Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

I've been waiting for this for months! I'm so hyped to see Apeiron interact with a non-BB PRT director in person, on top of freeing the hostages, plus I think he is supposed to deal with some of the religious implications from the hostages praying to him and getting visions during this trip. This is going to be amazing!
 
Imma be completely honest, my eyes were glazing over parts of the chapter lol. Nothing against the author ofc, this is more of a me problem. I suppose I don't quite get why we cant start by killing off Jack first and then dealing with his passenger.

I suppose it's mainly because the Nine have just become a chore for Joe and the team at this point. Like yea the 9 are coming.... eventually... Like that one South Park skit with GRRM. - this one.
 
I'm so hyped for another chapter outside the workshop, and especially hyped for finally closing out the bomb hostage plotline. And we now have an in-universe example of what would be considered a Superweapon item for Joe, an Entire Administrator Shard. While this probably means we'll never see a superweapon produced in the story, it does give Joe a neat secondary power of being able to find things. Even if he can't target it very precisely that's still huge.
 
Which hopefully wouldn't run too far past the default endpoint, though with Temporal Controls that endpoint was barely twenty minutes in outside time. If I was meeting with Director Armstrong and dealing with the hostages, there was no way to make that deadline.

Which my duplicates accepted, even if they were a little grumpy about it in advance.
Is there some reason the duplicates can't just step out of the workshop when they're running low on potion duration to keep the overrun from getting too bad?
 
Before I could close the distance the man in the car behind me started leaning on his horn, much to the annoyance of the rest of the drivers. I glanced back and the horn cut out, leaving the man frantically hammering on his steering wheel.
Apeiron has no need to toot his own horn. Instead, he enjoys tooting the horns of others... what a naughty boy, Joe is.
 
Is there some reason the duplicates can't just step out of the workshop when they're running low on potion duration to keep the overrun from getting too bad?
Other than the aspect of having the duplicates take whatever is left of their 20% time outside of the workshop when they are still Joe and therefore not going to(incapable of?) just sit around and wait out the duration, I don't think so.
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As someone who was reading Worm as it first came out, I don't remember it ever being mentioned in the story that Glory Girl's aura affected Amy like how the fandom believes it did.

In fact, Wildbow actually pretty much explicitly debunked this theory in Ward. Before you guys get on my ass about saying how you don't consider Ward canon, I want to point out that Wildbow debunking the aura theory in Ward is not a retcon, because it was literally never stated in Worm.

Not that I like Ward, but still. I'm pretty sure it's canon that Vicky's aura isn't actually doing anything to Amy or anybody else. Like, Wildbow has debunked this. I'm pretty sure that Wildbow also debunked the aura theory in a WOG as well, so not just in Ward.
 
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Taylor's unbelievably broken master power, Flechette's insanely strong omni dimensional striker ability, something on the part of Panacea, and some insight from Bonesaw

You know with everything he knows and might learn (Bonesaw's power research, Panacea's full power) he could come to the same realization I had of what they could have probably done to save the world. So the realization/though I had was that Bonesaw and PanPan could have jailbroken Taylor's power so she could master the passengers them selves and have them converge into a "straight line" or whatever passes for it in shard space and have Flechette kill every passenger in existence/there thus saving Earth at the cost of every parahuman's life. Probably would have been that bittersweet ending for a Nobledark story if Worm wasn't made as Grimdark.
 
You know with everything he knows and might learn (Bonesaw's power research, Panacea's full power) he could come to the same realization I had of what they could have probably done to save the world. So the realization/though I had was that Bonesaw and PanPan could have jailbroken Taylor's power so she could master the passengers them selves and have them converge into a "straight line" or whatever passes for it in shard space and have Flechette kill every passenger in existence/there thus saving Earth at the cost of every parahuman's life. Probably would have been that bittersweet ending for a Nobledark story if Worm wasn't made as Grimdark.
Pretty sure i was told that the ending of ward was going to be bonesaw making a virus that only kills para humans.
 
Wildbow claiming that constant low level emotional manipulation has no long term effects makes about as much sense as Wildbow claiming that 2+2=0.7. It's too stupid to take seriously.
It's superpowers lmao. It's just supposed to be a stun effect, not a master effect. It's practically magic, I'm not sure why it's so hard for people to wrap their heads around this. It's not like Vicky is the only person in all of fiction with a power like hers, yet I only here talks about long term effects with her, probably because the fandom's woobification of Amy.

