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secrets, and their base natures should be able to defend themselves
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Thank you.
While his loyalty to Ciaran is "ironclad" and one of the greatest motivators for his actions, remember that the honour, and glory of Kaleesh is a part of that, though otherwise your analysis of Grievous is quite thorough, well done!Not quite as happy with this one as I was with my previous omakes, but it should work out well enough I think. Let me know if you guys spot any errors.
Notes and Observations of General Grievous by Doctor Ruundal Kool
Meeting 1:
"...While I most certainly had definite impressions as to the character of Qymaen jai Sheelal -or Grievous as he prefers to be called- I can easily say that even a single meeting with him has most assuredly shattered those preconceptions. I, like many others most likely, was expecting a vengeful, bloodthirsty monster of a being. And while he certainly possesses a lust for battle, Grievous is far and away from simply being some primitive war lord. Oh he certainly holds some values that the wider 'civilized' Galaxy would look at in shock, Grievous is much, much more than that. Even after only a single meeting, I can plainly see the cunning intelligence he possesses..."
Meeting 3:
"...I can only stand by my previous assertion of the depth to Grievous' mind. Grievous is -quite frankly given everyone else in Lady Ciaran's organization that I see- refreshingly straightforward in our interactions. But assuming that his blunt... honesty is the entirety of his character is a trap far too many fall into I believe. His answers and the few questions he asks in return are as perceptive and cunning as any of Mitth'raw'nuruodo's. A being like Grievous would never have risen to such prominence on his home world, much less in the Abyss Watchers, had he been unable to formulate proper tactics and strategies. While I am learning a great deal as to his character, I do not doubt -not even for a moment- that Grievous is playing the long game in our sessions in much the same way I Thrawn does. What his end goal is, I do not know, but he has one, of that I am certain given how little actual information Grievous has shared about himself. Oh he's told me a great deal about his homeworld and its culture, but there has been little substance about the being himself..."
Meeting 7:
"...Things are progressing well enough with Grievous so far. As of the session before this one, Grievous has decided to share with me the stories behind some of his hunts and battles. Even as he shares the information behind each battle, each hunt, I admit that I can scarcely comprehend his strategies beyond some of the simpler tactics until after the fact when he explains everything that happens in minute detail. Hearing his recollections of these hunts and fights, I can easily see how he has managed to beat Thrawn in several of their simulated battles. He isn't victorious every time, but it is often enough if the rumor mill is anything to go by and I can certainly see why..."
Meeting 8:
"...While I was well aware that I would learn an enormous amount about the inner workings of the Abyss Walkers when I accepted this position, the things I learn still manage to surprise me. While I'd known about the operation we undertook against the Black Sun, I had not know any more that the rumor mill knew. That has been changed now that Grievous has informed me of just what occurred to a reasonable level of detail. And yet again I'm reminded of his intelligence and cunning which, when partnered with his own ruthlessness, make Grievous one of the most skilled and feared combatants in the galaxy..."
Meeting 14:
"...While I expected to learn a great deal from Grievous, I had not expected it to take the form of combat lessons. Oh I certainly knew I would learn more about tactics and strategy simply by proximity, but I did not expect that Grievous would show up at this most recent session with the blunt desire to understand just what my role was in the Abyss Watchers beyond the obvious. Once he had ascertained my duties, and then learned I had never been trained in any form of combat, he immediately dragged me to one of the on-site practice rooms and commandeered it for use. What followed was three hours of basic hand-to-hand combat instruction and basic blaster safety and usage training. Even now, several hours, a large meal, and a hot shower later, I still feel sore and bruised all over and just writing these notes is exhausting. Before we separated for the day, Grievous did inorm me as to just why he was doing this. He said plainly, and in no uncertain manner, that someone who deals so much with so many important figures, their secrets, and their base natures should be able to defend themselves. If I could not protect myself, then I presented a significant risk to the organization and -more importantly to Grievous- to Lady Ciaran. He has informed me that he expects me to practice what I've learned today in preparation for our next session, something I am not looking forward too.
But disappointing Grievous would be foolish beyond all reason, especially on this subject. I can see that his loyalty to Lady Ciaran is ironclad. So long as she does not betray him first, Grievous will most likely never betray her. Indeed, I strongly suspect that the Heat death of the universe will occur before that happens in fact..."
Meeting 15:
"...Looking back on the previous session, and now this one as well -from which I am still sore and bruised- I can easily tell what Grievous' goal was from the start. Just as I was evaluating him for mental stability and reliability, he was evaluating me. Only he was judging for himself my loyalty to Lady Ciaran and her organization by extension. In hindsight, I do not doubt for even a moment that had Grievous judges me to be a threat to Lady Ciaran he would have killed me on the spot and without regret. Knowing that has solidified my informed opinion as to Grievous' role in the Abyss Watchers and the wider galaxy.
He is no threat to Lady Ciaran or any of her subordinates. He most likely never will be either because Grievous gives himself fully to whatever task he undertakes and does not take half-measures. And the task he has dedicated himself to is aiding Lady Ciaran..."
Notes and Observations of General Grievous by Doctor Ruundal Kool
Obi-Wan getting a hit in. Good on him.
Man, that never works for you. Stop trying."We may as well end the fight here," Obi-Wan said in an almost disarmingly casual tone. "I have-"
This should be Form III.
No she's only a darth not a sith
It's better for Ciaran for the Jedi to remain as passive and relatively ineffectual as they are. The better and more active they become the more they'll impede her actions post-Palpatine.Now I want an Jedi Master Ciaran omake or an alternate reality crossover!
I wonder if Ciaran can unleash the full potential the Jedi order and its impact on the galaxy.
Oh sure its easy for her to go SIth or become a Death Raven but seeing her navigate and change the Jedi Order from within as her is far more interesting using due to rules and tradition.
What she would do as the Grandmaster of the Jedi heh
It's better for Ciaran for the Jedi to remain as passive and relatively ineffectual as they are. The better and more active they become the more they'll impede her actions post-Palpatine.
That would be surprising, though there WOULD be considerable differences, personally I think she would be a, Jedi Investigator, Jedi Shadow or a member of Council of First Knowledge or something... you know seeing the pattern fallowing a lead and informing others/taking preemptive actions... Still it be awesome.Now I want an Jedi Master Ciaran omake or an alternate reality crossover!
I wonder if Jedi version of Ciaran can unleash the full potential the Jedi order and its impact on the galaxy.
Oh sure its easy for her to go SIth or become a Death Raven but seeing her navigate and change the Jedi Order from within as her is far more interesting using due to rules and tradition.
What she would do as the Grandmaster of the Jedi heh
"All that talent, that constant drive to improve and to succeed..." Obi-Wan said to himself as he watched Ciaran and Siri spar. "...Why is it that the Force kept us from finding her?" He sighed to himself. "Then again given her personality I don't know if things would have worked out with the Jedi..."