Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

The Nine thing is really simple they are far away and he needs to wait until they get closer to avoid people panicking. Since I don't think people truly realise the details I'll explain them as they are now and not from when he first learned of them when they were further away with only a very large an rough area that they were somewhere in and people first called to go out and crush them.

Brockton Bay is in New Hampshire, the exact location is unknown but it is known it is on the very Eastern coast of New Hampshire. From the Nine's current location in the state of New York they have to travel through a fair chunk of the state they are in. No matter the route they take they then have to travel through the entirety of another state and based on their route possibly more than one to even enter New Hampshire. From there they then need to move to the East coast of New Hampshire and go to the Bay itself.

To put it simply that means even now the lowest you can express the distance between them is around 2 and a half states away and may go as high as 4 based on their route. To most probable locations where the Bay could be Google Maps rates it as an around 6 hour drive in modern conditions taking a route which is mainly motorways. However, the nine need to move with stealth in a big trailer to accommodate Crawler so are unlikely to take that route since it has tolls and are in 2011 Earth Bet in an area effected by Bakuda's bombs such as the big EMP one so are likely to need longer.

Going out to crush them now is thus too big a deviation and provokes too strong a reaction to be feasible especially since the nine are in New York state which is Legend's area.
Not buying this explanation personally. Joe is already a mercenary in public perception rather than a hero, and lord knows there are a laundry list of people who would like the S9 obliterated and could conceivably "afford" that revenge. Pretending to be limited to Brockton Bay is not going to make them seem like less of a threat than they already are in any way, nor would waiting for them to come to Brockton have any real benefits over just destroying them as part of some made up contract and posting a video(or doing it in some podunk town the S9 passes through). It's simply an overcomplication in search of justification.
 
Not buying this explanation personally. Joe is already a mercenary in public perception rather than a hero, and lord knows there are a laundry list of people who would like the S9 obliterated and could conceivably "afford" that revenge. Pretending to be limited to Brockton Bay is not going to make them seem like less of a threat than they already are in any way, nor would waiting for them to come to Brockton have any real benefits over just destroying them as part of some made up contract and posting a video(or doing it in some podunk town the S9 passes through). It's simply an overcomplication in search of justification.
Its so nobody else does something really stupid once they see the Forge move. So far the Forge has stayed in BB, the whole world is counting on that to feel like they can some what predict what the Forge will do.

Joe and co can easily handle anything less than Scion when they move, but right now, he doesnt want to deal with them.

The 9 are coming to him, he has them watched, distracted by drones etc etc. He has other concerns much closer to home right now.
 
Not buying this explanation personally. Joe is already a mercenary in public perception rather than a hero, and lord knows there are a laundry list of people who would like the S9 obliterated and could conceivably "afford" that revenge. Pretending to be limited to Brockton Bay is not going to make them seem like less of a threat than they already are in any way, nor would waiting for them to come to Brockton have any real benefits over just destroying them as part of some made up contract and posting a video(or doing it in some podunk town the S9 passes through). It's simply an overcomplication in search of justification.
In what possible way?

The Celestial Forge in one city is distinctly less than a Nilbog/Machine Army level threat - not only is it possible to contain, you don't even need to deploy a siege force to do it.

The Celestial Forge going wherever it wants is an existential threat that makes the Endbringers look like fluffy bunnies except for the false hope that you might be able to beat them with an Endbringer battle defense.
 
And the fact that March's Shard is probably all for resurrecting March means he might actually be able to manage it.

Truth doesn't block human transmutation. Truth steps in when you're going against the laws of nature. That's what Truth is. Truth are the laws of nature, and one of those laws seems to include the cycle of souls. You can't call souls back from the afterlife.
The problem with that reasoning is that for parahumans, shardspace is the afterlife. Her soul isn't just lying around; it's passed on.
 
