I hate to break it to you but Ciaran knows the stuff she's caused. She doesn't care and would do it again. Like the only time she would regret it or care if it did something like that is if it lead to mass genocide. As for Naboo in specific I don't remember her actually doing anything really bad to it. I think the worst she did was prevent Nute from being found guilty and getting Borvo off Naboo before he got caught.

I suspect she knows that on an intellectual level. But I doubt she lets herself get close emotionally. After all, what would the point be?

Ciaran doesn't strike me as a very introspective sort.

As for Naboo, she helped engineer an invasion and ruin local businesses. You don't think people didn't die because of that? Or weren't otherwise hurt?

Force phantoms are a known dark side ability, where one's life is tied together with another living organism- like Voldemort and Nagini.

Plagueis did something different, he introduced some sort of virus that mutated the midichlorians in him, making it impossible for them be one with the force after his death.

His original plan, I think was to hang around after death and once the Chosen One had born, highjack his body.

Plagueis probably is still working on that plan.

Hmm, is it canon that Plagueis became some sort of super ghost then?

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I have @Omegastar to thank for reminding me of these posts from the previous thread.

@Dr. Snark, this includes one of my earlier info-dump posts with all of our interactions with Damask Holdings (at least through Turn 14), and sorting through the confusion of the IGBC simultaneously funding the Outer Rim fleets that formed the core of the CIS and funding the clone army from Kamino and the Sienar fleet orders that formed the core of the current GAR and Republic navy. There's also a "Mostly Canon" omake written by... you... with the same general info and some conclusions. This might be very useful context when you're writing the upcoming "Order 66" interlude.

Would anyone be willing to write an omake covering Ciaran's investigations into this mess? Even just a short "Ciaran sifts through all of this info in her head" would be fine, though adding a deerstalker cap might be a nice touch...


For reference, here is what we know (in character) so far:

During Turn 4 (BBY 34), we did a few legal-on-paper jobs for the IGBC. We did such a good job that we received a package from Damask Holdings, "containing a credship, a few datachips and the location of our new office." This puzzled us since Damask Holdings "had been disbanded 20 years ago."

During Turn 5, we investigated non-Jedi traditions, and had remarkable succeess due in part to "the data from the datachips from Damask Holdings." We also 'shook hands' with the IGBC and learned that they had "new business ventures in the Outer Rim" that would "make them very popular since the Republic keeps failing to do anything for them."

During Turn 9, we learned about a rumor that "there have been a lot of credits moved -- enough to pay for an army." We investigated and discovered that "the IGBC channeled untold amounts of credits to Sienar Fleet Systems and to Kamino about two or three years ago."

During Turn 10, we first heard the rumors about "systems considering to secede from the Republic." The same turn, we traveled to Kamino to learn more, and discovered that they were creating a Clone Army "requested by [Jedi] Master Sifo Dyas" to ensure that the Republic "would have an army available." The full order of clones would be ready in about six years. Thanks to the Silencer's initiative, we also learned that the clones were implanted with 'inhibitor chips' that would "force a biological being to act in a specific way." (We also learned that 'The Silencer' was a clone created from a "strange DNA sample" provided by an unknown Muun -- not sure if this is relevant, but Ciaran might think so).

During Turn 13, we investigated those Separatism rumors (and found it had a lot more support than we expected), and funded an "Outer-Rim Colonial Defence League." We also 'followed the money' on the IGBC-Kamino transaction, and learned that the funds originated from Damask Holdings.

During Turn 14 (this turn), we investigated Damask Holdings and learned... a whole bunch.
  • Damask Holdings is or was the 'power behind the throne' of the IGBC -- Hego Damask (a Muun) taught San Hill, and worked with Hill's father.
  • Damask Holdings ceased to exist after 52 BBY, after all its members were murdered (with the sole exception of Hego himself).
  • Damask Holdings briefly reappeared in order to... send Ciaran a few gifts (Turn 4) and buy a Clone Army (Turn 6).
  • Hego Damask apparently died in 32 BBY (Turn 6), with no one the wiser. This was either shortly before or after ordering the Clone Army.
  • Hego Damask's (presumably very extensive) wealth disappeared, also with no one the wiser.
In addition, during this turn we also returned to Kamino to investigate further, with Obi-Wan in tow. This time we learned that that "Sifo Dyas originally planned the inhibitor chips as a safeguard against rogue Jedi" (which indicates that the clones are given behavioral controls that might force them to target Jedi), and that the chips themselves were provided by "someone called Tyranus," who is identified as "a secretive member of the Jedi Order." Both you and Obi-Wan agree that 'Tyranus' sounds like the name of a Sith Lord.


