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Too bad I'm on my phone, or I'd early post that Honiani omake I've been playing with. Thread needs a distraction about now.
at this point I'm entrenched enough to weather a blast of negative reviews if I happen to pick one up.
Well, from this past behavior, I would surmise that posting an omake or any other sort of fan content here is a risky option, as the thread may get unnecessarily salty and descend upon you angrily.And as this exchange proves, when have I ever been particularly likely to jump into a mob effect in progress for anyone here? Impressions are shaped by past behavior.
I made up a Shitty map about some of the Cardassian war ideas being tossed around.
This concept revolves around Amarkia being built up as a Industrial hub for the federation, and assumes the conflict is post inclusion of affiliates.
The orange lanes is a critical logistic corridor linking the Okatha, Sol, Amarkia hubs.
Zones
GBZ - Achored by Starbase at Collie, Supply hub - Apinae.
CCBZ - Anchored by Starbase at Lapycorias, Supply hub - Indoria.
RCBZ - Anchored by Starbase at Rethelia, Supply hub - Rethelia.
Suggested Improvements
GBZ
* Starbase at Collie
CCBR
* Outposts at Grrizzi and Burrizz
* Listening posts at G0, G-1, G-2
RCBZ
* Outposts at Hacitorus
* Listening posts at G-6, G-7, F-7
Other
* Starbase at Risa
* Large increase in berths from Amarkia and spinwards
* Outposts at Ollasa IV, Alrizzine IV, Merfara II
Suggested Military Exercises pre-war.
* Militia moving to defend a Daiwiar attack on Ollasa IV at the same time Lecarre attacks Risa.
* Vega - local assets responding to a surprise attack by Yrillia, delaying action until regional forces can reinforce.
* Lapicorias - Repelling Large fleet battle.
* Dorsata - Hit/Run skirmishes around outposts.
Tempted to repost. Will think about it....anyway now that that shit storm is hopefully over, I feel kinda bad that SJ's omake and earlier discussion got side-tracked.
[writes Leila into the cut content, on the villains' side]
RCBZ clearly stands for Rimward Cardassian Border Zone, C could be either Corward or Central.So this is extrapolating how the Klingon-Romulan war is working, with 4 prospective "lanes" to organize operations within, which is quite reasonable. I don't get what "CCBZ" and "RCBZ" stand for here though.
So this is extrapolating how the Klingon-Romulan war is working, with 4 prospective "lanes" to organize operations within, which is quite reasonable. I don't get what "CCBZ" and "RCBZ" stand for here though.
The Sydraxian, Yrillian, and maybe Dawiar situations have good chances to change by the time war erupts. Still, it would be prudent to anticipate and prepare for, if not outright "surprise attacks", then at least civil upheaval or war in those polities.
Before embarking on specific proposals, I strongly believe we need an overarching strategy first, one that is agreeable with the main Federation stakeholders in a Federation-Cardassian war. Are we going to try to maintain borders as our Forward Defense would be more optimized for, or should we adopt a Fabian strategy to take advantage of our larger territory and industry? If the latter, what are we willing to sacrifice? Would any member nation submit to temporary homeworld invasion when it would be strategically sound (looking at the Indorians here)? Other political/war-support vs military/industrial trade-offs abound.
I have an omake involving time travel and the Biophage that I've been sitting on because while I really like where I've gone with it it's probably ridiculously noncanonical.
Home world occupation would be a shitshow that I would rather not deal with both IC for moral reasons, OOC because it would be unfun, and strategically because it seems to cause more complications than it solves. Realistically we're talking Indoria, Rethelia, and maybe Risa here. Lapycorias would be the stage I'd give up, hopefully making them bleed a bit, to buy time for reinforcing Indoria. Rethelia may actually be less defensible now that we've built the Indoria starbase. Suggestions on how to put a roadbump in front of Rethelia would be welcome.
I have an omake involving time travel and the Biophage that I've been sitting on because while I really like where I've gone with it it's probably ridiculously noncanonical.