So, talking about what to do with the S9; servo-skull them. Specifically their coronae, to use as targeting beacons in the shardspace void. Just need to figure out a way to generate a signal that will transmit through the pollentia and be detectable to the ship.
 
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In what possible way?

The Celestial Forge in one city is distinctly less than a Nilbog/Machine Army level threat - not only is it possible to contain, you don't even need to deploy a siege force to do it.

The Celestial Forge going wherever it wants is an existential threat that makes the Endbringers look like fluffy bunnies except for the false hope that you might be able to beat them with an Endbringer battle defense.
None of the PRT or Cauldron are seriously under the assumption that the CF will only stay in Brockton, and it wouldn't make them more of a threat than they already are if they temporarily go somewhere for a job. Faultline's crew don't even do most of their business in Brockton either. They are a threat, but containment like Nilbog was never an option to begin with.

The real mass panic information are the AIs, extent of the drones available, or biotinkering rather than simple maneuverability. Exposing any of that is completely unnecessary to take out the 9.
 
None of the PRT or Cauldron are seriously under the assumption that the CF will only stay in Brockton, and it wouldn't make them more of a threat than they already are if they temporarily go somewhere for a job. Faultline's crew don't even do most of their business in Brockton either. They are a threat, but containment like Nilbog was never an option to begin with.
It's containment in the sense that they view him as predictable, and passive unless provoked. They do in fact hold that opinion, because it's what Joe explicitly set his precog spoofer to.
 
None of the PRT or Cauldron are seriously under the assumption that the CF will only stay in Brockton, and it wouldn't make them more of a threat than they already are if they temporarily go somewhere for a job. Faultline's crew don't even do most of their business in Brockton either. They are a threat, but containment like Nilbog was never an option to begin with.
Faultline's crew traveling is irrelevant, because Faultline's crew aren't a multi-S-tier threat.
 
The real mass panic information are the AIs, extent of the drones available, or biotinkering rather than simple maneuverability. Exposing any of that is completely unnecessary to take out the 9.

You mean the drones that can fool FUCKING BONESAW as far as telling if they're normal humans or not?

Yeah some rando thinker is going to bust through the Washutech thinker spoofing due to examining the latest set of dead civilians in the days running up to the Nine's Transgression and subsequent wipeout.
 
You mean the drones that can fool FUCKING BONESAW as far as telling if they're normal humans or not?

Yeah some rando thinker is going to bust through the Washutech thinker spoofing due to examining the latest set of dead civilians in the days running up to the Nine's Transgression and subsequent wipeout.
I literally said the opposite of what you are implying. I know no rando is going to examine Fleet's dead drones and come up with anything, though if Bonesaw had examined them carefully something probably would have come up funky. It was just an example of potentially panic-inducing information compared to simply travelling elsewhere for jobs. He doesn't need to expose any of that to take out the 9, ergo it's not likely to set off any additional panic buttons with the PRT.

So far Joe and CF have sold themselves to the public as a group of mercenaries that have some standards but are available for hire. It would actually be weirder if they never left the city, and in fact they are planning to anyway after the S9. The explanation that they are staying in BB in order not to panic the PRT doesn't hold up to scrutiny and is unnecessary.
 
I literally said the opposite of what you are implying. I know no rando is going to examine Fleet's dead drones and come up with anything, though if Bonesaw had examined them carefully something probably would have come up funky. It was just an example of potentially panic-inducing information compared to simply travelling elsewhere for jobs. He doesn't need to expose any of that to take out the 9, ergo it's not likely to set off any additional panic buttons with the PRT.