Anyone want to take a shot at this? Sherlock Holmes would have no trouble connecting most of these dots, and I doubt our (28 Intrigue) Ciaran would do much worse. For instance:
  • The fact that the clones were ordered and financed by Damask and IGBC tells us that they were planning for Separatist movement and a galactic war for a long time beforehand. But the fact that the Kaminoans were told to deliver the clones to the Republic tells us that the IGBC (or its secret backer) doesn't necessarily want the Separatists to win.
  • Hego Damask came out of retirement to set up a galactic-scale conflict. He was killed around the same time the Clone Army was ordered. But whoever killed him did not change the order, and seems to have let Hego's plans (for war) continue apace. So the two were most likely co-conspirators. This would also explain how Hego's wealth managed to disappear so entirely.
  • Damask Holdings had information about non-Jedi Force traditions, its agent impersonated a Jedi (Sifo Dyas) and referred to a Sith-sounding backer (Tyranus), and planned for the Clone Army to attack Jedi. Conclusion: Hego Damsk was a Force trained enemy of the Jedi, and most likely a Sith.
  • If Ciaran is familiar with the 'Rule of Two' -- particularly the Sith 'tradition' of the Apprentice trying to kill the Master -- then from the two above items she would conclude that this co-conspirator who killed Hego Damask is himself a Sith Lord.
There's more here, but darn if this isn't an amazing start. We've already done more to uncover the truth behind the Clone Wars than the Jedi ever managed in canon -- and the Clone Wars haven't even begun yet!

And here's Dr. Snark's omake from the last thread:
So a while back Publicola suggested putting together all of our information on Damask Holdings in omake form and that adding deerstalker caps to said omake would probably be too much.

I have decided to listen to one of these two points.

Putting Some Heads Together

Classified Audio Record 00-1394: Damask Holdings Analysis. Abyss Watchers Members Present: Ciaran [REDACTED], Silencer [NAME REDACTED], Silas Cata, Gulan Terrek.

WARNING: Unauthorized access of this file will result in the full might of the Abyss Watchers being brought down upon the violator. WE WILL FIND YOU.

Beginning Playback...


Ciaran: Gulan, Silencer, thank you for coming to help analyze what we have learned so far about Damask Holdings.

Gulan: Boss, why are you and Silas wearing deerstalker hats?

Silas: You do not mock a man's detective hat, Gulan.

Silencer: Headwear like that does not boost intellect in-

Ciaran: While I do agree with my grandfather we are getting off track. We should start from the beginning given that you and Grandfather were not with us at the time.

Gulan: Right. This began 10 years ago when we were given a package from Damask Holdings for our good work with the IGBC. The package contained funds, data, and a new office for Ciaran. This is when she began to become a more public figure in the galaxy.

Silas: I gotta admit I was not expecting Ciaran to suddenly jump from gang leader to galactic celebrity.

Gulan: Neither she or I were either, but in the end I do appreciate the bigger and legitimate paycheck I get these days.

Ciaran: At any rate, the data was interesting because it contained information on non-traditional Force sects, information that would be obscure unless you know where to look. This was the first indication that Damask Holdings was associated with Force-users though the significance of this only became apparent recently.

Gulan: On the financial side, we learned about the IGBC sending funds to the Outer Rim-in hindsight bolstering the Separatist movement we see today-as well as the significant amounts of credits being sent to Kamino and Sienar.

Silas: And after this our merc friend and I came into the fold.

Ciaran: Right. And this is where things start getting complicated. We heard about the beginnings of the Separatist movement but more importantly, we discovered the clone army on Kamino, its commission by "Sifo-Dyas," and thanks to the efforts of the Silencer, the inhibitor chips that could compel their actions.

Silas: And just last year the Seps became organized. But more importantly we found out the money for the clone army came from Damask.

Gulan: And now we have all of the information on Damask Holdings any being in the galaxy could ask for. We know that the organization was the power behind the IGBC, that it was disbanded when everyone but it's owner Hego Damask-a Muun-died, and that he died around the time he ordered the clone army. Most importantly, all of his wealth vanished.

Ciaran: My lovely trip with Obi-Wan also gave us more information on the clones; namely that their chips are supposedly to protect against Force-users and that they were provided by a "Tyrannus," likely a Sith.

Silencer: The only reason I would want to protect against Force-users is if I planned on killing them.