It's like asking why doesn't Superman destroy the Earth when he reaches super fast speeds. It's magic, you're not supposed to think about it. You're only thinking about it because of Amy's woobification. (Some comics have explanations as to why Superman doesn't destroy the Earth, but my point stands).
 
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Pretty sure i was told that the ending of ward was going to be bonesaw making a virus that only kills para humans.

Unless that virus also killed the shards then all that would do is kill all the current parahumans and however many people it would take for the shards to start mucking with their hosts biology till they survived the virus or until one of the higher ranking shards become the new main hub of an entity and destroy everything version of Earth then move on. Though it could very well be what Wildbow wanted with how Grimdark Worm is.
 
It's like asking why doesn't Superman destroy the Earth when he reaches super fast speeds. It's magic, you're not supposed to think about it.
The problem is that half the point of Worm's setting is that there is no magic. Everything is science hidden by passengers. Wildbow created a setting based in the backbone of giving everything in a super hero setting a logical answer. Why can't super science fix the world, tinkers don't use real science. Why has no one killed the Joker aka Jack Slash, his real super power is that he has plot armor.

However when you create a setting where everything supposedly has an explanation you invite people to pick at the details.

Also here is the lord WoG on Vicky's aura:
First off, I'm not making excuses for anything. What happened to Vicky in Worm was horrendous. Understanding contributing factors towards Amy's actions in no way excuses them or lessens the impact they had. That is actually close enough to one of the main themes of this story that I felt I needed to state it outright.

With respect to the 'Aura Theory', I am not subscribing to it. The passenger is fully onboard, but that is because it is pretty much a staple of Worm fanon, and that is what the passenger represents. The disconnect between fan interpretations of events and reality is something Joe struggles with when dealing with his passenger.

While I'm not subscribing to the idea that Amy was mind controlled I think it would be equally foolish to pretend that Glory Girl's aura had no impact. Regular emotion shifts when exposed to someone will have lasting effects on a brain. Wildbow clearly knew about this effect since there were two other characters (Cherish and Peral) who used it as part of their powerset.


The only way for it not to permanently impact someone is if there is some safety measure that negates any long-term effect. That was the stance that Ward took, and frankly it is nonsense. Glory Girl's shard does not have the resources or experience to moderate a power like that. It would be an incredibly complex operation to induce emotions while also preventing any form or conditioned response and or the creation of favorable memories of the experience. That is a level of mental control that exceeds the best masters in the series, and the idea that a barely functional shard was able to manage it doesn't make sense.

Amy's problems stem from a significant number of sources. Her relationship with Carol, her self-image, her feelings of obligation, her relative isolation, and her lack of positive influences in her life. I'm not taking the fanon view of Amy working herself to death, but she clearly drives herself hard. Even without the aura Amy would have developed a dependent relationship with Vicky as the only consistently positive part of her life. With her brain being consistently altered at the same time there is no reasonable way to say it had no impact on the situation.

I also want to say that I am not blaming Vicky for this. Through the story this issue is anything but clear. This is a sensitive topic and if the fact that this element of Worm is going to be explored makes you uncomfortable then I understand if you want to drop the story, and thank you for giving it a chance.
 
The problem is that half the point of Worm's setting is that there is no magic. Everything is science hidden by passengers. Wildbow created a setting based in the backbone of giving everything in a super hero setting a logical answer. Why can't super science fix the world, tinkers don't use real science. Why has no one killed the Joker aka Jack Slash, his real super power is that he has plot armor.

However when you create a setting where everything supposedly has an explanation you invite people to pick at the details.

Also here is the lord WoG on Vicky's aura:
The fact that there is no actual magic in worm changes nothing. Calling it science is like calling Dr. Doom's omnipotent power-stealing machine that he made offscreen science. We don't know how powers work at all in Worm. We're told that Shards do things through super science, which tells us nothing. In other words, Shards can do whatever the plot allows them to do, and it's not magic only because we're told it's super science.

But from a meta perspective, it might as well be magic. Because honestly, how does everything supposedly have an explanation? The explanation is that Shards did it, which is no different than saying that Magic did it in the eyes of a reader in 2024.
 