That is, indeed, one of the elements intended to form the character of the Interstellar Commonwealth, and a notable proportion of their population.We just made first contact with them, and they have excellent in-character reasons to be reticent about the history of their own species because their hat is not just 'cautious,' it is space-PTSD survivors of a deluge of extinction-level events. The Ked Peddah are naturally like this. For the 'Padani,' it's a cultural adaptation they needed in order to not die due to growing up in such a staggeringly rough neighborhood.
That is the intended level of physical similarity.Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if primitive, low-end scanners had trouble telling homo erectus and humans apart at close range without good processing and a much more extensive biological database than we have on these people at first contact.
A lot of our species have extremely obvious features that make it easy to tell them from humans with a superficial scan. Romulans, Vulcans, and Amarki have copper-based blood. Tellarites are midgets. Rigellians are turtle-people. Caitians have tails, Indorians have significant extra skeletal features on their heads. Apiata have antennae and I strongly suspect some other major anatomical features different from humans. Klingons have a host of anatomical differences and a body temperature that would be lethal in humans.
But Betazoids? Risans? If you told me it was hard for 23rd century sensors to tell them from humans at a glance without careful analysis, I'd believe you. They sure as hell look human, especially Betazoids.
The nacelles are centered on each pylon and bussard ramscoop. They do not have complete line of sight to one another, being about as occluded as the Defiant-class nacelles are.Depends on how the pylons are configured, either each nacelle has no line of sight to the next one (if you assume that each complete nacelle structure is 'between' two solid wall-like pylons)... Or each nacelle has intimate connection to the ones on either side (if you assume each pylon attaches in the center of a nacelle structure, the same way the pylons on the Connie, Excelsior, and Galaxy do).
And that was certainly something I was keeping in mind, avoiding weird for the sake of weirdness. As best as we could manage, the Padani have what they need to fulfill the narrative role that they were designed to fill -- assuming, of course, that Oneiros is retaining that.That seems rather arbitrary. "Not special enough, MUST ADD MORE SPECIAL" is a dangerous game to play, because it can easily lead to fictional constructs collapsing under the weight of their own complications and contradictions. You may be able to get away with it, but it's one of the most common rookie mistakes to keep looking at something, saying it's too normal, and arbitrarily adding more random weird features for the sake of making it stop seeming 'mundane' to an overly jaded eye.
Sorry.*looks into thread*
... My head is too headaches for this.
*bbl*
It's obviously a shitty situation, and I hope the Federation-Cardassian War isn't going to be as apocalyptic as the canon Dominion War, but it's realistic to consider a scenario where the Cardassians make a blitzkrieg toward one of those homeworlds, and we have to make a decision whether to make a "last stand" of sorts, or to conserve our forces.Home world occupation would be a shitshow that I would rather not deal with both IC for moral reasons, OOC because it would be unfun, and strategically because it seems to cause more complications than it solves. Realistically we're talking Indoria, Rethelia, and maybe Risa here.
Lapycorias would be the stage I'd give up, hopefully making them bleed a bit, to buy time for reinforcing Indoria. Rethelia may actually be less defensible now that we've built the Indoria starbase. Suggestions on how to put a roadbump in front of Rethelia would be welcome.
Right, apparently I'm too stubborn to leave well enough alone.
[puts on helmet and EOD suit]
That is, indeed, one of the elements intended to form the character of the Interstellar Commonwealth, and a notable proportion of their population.
That is the intended level of physical similarity.
The nacelles are centered on each pylon and bussard ramscoop. They do not have complete line of sight to one another, being about as occluded as the Defiant-class nacelles are.
And that was certainly something I was keeping in mind, avoiding weird for the sake of weirdness. As best as we could manage, the Padani have what they need to fulfill the narrative role that they were designed to fill -- assuming, of course, that Oneiros is retaining that.
Sorry.