Ciaran: Indeed. Actually that reminds me Silencer, wasn't your genetic data given to the Kaminoans by a Muun?

-Long silence-

Ciaran: Right. It still may be significant somehow.

Silencer: What does all this mean in more practical terms? For any counter-plan we need to understand the situation at hand.

Silas: It looks like Damask used the IGBC as a cover to support the founding of the Seps and to build the clone army and the fleet to support it from Sienar. That sounds like he'd want a war but didn't want either side to have a clear advantage.

Gulan: It does seem like there were power plays behind the scenes of this given that Damask dropped dead when he ordered the clone army. But the plan hasn't stopped, so whoever took over must still have wanted the plan to succeed...and they took Damask's money for good measure.

Silas: A move from your own playbook, right Gulan?

Gulan: Why never. I most certainly wouldn't play off rival organizations against each other for profit. That's horrible.

-Laughter from Silas and Gulan that slowly peters out-

Silas: Ciaran? What have you figured out?

Ciaran: Damask is likely a Sith, and by extension so is his replacement.

-Silence-

Gulan: Oh shit.

Silas: We're in over our heads, aren't we?

Ciaran: The fact of the matter is that not only did Damask have access to alternate Force-user schools but was able to replicate a Jedi's presence so thoroughly that he was able to fool the Kaminoans. His supporter is "Tyrannus"-clearly a Sith-and as we've established the clone army is designed to potentially target Force users. And the only Force-using group in the galaxy large enough to use it on would be the Jedi. As for whoever's in charge now...

Silencer: The only person who could kill Damask is someone who could overcome his Force abilities, which narrows it down to other Force-users themselves. Given that the plan to kill Jedi is still in motion, the new leader is mostly likely a Sith as well.

-Silence-

Silas: So what I'm hearing is that we're dealing with a Sith conspiracy to kill the Jedi, and the man who helped us get to where we are today was behind it all before he was offed and replaced.

Gulan: What's the plan, boss?

Ciaran: Right now, our best lead is Damask. Find out everything about him-the schools he went to, the planets he's visited, the people he's worked with. There's got to be something about him that will lead us closer to the truth of all of this.

Gulan: And then what!? What happens when the trail leads to a fucking Sith!? How do we beat that!?

Silencer: We kill him with the help of the Jedi. They are close partners to us now.

-Gulan sighs-

Gulan: And we'd be less likely to get stabbed in the back with them in charge. Right.

Ciaran: That will be all, thank you for your time.

-Silence, sound of door opening and closing-

Silas: I know that look on your face kiddo. What's the matter?

-Ciaran sighs-

Ciaran: Everything that I am, everything that I've become, was all a part of this. I was about to become another pawn in this game.

Silas: But you aren't. If you were this investigation wouldn't be happening.

Ciaran: That's just it. I think that whoever took over from Damask has no idea who I am. That's reassuring but...

-Silence-

Ciaran: The idea that everything that I am is because someone else gave it to me sickens me. That everything I did to take the Abyss Watchers from another street gang to a force in the galaxy was just so a Sith could use it for their own ends-

Silas: Hey now. You said Damask died when he ordered the clone army right? And that the new guy doesn't know who you are. so that means everything since then was all you, kiddo. Remember what's best in life?

-Ciaran chuckles-

Ciaran: "To troll your enemies, to see them financially ruined before you, and to hear the lamentations of their whores." How could I forget.

-Sounds of paper shuffling-

Ciaran: Right. I have a galaxy that I want to own.

End Recording.

Attached Note: Never mock a woman's detective hat. Ever. I'll know if you do and the results won't be pleasant. -Ciaran


(AN: That got away from me again, not that I regret it at all. Also be sure to thank Theunderbolt for coming up with that "What is best in life bit"-that ended up fitting in perfectly where it did.)
 
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Hmm, is it canon that Plagueis became some sort of super ghost then?

I think in canon he just died.

The plan I mentioned was originally concocted by his Master Tenebrous.

In canon when Tenebrous was killed by Plagueis, he used the mutated midichlorians to infect Plagueis and continue on living in him. But then he forsaw that Plagueis will be killed by his apprentice, so he panicked and got out of Plagueis' body and got himself trapped for eternity.

But if Plagueis is still around in this story then either Tenebrous was successful or Plagueis improved upon his master's work and is still trying to get into the Chosen One.
 