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Like yea the 9 are coming.... eventually... Like that one South Park skit with GRRM.

Yeah. The entire caught in traffic scene felt like a very blatant example of how time is approaching infinity.
It's been... 18 months since the S9 started their eight hour cruise towards Brockton.

I am completely expecting a, "Meanwhile, at the Galactic Core," "Two days ago at Cauldron's Cantina, home of Contessa Crab Cakes and Clam Chowder," "Passenger space is very, very big...," or other such cut scene. Hell, I'm fairly sure that even though his next job he wants to do is getting the bombs out of people's heads, that even that isn't going to be done by the end of next chapter.

It has reached critical levels of Taylor Varga in which absolutely. Nothing. Happens.
 
It's magic, you're not supposed to think about it. You're only thinking about it because of Amy's woobification.
So all your point is, is that we supposed to turn our brains off and don't think beyond what author says. If that's your point, then please be consistent, turn your brain off and don't think what is true in that fic beyond what Lord said in the WoG given above. If that is not your point, then please give arguments better than "Don't think about it" and "It's just works".

Also, hard magic systems exist, you know, the ones designed to be consistent and be able to hold to scrutiny of thought. It is magic does not inherently mean it is stupid and unworthy of inquisitive thought. Present the system and claim it has internally consistent logic, like Wildbow did, and people will try to decipher that logic. Like, how people saw one part of the system being able to do a thing (Cherish trying to condition the 9 with her power) and wonder if the other part of the system (Glory Girl) is doing the same, even accidentally. It started because people were capable of noticing things and making logical connections, way before the trend to "woobify" Amy began. You are making assumptions, just like way back people assumed that Glory Girl's power has long-term consequences, if you're so against it, maybe you should stick to that "not thinking" thing.

I really fucking hate even a notion of a notion of "Just turn your brain off" arguments.
 
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It's superpowers lmao. It's just supposed to be a stun effect, not a master effect. It's practically magic, I'm not sure why it's so hard for people to wrap their heads around this. It's not like Vicky is the only person in all of fiction with a power like hers, yet I only here talks about long term effects with her, probably because the fandom's woobification of Amy.

It's like asking why doesn't Superman destroy the Earth when he reaches super fast speeds. It's magic, you're not supposed to think about it. You're only thinking about it because of Amy's woobification. (Some comics have explanations as to why Superman doesn't destroy the Earth, but my point stands).

Writers can write things, they can even come up with in-universe explanations as to why what the write makes sense even if it wouldn't in a normal context. That's the power of writing.

But if some people find those explanations unsatisfactory, or feel they invite additional confusion, people will break from the writers established cannon.

And I don't just mean unsatisfactory in a logical sense, where the A to B reasoning creates plot holes. I mean unsatisfying in an emotional sense. When fans feel like an idea was left unexplored, or would be more interesting than the 'logical' conclusion of the writer, well, that's fertile ground for fanfiction.

Wildbow left the matter of Vicky's power vague for a long time, both in Worm and his WoGs surrounding it. People drew conclusions about the effects of the power, then wrote what possibilities were created from those conclusions. Wildbow did not correct these people, and at this point I can only speculate as to why, but I would guess it would be because Vicky was not the protagonist of Worm, as such clarifying her power would have little impact on the focal point of the narrative. That focal point being Taylor, who only interacted with Vicky maybe a handful of times.

Then Ward was written. Vicky was the protagonist, and suddenly what her powers could or could not do became very important. Thus, Wildbow decided to clarify and explain Vicky's powers, incidentally wiping away all the possibilities created by the fans conclusions.

The explanation for this that Wildbow gave, that Vicky's emotional powers worked without negative side effects, was found to be unsatisfying by people who wanted to tell stories based around the possibilities. They found it to be logically unsatisfying, as it conflicted with a modern understanding of human psychology, even if the effects can be handwaved in universe. And/or emotionally unsatisfying, as it killed potential plot points and conflicts.

So people just... Went on to write those plots anyway.

Fanfic writers can justify it different ways, call it an AU, call it a reasonable deduction or realism applied to superpowers-

But at the end of the day, Vicky's powers being a simple stun effect doesn't create nearly as many potential stories as the more complex and messy explanation.

