Advice and Trust [NGE]
Wixelt
NGE Fic plan 480 pages and counting...
- Location
- England, UK
- Pronouns
- He/They
Painful.
More seriously, though, something along the lines of his fate in Chronicles might be fitting, though imprisonment for life is also an option.
Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
I'm going to be contrarian and predict that he gets precisely what he wants...only to have it ripped away from him in dramatic fashion.
grommile
nasty-minded old cynic
- Location
- NERV-Mercia
- Pronouns
- Traditional/Animate
so... just like canon?
- Location
- United States
The fate of Gendo...hmmm...
I'd say he'd be inflicted the absolute worse possible fate I can imagine. Having disgusted Yui to the point of hatred, knowing he's alone and unloved, and he cannot kill himself. He'll live the rest of his life, broken and in a vegetative state. (Because adam had to be removed and destroyed) And thanks to the excellent work of NERV's technology, he'll live for a loooong time.
I'd say he'd be inflicted the absolute worse possible fate I can imagine. Having disgusted Yui to the point of hatred, knowing he's alone and unloved, and he cannot kill himself. He'll live the rest of his life, broken and in a vegetative state. (Because adam had to be removed and destroyed) And thanks to the excellent work of NERV's technology, he'll live for a loooong time.
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Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
To be completely contrarian again, they end up achieving Instrumentality.
Except they're the only ones in it, so they only have each other to deal with for all eternity.
/their collective essence
//fits in a large pickle jar
///that Ritsuko Akagi keeps in an industrial fridge in Terminal Dogma
- Location
- Milton Keynes UK
/their collective essence
//fits in a large pickle jar
///that Ritsuko Akagi keeps in an industrial fridge in Terminal Dogma
*Insert Skeksis Chamberlain HmmmmMMMMMmmmm noises, ala Akagi*
*"essence, we must not drink thier essence"*
- Location
- National Capital Region, USA
This is a biiiit close to the edge for what's allowable with the cast, so ease it back a little. There's reasons why any nighttime activities in A&T 'canon' happen very much off-screen.
Like I've said before, I don't mind too much if this place acts as the SV Eva General Thread between updates. Though of course, A&T discussion is more fun to me.
On the plus side, I'm in place at my base now, and SV is not blocked at work like it is back home, so I can probably get more writing done on slow days. This week has been moderately busy (we blew up an island in my area of ops!), and I was catching up on weeks of SV backlog, but I think we're all done with that. So... writing! I know it's already Thrusday, but I've got tomorrow to write during, yes? I hope.
Still somewhat up in the air, though I have some ideas... poetic irony may be a factor.
Also, when I tried mentally working on A&T this last 2 weeks, I got bits of a new A/K Hangover scene. Not what I needed!
Astray Spiral
Potential Evil Incarnate
- Location
- C:\Windows\explorer.exe
Nice to know, and on the bombing of an island: whoa.
Duff Timmons
A&T Shinji Ikari
Exiting Shinji mode in 3..2..1..
Don't worry, I'm not going there. Part of the reason I fell in love with your story was because of exactly that, this isn't just straight porn (let alone child porn). But I will admit, you ride the line with what you can get away with sometimes dude.
Entering Shinji mode in.....
Why the hell do I do this we all know its (LOUD STATIC SOUND EFFECT).
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God damn it the computer's screwing up again. Oh! Hey God I mean Strypgia, doing fine here.....doing real fine.
Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
I was wondering where Asuka's been.
I'm sure my texting snippet didn't help at all.
/I may have another one in a bit
- Location
- Canada
To be completely contrarian again, they end up achieving Instrumentality.
Except they're the only ones in it, so they only have each other to deal with for all eternity.
/their collective essence
//fits in a large pickle jar
///that Ritsuko Akagi keeps in an industrial fridge in Terminal Dogma
Would it be in the form of slime?
Critian Caceorte
Currently Suffering from Space-Time Narcolepsy
- Location
- Washington State
Just let it flow through you Stryp, all of this Hangover avoidance is clogging up your chakras. Once you unclog and embrace the OT4, your ki will flow so much better.
Duff Timmons
A&T Shinji Ikari
I just came to a realization, and I hate myself now because this only proves that I'm becoming one with this stupid internet society. Instrumentality is one of my f@#$ing trigger words. Not to the same degree that trolls have whenever they here 'feminism' or 'change', but considering the world I live in and everything at stake. It makes me want to loose my f@#$ing mind.
Comedy Omake #145 - Pilot Drunk Texts
Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
The Evangelion Pilots reached for the phones and began searching their texts from last night.
Well, Asuka woozily dragged hers out and demanded that Shinji search for her, but the effect was the same.