Relatedly, @Dr. Snark, did you see my suggestion a few pages back, for where & what our 'Muunilist Facility' turns out to be?
...Actually... :rofl: ...Right now, I'm wondering if we could ret-con our Muunilist mansion purchase (last turn) so that it turns out we had actually purchased the Damask Holdings superspire. That would be just. so. perfect -- to accidentally lay claim to the Damask legacy, as his rightful protege (the only one that didn't kill him, after all).

The building is in downtown Harnaidan, so it still fits the 'cheap due to bomb & blaster damage from the recent battle'. And it would be exactly our kind of luck to unwittingly purchase a building once owned by a Sith Lord. :D
I also suggested a write-in for base upgrade or action that would let us take over Hego Damask's old vault-spire & research lab on Aborah.

Regardless, now that we have a foothold on Muunilist proper, and especially now that we're pretty sure who Darth Sidious is, we should consider playing to our strengths and using our Intrigue skill-set to unravel the conspiracy.


Here was the Turn 14 result that precipitated the info-dump I linked above:
[X] Investigate Damask Holdings: You have a name and you know that Damask Holdings is affiliated with the IGBC. That is most likely more than enough to start investigating. Chance of Success: 60% Reward: Information on Hego Damask and Damask Holdings

Required: 40 Rolled: 72+5+5+9+10=101

What you managed to figure out after you, your grandfather, your personal psychopath and a whole lot of your informations began to dig for information about Damask Holdings for a whole year had proven itself to be very interesting. 1. Damask Holdings had very close ties to the IGBC. In fact, San Hills father was part of it and he himself was tutored by Hego Damask which may explain why he ended up being influential enough to take over the IGBC. 2. Hego Damask died abruptly in 32 BBY and nobody knows what happened to his corpse. The fact that nearly nobody even noticed that he was dead or even cared didn't help since he disappeard from the face of the galaxy for twenty years. 3. Damask Holdings didn't actually even exist anymore since 52 BBY when all its members were murdered with Hego Damask himself as the only survivor, which makes both the fact that you received a few gifts and how he actually reappeared out of nowhere to finance the Clone Army quite suspicious. He was planning something, but the question is what. 4. All of his most likely VERY extensive wealth has disappeared without a trace. Reward: Even more information, +2 Intrigue for Ciaran, Silas and the Silencer
Note specifically the last line. Now that we have friends and connections among the Muun, we can "follow the money" more effectively. Not only that, but since Palpatine would have only received Damask assets indirectly (since their connection was secret), we could probably return most of the missing assets to their rightful heirs on Muunilist -- it'd weaken Palpatine, but not something he'd see as a threat, since we'd be retrieving the assets from Palpatine's agents or less-than-legal pawns (and Palpatine would have ensured there'd be nothing to tie him to them or vice versa).

So that's my suggestion. We've previously establish very good reasons to follow the money, and the revelation this turn that reveals Order 66 (and that the 'triggerman' is the Supreme Chancellor, meaning that Damask's apprentice/successor is most likely Palpatine himself...) will make our path forward a lot more interesting.
 
Chain of Command (Canon)
Chain of Command

When he had first been hired by Ciaran to work for the Abyss Watchers, Tyro Torwin was motivated by credits. Credits needed to rebuild the Arcblade Fleet, but cold hard credits nonetheless. But time passed, and the Arcblade Fleet recovered. Tyro no longer needed to send credits to rebuild his homefleet, though he still did to this day. He had found new motivation in his students though once Ciaran had assigned him to their training.

His motivations nowadays were twofold. Pride in his work was one, because he did see his students as his work. If he were less than the best, the Force-using agents of the Abyss Watchers would be substandard, and it would reflect poorly on him. The second way his students motivated him was fear. His talk with Darth Vectivus had alleviated the fear somewhat, but he was still terrified that one of his students would surpass him with unbridled natural talent. Statistically, it made sense that such a thing would happen eventually.

But Tyro didn't want that day to come for a long time. He was the most experienced, still living Force user in the Abyss Watchers, and he'd be damned before someone took that title from him. So he made the time to train himself, something he had given up on back when he had still been a member of the Arcblade Fleet of Blazing Chains pirates. He had been the best at what he did, and saw no one who could challenge him in his field.

Now his horizons had been expanded. What he had discovered and thought advanced tricks of the Blazing Chains style were revealed to be rudimentary tricks most Jedi learned as padawans, and what he had mastered as a youngster was rarely utilized by anyone. Tyro was trying to integrate other styles to complement the Blazing Chains style, as he had taught himself how to sense life with the Force so many years ago.

