary for a hero who can be tiny.
Now we have run out of source material to work with. Sure we could throw in more characters into the amalgamation but that could swiftly result in the character becoming a mess and I prefer to keep things simple and clean. As such now we begin looking at what we can derive original writing from. We know that Ion Mask was based out of Ivy town and that Iron Mask as an Atom villain will likely be the same. The most notable thing about Ivy Town is Ivy University which is where the Atom works in his civilian identity. So we've got an easy way to set up the scarring with a tried and true comics trope, a lab accident. So we have our setup for how he got scarred but we don't have the motivation for being a criminal. In both Ion Mask and the original Iron Mask's origins they became supervillains because they were criminals. In this adaption that doesn't work as cleanly since I have him in some way involve with Ivy University. I know that he wants to abandon his civilian identity so something about becoming a criminal must appeal to him over retaining his old life. And with that thought in mind I managed to come up with a rather unique interpretation for this character that I hope people find interesting and exciting.
William Jameson was a professor of chemistry at Ivy University. While he had a brilliant mind he was utterly and completely bored of his life. Everything felt meaningless to him. No matter what he achieved he was always overshadowed and insignificant. William slipped further and further into depression. He grew misanthropic and started actively despising those he had to teach as he felt they did not respect him and that everyone mocked him behind his back. His anger towards his students manifested as violent rants at how worthless his students were. Needless to say they didn't like him all that much. One day some of his students decided to sabotage William's lab equipment as a way to get back at him after he unfairly failed him out of the class. One fateful night William decided he had enough. His life was empty and unfulfilling, he was going to end it. As such William decided to commit suicide. However if he was going to die, he wanted people to remember him for it so that he would no longer be insignificant. William set up an explosive calculated to kill him. However because of the faulty lab equipment the explosion went off early and William actually survived the attempt. Volunteers came and saved people from the fire.
When William came to he found himself in the house of an amateur locksmith and paramedic. The hospital didn't have enough room to take care of everyone hurt in the explosion so William had to make do with what he got. The man couldn't recognize William and nobody knew what had happened. Willaim ended up confessing to the man that he set up the explosions. The man was horrified and struck William. In a moment of rage William struck back and killed the man. It was then that William realized something. The act of killing someone gave him joy. He could lash out at those that looked down on him and remake himself into something bigger than all of them. William made a crude metal mask to hide his face before burning down the man's house to hide what had happened.
William left that house and had renamed himself Daniel Vittorio and had gotten involved with the mob. His knowledge of chemistry and viciousness allowed him to swiftly rise up the ranks. He ended up as the right hand man of the leader of the mob and was known for always wearing a metal mask. However once the Atom showed up Daniel was once again overshadowed and was belittled by the boss when he couldn't stop him. Daniel had enough. He murdered the head of the mob and took control of the criminal element to form his own gang. Taking the name Iron Mask, he began a crime wave designed to draw out the Atom so he could go and kill him. Iron Mask soon found he enjoyed being a supervillain even more than being a criminal and that he could live in infamy even when he lost this way. Iron Mask soon realized that his mystique would be ruined if people knew who he really was so he burned off his finger prints and set about trying to kill everyone who might know his real identity. Atom eventually managed to deduce who Iron Mask really was and the two have only grown to hate each other more as time passes on with Iron Mask resenting Atom's refusal to let him become a symbol of terror and Atom finding Iron Mask to be a despicable human being.
I hope that this origin story is interesting. A lot is left open but I think it is a fun adaptation. Let me know your thoughts on what I've come up with.
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