"You and I apparently texted Maya," said Rei to Asuka.
xxxx
(Time Stamp: 1 AM)
A: hey
A: heeeeey
A: maaaaaaaayaaaaaa
R: Awaken thyself, Diminutive Mouse of Clan Ibuki!
Ma: Asuka? Rei?
Ma: It's really early in the morning
Ma: Is something wrong?
A: i had a great idea
A: but it's a seeeeeeecret
R: But the knowledge promises to expand thy horizons, a veritable Overton Window unto itself!
Ma: ???
A: okay here me out
A: i think
A: i know
A: that dr. kakagi
A: likes cats
A: u should tell her that
Ma: Asuka, I already knew that senpai liked cats
R: But art thou truly aware of the depth of her affection for the members of Felis catus? I say thee NAY!
Ma: Asuka, Rei, are you two drunk-texting me?
A: no
A: and even if we were, we'd be perfectly functional algebraics
R: And abstractly so, at that! Group theory would have nothing on us!
Ma: okay first of all, the term's "functional alcoholic"
A: u say tat like its a bad thing
Ma: and secondly, I just invited Dr. Akagi into this group text.
A: YOU NARC
A: I COULD DRIVE TO YOUR HOUSE AND KICK YOU IN THE OVARIES RIGHT NOW AND NOT EVEN STOP FOR A BURRITO
R: I believe the vodka is disagreeing with you, my fair maiden!
A: i disagree with myself on a regular basis
Ma: senpai, I think Asuka and Rei are heavily inebriated
Rits: judging by the text I just got from Shinji, they're not the only ones
A: was wondering wut he was screaming about
R: I believe my liver has begun whispering sinister things about me to my kidneys. A foul plot is afoot, I say!
A: whisper louder so i can record it
(Time Stamp: 1:20 AM)
Ma: senpai
Rits: yes?
Ma: I just got a voicemail from Rei
Ma: she keeps whispering about free real estate???
Rits: ugh, this is gonna throw off the sync tests tomorrow. might as well cancel them
Rits: another Geofront late-nighter for nothing
Ma: shouldn't we stop them?
Rits: the MAGI are tracking the Pilots, they'll inform law enforcement before anything gets too out of hand
Ma: how is this not out of hand?
Rits: compared to my college days with Misato and Ryoji?
Ma: @_@
Rits: get some sleep maya, they'll learn one way or another
xxxx
"Srfflbl," grunted Asuka, muffling her chuckles.
"Yes Asuka, you were quite surly," commented Rei. "On a positive note, I'm not currently hallucinating about my bodily organs."
Misato's eyebrow had yet to stop twitching.
Wixelt
NGE Fic plan 480 pages and counting...
- Location
- England, UK
- Pronouns
- He/They
Rits: honestly, it was a slow day if a night of drinking didn't end with one form of inanity or another. younger drunk misato was really going places.
Ma: figuratively, right?
Rits: i wish. but then there was that time we all woke up on a boat to China, so...
Ma: O_O
K: "Speak for yourself..."
K's S2 Organ: 'C'mon, just a little Instrumentality. Don't have to hurt nobody. They might even like it.'
K: 'The answer is no. No they wouldn't. Also, shut up.'
K's S2 Organ: 'Maybe you'll think more about the effects of alcohol on an Adamite body structure in future, then.'
K: *slams head against table*
BG_Character_592
The Fisherman
- Location
- Australia
Similar reasons for Chronicles; pretty sure I've even held back on such scenes lately (I certainly know the Laserdisc Chronicles could get a bit... questionable at times).
Plus, lemon's kinda boring to write. There's only so many permutations of "Insert Object A into Slot B" you can do, and it's more fun to leave it up to the imagination
Also it keeps me from getting infracted, which is always nice
Nothing like letting them learn the way our forefathers learnt: waking up with a massive hangover in a prefecture police station holding cell, with absolutely no memory on how you got there.
Or waking up in Vegas with a polar bear in your bathtub and suddenly married to three of your pilot friends
- Location
- Online
Basically keep it to innuendo.Similar reasons for Chronicles; pretty sure I've even held back on such scenes lately (I certainly know the Laserdisc Chronicles could get a bit... questionable at times).
Plus, lemon's kinda boring to write. There's only so many permutations of "Insert Object A into Slot B" you can do, and it's more fun to leave it up to the imagination
And that's where the writing comes in; you need to set a mood/tone, scenery and a lot of other things i can mention that may get me kicked out for saying. Point it's like any kind of writing you have to draw us in.
Khil: I... am... still emperor.
Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
Similar reasons for Chronicles; pretty sure I've even held back on such scenes lately (I certainly know the Laserdisc Chronicles could get a bit... questionable at times).
