Forge of Destiny(Xianxia Quest)

We definite have the edge on Ji Rong in sponsorship, not in whatever Liling is willing to cram into him but in how long we've been sponsored.
How long is that?
From day 1 Meizhen shared her tea(which was pretty amazing as Red drugs go) and jumpstarted our cultivation. We got tutoring from her from the very start and we basically never stopped sparring and meditating together, even if it became apparent that she couldn't keep feeding our drug habit once it was clear we couldn't be a Bai vassal on her conscience.

Before the Thunderdome we got the Moon Care Package, which is utterly bullshit in terms of Art quality. The Moons continued to sponsor us afterwards, though not regularly, whenever they did it was huge and contained an Art bundle to boot. Leading us to rob Renshu blind paid for a profligate drug spending spree(the mathemancers can probably back this up with how much the furnace and his SLPs were worth), and then furthermore got us a high quality spirit fully aligned with our primary arts, as well as the material for a Domain Weapon which would be respectable for a high noble scion.

After the Thunderdome, we befriended Hanyi on a whim, and thus we got biweekly tutoring with a Cyan spirit of frozen yandere death on our primary arts for basically 3/4 of the year.

Then there was Cai, who came in much later, but her magic dress, sparring, and wealth boon, as well as the White Room really pushed the limits on the last quarter of the year.

To put all that in context, Ji Rong got a quarter year of training and materials under Liling, a couple months with Chu Song, and some early boons from exploring, but lost entire months to time out, fortress squatting and whatnot. Liling probably could afford to be a lot more generous than Renxiang, but the one thing she cannot buy is time. Drugs need time to take effect
 
Yeah.

The real thing to worry about is Ji Rong having scarfed down berserker potions or something to be able to fake being much stronger than he actually is. "Who cares if I can't fight effectively for a month if I can get in the top four anyway?" logic if you will, and we already know there's precedent for Liling feeding power-heightening stuff to Ji Rong for major fights.

I'd say in ordinary conditions right now, we'd win probably seven to eight out of ten fights. But he's not going to be loaded for ordinary fights. He's going to be loaded as a cruise missile aimed at us in particular, when he can be reasonably certain that he'll have a few weeks to recover from any abuse he puts himself through in the meantime. And if he gets whatever the reward for semifinalists is, he's likely to make good his losses and then some anyway.

So I'd say for this fight in particular, we're going to be hard pressed, because as far as he's concerned, we're the Last Boss of this tournament (Since his own benefactor--who he's probably had about as much luck in sparring against as we have against Meizhen--is next anyway). He's not getting a shot at Renxiang, so he'll take it out on us.

I'd say we're still not in bad shape regardless, we've made good use of our available resources and have some pretty good strategies, but he's probably going to pave over his weaknesses with action economy by doubling down on his strengths.
 
A Stewards Journal
Goddamit, @Thor's Twin has me inspired. I want to know more about this Norse-Germanic culture the he just created, so you get to suffer through the adventures of a young scion of a Marquis who has put together a trade expedition to the fabulously wealthy and exotic Celestial Empire on behalf of the Imperiala Ligan(Imperial League in Swedish). Note, not really a writer, but hey like I said, I got inspired, so blame Thor!

A Steward's Journal

132 Bauchman 3, first of Spring 1

It is done.

I, Konrad Meyer, 4th son to the Margrave of Süßwasserfurt, have obtained a Kings Warrant to conduct trade with foreign nations. Specifically, with the mysterious Celestial Empire, that shadowed land of Spirits and mages. With the funds I have ammased, and with the company I have assembled, plus a few generous "donations" to the Løvenes Orden have Convinced King Bauchman, as well as the Convocation of Princes, that my plan is warranted imperial support. Many trade missions have been launched to this far away Empire since explorers discovered it in 36 Leonhardt, but not many have returned. Those that have, have brought back riches and acclaim aplenty, which is what I need to convince father to make me heir instead of my wastrel brothers.

The candle burns low. I need to make ready for an early start in the morn, as I depart for Steinhaven, the largest port city on the coast of the Kristallmeer. I sail in two months.