So far Joe and CF have sold themselves to the public as a group of mercenaries that have some standards but are available for hire. It would actually be weirder if they never left the city, and in fact they are planning to anyway after the S9. The explanation that they are staying in BB in order not to panic the PRT doesn't hold up to scrutiny and is unnecessary.
The problem with your interpretation, is that normal mercenaries don't count as an A-S class threat, also only Apeiron is explicitly confirmed as a mercenary, its a paper thin justification with only two publically known contracts, and Joe is sufficiently paranoid in that he refuses to reveal any element of the forge to outsiders.
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One thing I would like to point out is that while SB and SV have a Zero Tolerance policy about under eighteens, in the Real World the age of consent throughout New England is sixteen. So while Parian getting together with Flechette might be a bit skeevy, it was by no means illegal. Also, I'm pretty sure Parian is an undergraduate which would make her 21 at most.
I already explained why and how they are moving so fast and why it doesn't matter but I'll repeat this much the plans the ABB have don't really matter because they just got predicted to be 3 or 4 days away from being possible to implement. However, earlier on when Joe met Uppercrust he predicted he would only need 3 days to track Bakuda's signal through shardspace to find the ABB's lair.

Joe's predication is not only due first but is the one that can be sped up with there already being things like sectional time gained that can help speed it up. Due to this it is very likely their plans won't matter because they will be crushed before the earliest possible time they could try them.



I was speaking for clones and shards in general which includes things like the S200 Bonesaw made in canon after invading toybox. Shards having that attitude is also the reason for things like how only one twin needs to trigger for both to get the same power from it such as the Valkyrie twins except in cases where both twins trigger at the same time or where they are very close.

Oni Lee's clones don't get his power I was simplifying it to explain why you couldn't cut them open to experiment. However, the full detail is that they aren't clones how they are normally thought of. What really happens is his shard effectively creates a new version of him at a place he can see and the old him can act for a few seconds before it falls apart. These old versions can't spawn more versions. Of course given that's how his power works it could be argued the new version is effectively a clone of him which does have his power. This repeated copying is also the reason for his personality death because he's effectively copied himself thousands of times by this point.

They also don't want them for studying as I covered I am pretty sure they want them to try the cluster draining trick which is why they were talking about boosting themselves to Apeiron's lv. Of course while I have also covered why they won't get the opportunity to try and drain the clones I also don't think it will work because I don't think the drain would work without the connections between capes of a cluster.

At most I could see it only working on clones of themselves but then they'd need to keep the clones alive and around themselves and such a thing would still leave them far from Apeiron's lv unless we were considering something like him from his first night out or at the storage yard.

It also wouldn't really fix the Butcher's issue if it even works on them with them already being an unstable gestalt. Even if it works somehow for them despite the powers the clones would have including unbreakable skin (reminder the drain is usually set up by the one getting the boost covering themself in the blood of the other and lying together for ages) and if the others can't hijack the boost (the 2 heroes probably could now) it would just boost them enough they are unlikely to die but the voices would still be there along with the unknown case of when she dies of old age and will probably attract Apeiron's attention and he can easily shut it down.



Discord conversations recently placed Fletchette at 17 and Parian as 21 or 22 due to being in Joe's academic year based on when her birthday is but also possibly older if she'd needed to miss years due to moving to another country and learning the language.

However, there are still moral issues beyond that there. Lily used to be a domineering control freak which ruined her last 4 or 5 relationships so due to that and possibly their cluster bleed of giving away any bits of themselves they don't like about themselves she decided to be an absolute doormat in her next one.

Fortunately for her that worked out because Parian is so messed up she would only agree to a relationship were she had full absolute 100 % control over each and every decision which is very skeevy when you consider the age gap and possible cluster bleed. It doesn't apply here but it is also very skeevy that a fair number of self inserts know all this and then still try to get them dating.
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Parian is ~21 or so. Oldest member of the Undersiders. Not sure on this one, really don't feel like searching for it. Midway through a fashion degree when she makes her first appearance (this is after several years of an engineering degree IIRC) - see her interlude for details.
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Age of consent laws in New Hampshire are indeed set at 16, unless the older of the pair is acting in loco parentis, for example as a teacher, coach or manager.
 
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Since the people that have been complaining about how the S9 are being dealt with (for weeks) don't seem to understand the reasoning behind this decision, here's the reasoning.

