And of course it's both of them going back in time from different timelines where the other one died. Cause SuSu can never be separated!We obviously need a Su ling and li suyin sue fic now . TEAM SUSU SUEEEE
Last edited:
And of course it's both of them going back in time from different timelines where the other one died. Cause SuSu can never be separated!We obviously need a Su ling and li suyin sue fic now . TEAM SUSU SUEEEE
I like this; it was a fun read.
The only thing that bugs me is way the Talent boost (capital T) was written. The post made it sound like Fan Yu magically got a Talent boost in addition to being sent back in time, which is a bit weird and unnecessary.
It makes sense to say that Fan Yu is progressing faster due to retreading his steps, but if that is what you want to say, I'd just refer to cultivation speed instead of talent.
My feelings would be that he just thinks he's increased in talent. When he actually gets into green and starts going over new ground, he'll discover that no, he actually hasn't.Yes, the Talent increase was intentional, so Fan Yu now boasts the prodigous talent of ... 4.5 (instead of talent 3 which he has in my headcanon)
The reason for the talent increase would hypothetically be from his older mind overlapping mostly with his younger mind, but buffing it up a bit, since there's still a difference between a 31 year old cultivator peak green and his 14 y.o. self early/mid red.
I look forward to the next part of this adventure, where, several days later, Ling Qi starts to hallucinate.
If we start with one success on each, how much does the medicine help if we try to do a dedicated breakthrough week? Since the meds only kick in on second and third rolls I would assume this lets us get the most out of them.Alright, so our shiny new breakthrough pills definitely encourage us to go all in for 1 week there. I've run up some simulations of how this could go, and what we can expect, assuming we have 6 actions to spend.
Basically, I've examined two strategies here. In strategy 1, we roll Green until we fail, using our reroll if needed. Once we've failed, we switch to Bronze, and roll that until failure. After that, we basically look at things, check which of them is closer to completion (probably green), and try to recover and try again.
I think Ling would be proud. Zhengui managed to steal from himself.Right now all i can think of is a detective story involving Zhen and Cui trying to figure out who's been stealing beast cores from their masters without any trace of entering or leaving the building or their partners even noticing, working through a list of suspects all over the sect without any of the cultivators being aware. Then it just turns out Gui is a glutton and has been taking snacks whilst Zhen is asleep, Ling and Best Snek are just too amused to do anything about it.
Thanks for the compliments, it's mostly intended to just be a fun romp.
Yes, the Talent increase was intentional, so Fan Yu now boasts the prodigous talent of ... 4.5 (instead of talent 3 which he has in my headcanon)
The reason for the talent increase would hypothetically be from his older mind overlapping mostly with his younger mind, but buffing it up a bit, since there's still a difference between a 31 year old cultivator peak green and his 14 y.o. self early/mid red.
Also, if this were a quest, Fan Yu would have a bonus to cultivating the arts he knew in his previous life up to the level he himself had mastered them(the bonus would be that of a inner sect teacher tutoring - think Ruan Shen)
That said, my intent wasn't to allow powerwanking. Sorry to everyone who started having HP/Naruto edgy timetravel flashbacks.
Meizhen, Sun Liling, Reixang, Ling Qi, Ji Rong, Xuan Shi all have greater talent. Possibly Kang Zihao, Guangli, Suyin, as well.
Not to mention better starting position for most of them. They would simply stomp Fan Yu at this moment of time.
Fan Yu's greatest advantages are in information and social-fu. He is an adult, surrounded by children, and trained in politics and diplomacy, by his clan which have strong earth leanings, which means they tend to work with community.
Cultivation arts have diminishing effects the more you get them, assuming they don't just conflict and mess you up. So if you learn, say, three different fire cultivation art, they overlap rather than stack after a while.Instead of a Talent increase, I would just have him know dozens of cultivation arts availible to a Green that aids in Low Talent cultivation, having a couple give perm effects.
The wording is awkward, but the second/third/fourth roll part is referring to yellow/green/cyan (or maybe green/cyan/indigo) realms, not the rolls made during a week.If we start with one success on each, how much does the medicine help if we try to do a dedicated breakthrough week? Since the meds only kick in on second and third rolls I would assume this lets us get the most out of them.
Besides the efficiency point, it would also be sweet to knock out both third realm breakthroughs in the same week. Talk about bumping up that reputation...
Cultivation arts have diminishing effects the more you get them, assuming they don't just conflict and mess you up. So if you learn, say, three different fire cultivation art, they overlap rather than stack after a while.
Argent cultivation arts are in part designed to work in addition to a family cultivation art, but usually cultivators at most learn 3 different ones.
The wording is awkward, but the second/third/fourth roll part is referring to yellow/green/cyan (or maybe green/cyan/indigo) realms, not the rolls made during a week.
I don't think those are frequent enough to need an advantage against. The only people with such an art would be alchemist clans.As an aside, I assume most Noble Cultivation Arts buff pills or stone guzzling, since wealth is their primary advantage over the rare high Talent commoner.
Sometimes literally!
Interesting. So the medicine is better than I thought. It still seems like we'd be better off trading away some of it if possible, just because it's so much more valuable for other people.The wording is awkward, but the second/third/fourth roll part is referring to yellow/green/cyan (or maybe green/cyan/indigo) realms, not the rolls made during a week.
I'm really curious what that budget looks like. I'd love to see what Han Jian and Gu Xiulan's weekly expenditures have been.As an aside, I assume most Noble Cultivation Arts buff pills or stone guzzling, since wealth is their primary advantage over the rare high Talent commoner.
Totes correct. Honestly, given the percentages, attempting a double breakthrough in a single turn of closed door cultivation is looking more attractive by far with the medicines.No, we'll want to use both in a big breakthrough week.
Because if we miss a Breakthrough roll by 5 otherwise, we'll never hear the end of the screaming.
No, we'll want to use both in a big breakthrough week.
Because if we miss a Breakthrough roll by 5 otherwise, we'll never hear the end of the screaming.
How do we know what the wording means? Is this something yrsillar has clarified on discord?Cultivation arts have diminishing effects the more you get them, assuming they don't just conflict and mess you up. So if you learn, say, three different fire cultivation art, they overlap rather than stack after a while.
Argent cultivation arts are in part designed to work in addition to a family cultivation art, but usually cultivators at most learn 3 different ones.
The wording is awkward, but the second/third/fourth roll part is referring to yellow/green/cyan (or maybe green/cyan/indigo) realms, not the rolls made during a week.
Yes:How do we know what the wording means? Is this something yrsillar has clarified on discord?
Arkeus
Blood of Father Sky: Allows the user to reduce all second, third and fourth breakthrough rolls by five <= I guess you mean 'second, third and fourth stage'?
Yrsillar
yeah
Saltiest negaverse is probably the Ji Rong Negaverse over the way our respective social disadvantages have played out.Yeah, they'll hear us all the way in the Han Jian Negaverse.
And probably be super salty that we're bitching about not getting a perfect double breakthrough on the first try.
Urgh. Urgh. Urgh.Saltiest negaverse is probably the Ji Rong Negaverse over the way our respective social disadvantages have played out.
56 to 60 actually.+1 on using the super pills on us.
Let's just make sure we make everything posible to get the best results on the breakthrough,
let's not taunt murphy by selling those pills saying we don't need them.
I can already see half our rolls ending up being from 66 to 70 if we don't use those pills.