132 Bauchman 3, 10th of Spring 1

I have arrived in Steinhaven, and have been hosted by the Margrave Reiner Von Albrecht. After the usual fetes and well mets', I have started assembling the expedition, bolstered by the addition of the Margrave's second cousin and good friend of mine, Klaus Von Griesheim, who holds the title of viscount and is the Margrave's primary craftmage, running the forges and craftwerks of the city. Having trained his latest batch of journeymen to Mastery of the fourth foundation, he has decided it was time to go on an adventure "before I'm all old and calcified", as he says. He has been an invaluable aid in gaining supplies, trade goods, and most importantly, convincing shipmasters to sign onto the expedition.

Meanwhile, I have opened a recruiting office for crew, porters, tailors, and various other sundry personnel needed, as well as the command staff who will be issuing the orders Klaus and I give. I pray to the Goddess for swift success.

132 Bauchman 3, 18th of Spring 1

A Kings Warrant goes a long way in smoothing over problems with merchants and suppliers, shipmen and traders. Trouble was averted after a league of merchants, hearing of the expedition, engaged in shady price practices for their wares. Nothing was provably illegal, but it was threatening to destroy my carefully laid out budget, with some things being 300% more expensive than usual, always with some unverifiable yet plausible excuse. They changed their tune real quick when presented the document and told that impeding an officially sanctioned trade mission was grounds for charges of treason, which carried the penalty of summary execution. It was real mysterious after that how easy it was to buy fresh meats at half the cost as normal, almost as if they were afraid for their lives. Funny that.

Another issue that has come up is the hierarchy of rank among the ship captains, who are a fairly independent lot at the best of times and not used to taking orders from others. This was solved by appointing a fairly intimidating man only known as Higgs the Unstoppable, who is one of the few to have sailed the Todesstraßen and reached the even more mysterious Children of Earth far to south past the barbaric tribes of the Great Desert, as Shipmaster to the Expedition. Few here would dare say he is unqualified, and fewer still would dare question his orders or resolve. I am glad such a man has decided to sign on, as I must confess when it comes to ships I may as well be attempting to fly like the famed tribes of the Clouds.

132 Bauchmann 3, 25th Spring 1

Progress continues apace. More and more supplies and goods fills the warehouse I have rented for the expedition, awaiting loading onto the fleet of merchant ships that have signed on.

Meanwhile, I have begun intensive study of everything that is known of the lands that we intend to set forth for. While even today we know only a barest fraction of what there is to know about the Celestial Empire, what we do know is fascinating. The first thing to know is they are extremely suspicious of outsiders, and mostly consider them barbarians. This is reflected by the fact that nobody who is not a citizen of the Empire has any rights at all, outside of the region bordering on the Kristallmeer known as the Savage Seas-which is the only area that has the authority to trade with outsiders and only then in specially designated trade cities. Any foreigner caught outside of such designated zones is at risk of being summarily captured as a spy. They are especially suspicious of foreign mages, and require such individuals to wear suppression runes at all times. (I've ran across several mentions that a couple of the early expeditions were devastated by mysterious "storms" that arose suddenly after a mage was caught asking too many leading questions.)

Speaking of magic, their entire magical tradition is at times familiar and confounding. Like us, their mages tend to be the rulers and elite of their society, due to the fact that magic preserves the body, and forces out mortality; however, they don't call themselves mages, but "cultivators", and "immortals", due to this effect. And while we conform to the 5 elements of Earth, Wind, Fire, Water, and Aether, The cultivators of the Empire have as many elements as it seems at times as the grains of sand on a beach, though they have a "standard" set of 8 Elements that conform to some description of the human spirit, expressed as Heaven, Wind, Water, Mountain, Earth, Thunder, Fire, Lake. I must confess the intricacies of them all are somewhat confusing, and these are just the "standard" elements. There are others acknowledged, such as Wood, which seems to be some subset of earth or water, and Metal, which seems to be some variation on Wood, or Fire, to more exotic elements such as Music(yes, Music. I had to double check the translation to be sure, but Music is an an element, apparently), and even Life, and Death. Apparently, if there was an element created for a cultivator's Way, then it ends up acknowledged in some form or another, no matter if it might fit better under a more broader element.

Speaking of Ways, from what we have gathered over the years, a cultivator's Way is something VERY important in their growth. Nobody is sure of the specifics, but once a cultivator reaches the third foundation, they choose the one concept that embodies them the most, and develops a cloak of power similar that to, ironically, a Mage's Mantle, which from then on defines their cultivation as they advance. I find it somewhat interesting on how two different cultures, separated by such distance and time, have developed a similar concept on handling the ever greater power a mage wields as they advance on foundation-given that our own mages bolster their willpower by choosing a concept, and reinforcing it until it becomes the unbreakable iron pillar that supports a mage's ascension. And how fascinating that as a cultivator AND mage grows in power, that concept more and more manifests as an aura of power that influences the world around him!