His current attention was on the Buried Presence technique. He could use it already of course, but getting good enough at the technique to use it in combat was something else entirely. Hiding himself while still affecting his shots with the Force had been simple, but masking his use of the Force on the shots themselves was an entirely different beast. He thought he had it mostly down pat, though with no one to truly practice against he would never be sure.

He was winding down with some of the basics, shooting a dozen or so targets behind cover with his eyes closed, when his practice was interrupted. "So, you're the one in charge of training the Abyss Watcher's in the ways of the Force?"

Tyro opened his eyes to see the Sith assassin Lady Ciaran had taken in. "Indeed I am. Tyro Torwin, what can I do for you?"

"I hear you practice the Blazing Chains style, making use of a blaster rather than a lightsaber. I want to see if such a thing is worthy of anything but contempt." she said, taking out two unlit lightsabers. It appeared that she wanted a fight.

Tyro sighed as he drew his two blaster pistols. "Alright, if you insist!" he said, opening fire on the last word and putting some distance between them as Asajj was taken off guard. Still, for being caught flat footed she managed to deflect or dodge every shot with her two crimson lightsabers. After a second though, she regained her composure and started pushing forward.

But that short time had given Tyro the chance to put some distance between them. He stopped firing headlong, using the Force to turn his shots at the last second to strike at different angles. Most impressively, Asajj didn't even slow down, deflecting his shots into the ground without even looking at them, likely using the Force to see a split second into the future and predict his attacks. Tyro had never had a talent for foresight with the Force, but damn if he didn't envy it.

As she was drawing nearer, Tyro threw the blaster in his left hand at her. She weaved out of the way effortlessly, and deflected the shot he fired remotely from behind her, spinning to cut the blaster in half and destroy it. Tyro took advantage of her facing the other way and leapt forward. If she wanted to predict his shots, he'd just give her no time to react.

Asajj completed her spin and found herself staring straight down the barrel of Tyro's remaining blaster. He fired, missing as her head barely shifted to the side enough to dodge it. He dropped the blaster then, looking down at the lightsaber inches from his chest.

"It appears blasters aren't any match for a lightsaber, even with the Force." said Asajj.

Tyro let out a short, barking laugh in response. "Perhaps you should look behind you before you jump the gun with all your gloating." Asajj looked behind her, and saw Tyro's last shot hovering in the air directly behind her. Tyro's empty right hand swept to the side, and the blaster bolt went hurtling to the right as well. Tyro stepped to the side of her still lit lightsaber and walked past her. "I start training the next class of acolytes in the Blazing Chain techniques tomorrow. If you ask nicely, maybe I'll let you sit in."


AN: At this point I'm motivated to hit the omake cap so we don't need to use an action giving something personal attention and can finally learn Blazing Chains. Until then though, I'll just keep portraying Tyro Torwin and his style of using the Force in the most badass way possible to make the option as appealing to everyone else as it is to me. C'mon people, telepathic guns!
 
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Asajj looked behind her, and saw Tyro's last shot hovering in the air directly behind her. Tyro's empty right hand swept to the side, and the blaster bolt went hurtling to the right as well.
*mentally nicknames him "Tyro Ren"*
AN: At this point I'm motivated to hit the omake cap so we don't need to use an action giving something personal attention and can finally learn Blazing Chains. Until then though, I'll just keep portraying Tyro Torwin and his style of using the Force in the most badass way possible to make the option as appealing to everyone else as it is to me. C'mon people, telepathic guns!
Well, I'm convinced. :)


the Force using agents
*Force-using
But Tyro didn't want hat day
But I like hat day! :(
(*that)
"It appears blasters aren't any match for a lightsaber, even with the Force." Tyro let out a short, barking laugh.

"Perhaps you should look behind you before you jump the gun with all your gloating." Asajj looked behind her,
Perhaps rearrange so that each person's dialogue is next to their name or action. It took me a moment to realize that it was Asajj who said the "It appears blasters" line.
 
Chain of Command

When he had first been hired by Ciaran to work for the Abyss Watchers, Tyro Torwin was motivated by credits. Credits needed to rebuild the Arcblade Fleet, but cold hard credits nonetheless. But time passed, and the Arcblade Fleet recovered. Tyro no longer needed to send credits to rebuild his homefleet, though he still did to this day. He had found new motivation in his students though once Ciaran had assigned him to their training.

His motivations nowadays were twofold. Pride in his work was one, because he did see his students as his work. If he were less than the best, the Force using agents of the Abyss Watchers would be substandard, and it would reflect poorly on him. The second way his students motivated him was fear. His talk with Darth Vectivus had alleviated the fear somewhat, but he was still terrified that one of his students would surpass him with unbridled natural talent. Statistically, it made sense that such a thing would happen eventually.

