Armisael attacks while Rei and Kaworu are in Unit-00, they turn into that merged kaworu-rei thing from EOE and then trigger the self-destruct, possibly after leaping way into the air so they don't nuke the city completely.

Rei survives because Gendo had an extra backup body hidden under all the bad porn on his desk.

Asuka and Shinji just cry a lot.
 
Rei survives because Gendo had an extra backup body hidden under all the bad porn on his desk.
That desk IS big enough to hid a body in... and worse comes to worst, they have the data from her most recent scan, and the technical know-how to make a new body... Assuming a new one doesn't just drop off of Lilith like a very fleshy fruit.
 
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Oy, what a day. Iraq is infecting me.
She just never stops does she? And I STILL can't tell if she knows what she's saying.
Rei: "Asuka tutored me in the arts of trollololo. She now refuses to play poker with me anymore. Although she turns the most amusing colors when I suggest strip poker in the same tone of voice."



:V
[Smash-cut to Asuka, Shinji and Rei walking in to find the kitchen covered in foam and fire and Kaworu running around like a maniac with a fire extinguisher, spraying foam over all the fires. His hair also has a small blaze in it.]
Kaworu: "I WAS ONLY MAKING MILK AND CEREAL! I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!"
This is quite possibly one of the best images ever.
:) Thanks!

To be fair, they were really tasty cookies. :V
This part seems somewhat awkward, with no description of Shinji going from shock/surprise to calmly handing Rei her present.
It's not shock, just Shinji's 'huh, I've never heard of this'. No severe reaction needed or dropped there.
EDIT EDIT: Wait, was that strictly a cross-synch test, or a multi-synch dual pilot test?
Just cross-synch, ie, Shinji in Unit-02 instead of Unit-01, etc. Not 'Let's see how many Pilots we can squeeze into one Entry Plug before someone notices we're just fucking around'. :p
If this cross-synch test goes spectacularly wrong, and Kaworu loses his ability to resist the Call?
Hmm... what other things could trigger that?
Though i kind of wish Toji, Hikari, and KSK(or is it KKS? SKK?) were their, we haven't seen them in a while.
I wanted that too, but the scene was already getting crowded with just six people and gifts, so I gave them excuses to be elsewhere. I do want to give some more time to them all, but that might be pushed to side-stories to avoid making the core chapters any larger than they're already going to be.
Besides, a Pietà moment with Rei and Kaworu would be infinitely superior.
Closest I've got at the moment.


Ok, now to that playlist!

Kaworu's Rei Mix #1 (He's not creative enough yet to call it a Reimix :V )
Iris - The Goo-Goo Dolls
Symphonies - Clean Bandit
She's So High - Tal Bachman
Send Me An Angel - Real Life
God Is A Girl - Groove Coverage
Crazy For This Girl - Evan & Jaron
I Want To Know What Love Is - Foreigner
My First, My Last, My Everything - Barry White
Nothing's Gonna Stop Us Now - Jefferson Starship
Awake & Alive - Skillet





 
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Rei self-destructing.

That would do it and I hate you both so much right now. :cry:

Given the symmetry involved, it seems unlikely to me that Chapter 10 won't feature the 16th Angel and Chapter 11 won't feature the 17th Angel. And we already know that everything that hasn't gone to Hell will do so in Chapter 12. But the idea that Chapter 11 is going to be very, very, very short is now in my head.
 
That'd be a hell of a Mythology Nod, what with Shinji strangling Asuka in his little 'Heaven'.

I think we've had enough "sex=violence" imagery in NGE, don't you? Does the Angel of Celestial Tape-worms need to get in on the act with Rei?

I was thinking more of a parallel with how Rei I was strangled by Naoko Akagi, rather than to Shinji and Asuka in EOE.

On a semi-related side note... do we know why it was that Rei didn't like the color red in canon? Was it strictly a product of her animosity with Asuka, or was there more to it? Because I can't help but recall Rei I was wearing a red dress when Naoko killed her...
 
On a semi-related side note... do we know why it was that Rei didn't like the color red in canon? Was it strictly a product of her animosity with Asuka, or was there more to it? Because I can't help but recall Rei I was wearing a red dress when Naoko killed her...
I don't think they really get into the root of it, but her antagonism with Asuka definitely fueled it. I think it tied into her dislike of blood, which might also have something to do with her dislike of meat. (She mentions the blood during her weird monologue during the clip show.)
 
If you really want to be pedantic, "okay" is just the most common way today of writing what used to be written, "O.K.", but I've seen "OK", "ok", and in early 20th Century works, "okeh". Expecting consistent relationships between English spelling and pronunciation is a bit like expecting a cat to do what you tell it to.