To tie things back to Brockton Bay's Celestial Forge. The entire plotline about Amy's master-stranger confinement, and the vast web of knock-on effects from that such as the New Wave team breakdown, the tightened protocols on Joe, Mark showing up-

It all stemmed from Vicky's powers messing with Amy's head and triggering a master alert.

If you like those plot lines? Then you're probably in favor of this interpretation of Vicky's power, as it's required to tell these stories in this manner. If you don't like these plot lines? Then Vicky's power being as Wildbow enforced might appeal to you more as it takes the legs out from under those aspects of the story.
 
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So all your point is, is that we supposed to turn our brains off and don't think beyond what author says. If that's your point, then please be consistent, turn your brain off and don't think what is true in that fic beyond what Lord said in the WoG given above. If that is not your point, then please give arguments better than "Don't think about it" and "It's just works".

Also, hard magic systems exist, you know, the ones designed to be consistent and be able to hold to scrutiny of thought. It is magic does not inherently mean it is stupid and unworthy of inquisitive thought. Present the system and claim it has internally consistent logic, like Wildbow did, and people will try to decipher that logic. Like, how people saw one part of the system being able to do a thing (Cherish trying to condition the 9 with her power) and wonder if the other part of the system (Glory Girl) is doing the same, even accidentally. It started because people were capable of noticing things and making logical connections, way before the trend to "woobify" Amy began. You are making assumptions, just like way back people assumed that Glory Girl's power has long-term consequences, if you're so against it, maybe you should stick to that "not thinking" thing.

I really fucking hate even a notion of a notion of "Just turn your brain off" arguments.
Writers can write things, they can even come up with in-universe explanations as to why what the write makes sense even if it wouldn't in a normal context. That's the power of writing.

But if some people find those explanations unsatisfactory, or feel they invite additional confusion, people will break from the writers established cannon.

And I don't just mean unsatisfactory in a logical sense, where the A to B reasoning creates plot holes. I mean unsatisfying in an emotional sense. When fans feel like an idea was left unexplored, or would be more interesting than the 'logical' conclusion of the writer, well, that's fertile ground for fanfiction.

Wildbow left the matter of Vicky's power vague for a long time, both in Worm and his WoGs surrounding it. People drew conclusions about the effects of the power, then wrote what possibilities were created from those conclusions. Wildbow did not correct these people, and at this point I can only speculate as to why, but I would guess it would be because Vicky was not the protagonist of Worm, as such clarifying her power would have little impact on the focal point of the narrative. That focal point being Taylor, who only interacted with Vicky maybe a handful of times.

Then Ward was written. Vicky was the protagonist, and suddenly what her powers could or could not do became very important. Thus, Wildbow decided to clarify and explain Vicky's powers, incidentally wiping away all the possibilities created by the fans conclusions.

The explanation for this that Wildbow gave, that Vicky's emotional powers worked without negative side effects, was found to be unsatisfying by people who wanted to tell stories based around the possibilities. They found it to be logically unsatisfying, as it conflicted with a modern understanding of human psychology, even if the effects can be handwaved in universe. And/or emotionally unsatisfying, as it killed potential plot points and conflicts.

So people just... Went on to write those plots anyway.

Fanfic writers can justify it different ways, call it an AU, call it a reasonable deduction or realism applied to superpowers-

But at the end of the day, Vicky's powers being a simple stun effect doesn't create nearly as many potential stories as the more complex and messy explanation.

To tie things back to Brockton Bay's Celestial Forge. The entire plotline about Amy's master-stranger confinement, and the vast web of knock-on effects from that such as the New Wave team breakdown, the tightened protocols on Joe, Mark showing up-

It all stemmed from Vicky's powers messing with Amy's head and triggering a master alert.

If you like those plot lines? Then you're probably in favor of this interpretation of Vicky's power, as it's required to tell these stories in this manner. If you don't like these plot lines? Then Vicky's power being as Wildbow enforced might appeal to you more as it takes the legs out from under those aspects of the story.

So just to be clear, you can totally buy the fact that Shards are so bullshit that they can effect things on a multiversal scale, but apparently Vicky's shard can't prevent long term effects for the people that enter her short aura range?

Are you guys actually trolling me right now? There are so many ridiculous things that Shards do, but this is the one thing you guys can't accept?
 
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