But Tyro didn't want hat day to come for a long time. He was the most experienced, still living Force user in the Abyss Watchers, and he'd be damned before someone took that title from him. So he made the time to train himself, something he had given up on back when he had still been a member of the Arcblade Fleet of Blazing Chains pirates. He had been the best at what he did, and saw no one who could challenge him in his field.

Now his horizons had been expanded. What he had discovered and thought advanced tricks of the Blazing Chains style were revealed to be rudimentary tricks most Jedi learned as padawans, and what he had mastered as a youngster was rarely utilized by anyone. Tyro was trying to integrate other styles to complement the Blazing Chains style, as he had taught himself how to sense life with the Force so many years ago.

His current attention was on the Buried Presence technique. He could use it already of course, but getting good enough at the technique to use it in combat was something else entirely. Hiding himself while still affecting his shots with the Force had been simple, but masking his use of the Force on the shots themselves was an entirely different beast. He thought he had it mostly down pat, though with no one to truly practice against he would never be sure.

He was winding down with some of the basics, shooting a dozen or so targets behind cover with his eyes closed, when his practice was interrupted. "So, you're the one in charge of training the Abyss Watcher's in the ways of the Force?"

Tyro opened his eyes to see the Sith assassin Lady Ciaran had taken in. "Indeed I am. Tyro Torwin, what can I do for you?"

"I hear you practice the Blazing Chains style, making use of a blaster rather than a lightsaber. I want to see if such a thing is worthy of anything but contempt." she said, taking out two unlit lightsabers. It appeared that she wanted a fight.

Tyro sighed as he drew his two blaster pistols. "Alright, if you insist!" he said, opening fire on the last word and putting some distance between them as Asajj was taken off guard. Still, for being caught flat footed she managed to deflect or dodge every shot with her two crimson lightsabers. After a second though, she regained her composure and started pushing forward.

But that short time had given Tyro the chance to put some distance between them. He stopped firing headlong, using the Force to turn his shots at the last second to strike at different angles. Most impressively, Asajj didn't even slow down, deflecting his shots into the ground without even looking at them, likely using the Force to see a split second into the future and predict his attacks. Tyro had never had a talent for foresight with the Force, but damn if he didn't envy it.

As she was drawing nearer, Tyro threw the blaster in his left hand at her. She weaved out of the way effortlessly, and deflected the shot he fired remotely from behind her, spinning to cut the blaster in half and destroy it. Tyro took advantage of her facing the other way and leapt forward. If she wanted to predict his shots, he'd just give her no time to react.

Asajj completed her spin and found herself staring straight down the barrel of Tyro's remaining blaster. He fired, missing as her head barely shifted to the side enough to dodge it. He dropped the blaster then, looking down at the lightsaber inches from his chest.

"It appears blasters aren't any match for a lightsaber, even with the Force." Tyro let out a short, barking laugh.

"Perhaps you should look behind you before you jump the gun with all your gloating." Asajj looked behind her, and saw Tyro's last shot hovering in the air directly behind her. Tyro's empty right hand swept to the side, and the blaster bolt went hurtling to the right as well. Tyro stepped to the side of her still lit lightsaber and walked past her. "I start training the next class of acolytes in the Blazing Chain techniques tomorrow. If you ask nicely, maybe I'll let you sit in."


AN: At this point I'm motivated to hit the omake cap so we don't need to use an action giving something personal attention and can finally learn Blazing Chains. Until then though, I'll just keep portraying Tyro Torwin and his style of using the Force in the most badass way possible to make the option as appealing to everyone else as it is to me. C'mon people, telepathic guns!
i want the TELEPATHIC GUNS
i also want to make our own personal STYLE using barie presence blazing chain and lightsaber dueling to make a very scary nearly unpredictable technique
 
*mentally nicknames him "Tyro Ren"*

Pretty much, but Tyro can change the direction of the blaster bolt after he stops it.

Spoiler: A few minor typos

Thanks. At least it's not like I misspelled the name of his species my entire life.

What is Blazing Chains again?

@EVA-Saiyajin It's the Force style our Lore adviser Tyro Torwin uses, and it involves using the force to affect the trajectory of blaster bolts, both to make them miss you and hit your opponent.
 
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i want the TELEPATHIC GUNS
i also want to make our own personal STYLE using barie presence blazing chain and lightsaber dueling to make a very scary nearly unpredictable technique
You know, the first Darth Treya fought close combat by using three telekinetically controlled lightsabers to lock people down while she hammered them with force lightning from midrange.