The delay with the CF vs S9 has nothing to do with either the CF or the S9, it has everything to do with the Thinker Predictions of individuals and groups outside the situation. The only ones who know that Apeiron can fake out thinker predictions are the CF. Apeiron wants the entire world to think that only those who pick a fight with the CF will be attacked by the CF. People assuming that thinkers can predict the CF is a security blanket that prevents panic.

If the CF attacks the S9 before they are close enough to Brockton Bay to be considered a threat to Brockton Bay, then EVERY Thinker in the WORLD will know that they CANNOT PREDICT the Celestial Forge. With how terrified everyone is of the CF this panic could start WW3 amongst other panic induced consequences. If the CF waits until the S9 are close enough to Brockton Bay to be considered a threat to Brockton Bay, then the Thinkers will still believe that they can predict the CF.

This decision by Apeiron is a political move that leans into PR. If you feel skeptical then reread the Chubster Interlude. Please stop complaining about how Apeiron is manipulating the S9, it's annoying. It's especially annoying when all the complaints about this either don't understand or completely ignore the real reasoning for this decision. If you are going to complain about Joe's decision to wait for the S9 to come to him, at least include the proper reasoning so that you don't come across as someone not paying attention to the story you're reading.

Took maybe 20 minutes to write this d*mn post not including the bathroom break and reading new posts, this is exhausting I definitely prefer lurking.

I'm sorry, but that reasoning still doesn't add up for me.
What's the point in faking that thinkers can't predict him? You mean to say that he'll never act outside of Brockton Bay then? Or he'll wait for a more "worthy" occasion?
But the S9 are actually worth it.
What's happening is Joe's getting careless and not realizing the amount of damage those psychopaths could cause if they ended up fighting for their lifes inside the city.
And he's doing that for basically PR. Now he's both careless and irresponsible.
The S9 is gunning for him, and by extension, the brocktonites(?) due to his abilities. It's his responsability to shield those people from harm as best as he can.
He had a good plan: create an artificial battlefield that the S9 wouldn't be able to exploit in order to escape.
Now he's gonna let them roll in BB, the city which contains multiple gangs who would greatly benefit in a well-timed distraction.
 
I'm sorry, but that reasoning still doesn't add up for me.
What's the point in faking that thinkers can't predict him? You mean to say that he'll never act outside of Brockton Bay then? Or he'll wait for a more "worthy" occasion?
But the S9 are actually worth it.
What's happening is Joe's getting careless and not realizing the amount of damage those psychopaths could cause if they ended up fighting for their lifes inside the city.
And he's doing that for basically PR. Now he's both careless and irresponsible.
The S9 is gunning for him, and by extension, the brocktonites(?) due to his abilities. It's his responsability to shield those people from harm as best as he can.
He had a good plan: create an artificial battlefield that the S9 wouldn't be able to exploit in order to escape.
Now he's gonna let them roll in BB, the city which contains multiple gangs who would greatly benefit in a well-timed distraction.
That is what's happening though?

He's evacuated all civilians in the path and replaced them with fiat backed indistinguishable from human droids as well as the infrastructure, which can all be repaired using his nano forge.

And in addition he has stated that he will intervene as soon as they cross the border into New Hampshire.

Edit:Joe's Thinker immunity is fiat backed, but they can figure out they are being spoofed.
 
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If I had to pinpoint why I'm not a fan of all this, it's that I have no interest in more of March's bullshit. She sucked in Ward and her survival here was egregiously annoying in the first place. I simply don't want any more of her as a character; at least Leet has some complexity, and Bakuda has stage presence. March in contrast is a plot device with a note reading "what if I unconvincingly and unsatisfyingly won at all times?" taped to her forehead. I want her to go away, not get beaten.