As for the Spirits of the Divine that they worship, well that's exactly what they are. Grand Spirits and Ancestors that Ascended, and are revered throughout. It is somewhat a strange concept for us who worship only the Goddess, she who is arbiter of the Mortal Elements and Avatar of the Spirit Aether, but not something unthinkable-since we believe the Elemental Spirits are the messengers of the Goddess, it is not an unfathomable leap for one to believe that the Great Spirits rule the heavens, and the Ancestors are the messengers and caretakers to and from the Gods. I must confess, though, this is still vaguely...unsettling. And they are not keen on hearing an outside viewpoint on the matter, as the 15th expedition undertaken in 235 Dahlmann 2 found out the hard way when missionaries from the Lammets Orden caused the entire expedition to be summarily banished.(There was again, a mysterious storm that later destroyed half the expedition on the way back to the League. It is suspected a powerful weather mage is a member of the ruling Duchy of the Savage Seas, but no confirmation can be obtained).

I must cut this short, as I have suddenly realized that the sun is setting, and I have not eaten in hours. While food is less of a concern for a mage, even one as low rank as I, one must still maintain decorum.


132 Bauchmann 3, 12th Spring 2

Things are coming together, as the last of the ships begin loading in preparation of setting sail on high tide in a week. As of late, my research has moved from the customs and ways of the Celestial Empire, and onto the hazards of the voyage in order to better prepare for them. Along with Klaus and Shipmaster Higgs, I have discovered that the hazards of the voyage are relatively few, all told. Other than the sheer length of the journey, which is a distressingly long 6 month voyage with at least 1 month sailing from sight of land in order to cross the Great Northern Bay, the only real hazard is one from the rather piratical nation of the Rote Geraden, inhabiting a chain of islands somwhat north of the Empire. They are ruled by the Krakenkönig, whose power is based on the number of shipmasters who follow him, and the amount of treasure they manage to plunder from their neighbors, and appear to be a rather large thorn in the side of the Celestial Empire. The Empire has a number of patrols to catch raiders as they appear, but as outsiders if we are caught outside of the range of patrols, the Empire's stand is that we're essentially on our own.

Given that armed ships are generally treated no different than raiders, this does present a rather tricky logistical situation, as we cannot be perceived to be threatening the empire or risk being sunk. I have read speculation that they are still a little resentful about the outcome of the battle of Northern Bay in 98 Leonhardt, which was tactically a draw but strategically forced them to acknowledge that we weren't just barbarians, and lead to the current treaty opening trade with us. There was mention of the then Ducal house collapsing in support from the outcome and the current House of Xuan rising in their place, but that is neither here nor there. In any case, we have decided to adopt a strategy of counterboarding any raiders, as there doesn't seem to be any objection to personal arms, simply anything that might point to the ship being a warship.

I just got a knock at the door. It appears Higgs has a few last minute preparations he wants to make me aware of.


132 Bauchmann 3, 19th Spring 2.

I sit here on board the flagship of the Fleet as the sun rises. We set sail in an hour!






Yeah, didn't get anywhere near the Empire just yet, but I just couldn't resist fleshing out the background of the kingdom Thor created. I might continue this in a part 2 detailing the journey and arrival of the trade expedition, but for now I'm tapped out.
 
The Pass
The Pass: Shield of the World


Amongst all of the great Cities of Katoikia there has not been a well written account of The Pass. Finding this unacceptable as The Pass is the shield upon which Katoikia rests behind I have endeavor to write an account of The Pass that is both worthy of The Pass's glory and my own greatness. I hope that my account shall be read to the children once The Pass is no longer needed; once we reclaim Apxaios. I shall first start with the history of The Pass.