You know, if you want a goal to work towards.
 
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You know, the first Darth Treya fought close combat by using three telekinetically controlled lightsabers to lock people down while she hammered them with force lightning from midrange.

You know, if you want a goal to work towards.
i think i'm in love.
we need to do this, but maby with guns. it would be cool actually. a bunch of guns that keep spinning around and shooting you
 
If only Ciaran could use the Force to create a pocket dimension to store all the guns (and turbolasers) for telekinetic use...
 
Generally Speaking
General Grievous enjoyed the graduation of trainees from the Abyss Watcher facilities on Kalee. It was a good excuse to visit his homeworld, and he was able to motivate the next generation of Kaleesh warriors. The debt his people owed Lady Ciaran was one he personally would never consider repaid in full, and Grievous made it his mission to instill his beliefs into as many Kaleesh as he could. It was usually unneeded, as many felt the exact same way he did, occasionally more fanatically, revering Ciaran as a goddess.

Grievous wouldn't go that far. He had spent too much time around the eccentric woman to see her as anything but that, an eccentric woman who had saved both him personally and the planet he had fought so long and hard for. The day she had convinced the galaxy that the Huk were the aggressors, he owed her everything. And yet she continued to invest in Kalee, reaffirming his devotion time and again. So when he heard rumors of someone else attempting to recruit Kaleesh warriors from the training program built by Lady Ciaran, he set out to deal with them personally.

The transgressor was a human male, growing old as evidenced by his grey hair tied up in a bun, but still fit enough to be a fighter. He wore the robes of a Jedi, but his were tattered and damaged by battle, covered in armor that maximized protection while doing little to hinder mobility. Across is back was his lightsaber, half sheathed. Accompanying the Jedi were several men, not clones, but still wearing the insignia of the Republic army.

"What do you think you're doing?" asked Grievous as he approached the man. It may not have been the most diplomatic approach, but Grievous was hardly a diplomat.

"General Rahm Kota of the Republic and Jedi Master." said the Jedi, introducing himself. "I've come here because I've heard the Kaleesh are exceptional warriors. My militia's hardly sustaining heavy losses in the field, but we need more men if we want to really stick it to the Separatists. Figured if I was recruiting in the area, I might as well recruit the best."

Grievous was both flattered by the compliments to his people's skill as warriors and irritated by the flagrant disregard for the insinuation that any Kaleesh would turn their back on the Abyss Watchers to join the Republic after all Lady Ciaran had done for them and all the Republic had ignored their pleas to side with the Huk. "Perhaps you should simply request additional clones, and leave this planet."

General Kota spit off to the side in derision. "Not happening. Can't trust those clones. Who knows what kind of orders they might have indoctrinated into those heads of theirs? That's why I lead a militia of volunteers. Brave men and women, every last one of them. And I want to fight alongside some Kaleesh, the bravest warriors in the galaxy if half of what I hear is true."

"Flattery will get you nowhere, Jedi. You are wasting your time. A true Kaleesh would never serve under a pathetic Jedi in the first place." said General Grievous, letting his personal distaste for the Jedi color his words.

"Pathetic am I?" said Kota, reaching for his lightsaber and stepping towards Grievous aggressively. "I bet I could beat your sorry self with not trouble at all."

"Is that so?" said Grievous, excited to learn this Jedi was as open to settling their dispute with violence as he was. Grievous reached into a pouch and drew forth a bronze coin, which he then flicked at the Jedi.

Kota caught the coin with ease and proceeded to turn in over in his hand looking at it. "What's this?"

"A Kaleesh dueling coin. The bronze means the challenge is not to the death. As pleasing as that might be, there are those above me who would be inconvenienced by your death at my hands." Said Grievous, as two Kaleesh trainees in the crowd that had gathered hurried to bring them the wooden blades that were used in such duels.

"Fine by me. Don't come complaining when you lose because you've underestimated the power of the Force." said Kota, moving his hand away from his lightsaber now that he knew he would not need the lethal weapon.

Grievous reached to his side and grabbed the wooden blade that was placed into his palm as Kota did the same. "Your paltry religion is no match for a true warrior of Kalee. You will lose this match no matter how much you use the Force, I would bet my life on it."

Kota laughed. "Keep your life, I don't want it. But I can hardly be seen as a coward, can I? Since a Jedi's lightsaber is his life, I'll bet my lightsaber you'll be the one who winds up in the dust."