The S9 issue isn't that Joe's taking it slow, it's that he will not stop checking on them without doing anything. His logic is sound, but they're dragging as an upcoming plotline because Joe (and LordR) won't stop mentioning them and then doing nothing new about them. They've been dragged out so long that they've stopped feeling like fascinating antagonists and started feeling like increasingly bumbling comic relief.
 
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If I had to pinpoint why I'm not a fan of all this, it's that I have no interest in more of March's bullshit. She sucked in Ward and her survival here was egregiously annoying in the first place. I simply don't want any more of her as a character; at least Leet has some complexity, and Bakuda has stage presence. March in contrast is a plot device with a note reading "what if I unconvincingly and unsatisfyingly won at all times?" taped to her forehead. I want her to go away, not get beaten.

The S9 issue isn't that Joe's taking it slow, it's that he will not stop checking on them without doing anything. His logic is sound, but they're dragging as an upcoming plotline because Joe (and LordR) won't stop mentioning them and then doing nothing new about them. They've been dragged out so long that they've stopped feeling like fascinating antagonists and started feeling like increasingly bumbling comic relief.
Technically speaking March is dead, and her body is being puppeted by her Shard/s, for the S9, assuming the current pace continues, we are around 2-3 hours per chapter, the S9 will arrive in 24-36 hours, which means twelve more chapters not counting interludes or twenty-four IRL weeks.

So the S9 will arrive in next March's chapter, plenty of time, comparable to the wait for the summit.
 
Not sure how I feel about massively overcomplicating the S9 situation. I get that he wants to make an example of them and crush their efforts trivially as part of that, but he could've achieved the goal so much easier with some common sense.
That isn't the reason. He's deeply worried about revealing that the data he's been feeding to precognitive thinkers [which portrays him as definitely not being the kind of person to proactively attack the S9] has been fake, so he needs to wait until he has a good enough excuse i.e. them clearly attacking Brockton Bay.
 
That isn't the reason. He's deeply worried about revealing that the data he's been feeding to precognitive thinkers [which portrays him as definitely not being the kind of person to proactively attack the S9] has been fake, so he needs to wait until he has a good enough excuse i.e. them clearly attacking Brockton Bay.
Actually, it's actually slightly more proactive than you think, it's entry across the border of New Hampshire which is grounds for immediate response, but murderhobos keep spending their whole time torturing the droids.
 
"No." She said sharply, waving her hand in a cutting motion. Hemorrhagia gave her a concerned look. "They were trying for a while, but since this morning they've been quiet. I have things under control."
So the two dissenting voices went quiet at the moment they received a message and power boost? This certainly won't cause any problems.
I'm a little surprised Survey didn't manage to spy on Butcher's meeting with Uber. Even just knowing about the dead drops might have allowed Joe to sneak a dimensional tracker into one of the supply chain.
 
So the two dissenting voices went quiet at the moment they received a message and power boost? This certainly won't cause any problems.
I'm a little surprised Survey didn't manage to spy on Butcher's meeting with Uber. Even just knowing about the dead drops might have allowed Joe to sneak a dimensional tracker into one of the supply chain.

I believe that the in-chapter excuse was that they were fooled by their own analysis, ironically enough, into believing that the Teeth were a low priority for realtime monitoring due to their intentions to only retaliate at the Empire. So Survey has them on the backburner at the moment.
 
Actually, it's actually slightly more proactive than you think, it's entry across the border of New Hampshire which is grounds for immediate response, but murderhobos keep spending their whole time torturing the droids.
It is worth remembering that Joe's sense of time is warped even before he got the ability to speed up the Workshop. In truth, the delay is overemphasized. Joe is impatient over the S9 "toying" with the droids, but if you look at it closely it probably hasn't even been an hour since Cherish and Shatterbird got directed towards the droid in question since it only happened around the start of the charity ball.