Even the smallest child knows that our people have not always lived in the cities of Katoikia. Long ago our people lived in Apxaios. That wondrous land of plenty. Great cities and great athánatos. This was not to last. During a great war between athánatos everything changed. Over the horizon a dark cloud had formed. The astamátiti had come from behind the horizon. Most crawled among the fertile land defieling the land with their decaying flesh and toxic esoterikós. Some marched in formations much like our athánatos. This great curse shattered our cities, shattered our athánatos, shattered our people, and shattered our families. Our people had no choice but to flee before the astamátiti. However no matter how far we fled the astamátiti followed. We fled through the plains over the rivers and into Katoikia. With great seas on either side of Katoikia our people continued forward. Then our scouts returned and told us that the land of Katoikia ended as the two seas swept together to swallow the land. Some of our crafter athánatos built great boats to continue the escape. Those of us that had not boarded boats watched in horror as the seas turned hungry and red. Giant monsters arose out of the sea to devour those that had sailed onto those seas. Our people were trapped. The astamátiti behind us marching forward with their horrific esoterikós and the hungry seas before us.


This is when the greatest athánatos to grace our people arose. His name was Ἀρχιμήδης. He was the finest athánatos to have ever lived. Many say he is the finest athánatos who can live. Skilled beyond even other athánatos in the matters of crafting and of shaping the world he decided to build and arm The Pass. He built the pass out of rock. Blocking off Katoikia from Apxaios The Pass forms a rectangle a third of a mile high, five miles long, and 30 miles wide. A small path 20 feet wide cuts through the middle of The Pass giving The Pass it's name. In the rooms and passages built within The Pass Ἀρχιμήδης and his fellow crafter athánatos began to build. They threw vast engines into the seas on either side of The Pass. The engines heat those waters to such an amount that the astamátiti would boil alive should they try and swim around The Pass. Then they crafted vast armies of war golems and siege weapons to help our brave warrior athánatos hold The Pass. While those armaments were being crafted Ἀρχιμήδης himself began to build his golems and siege weapons. Every single one of his siege weapons still stand spewing death from the back of The Pass. Sadly only one of his golems still stand. Atlas watches ever vigil over the vast metal graveyard where Ἀρχιμήδης and his golems stood and fell defending The Pass from the greatest astamátiti assault recorded. It is because of his genius and sacrifice that The Pass held off the assault. Ἀρχιμήδης's sacrifice allowed our people to rebuild here in Katoikia and it will be his legacy that allows our people to one day reclaim Apxaios.


Part Two

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A/N

It's no longer a writer's bite it's a plague! Curse you @tryrar and @Thor's Twin ! This is my idea for a state that exists at the opposite side of the Golden Fields. The idea of what would it mean if the ash walkers expanded in as many directions as possible. I have not yet heard of any geographical reason why the couldn't just expand in the other direction from the golden fields. My imagination thought of what a peoples reaction would be when a huge horde of ashwalkers just showed up at their borders and starting killing them. This Civ is based on the ancient Greeks. I hope everyone enjoys my offering to the omake lists. Also the guy writing this account is really too full of himself and I hope I got that across. Any critiques welcome!
 
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Just a heads up @yrsillar two stories for your reading above this post. Thanks for the great story that your are writing. It has been such a joy to read and I always look forward to the next update!
 
Speaking of Ji Rong, there's a factor to our planned tactics against him we seem to have overlooked.

So, there is no reason to expect that Yan Renshu would have disclosed the loss of his jade slip to anyone. It's not the kind of loss you advertise, and it wouldn't have done him any good anyway. So the only people who should know about Ling Qi's mastery of AE are the vent crew, Cai, and Gan. I mean, barring Elders but they don't count. Our plan has us summoning the worms with a qi card. Ji Rong, and possibly Sun Liling, will have no reason to expect we're the ones who put the worms in the qi card. The most reasonable assumption for Ji Rong to make is that somehow, for some reason, Yan Renshu furnished Ling Qi with a qi card full of worms. It makes zero sense, but it makes the most sense of possibilities available.

Again, because this bears repeating, in the moment it's going to look like Ling Qi somehow got help from Renshu for the finals. At least to our year-mates. I expect the more profound cultivators in the crowd can tell if we're using a technique stored by us or someone else, but peers probably shouldn't be on that level.

edit: typo'd a name
 
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Well I wouldn't be as worried about ji rong if it wasn't for the fact that he had a shonen training session and if there is one thing in his favor it's that he gets more out of any training he gets then we do.
While I think we will win I'm still not going to let any implications that he isn't a threat go unchallenged.
 