The two generals continued to stare each other down before moving in unison to some unseen signal. The two fighters' wooden weapons clacked as they met time and time again, Kota moving as if her could see where Grievous would strike next and Grievous simply moving with superior speed and power to compensate. Kota rolled to the left and struck at Grievous' side, but the Kaleesh warrior leapt back.

The two circled each other, looking for any weakness to exploit. Grievous moved first, leaping forward with an overhead strike that sacrificed any skill with the blade for sheer speed and power. Kota rolled out of the way, and Grievous' blow kicked up a bit of dust as it impacted the ground. Grievous ducked and swept the sword low to knock out Kota's legs as the Jedi moved to exploit his opponent's vulnerable state.

The Jedi hopped over the blade, but Grievous' free hand shot out like a striking snake and gripped Kota's ankle. Grievous flung the Jedi behind him, and Kota righted himself in midair and skid to a stop on his feet. Closing his eyes, Kota waved his hand in front of himself before thrust the empty palm forward. And invisible Force slammed into Grievous, who dug his feet in to try and remain standing.

He succeeded, but Kota had taken advantage of the opening, darting in to strike at the Kaleesh general. Grievous countered by throwing his body forward as soon as the push ceased, slamming his body into the Jedi general before he could swing his blade. With the gap between them eliminated entirely, Grievous held the advantage with his stronger body.

Still, as the tall as he was, Grievous also had trouble striking at such close range, and he wasn't able to inflict much damage with his fist before Kota shoved him with the Force once more. This time Grievous wasn't able to brace himself as well, and was sent skidding backwards, leaving two furrows in the ground from where his feet had dragged.

Kota got close again, this time careful to remain on the lookout for any sudden steps forward or back from Grievous. Always maintaining the optimal distance, Kota's superior bladework came into its own. Grievous was doing an adequate job fending off Kota's blows, but one snuck through the Kaleesh's defense and struck him across the face. His mask chipped from the force of the blow, but Grievous himself was unfazed.

It was clear Kota had expected the hit to stun his foe at least for a split second, and he was slow to react to Grievous' own strike, a strong hit to the side of the gut. Kota's upper body doubled over from the pain of the blow, but he remained aware enough to leapt backwards, further than he would have been able to without the Force, in order to avoid Grievous' follow up.

Grievous ran after Kota, striking with a jumping overhead to crush his opponent with raw power. Unable to recover in time to dodge, Kota instead raised his wooden blade to block. The two clashed, and the force proved too much. Not for either of the fighters, but for the weapons themselves, which snapped at the point of contact.

Now wielding something more akin to primitive spears, the two continued, each seeking to end it. Both stabbed towards their opponent's face with the pointed edges left behind by the earlier fracture. Grievous made no move to dodge, but Kota's weapon merely skidded off his mask. Kota tried to tilt his head out of the way, but Grievous' weapon still scored his cheek.

Kota winced in pain, and Grievous leapt at his chance like a furious animal. Grievous threw his head forward, smashing his forehead into Kota's with such force his mask cracked at the point of impact. Kota was stunned by the blow, but Grievous didn't let up, smashing his weapon into the side of Kota's head and sending the Jedi sprawling onto the ground.

Planting a foot squarely on Kota's back to hold him down, Grievous bent over and grabbed the lightsaber from its sheathe on Kota's back. "Perhaps you should meditate on your failure, Jedi. Who knows? You may find an answer as to why you lost in the time it takes you to build a new lightsaber." mocked Grievous as he turned and walked away.

As Kota's men realized that the duel was over, they rushed forward to help their general off the ground, and let him lean on them as they retreated back to their ship. Grievous meanwhile contemplated new designs for his mask as he looked at the lightsaber in his hand. The weight was far better than the knock-offs used by the Abyss Watchers, and as he gave it an experimental wave, Grievous decided that his initial distaste for the weapon was due to the shoddy craftsmanship the Abyss Watches had been able to achieve without proper blueprints. But if he could take lightsabers that had been properly constructed from fallen foes, well then, Grievous might even consider learning the weapon. Perhaps he'd even start a collection of them.


AN: I like this one. I got to write a cool fight scene between two generals, and Grievous defended the Abyss Watcher's monopoly on Kaleesh warriors. And out General starts his infamous collection, though it probably won't ever get as large as it did in canon, what with the whole "not killing Jedi" thing. But any rogue Jedi or Dark Jedi are fair game. coughcoughNewDroidArmycoughcough
 
He could give it to the Agents to have them reverse-engineer it and improve their own lightsaber designs.
 
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