I can only assume that the two of them even only took the chance despite Jack telling them to get things done quickly because it was the kind of delay that could also happen if you were caught out in traffic. To which, they haven't been having since Joe basically manipulated the entire traffic grid, local weather system, and a hundred other factors in an attempt to streamline them into Brockton Bay. Heck this entire encounter literally just fell into their laps as opposed to having to spend time searching for a good target. Looking at it one way, they're wasting time precisely because they've been having such a lucky run that the two felt like they could afford to... overindulge, so to speak.
 
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I think there are two main reasons. First, Bakuda's power excels when she's making lots of random stuff in a fugue and fielding said untested bombs. If she's even capable of making a 'cure cancer bomb', I suspect her ideal research process would involve going to an oncology ward, stripping machines for parts, and testing the bombs on people with cancer until she finds one that works. Even with access to good equipment, being stuck in a pocket dimension is very much not conducive to her methodology.

Secondly, sometimes I've seen her power misstated as delivering arbitrary shaker effects, but that leaves out the fact that she doesn't get to pick what those effects are, and every single one she's displayed is offensive or destructive in nature. She can make very exotic bombs, bombs that clearly use tech which would be better suited for constructive purposes, but a healing "bomb" that doesn't also give you cancer might be too far out of specialty for her.
Since curing cancer usually involves killing cancer I don't think that her specialty being offensive and destructive in nature would impede her ability to do so. Field-testing things might be a bit tricky but they do have access to a teleportation device and the Teeth; bare minimum I would think that they'd be willing to throw a few bombs at Spree's clones or something.

Edit: though yes her being a Chaos Tinker would probably give her some trouble.
 
Yeah some rando thinker is going to bust through the Washutech thinker spoofing due to examining the latest set of dead civilians in the days running up to the Nine's Transgression and subsequent wipeout.
I mean they actually should, not because the drones themselves are a giveaway but because the way the Nine inflicted a normal level of random murders but none of them were missed by anyone is an impossible stroke of coincidence.

However, investigation to get to that point is likely to take long enough to not matter.
 
Honestly, could we all just agree to drop the S9 debate? Joe has them hemmed in, declawed, and will get around to deal with them in 24 to 48 hours of in-story time (which is much more time for us of course).

You could probably come up with a reason for him to act right now instead of waiting those hours, or just not buy the excuse that has been but forth in the story (about keeping the precog spoofing secret), but this won't happen for storytelling reasons.

One thing at a time. Garment's show has lots of social aspects that need to be told first, but if the CF dropped the hammer on the S9 the show would be cancelled. Roust has also spent all the time since the Summit chapter setting up the board for the confrontation between the Teeth, the Empire, the PRT, and anyone else wanting to stick their oar in - but the moment Apeiron goes after the S9 it will flip the board and make all this build-up for naught.

So. We're going to have the charity action with all the surrounding drama. The Teeth are going to fight and do their surprise tactics. The Empire will field Damsel of Distress and any other surprises they could shake up. The PRT and hero side gets the chance to regain some face if they handles this conflict decently - and finally some of the other members of the CF gets to show off their abilities in the field when the conflict inevitably escalates.

This is the upcoming story points that we want to get through before the S9 smack-down steals the show, so they're stuck on the backburner for now.
 
It is worth remembering that Joe's sense of time is warped even before he got the ability to speed up the Workshop. In truth, the delay is overemphasized. Joe is impatient over the S9 "toying" with the droids, but if you look at it closely it probably hasn't even been an hour since Cherish and Shatterbird got directed towards the droid in question since it only happened around the start of the charity ball.
Yeah, people are really harping on him "putting off" a thing he has scheduled for tomorrow morning. Sure, that's like 6 years for us, but only a few hours in story. I'm literally putting off doing chores that don't even require leaving my room for longer than that right now. XD
 
I think a combination of the real time waiting and the mere mention of the ABB remnants pissing people off by itself over the plot armor is the reason the S9 debate is coming up again, notwithstanding people simply not having read any discussion and simply commenting on the chapter putting their 2 cents out there with no intent of continuing an argument they don't know exists..
 
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