Well I wouldn't be as worried about ji rong if it wasn't for the fact that he had a shonen training session and if there is one thing in his favor it's that he gets more out of any training he gets then we do.
While I think we will win I'm still not going to let any implications that he isn't a threat go unchallenged.
We've had personal tutoring from a high Cyan for the bulk of the year, including a succeed or die Music tribulation. Plus all our sparring with the GF group, Meizhen, more recently Cai Renxiang, and the variety of tutors we sought out; it's likely we have more peer and peer+ sparring experience throughout the year than he does. It would be pretty weird if he flatly outperformed all that with his post-jail training regime.

Edit: Not that he hasn't had solid training partners! Chu Song was a strong starting asset and his existing martial skill should have helped him leverage it early. Still, we've had Meizhen in our corner since the start too. Then he has Kang, Lu Feng, and whatever poor nameless NPC bastard he could rope into getting beat up on. I doubt Liling sparred with him all that often.
 
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We've had personal tutoring from a high Cyan for the bulk of the year, including a succeed or die Music tribulation. Plus all our sparring with the GF group, Meizhen, more recently Cai Renxiang, and the variety of tutors we sought out; it's likely we have more peer and peer+ sparring experience throughout the year than he does. It would be pretty weird if he flatly outperformed all that with his post-jail training regime.

Edit: Not that he hasn't had solid training partners! Chu Song was a strong starting asset and his existing martial skill should have helped him leverage it early. Still, we've had Meizhen in our corner since the start too. Then he has Kang, Lu Feng, and whatever poor nameless NPC bastard he could rope into getting beat up on. I doubt Liling sparred with him all that often.
Those resources we have are the only reason I think we will win despite everything.
Also you left out the important part of his resources(or you just haven't been reading the side stories. those are canon you know). That he spent a week getting training from hell from a guy who casually played around with Sun. You know what he taught him? A technique that gets more powerful the more single minded and determined you are(so that you may reach the heavens no less). We might be in another genre, but getting ourselves into a situation where ji is a shonen hero while we are the dragon to a shonen villain and having the balls to say that he is unconnected nobody and that he has no chance against us right to the great god murphy's face seems like a bad idea.
Edit people keep dismissing him as a face puncher. Have you considered how many stories there are about how one face puncher and some sympathetic delinquents are all that is needed to bring down vast organizations? Yeah there are a bloody lot.
edit2: and you know why those stories work because the villains are idiots who deny the hero is a threat. You are basically saying that I should relax because we have plot armor.
 
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Oh no! Ji Rong has an art with... fluff. This is just "cultivation runs on self-knowledge so slotting AM is OP" all over again.

Chill out and actually read what people are saying. Nowhere did I say Ji Rong isn't a threat, he's just not one who is stronger in our areas of strength and more advantaged in our areas of advantage. This doesn't mean he has nothing, it means he has different things. We ought to have the overall edge in Art and tutoring quality. He ought to have the edge in Art focus, bending his talents towards a narrower set of capabilities than we have.
 
Also you left out the important part of his resources(or you just haven't been reading the side stories. those are canon you know). That he spent a week getting training from hell from a guy who casually played around with Sun. You know what he taught him? A technique that gets more powerful the more single minded and determined you are(so that you may reach the heavens no less)
No he didn't

Zhiqiang taught him to focus on executing a perfect strike and to finish his fights quickly through them.

No techniques were involved, only a mindset.
 
I think that Meizhen should be a bit ahead of Ling. We have made a point of sharing our good fortune with Meizhen regularly. We have shared every good cultivation site we have found with her. I think that we have shared a few arts as well.
 
Also Meizhen has not been distracted by anything and hasn't had to fund a war. She has been cultivating full time.
 
The red haired giant let out a rather uncouth guffaw, pinning the Guo scion with a look of amusement. "The entertainment has been a bit lacking," the mountain-like man said baldly. "Though your girl gave the closest thing to an amusing show Guo, your youngest generation is slipping Bai Suzhen."

The aforementioned woman's shot the red haired man the sort of look Ling Qi had only seen on the faces of wealthy women encountering the filth of the street. "As crass as ever I see, Zheng Po," Bai Suzhen replied coldly. "My niece has a kind heart, that is hardly a fault in moderation."

Ling Qi had to struggle to maintain her even expression at that statement. Bai Meizhen was her best friend, but to call her kind…
Lol next Meizhen match is with Kang Zihao, what would Zheng Po think?
 
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