Plus, lemon's kinda boring to write. There's only so many permutations of "Insert Object A into Slot B" you can do, and it's more fun to leave it up to the imagination
Also it keeps me from getting infracted, which is always nice
There's also the element of Mystery: the attraction of the unknown tends to be far more enticing than having everything laid bare.
After all, if you know everything there is to know about a particular topic, why keep on going? The same can be said to apply to the art of romance.
- Location
- On a powder keg, next to a fire
Lemon's a mean to an end, I guess, just another tool in the tool shed. If you try to build something by just banging it with a hammer, something will come out of it, just it won't be very versatile.
And while total "plot what plot" is boring to both write and read, "porn with plot" can be engaging - as long as the plot is well done and more than a pretense. There are some examples here on the forum.
But I think we strayed and this is no longer a matter right for this thread.
This or other way, an investigation is in order. And either way, you are in for a headache.
Comedy Omake #146 - More Pilot Drunk Texts
Ultra Sonic 007
Trying to keep things simple~
- Location
- Colorado
"...crstrwry," grumbled Asuka, turning a weary eye to Shinji.
"I am also curious. What exactly was Dr. Akagi referring to?" inquired Rei.
Shinji's flustered face as he gazed at his phone pretty much said it all.
xxxx
(Time Stamp: 1:05 AM)
H: we're still texting while walking
K: %)
H: that makes perfect sense! gotta work off the donuts while we eat them
S: HOLY SHIT
H: that's loud
S: DID ANYONE ELSE SEE THAT
K: <:‑|
H: aw, don't insult yurself nagisa, i don't get it either
H: *yourslf
H: *yorslev
H: is my damn autocorrect drunk too?
S: DR. AKAGI
H: wait, you're inviting her??
S: WE HAVE A DILEMMA
K: O_O
Rits: Busy prepping for a sync test. MAGI haven't signaled me about any sort of major alert. What's going on?
S: okay lemme calm down
S: so we're all making our way downtown, walking fast
Rits: oh gawd drunken lyrics I'm signing off
H: what song?
S: eating donuts that Pen-Pen provided, right?
Rits: fine, continue, might as well see where this train finally wrecks
K: (／ロ°)／
Rits: so you're that kind of drunk, good to know
S: AND THEN OUT OF NOWHERE
S: THERE'S ANOTHER ME
S: EXCEPT DIFFERENT
Rits: mm-hmm
S: HE'S GOT LIKE A COOL CLOAK, WITH A FLOATY PURPLE DRONE THING
S: HE LOOKS AT THE FIVE OF US AND IS ALL LIKE
S: 'bruh, you seem to have a good thing going. take care of yourself'
S: AND THEN HE VANISHES INTO THIN AIR
H: ikari-kun, you're starting to shout as you text
K: (?_?)
S: COME ON KAWORU, THIS KIND OF WEIRD CRAP IS SUPPOSED TO BE YOUR SHTICK
Rits: Okay, calm down Ikari.
S: THERE IS NOT ENOUGH CAPSLOCK IN THE HISTORY OF THE UNIVERSE TO EXPRESS MY CURRENT STATE OF "WTF JUST HAPPENED"
K: (~_~)
H: nagisa's right, body doubles don't seem that weird after Third Impact
H: and that was basically god having an existential meltdown
K: (#^.^#)
S: think i got it out of my system
S: oh hey isn't that the bar where suziehara works?
H: it is! let's go say hi to toei!
H: *toto
H: *totoro
H: *togepi
H: DAMMIT SPELL MY BOYFRIEND'S NAME
Rits: okay, Maya's texting me, and Asuka and Rei seem equally perturbed
Rits: we'll have to discuss this later
Rits: preferably never
K: (^_-)-☆
A: hey now, the friend zone has no room for winks
H: oh hi asuka, when'd you join
A: i am one with the texting gods, for i demand ENTERTAINMENT
A: let's crash on toji's shift
H: gonna try it again. tobi
H: *tojiko
H: *toriyama
H: OH COME ON
R: A capital idea!
xxxx
"My texts feel excessively British," murmured Rei.
"Oh gods we crashed on Toji's shift," whined Hikari, her entire head going red down to the pore.
"I swear I wasn't hallucinating," insisted Shinji.
"I have no reason to doubt your testimony," serenely remarked Kaworu. "Other than the fact that we were all, as the Lilim say, 'dumpstered'."
Asuka snort-giggled.
"That's 'wasted'," corrected Rei.
Misato's eyebrow threatened to fall off from all of the twitching. Was this what I was like? Was this what sober people felt when dealing with me???
xxxx
/where this wild ride stops?
//who knows
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