It's obviously a shitty situation, and I hope the Federation-Cardassian War isn't going to be as apocalyptic as the canon Dominion War, but it's realistic to consider a scenario where the Cardassians make a blitzkrieg toward one of those homeworlds, and we have to make a decision whether to make a "last stand" of sorts, or to conserve our forces.
Losing a homeworld is a huge political loss that has every opportunity to form cracks in the Federation, but from a purely military and industrial standpoint, any of those worlds comprises less than 10% of Federation, and losing say 20% of our forces there defending against an overwhelming force may not be worth it.
I do hope this remains a hypothetical, but in a full scale war with a peer power, that may be too optimistic.
Diplo push the Bajorans
No, seriously, there probably are some not-yet-revealed minor colonies in the CBZ and between Rethelia and Bajor space that can serve as a buffer. That doesn't prevent an outright blitzkrieg, since outposts could likely be bypassed at some ongoing risk. So Rethelia and other homeworlds would just have to focus on fortifying themselves to Arcadian levels.
SV has an "apocrypha" threadmark for a reason. I'd like to see your story.
It needs some touching up given the recent encounter. That's part of what I held it, just not the time yet.The Other Trouser Leg was pretty good and is equally noncanonical. (Hell everything I've written is probably noncanonical to greater or lesser shades.)
Since I'm not sure what elements of the proposal Oneiros is retaining and what he isn't, and further noting again that we've only been cleared to provide information that Starfleet would have at this point, that is, information gleaned from the contact with the Courageous and what the ICS would send over for their first contact package (noting that the initial analysis indicates they've probably never actually done this before), I think the best answer I can give to that is...What narrative role are these guys meant to serve, though?
What I'm getting is that they're a very defensive-minded, non-expansionist, and peaceful faction that mostly wants to rule it's own little corner of the galaxy and be left alone. The fact that they haven't yet met their Honiani and Yan-Ros neighbors suggests that they pretty much never leave their own space.
Given those facts, I'm kind of scratching my head about the role you intended them to play in the story. They're just so benign and out of the way.
What are you saying, talking pie? You're not supposed to come out of the oven until you're ready to be eaten. Do you want to be eaten?
Since I'm not sure what elements of the proposal Oneiros is retaining and what he isn't, and further noting again that we've only been cleared to provide information that Starfleet would have at this point, that is, information gleaned from the contact with the Courageous and what the ICS would send over for their first contact package (noting that the initial analysis indicates they've probably never actually done this before), I think the best answer I can give to that is...
...not all of those "facts" are accurate. And it's entirely possible to be serious rivals while they still have, and I quote here: "core values appear to broadly agree with those of the UFP."
After all, that readily describes England and France for the past millenium.
So this is extrapolating how the Klingon-Romulan war is working, with 4 prospective "lanes" to organize operations within, which is quite reasonable. I don't get what "CCBZ" and "RCBZ" stand for here though.
The Sydraxian, Yrillian, and maybe Dawiar situations have good chances to change by the time war erupts. Still, it would be prudent to anticipate and prepare for, if not outright "surprise attacks", then at least civil upheaval or war in those polities.
Before embarking on specific proposals, I strongly believe we need an overarching strategy first, one that is agreeable with the main Federation stakeholders in a Federation-Cardassian war. Are we going to try to maintain borders as our Forward Defense would be more optimized for, or should we adopt a Fabian strategy to take advantage of our larger territory and industry? If the latter, what are we willing to sacrifice? Would any member nation submit to temporary homeworld invasion when it would be strategically sound (looking at the Indorians here)? Other political/war-support vs military/industrial trade-offs abound.
That's not necessarily the case. It may be that their expansion tailwards was curtailed by hazards encountered in that direction. Given the Planet Killer was heading towards the heart of the Federation and that Rigel was it's next stop it's not unbelievable for it have passed through the tailwards section of ISC space. If they'd encountered any other doomsday weapons, spacial anomalies, or hostile empires in that area I could easily see the deciding it was too dangerous to try and expand in that direction.The fact that they haven't yet met their Honiani and Yan-Ros neighbors suggests that they pretty much never leave their own space.