You're absolutely right about colons not being sentence-ending punctuation marks in English.

I thought we had this conversation before. And I thought we concluded that "okay" is just weird. It doesn't stand for anything, it just is.
 
Five for the playlist, @Strypgia



Salutations, fellow RWBY fan, and/or RWBY music appreciator! I've been trying to decide who would best be exemplified by "Gold" in this fic. Would you possibly have an opinion? I've been dithering between Asuka and Shinji.

 
Salutations, fellow RWBY fan, and/or RWBY music appreciator! I've been trying to decide who would best be exemplified by "Gold" in this fic. Would you possibly have an opinion? I've been dithering between Asuka and Shinji.

Something about it just makes me think Rei on the Israefel Special route instead of the Rainbow Trout route. The thing is, it's pretty much a song about someone who's dependable first and foremost, and does all they can as a protective agent second. That's definitely more Rei than Asuka or Shinji- she's the rock, here, and the hammer of light too. If for no other reason than GNR potential.

Have something better for Asuka and Shinji.




(Yes, Shinji gets the song about a demon in Latin, and Asuka gets the cooing baritone talking about music and love. It works out that way, apparently.)
 
Strypgia said that this made the Christmas Eve party canon, so they were there the night before, at least. This is Christmas morning.
But that was posted a while ago, so while it was only one...day in story it's been a couple months since i last saw them.
I wanted that too, but the scene was already getting crowded with just six people and gifts, so I gave them excuses to be elsewhere. I do want to give some more time to them all, but that might be pushed to side-stories to avoid making the core chapters any larger than they're already going to be.
Closest I've got at the moment.
I look forward to those side stories.
 
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I find it hilarious that Rei is making the Crazy Rei eyes in that picture.

Asuka had a small smile on her face. "Also, he knows even you're not so crazy as to guzzle fancy liquor like that down too quickly. You'll sip it and savor it slowly, thereby reducing your drinking a bit. Like I said, 'smart and listens'."

Misato shot Shinji an amused look. He ducked his head, slightly guiltily. "You do drink a lot, Misato-san. It worries me sometimes."

"I've been cutting back!" she protested. "I've been... otherwise distracted lately." She clinked her glass of wine against Kaji's. "We'll make it last, Shinji. Thank you."

Amusing, and a nice counterpoint to Misato quitting drinking in the canon after Kaji died. Different reason, but growth in both cases.


"Not the SDAT. I made the tape in it for you. Shinji told me about 'mix tapes'. So I assembled a tape of songs for you. To... say things I can't."

Misato and Asuka exchanged a look full of raised eyebrows, then switched back to Rei.

Yeah, that was about as subtle as a train wreck.

"I gave him his gift last night, at the end of the party," Rei said calmly. "It was likewise a rather personal one."

Rei calmly took another cookie and nibbled at it, ignoring all the stares.

Rei rose smoothly, taking another cookie as she did. "I will be pleased to help with the set-up, Asuka. Come, Kaworu. To the bedroom."

"Meeble."

I think most everyone has caught these innuendos.

I HAVE TOLD YOU, YOU ARE MORE THAN SUFFICIENTLY LILIM TO ACHIEVE CREATION. BE CALM.

But I may have been the only one to catch that one. :D

And I'd give up forever to touch you
'Cause I know that you feel me somehow
You're the closest to heaven that I'll ever be
And I don't wanna go home right now

Yeah, that message was received loud and clear.
 
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I also had a notion of how the Armisael scenario plays out where Rei, with a much stronger sense of self now, instead of simply blowing up her EVA, instead engages Armisael in a mental battle, where she tries to destroy its ego borderline (and hopefully its AT-field) by attacking its own sense of self through logic and rhetoric. Failing this, she cranks up her synch ratio as high as she can to maximize feedback, then stabs her own EVA in the leg with its progressive knife, trusting that living with constant pain for her entire existence has given her a higher tolerance for it than the Angel. Once the 'doppelganger' in their shared mental space is pretty much unresponsive, she crawls over and strangles it.

I imagined a slightly different method. She sets off the self-destruct like in canon, but while Unit-00's AT Field is inverted to keep Armisael inside, Rei's own AT Field is in standard configuration to protect herself from the blast. When the retrieval team finds what's left of the Entry Plug, a rather battered Rei crawls out of the wreckage, bleeding a bit, her plug suit mostly shredded, but she's alive and all her parts are still attached. There's some debate about what she said before passing out. It was either "Remind me never to do that again." or "I believe that I have expended my ration of good luck for the year."
 
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